Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on pg 45 on 18 Dec - Page 26

Already updated 2nd part!! Going to write 3rd!!

Whoah, you are on an updating spree. 😃 Second fabulous update. 👏 Love the way you show Kalpi's intelligent brain & plans. 😳 my fav part when Pakhi says she is smarter than me. 😆 Loved the update. 😃⭐️

Wow that awesome kalpi so smart

awesome update Vishu di.. Wow kya mast line this kalpi ki... Waah!! Waah!! Waah!!.. Waiting for 3rd part

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unres
both the updates are wonderful😳
u r seriously amaze us with each twist and turns in every update

part 39
love the way u describe kalpi's entry into Mandir. Aakash is already there waiting for her, and is realy expecting smile from her?😡 jerk he is😡
wow..kalpi said her mother is dead, no matter kamla wasnt there to hear it, bt its realy punishment for her.

What? Pakhi😡😡 how dare she? She wanted to do kalpi's kanyadan, what she think of herself.😡

whoa, kalpi slapp akash! Wow😎 keep it up kalpi. Bt that jerked raised his hand on kalpi, thakfully sammy reach their on time. And raghav also successful saving gauri.

Love the way raghav stop beating akash after kalpi's voice and hug her nt caring abt any1.

Though akash's deed are nt justifying still he is anger is undstandable. He wish kalpi atleast a frnd with him bt in past betrayal she refuse and to add fuel sammy n prem become frnd with her with time zone.
Lol..akash is curious to knw hw all dis happen, like me😉

part 40
. U r dumber than vamp
of my life... 🤣 well said kalpi.
What an fabulous plan kalpi made and just amazing that sammy and raghav to play along with her. Smart kalpi, how brilliantly she understand akash's words and find live record device. And used that device against him.

She is smarter than
me!!" Pakhi thought!!🤣Seriously pakhi, u must have to say she is nt dumb like u🤣

wow..akash is realy so curious! Poor guy must didnt able to undstand kalpi's smartness and singhania's power. Love d way they searched gauri, though akash himself gave them clue still, raghav did fabulous job.

Thankfuly, at last kalpi didnt got trapped and married to akash and even gauri is safe.

astonishing update, love d way story took twist and turns.

Ps. Sory 4 late unres, waiting 4 nxt update

Wow this is the word that left my mouth after reading how kalpi managed to inform Raghav and sammy 👏 you are just to good and u maintain this suspense very well we can't guess what happens next u always surpise us with most unexpected twists

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Vish, my Queen of Suspense. Superb update. Loved it, Kalpi was at last saved. Always doubted Akash was behind this kidnapping. It was good to see Raghav beating him. How and when were Raghav & Sammy informed by Kalpi about this? So eager to know that. I am sure Pakhi must be the mastermind, hope she gets punished soon enough.

P.S.: Didn't find anything wrong with update, maybe you just need some time to get fully involved with story emotions wise. But there is nothing wrong in the way you write or the story.😳

hi vish di welcome back & congratulation on ur wedding oh my god double updates enjoyed throughly i know u don't know me that well because i don't comment usually but I'm an ardent fan of ur ff's . Just one confusion what is that pakhi doing in that situation because she knew all the secrets that prem is with kalpi & rags & sammy also knows everything I'm just curious to know & just wating that how will the story unfolds...