FF- Kab tak Chup Rahoongi -chapter23 pg41

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mesmerized

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey everyone right I was sitting in my living room bored out of my mind and out of nowhere thought of this new FF right its not as good as the other FF and its quite confusing but let me know if you think I should give it an attempt.

Thanks

I haven't thought of a title or anything but here's just a brief :

- maithali and kasturi are sisters they live with there Parvati mama they love each other to bits . Kasturi is the older sister but Maithali seems more mature then her. Kasturi is in love with there neighbour Adi she is too scared to tell anyone but eventually tells maithali . maithali although she is completely against such idea of her sister and adi been an couple says she will help her to win over adi. On the other hand adi leaves with his mom and dad (ofcourse) and his brother sujal (just imagine the old sujal from KTH😳) sujal likes maithali and decides as soon as he finishes his study he will propose to her but meantime keeps it a secret ….. ok am not gonna write anymore just incase everyone things it's lame but be honest if you feel I should not do it then tell me…

Edited by mesmerized - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

😊 soundz pretty gd i fink u shud cary on anjaneajnabi 😊 sory dnt no ur name lol 😛

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NShah28

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Posted: 17 years ago

Fantastic!!! sounds really really good!!! go for it!!! woohoo!!!

I have a new found love for FF!! the more the merrier, writing one myself at the mo!! it takes you into a different world!! 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

lovely!!!! love you're concept!!!! 😛
can't wait to see AM fall for each other!!!
maithili wins over Kasturi ANYDAY!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

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shivrani

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Posted: 17 years ago

This is awsomee you have to write more!! 😊

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mesmerized

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Posted: 17 years ago

thxs evey1 really glad you all like it 😳

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mesmerized

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: henaz
😊 soundz pretty gd i fink u shud cary on anjaneajnabi 😊 sory dnt no ur name lol 😛

thxs call me farhan

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mesmerized

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Posted: 17 years ago

Ok here it goes am very rusty as I haven't written in a loooong time but please do correct any errors

Intro:

Maithali is a fun loving traditional girl. She is 19 years old and respects her older sister a lot, she goes to college and studies English Literature and hopes to make her Parvati mama and her parents Shruti and Sameer very proud one day.

Kasturi is 20 years old she loves her sister Maithali and sees her as a friend, Kasturi goes to the same college as Maithali but she studies fashion and hopes to style big stars one day.

Adi is a 20 years old and is very spoiled he is over pampered by his parents and especially his brother who takes all his blames on his shoulders. Adi loves partying and going out with girls he doesn't like going to college but his dad tells him its either studying or work and obviously he choice studying.

Sujal who is 21 years old … is opposite Adi he studies business and helps his dad at the office as much as he can. He believes in love and is waiting for the perfect girl who happens to be the girl next door.

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mesmerized

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Posted: 17 years ago

Ok here it goes am very rusty as I haven't written in a loooong time but please do correct any errors

Chapter 1

Maithali and Kasturi are in their room dancing around to both of their favourite song

Piya piya o piya piya

Piya piya o piya

Subah shaam kare mera jiya

Jiya jiya jiya jiya

Piya piya o piya piya

Piya piya o piya

Piya piya o piya piya

Piya piya o piya

Na jaane kyon dil dhadkeghadi ghadi ye kyon tadpeHo bedardi tune isko dard ye kaisa diyaPiya piya o piya piyaPiya piya o piya

Parvati enters the room stares at both her grandchildren, smiling at there childish behaviour

P: tum donor kya kar rahe ho? (Excuse my hindi spelling am trying) – What are you two doing?

M: sorry dadu hehe we can't sleep so we decided

K: to sing Piya piya o piya

P: tick ha tick ha just because you can't sleep doesn't mean you have to keep the rest of us up does it (parvati comments with a sarcastic smile on her face). Now go to sleep you have to wake up early tomorrow remember?

Saying this Parvati walks out shutting the door behind her

K: kyon? What's happening tomorrow?

M: first day back to college silly!

Kasturi puts her face to her pillow screaming oh no!!!

The next day Kasturi and Maithali both come running downstairs

K & M: Good morning papa good morning mama

Sameer: good morning ready for college you two

K: summer just flew by it feels like just yesterday we got leave from college

M: stop complaining di! hai papa we're ready to take on the world

Sameer: laughs that's my girl

Shruti: why don't you two go to school with your dadi after all she is…

M: mama are you mad if somebody in college sees us going to college with the principal they will laugh at us

P: so if anybody laughs at my grandchildren they will be very sorry

K & M: dadu please!!! We will be fine

P: ok then see you in college and don't be late otherwise you will both get a detention

Both sisters quickly finish drinking their juice and run towards the door

K & M: love you mom love you dad

ok that's the first part I really hope you like it .. it's a bit slow but sorry the first couple of chapters will be a bit slow .. please do comment, criticise etc 😳

Edited by anjaneajnabi - 17 years ago