Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on pg 45 on 18 Dec - Page 25

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Vishu di.. Plzz update waiting..
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Happy Independence Day!! Jai Hind!! Vande Matram!! I love India etc... etc but I am truly proud of being Indian and my reason of being proud... "India is the only country where... "Kos kos pe badle vaani and char kos pe paani!!" Means at every mile the language changes and at every four miles... The taste of water is different!!! Still we are together!!"


Thank u so much lovely ladies... u guys r truly rocking and encouraging!! M sorry for keep u waiting for such a long time but now no more wait... Straight to update!!

Update dedicated to Ushoshi...

Part 39

Ganesh Mandir, Wedding Day

Kalpi entered the temple wearing a red bridal saree along with minimal jewelry and make up... She was looking like some new bride instead of a would be bride by her appearance...Walking as slowly as possible she reached the place where Akash was present... He was wearing golden kurta-pyajama. Though both were in simple attires but the glow on Akash was clear to understand that he is the groom which was just opposite to that of Kalpi's.

"U r looking beautiful" He said while checking out Kalpi, she felt weird stares on her body and felt uncomfortable but stayed mum... All in her mind was the last hope that things will work out in some or the other way!! "But u will look more beautiful with ur pretty smile... It hurts to see u sad." Akash added. Kalpi managed to give a weak smile and nodded her head.

"Kalpi... u still have time. U can back out... I can clearly see ur displeasure with this wedding. I don't want u to be in this forced relation. " He said.

"Akash... I don't want to." She said in lower tone.. Akash understood and held her hand gently and took her to the mandap!! The pandit was chanting mantras there and they both sat for the wedding rituals... Her tension was increasing with the passing time... she had her mobile by her side and she was glancing at it again and again... A tear fell from her eye when Pandit asked for girl's parents to do the kanyadaan... She closed her fist to hide the drop in it and said... "My baba is not in the town and my mother is dead!! I have no one by my side to do the knayadaan."

"Not any relative??brother/sister.. anyone??" Pandit asked with a surprise.

She shook her head in no a voice caught their attention... "I will do her kanyadaan!!" She recognized the voice and murmured... "Pakhi??"

"Yes... Pakhi... ur sister!! Kalpi, you should have informed me about ur wedding... I would have convince Kamla maa to do ur Kanyadaan... U know, she can never say no to me!! Btw, why r u marrying so secretly?? I just followed u after seeing ur different behavior from yesterday!! But y r u doing this Kalpi... That too at the time when Raghav had gone out of the city!! Wait... U only sent him out for meeting!! So u wanted to hid it from all of us.. Tch Tch Kalpi!! But now I know ur secret..n I won't mind announcing it to Raghav. Well let me do ur Kanyadaan.. my little sis... Yes little sis as u r few minutes younger to me. Ohh Kalpi... I am so happy today!!" Pakhi taunted her as much as she can but Kalpi remained silent and let the ritual began... Finally her cell rang!! She saw the message and a smile came on her face which dint go unnoticed by Pakhi and Akash...

"Get up for pheras.." Pandit ordered at the same time... They got up and Akash started walking for the phera but Kalpi dint move a bit... "Kalpi.. come!!" Akash said but she dint move and hence he came back to take her with him. He held Kalpi by her arms but Kalpi jerked it off!! With utter shock he looked at her but before he can understand anything he felt a smashing slap on his cheek!!

"What the hell Kalpi!!" He roared.

"What the hell u think of urself Akash... U thought u can marry me by kidnapping Gauri aunty... U felt I am so weak that I will accept defeat without trying!! Ur game is over Akash.." With that she slapped him again... Pakhi took few steps back in fear...

"Enough Kalpi... Ur Gauri aunty is still with me!! Just marry me else I will..." Another slap and he got so angry than he pushed Kalpi forcefully on the floor and raised his hand to slap her back when a strong pair of arms stopped him with full force... Taken aback he looked to see who it is... "Sammy... but you??"

"Yes Sammy... Don't u dare to hurt her again." Sammy warned him.

"Silly people... Look like no one loves that old woman. She has to die now." He said cunningly and started leaving from there when he bumped in another person and got another shock seeing Raghav along with Gauri and cops. Without saying a word he punched Akash and kept beating him until a cop interfered...

"Sir... Don't take law in ur hands... He will get his due punishment." Cop said.

"No... I will punish him... How dare he touched my mother and kidnapped her!! How dare he hurt my Kalpi... The Kalpi who is my life... I won't leave him... He has to die and i will kill him." Raghav screamed loudly and started beating him again.

"Raghav stop!!" Kalpi screamed... And he stopped immediately just the way robot stops on giving some command.

"She rules his mind." Pakhi passed a sly comment and lowered her eyes on noticing Raghav's angry glare on her.

"Raghav... Let's cop do their work. I am sure he is not alone in this crime... He has to stay alive to tell us the real mastermind behind this game as I know Akash can't plan all this." Kalpi said and glared at Pakhi angrily who was taken aback.

Raghav nodded and pushed him back with jerk and hugged Kalpi without noticing the people around him... "Are u fine Kalpi... I am sure, U had to play along to find the culprit... I am sorry u had to go through this. I am sorry I took so much time to find maa..."

"Raghav.. I am fine!! I had full faith in you that u will come on time... " She replied and hugged him back tightly... "Raghav.." Sammy said to make them realize that everyone is around and they broke the hug and became cautious. Kalpi looked at Akash who was lying on the floor with bruises all over his body..

"Why u did this Akash... u were a friend.. I trusted u." She said softly. The pain of losing a friend was clear in her voice... She was betrayed again... Her trust was broken once again and that to by someone who stood beside her for last 5 years.

"Trusted me?? When Kalpi?? U just used me... U never accepted my friendship and whenever I asked u the reason, u said u don't believe in friendship... And Like a fool I believed in it and hoped that someday u will start believing relationship... And u know what u did... U became friends with Prem and Sammy... U never noticed my feelings for u... That's why I had no other option than blackmailing u... This was the only option left and I grabbed it!! N everything was going according to the plan... I don't know from where all this came?? Sammy had went to Ahmedabad... I myself have seen him going and Raghav... He had some meeting in Pune... U had sent him... I have heard it myself!!"


Now my usual rant... No proof reading and I am not satisfied with the update... M trying my best but still i feel something is missing!! Pardon me and blah blah!! well I kno.. none of u will read this note.😆
Edited by WonderQueen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update Vishu di.. I knew it.. I knew it.. I knew it... Mujhe pata tha its akash.. Thnk god Kalpi is shadi uss gadhe se nahi hui.. Di plz update nxt chappy waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz Vish update next part soon...thank god kalpi shouldn't marry wd aakash.. I knew it it's him...but at d end our both hero come back...and save our heroine now plz update soon...
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Wow akash did this all kamina kithna acting kiya usne 😡
Pakhi air kalpi ka kanyadan 🤢 it sounds disgusting

Now I'm eager to know how kalpi managed to say this to sammy and Raghav and how they managed to find gauri

Nice update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wowww what an update darling... u took my breath away young lady...keep updating asap...
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Thank u guys!! M on updating spree today so next part is here!! i might surprise u with the third update!!

Dedicated to SwityMango... Well Swity is my nick name!!😉

Part 40

"Heard it!! Right Akash... u have heard it!! But u know what Akash... u just heard what I chose to let u hear!! U did a small mistake... And the mistake was underestimating me and my capabilities!! U were not a capable villain Akash... Not even as smart as our telly soap vamps are... Well, why to go to telly world... U r dumber than vamp of my life... " She said while looking at Pakhi... Pakhi's blood boiled on the comment but she decided to ignore it as right now she was too shocked with all that happened in front of her. Kalpi continued... "Well... Don't give much pressure to ur mind... I will tell u how all this happened.

U remembered the night when u called me for the first time... I was going to meet Sammy and u warned me to not tell anything to him... Well that was the hint no. 1 that u r keeping an eye on me... But how was the bigger question... May be u were following me but then u gave me hint no. 2... U told me that I am smart enough to not share the kidnapping thing with Raghav... So that means u knew what happened inside Singhania mansion... And finally hint no. 3 U called me just after my call with Sammy... impatience u know!! At that time I was in my room so the option of following me was ruled out!! The only way to keep an eye on me was some remote device... but what it could be?? A CCTV camera?? No!! Because the location was different!! Than what it could be... I tried hard and recalled all ur words... u remember what u said?? My eyes and ears are always on u'... Eyes fine but why u said ears and the answer was simple... u were not watching me but listening... So it should be some recording device. But where it could be?? Again... First I was in car, second in hall and thirdly in my room so the device should be something which is always by side and what it could be?? MY red clutch... Which had all my bitter memories and I have never departed it from me. So searched it and Bingo... I found it!! A live recording networking device... Smart of u Akash!! But I wonder when u kept it in my bag and how do u know about it?? Answer please "

"I overheard u and Prem talking about it.. U were telling him that this is ur bitter past n u won't let it go till u get justice... N that day when I entered in ur office... U were in the washroom and ur handbag lying on the table... I opened it and found ur clutch inside... I inserted device in the smallest zip... That time my intention was to just know ur past and help u in healing it. It was the device due to which I came to know about ur plans and relationship with Raghav. And I decided that I can use it to track u... To know all ur plans... N it helped me in planning this kidnapping. All ur calls and talks were in scrutiny."

"That was right... But u fool!! In which era r u living?? From car only I smsed Sammy about Gauri aunty's kidnapping and told him to agree to go away from here as I knew that there is no way to track msgs. N after finding ur device it was so easy for me to talk to them on call. I just kept the device in the room and played the loud music and talked with Sammy over the call."

"But Sammy had boarded the plan.. I myself has checked it."

Sammy laughed on hearing it and said "Cops and contacts my dear friend... Just after Kalpi's call I called ASP and informed him about the kidnapping. He in the civil dress came with me to the airport... As we knew that u would confirm my PNR status on the call so the airport services were instructed to give affirmative answer and they did it. Just after an hour... I left airport and checked in a hotel. I knew that u will keep an eye on my house too so I dint took the risk. From there I called Raghav to meet and informed him everything. It was our plan that Kalpi will tell Raghav to go to pune while keeping ur device in her hand... N u fool got trapped."

"So the loud music was playing all night so that Kalpi can fool Akash and plan her next motive.. She is smarter than me!!" Pakhi thought!!

"But how u found about me?? I had left no clue behind... I even had a private number and was always polite to u Kalpi... Even denied to ur proposal at first coz I dint want u to doubt me." Akash asked surprisingly.

"Till I proposed u Akash... I dint know it was u. I just thought that I will take a risk and was guilty for breaking ur heart coz at one side I was proposing u and on the other side Raghav and Sammy were busy in finding Gauri aunty... But it was again ur over enthusiasm which caught u in trouble... When u accepted my proposal u said that we will meet tomorrow in the Ganesh mandir... Ganesh Mandir?? But I never told u about venue... It was me, Rags and Sammy who knew it.. Than who was the other person who can know about the venue... Obviously Blackmailer!! At that time, I knew it was u... But I had to play along as Gauri aunty was still with u..." Kalpi said angrily.

"But how u found that bhuidya(old lady)?" He asked again. Though he was in great pain but he was more curious to know the reason for his failure.

"Mind ur language bloody fool... She is my mother... It wasn't too tough to find her... Especially when we knew that it was u who kidnapped her. I tried tracing maa's number but the only information we got was that 2 days back,it was switched off just few kms away from singhania mansion... Tracing ur private number was not possible for us... But u had one another number too which u used for conversing with us. We traced all ur call details and luckily, u had made one call from lonavala... The area itself was big but too smaller than the city so our search was restricted... Than all we had to do was go through ur bank accounts to find any transaction in that area!! N surprisingly... No!! Neither u have taken out any penny from ATM or used ur card... Than how did u paid for the location or food for maa!! The answer was simple... u might have used her card so we found details of her card and luckily it was used at a local restaurant!! Along with police we reached there, After little interrogation with delivery boys and hotel bills... I came to know that the food was not being delivered at some house but to a man who was standing at the road!! I knew the road and it was truly a posh area... So where could u hid my mother in that area?? U don't have so much money that u can own a house in that room and no hotel was hired else u would not have ordered food from outside!! So the only option left was my own farm house which was just 2 kms away. We just rushed there and asked my security guard!! At first he was reluctant and said that mom came on her own and he is innocent but just in one punch, he accepted his crime that he helped u in this kidnapping!! N it took few minutes for us to reach here from there." Raghav told him the rest of the story.


Regards
Vish
Edited by WonderQueen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Really lovely
Akash is the culprit
Updates Updates soon
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Vish, my Queen of Suspense. Superb update. Loved it, Kalpi was at last saved. Always doubted Akash was behind this kidnapping. It was good to see Raghav beating him. How and when were Raghav & Sammy informed by Kalpi about this? So eager to know that. I am sure Pakhi must be the mastermind, hope she gets punished soon enough.
P.S.: Didn't find anything wrong with update, maybe you just need some time to get fully involved with story emotions wise. But there is nothing wrong in the way you write or the story.😳
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

Vish, my Queen of Suspense. Superb update. Loved it, Kalpi was at last saved. Always doubted Akash was behind this kidnapping. It was good to see Raghav beating him. How and when were Raghav & Sammy informed by Kalpi about this? So eager to know that. I am sure Pakhi must be the mastermind, hope she gets punished soon enough.

P.S.: Didn't find anything wrong with update, maybe you just need some time to get fully involved with story emotions wise. But there is nothing wrong in the way you write or the story.😳



Exactly Charu... that's the problem!! M not able to connect with my stories anymore!! My heart is not in it and hence m not able to write or describe emotions properly!! I just want to end it as go to my love revisited!!

Btw thank u for likiing it!!

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