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Maan hands was holding her..both were lying and watching te stars

Geet: omg how i forgot she tap Maan's chest

Maan frowned: Geet if u forget u have to tap ur head not me

Geet: im ill naa so tat only but how i forget

Maan: wat u forgot

Geet : how i forgot how can i, she look at Maan,all becoz of u only , Maan gave a look,in ur chakar i forgot my world,Maan smirk

Geet: don't smirk or i know how to wipe it, now give ur phone

Maan got confused thinking why she is asking phone: u r going to wish some one

Geet: can u give ur phone without asking any questions

Maan gave te phone,Geet took and ask him to open it.

Maan: ur name..Geet type her name but frown to see its not opening,she tried in caps too but still its not opening,

Geet : Maan its not opening

Maan : u r name Geet

Geet : its not opening naa

He grinned and licked her cheeks with his tongue and typed MISTY,Geet pout and pushed him, she open te apps thank god he didt delected her FB account which she uploaded last time..she open te fb.she wished VD and put te status tat she was hospitalised and celebrating her first VD with her bf..at once she put te status, she got many comments asking abt her health and teasing being with her bf tis late night

She giggling and typed wishing everyone mainly sending wishes to her GURTI..Maan peep and startled to see her chatting in FB and wonder thinking abt her words her world,so tis stupid thing is her world ,he stare at her who ignored his presence completely and lost in her GURTI world..

Maan wonder how cum she chatting still being in hospital he sigh thinking its not wonder as he know how crazy she is for GURTI

Maan: Geet tis te time to chat in FB

Geet: Maan today special day how cum i wont go to my world,today my GURTI DAY,Maan twisted his eyes brows hare LOVE means GURTI ( haina girls LOVE MEANS MAANEET)

Maan stare at her

Geet : omg so many notification and ffs to read and comment wat i will do how i will type..she look at Maan

Maan : wat

Geet : Maan can u type comments for me bechari Geet is ill naa and i got hurt too, with a baby face

Maan was shocked think she is asking him to type for her: u asking me to be ur PA haan

Geet : why how many times i typed for ur work, u can do once naa

Maan : dare u involve me in ur stupid things,showing his big eyes

Geet: DD

Maan: Geet how u thinking abt all tis craps even in tis condition

Geet was typing: even in our death bed we cant stay away from our GURTI..(correct girls)

Maan got angry hearing her words and yelled : Geet

Geet look at him: don't shout and don't disturb me for some time, ur time is over, now my GURTI time,She was just got busy in her world

Maan got annoy thinking here too she is engrossed in her stupid show., wat will be happen in future,he want to band all te social network damn tis craps..he look at her who ignored his presence,he try to snatch te phone from her

Geet pull it: pls Maan im just seeing wat all came not reading ,Maan glare at her, pls,with baby pleading face

Her 5 mins turned into half an hour Maan frowned

Maan: Geet

Geet look at him who is ready to pounce on her..Geet smiled sheepisly and lean on him ,Maan know she is paciflying him..

Geet: Maan see tis naa,

She started to give intro abt everyone and their history..Maan was annoyed but he know she wont stop her radio so just listening to her quietly, she was saying how she came into tis world thru shaina and how she got so many friends ..Maan have no other choice rather than to listen to her

Soon he felt her tone reduced,he look at her who slept on him but her mouth was still talking..Maan node his head seeing her blabbering,slowly took te phone from her hand and saw some one waiting for her reply,he got a naughty thought, he just typed CHENNAI EXPRESS stopped in her station and close te FB with a naughty grin, he made her lye properly..

He look at her angelic face and smiled,he kissed her forehead,he scoop her in his arms and carried down to te room,placed her on te bed, he felt she will be uncomfortable with her dress..he slowly removed her jewels then called nurse to change her dress, till then he changed in next room

After nurse left, he laid beside her staring at her,he cupped her face, he felt content being with her and fulfilled her wish to celebrate her first VD but felt guilty tat they celebrated in hospital..he decide he won't leave single person who gave pain to his MISTY..he know she wont even bear a small hurt and make tis world upside down with her scream but now bearing all tis only for him..he have promised himself from now on no harm will near her till he alive..he pecked her lips and slept holding her

Morning

Geet was watching te entrance waiting for Maan,when she wake up and saw she was in her bed, she know Maan have brought her down but where he went wen she asked dadi she said he went to office..her eyes struck on the door and she slept due to medicine effect

On other side of te city, a haunted godown away from te people,inside it was very dark, but te whole godown was echoing with some one's painful cry..basement of te godown, Maan was sitting surround by his mens..

The whole atmosphere was very calm but the only sound was the man who was screaming in pain,his lungs was crying in pain,he want his death to engulf him soon,rather than to face te hell which was sitting in front of him in FORM OF HELL,TE REAL HELL

Maan who came to know that his mens got hold of tat b**** ,he at once want to kill them and show them what real te hell is,he want to show to his enemies what could happen if they try to touch him or his possessions..he want to rush to them but controlled seeing his MISTY but now he know his MISTY is safe and came here to show them they hell

All were killed by Raghav and team but only tis two were remaining, as Maan himself want to give them wat they deserve.. so they tied tis two, one was half dead due to Raghav's third degree treatment..he was angry seeing tis b**** and want to kill them thinking about his baby sister but control as his boss want to do that with his hands

Maan was sitting calmly but he was chopping that man's fingers which had shot his Geet. the godown was out of city ,it was isolated and no one is present 10 kms around the godown,so no one can hear his scream

Maan in front of man who try to snatch his life, his jaan, his Geet from him..he was very calm but his eyes was blood shot red,his whole blood is boiling.his nerves were clenching inside..his inner volcano was ready to burst at any time..

Maan was chopping his finger like a cutting veggies, he didt had any feel for doing tis, te only thing was his Geet who was in blood of pool was flashing in front of him making him to behave like a devil..

Hearing his scream another man got his conscious and saw how Maan is giving a slow deathful torture,his whole body was shivering in fear in front of his eyes MSK looks like real devil..he pee in his pant but he want to try his last chance he know any how he will die but before tat he want to take his revenge

Maan stopped his act wen he heard te other man started to laugh,Maan look at him who is laugh was ecohing te whole godown.

Tat man: hmm so MSK was a coward,hearing his words Maan hand which was holding the knife stopped..i thought u will fight like a man but not like tis using your power surrounds by bgs,every one can do this

Maan eyes blood shot and burning his soul but he composed himself and staring at him who trying to hide his fear.

Man: hmm i thought im fighting with a man all these years, but now i ashamed to know that i fighting with a coward.Maan stood up pushing his chair down like a hungry lion.

Man: what u shocked to know that i said these many years im waiting for u

Maan : how i could't recognized u Munnabhai,that man had lost his face colour in shocked, brother of tagore who have kill himself in jail

That man got angry: its because of u he went to jail and he suicide ,

This man's brother was a big dadda and a money lender..it was one time wen Maan came to know that his one of staff got suicide becoz of his bro and got arrested by police and asked police to get all the proofs against him and made him rotten in jail for rest of his life,from that day Maan have made a rule to sanction loan to his staff when ever they ask without any interest..

Tat man killed himself in shame as he felt humilate in his under world business

Man: coz of u only he killed himself,from that day i was trying to trap u,but that three revials called me and i used this chance to meet u and take my revenge

Maan: and to die like u brother haan with a devilishly smirk

Man: we will see that,u untie and face me like a man not like tis

Bahadur try to hit him but Raghav stopped him nodding no..Maan gesture Bahadur and he untie him..Maan took the gun and shot te other man on his head and he fall on the ground..the man was shock and frighten seeing Maan ki face but composed himself as he got a last chance to face MSK

Maan: what scared

Man just rush to punch Maan but he moved and he fall on the ground hitting his face..

Maan smirked : i think u became old

Tat man got up and again try to punch,before tat Maan hold his hand and twisted it and pouncing his face and stomach making him split blood,that man was growling in pain but still he didt accept his defeat and try to hit Maan,he want to take revenge for his bro..He pushed Maan making him to hit the table slightly piercing his skin on his lips,his bgs was abt to rush to hit he showed his hand making them to stop

Hospital

Geet got up suddenly is she felt some thing peirecing her skin..Dadi hold her

Dadi : wat happen beta

Geet : oh where is Maan,

Dadi smile and kiss her :, missing him haan,with a teasing smile, don't worry Geet he will cum soon

Geet node her head but still her heart was restless to see Maan..she felt some thing is there, tats why Maan left her..her gaze was struck at te door..

Other side

Man laughed: what paining,but im happy to see ur pain when u hold that girl who i have shot..i think she is ur..Maan clenched his fist..but not bad Msk she is very hot,

Before he continues his face got a punch from Maan..Maan blood boiling when he said abt his Geet,tat man stumble but stood balancing himself wiping his blood and smirked at him thinking he touched his weak point, but he dont know Geet is MSK'S POWER

Man : wat u r blood boiling,wen my mens said abt her i didt consider their words, Maan look at him,tat day in dhabba, it was planned by me,but now after seeing her i know why they had a urge to touch her and have her for one day,she look very sexy,wiping his blood thats it Maan loss his last bit of control and started to punching him

Maan : how dare u try to touch my Geet how dare u,he was punching without knowing where he is hitting him, tat man was startled..but Maan didt stop his act, he got angry hearing his Geet name from tis b**** mouth, how dare he utter her name..

Maan was hitting, his each punch fall on him like hard blow..te man fall on te ground nearly to death, but Maan didt leave him, he was kicking his stomach making him to split te blood..Maan was out of control if some one try to stop him, they too have to burn in his rage..Maan took te gun and shot him,that man died but Maan didt stop shooting,he shot till the bullet got over..he was furious, he want to burn tis whole world to sooth his burning heart..

Maan started to roar like a wounded lion echoing te whole godown : ahhh

All was startled to see their boss but scared to go near him..Adi felt bad to see his friend, wen Raghav called him and said abt Maan cuming to godown he too rush as he know how furious he was..he didt interfere wen he killed tat two b****..Adi know they deserve tat, he saw Maan who was shouting,he hold him and hugged him to calm him

Adi: its ok nothing happen he died,he pat his back

Maan: how dare he touch my Geet.

Maan was wriggling in Adi's hold..He was shouting his whole body is trembling thinking wat would have happen if some thing happens to his MISTY..Adi hugged him tightly calming him, after some time Maan compose himself and broke the hug.

Maan saw his mens: clear everything and left with Adi,Maan hit the car

Adi: Maan

Maan: how was im so careless Adi what would happen if something

Adi shouted : nothing will happen nothing will happen to any one

Maan stare at him: hmm i want tat three b****** to rotten in roads..i know they are bows but te main arrows are still in peace..i would have killed them but they were once papa's friends but at the same time i cant leave them..i should see what would happen when they try to mess with MSK

Adi hold his shoulder: i know u will say this is i already started the work..before Geet get discharged and step into km they will cum to roads, no one will cum for they help

Maan stare at him and node,he thought to leave, before he turn Adi hold him and pat his shoulder, Maan saw him, he hugged him, Adi pat his back..Maan broke te hug and left

Maan left to hospital as he know his soul will get peace only with his Geet wen he enter the room, he saw Geet sleeping..Dadi was sitting beside her,seeing him dadi smiled but got panick seeing blood strain on his lips and rush to him

Dadi: what happen , Geet stir in her sleep

Maan : shh Dadi Geet,pointing to Geet

Dadi lowered her voice,she made him sit in the couch and took cotton to wipe the blood

Dadi: what happen Maan,again they try to,her heart was beating fast

Maan : no dadi i killed that mens who try to kill Geet

Dadi sighed: tat three mens

Maan: they will get punishment..

Dadi: im so proud of u beta i know u can do anything for ur family,Maan stare at his dadi who support his act rather than crying and scared for his act

Dadi : im not usual women who cry for tis, i have seen more than tis Maan, they should get wat they deserve, if u leave them now they will destroy many lives, so u saved them from tat monsters,Maan kissed her temple and hugged her,Dadi caress his hair, what commissioner said

Maan: he said he wont interfere what ever decision i take

Dadi : hmmm..Maan look at Geet..now only she slept..

Maan: hmm

Dadi : u too sleep Maan u look tired

Maan: no dadi im so happy thinking i killed tat b** but stopped i killed them with my hands im so happy and laid on her lap..

Dadi caressed his hair, Maan was lying and thinking abt te event..but they trance broke hearing Geet's voice

Geet : this is very bad im not well but Maan is sleeping on dadi too bad sexy u don't love me..both look at Geet and chuckled seeing her pout

Maan: this is my dadi hugging her waist

Geet : dadi i want to lye on ur lap push that IDIOT

Maan smirk at her hugging dadi more, at that time dadi phone rings..she excused herself and went out to talk, it was from their family pandit after Geet got shot she got worry and asked him to arrange a pooja for them after she cums to km..

Geet smile: see she left u i love my sexy

Maan chuckled and sat beside her, Maan was staring at her, Geet gesture wat, he node no and laid beside her burying his face on her neck like a small baby snuggling to his mother,he want to calm himself..Maan was nuzzling his nose on her skin and kissing her,Geet sense his restless and caressed his hair which sooth his heart..Maan was hugging her and wetting her skin with his kisses..Geet kissed his hair and caressing it

Geet : im so happy Maan that my Maan gave that mens what they deserve

Maan got startled and stop his kiss, raised himself and look at her..when dadi shout seeing Maan, Geet got up but when Maan said Geet,she know some thing so pretend to sleep and hear him

Geet finger caressed his lips: im so happy that u killed that mens but im sad..Maan saw her i cant see that,hmm u r too bad u could have taken me naa i to want to see they death how dare they try to kill my Maan..

Maan was shocked hearing her,he thought she will get scared to hear that he killed some one and she will worried to see him as a murder but she is feeling happy and angry on him why he didt take her..what kind of girl she is

Geet : how u killed him Maan by gun haan,Maan node yes,omg i missed a action movie..

Maan chuckled: i thought u will get scared and cry thinking i became murder

Geet: i think u seeing so many films chupke chupke,Maan saw her,how can u think like this u gave them punishment im so happy thinking what u thought go by law and punish them but that guys will find any loop and cums out..i dont want that..i wish all should be punish like tis culprits bravely and fight for themselves rather waiting for justice..im not saying we should go against law but some times we have too..

Maan pushed her hair : what kind of girl ur

Geet:im typical indian girl who love her family more,Maan stare at her,then think wat could happen if they shoot u i know nothing will happen to u but i should be ur in place and crying for u, thank god i got shoot and didt feel that pain.

Maan gap at her: u very selfish

Gert: yes for my love im selfish and smile at him

Maan: I LOVE U

Geet try to raise herself but she cant as her position didt let her do

Maan : what u want

Geet pout : cum close naa

Maan was confused: what

Geet : IDIOT cum close

Maan sighed and thought she want to say some thing he lean more on her and turned his face so that his ears were placed on her lips..Geet turned his face and just kissed his lips near his wounds

Maan winched,Geet look at him and caress his lips and kiss him again, Maan was startled thinking for first time she kissed him his heart was jumping in joy.

Geet : its paining

Maan node his head..Geet placed her lips and started to give butterfly kisses moving her lips all over his lips.. Maan clenched her hair and try to kiss her but she broke it

Geet: today i want to kiss u and show my teacher how well he teached me but if u kiss i wont

Maan know he is inviting problem but he cant deny his MISTY,he node and Geet started to kiss him and pulling him more on her..Maan didt put his weight and lye beside her..his lips,she want to take the pain from his lips.. n make him forget his tensions. she took his upper lips.

Geet was just kissing him, she said she want to kiss but don't know how to start, always he will be te one who take te lead but today she want to kiss him and sooth him.. she was trying to recollect wat all he will do wen he kiss her but at present nothing came into her mind..she was blank..she pouted n tried to remember how he made her feel special everytime making her forget everything..

Maan know abt his MISTY, even though she want to kiss him but she didt know wat to do..she is still a student..n he want to teach her or make a start..

Maan : Geet

Geet : hmm

Maan : don't think abt anything.just close ur eyes n try to do what u feel..when u feel me..just ur soft lips over mine..

his words made her feel shy but the passion she needed he ignited in her.she bent near him n looked at his m shaped lips..she placed her lips over his n closed her eyes..it felt heaven..

she slowly started to nibble his lower lips, it was sweet torture for Maan as she was slowly nibbling and chewing his lips like her candy, she was trying to show all her knowledge wat she learned from him, she want to taste and want to know wat was hidden inside his bow'shaped lips..

It was really a very pleasurable torture for Maan, even though he love to be kiss by his Geet and taking te lead but his inner beast was groaning in desire feeling her touches which burning his soul.her hands threading his hairs n pulling him closer..she couldnt get enough of him..she was too lost in kiss..n want to get more access.

Geet pushed his lip apart with her tongue to gain entry inside his mouth, sensing her intentions he opened his mouth and she insert her soft pink tongue inside his mouth and tracing his inner skin of his lower lips making him groan..Geet was shuddering feeling his mouth but she want to kiss him to make him feel special..Maan try to kiss her but she stop and glare at him like she want to take te lead today,Maan just obey her

Maan hands were roaming around her body over her dress, Geet raised herself to feel him more and her hands went behind his nape pulling his hair in her fist and massaging..her knee was rubbing his thigh, his whole body was burning with her gesture..Geet was just lost in her kiss without knowing she igniting his inner beast

Geet was playing with his tongue and sucking n chewing it, she was rotating her tongue inside his each and every cervics,both are shuddering and felt ripples passing thru them but it was very pleasurable moment for both..Maan couldnt hold back nor go against her wish..but his inner self want to feel her..

Slowly Maan took te lead as she was lost in him..he took her lower lips while she was kissing his upper..he toyed with her tongue when she played with his..she was too lost in him to notice his play ..he sucked her tongue extracting her flavour n she was doing same to him., they both lost in their kiss didt know whose tongue was in whose mouth,they just kissing nibbling and tasting them..

Both are not getting enough of him each other,they just lost in their kiss, Maan slowly reduce his intensity seeing her struggling for breath,they broke te kiss, Maan rest his forehead on her hers and both panting heavily,he saw her face flushed and her blushing

Maan smiled and kissed her both cheeks: not bad Geet u became a prefect student

Geet: then who is my teacher raising her invisible collar,Maan its paining

Maan: no baba

Geet: hmmm she was staring at him

Maan kiss her lips and kissed her eyes: now sleep

Geet node no no..Maan was leaning on her and whispering his breath was shivering her

Maan: u r blushing Geet, where my bold sherni went off who kissing me few mins back

She kissed in a flow but now she was feeling very very shy..

Geet blushed hearing his teasing words and smack his arms : DD

Maan : i don't know tat my sherni's kiss will burn MSK

Geet face was flushing with his teasings : pls naa

Maan : but thanku, pecking her lips, I LOVE TE KISS

Geet shied and hugged him. Maan too hugged and nuzzled her neck with his nose..Geet clenched his shirt..



PRECAP : SHERNI..😉

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LIKES ARE DECREASING I KNOW WHY COZ OF MY LATE UPDATING..THANKU FRIENDS FOR ALL WHO SUPPORTING ME ALL THESE YEARS..I WILL TRY TO BE REGULAR..
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PICXS ARE SEEN FRIENDS ?
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awesome update 👏
yes didu love means MAANEET
maan become jealous of geet reading ff n checking notification on FB😆
MAAN showed read hell to those 3 who try 2 harm geet
geet n daadi support maan for killing them
geet cribbing why maan not took her with him 2 show her how he killed them🤣
geet kissed maan😳😳
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