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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

how r u Prabh? hope u r better now
it was a lovely update
liked mihika's observations and her begging to Ru...it was funny 😛
actually i have nothing new to say about raman's care to his fav girls
he is a flawless hubby and father...
he always put their happiness and comfort above everything in this world
he didn't tell ishita anything about his headache but she realized it and
prepared special tea for him...loved this part
their mothers noticed d changed equation of their relationship and
became emotional as well as happy for their children 😊
looking forward to d next update dear 😊

Hey, I'm doing much better now, thanks for asking. And thank you so much for liking the update! I;m glad you liked Mihika noticing IshRa and asking Ruhi to be quiet! And Raman is an impossible dream guy, and I like to keep him that way, glad you like him like that as well! Happy you liked the bit where she sees he is hiding his pain and tries to fix it all while the mothers noticed them! Thanks again for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

From the beginning to the end... Perfect!

Prabh you'd once said that you are shy penning romance... I believe you are the beat at it! Other people write about those mushy, lovey-dovey moments... but your work is of substance... it's meaningful and significant to the basic crux of "A Contract of Love"

This is my most favourite part:

"I'll make tea for Raman and I should add ginger to it as well. He won't say it or ask for it, but it'll help with his headache. He never complains, but thinks I don't see his pain. I see it and I'll get rid of it."

Very well done Prabh... I'm sure you know... I'm perhaps the biggest fan of your work...!!

Thank you so much Di! I mean you though it was perfect, means so much to me! And I still feel shy and doubt the way I write romance, but this is what I can do, so I'm more than happy to know you like it this way. And you think I'm the best at it? That's really overwhelming and honestly a huge comment! So thank you so much for that. And glad you liked Ishita's monologue about his pain and how she wants to take it away with small simple things! Thank you so much Di for liking this and commenting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Big Thank you for Sakshi for the new banner for the 4th thread. It was beautiful and perfect for new chapter of Ishra life. Love you dear.❤️❤️ Prabh unres my post on pages 15😃
Edited by usaonly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here i was thinking Mothers Day was Over..silly me..😆
Smiles you never told me we are celebrating mothers day here..🤣

Let's remake...😆


and it will be ...Sirf aur sirf Maa Keliye 🤣 🤣
Kyunki Saas bhi ek Maa hai 😆





Movie Over...🤣 🤣 (IKR..it ended where it started rey..kya karoon..low budget movie boss😆)


And about Ishra..☺️
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon... (For a Salman Fan 😎)..
i got it..i got it..😆
Yeh hai Mohabbatein ❤️


Amazingly written rey..i loved it..👍🏼

Edited by nitii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Beautiful start for new chapter and new thread.Now they are ready to be back to their home(can call home now cause it fill with love)no more sadness and painful from the past all that chapter had close in Mumbai.From this trip they got to learn a lot and let go the painful past all Mu was clear to all the friends near Raman and Mihika for Ishu.The plane scene was beautiful how they are comfortable when they sleep in each other arms and shoulders.😳 Ruhi is a darling this chapter cause she listen to her new found friend Mihika and let her parents sleep peacefully till they landed.Once they back home and welcome by their parents they can see the development of their relationship. They are more comfortable caring and concern for each other.Ishu care for small detail of Raman headache and made special tea for him. Raman take care of Ishu when she run to the bathroom. the way they walk hand in hand together all these progress never miss the observe by both mother. Hope will get more cute scene and family teasing for the family to fill with love and join in next chapter.,For now Ishra can get their love ones to help to take care Ruhi and Ishu so she will be not so tired. And I don't know what Raman plan for Ishu work cause now she manage for his work in the office and home.Thank you for beautiful update and so far the beautiful journey of A CONTRACT OF LOVE.See you next update.🤗🤗

Thank yous o much! Glad you liked this chapter! They are finally back home and the next chapter will have a small mention of what you said on the meaning of home. Their sad pasts, let's see what happens with that now, but all in all IshRa came closer in the end and that's all that matters. Glad you liked the plane scene as they slept together as well as Ruhi supported her parents by staying quiet. And both have always cared, but now care just a bit extra for each other because of some new unknown feeling. Glad you liked them walking hand in hand and their mothers seeing that and becoming happy for their children. There will be some teasing shortly and family fun not in the next chapter, but maybe after that! And now IshRa can take time for themselves like you said and we'll see what Raman does about her job soon too. Thank you so much for liking and commenting. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nitii

Res😆

will unres it soon..no res business in this thread 😆

Well you said you will unres soon, so waiting for your unres!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 56

They walked into their room as he shut the door behind them. He jumped straight into bed claiming home sweet home while she laughed as she witness a serious son and son-in-law outside and here he was acting like her husband again; really cute and sweet. She sat down in bed next to him as he lay down telling her how he felt at home again since that house was not of his taste. He asked her what home she preferred and all he got in response was...

"I don't like either house. I like my family since they make the house a home."

"You're philosophical thoughts have begun again. It's this house I'm telling you."

"And it's this house that makes you so carefree!" They both shared a laugh before she lay down next to him and suddenly sat back up. He lifted his head to ask her what was happening when she placed her hand on his head and make him lay back down. He rested his head and closed his eyes while she patted his head gently watching the lines on his forehead disappear...

"Tired, right?" she whispered in case he was alright asleep.

"Hmmm."

"You worked so hard today."

"Hmmm."

"Probably have a headache too."

"Hmmm"

"Raman you know I don't like your hmmms and all."

"Hmmm."

"Once more and you've had it from me." He didn't reply. At first she thought he was listening to what she said, but then as he turned and grabbed her hand, she knew he had fallen asleep since he had been woke from his sleep halfway on the plane. She smiled at him and placed a kiss on his forehead before cuddling next to him and dozing off looking at his sleeping baby like face...

~~~~~

An hour later, he was freshening up after their nap while she had changed herself before and was sitting out in the balcony with her parents. She told them animatedly about Mumbai. She talked about meeting Mani there and Bala & Vandita as well while her parents admired the happiness on their daughter's face that seemed to have reappeared on her face after a long time...at least for them.

"Ishu, it's so nice to see you smiling and talking again." Her mother couldn't help think aloud and surprised Ishita who was busying talking to her father about her South Indian connection with Vandita. She smiled at her and knew her mother well enough to know exactly what she was talking about...

"Then thank your granddaughter, your unborn grandchild and your son-in-law for that. They are always doing something or the other." She smiled at her mom who got up and gave her a tight hug.

"Ishu I'm so happy for you!"

"Wow that's a lot of happiness Amma. You alright?" she asked breaking apart the hug and asking her mother to sit down again.

"Of course, we're fine. Just got a bit emotional seeing you so well settled after everything that has happened."

"Amma, please. I don't want to remember the past. It's bitter, and it hurts. All I know right now is that Raman is my husband and I just want to have a normal happy life with him and our kids."

"You will, that's what we all wish for."

"Now enough emotional talks, how about some coffee made by me?" she tried to lighten the mood after seeing her parents getting emotional.

"Why not?" Mr.Iyer exclaimed and added on how much he missed her coffee.

As she got up, Raman walked onto the balcony greeting Mr. and Mrs. Iyer with a smile with he looked at Ishita confused as she stepped inside.

"Raman, I'm making some coffee for Amma and Appa, do you want some?"

"No I'm fine and is it okay if I ask the help to make some. You shouldn't be working after a flight."

"Nothing can be done about you. My parents only like my coffee."

"Fine, and tell mom to make a light dinner. I know she'll go all out with oil and butter if you don't tell her. And she'll only listen if you say because she'll just tell me I need to be strong and out on weight."

"I agree with her. Extra buttery and oily for you now."

"And nothing can be done about you either!" They both shared a laugh oblivious that their parents were looking at them from the kitchen and balcony respectively. As they noticed their parents looking at them reminding them they weren't alone in Mumbai anymore, they quietened down and went to their own in-laws embarrassed at their talks out in the open. He sat down on the patio chair leaning back and right then Mr. Iyer got a call which he went to the side to attend. All this while Mrs. Iyer looked at Raman with teary eyes. He noticed her look the other way trying to wipe her tear. He sat up straight and looked at her softly...

"Amma..."

"Raman..." she wiped off her eyes worried he might has seen her cry.

"Why are you crying?"

"I don't know what to say." She decided to share with her son-in-law.

"What happened? Is there any problem?!"

"No, these tears are out of happiness. And I don't know how to thank you... for everything you are doing for my daughter...being a perfect husband for her and father for the baby..."

"I'll do anything and everything for my wife..."

"Raman she's a simple girl whose life become way too complicated. It was so called love and it left her with a child in her and no father to give love to it."

"Amma, but why are you telling me all this? I already know..."

"Raman I want you to know Ishita from before she married you and after that man left her. She might have told you something, but I also want you to know a few things. My daughter was called horrible things and judged by people. I would have never known about her pain before she broke the news of the baby to us, I never thought about how she felt carrying a baby without a marriage certificate or the man whose name would be stamped on the birth certificate, but he won't be by her side which society demands. Her Appa was furious and I was upset, but it was Mihika who told us we shouldn't show anger on her and that's when-"

"You didn't support Ishita before me..." he looked disbelieved at her mother with some anger shown in his tone. How could they have left their daughter at such a delicate point of her life? Tears formed in his eyes as he tried to think of going through all she told him alone for he had always thought she had supportive parents all along.

"It was my worst mistake. But I really think I have repented for that mistake by getting her married to you."

"Amma..." he shook his head at her showing his dislike for their behaviour towards his Ishita. But her mother knew it was his love for her speaking over his respect for her. And she ignored as she continued...

"My daughter's a fragile doll...she broke when that man used her and threw her. She acted brave in front of everyone and acted like society didn't mean a thing to her, but she was broken. She cried alone in the 4 corners of her room and always smiled at us so we would be strong enough to hold her together. She walked head held high in front of people who knew and others who believed rumours about it...but never cried in front of everyone. And I'm sorry for this, but I happened to see you two today when Ishita felt sick. Raman...Ishu cries to you about everything in her heart. She talks to you...and trust me she rarely does that. To have a peek into her heart and see what she feel is something which even I hardly get to do, and I'm so thankful she's got you now. Raman you have gotten the way to her heart with your love."

"Love?" he didn't know how to react. He couldn't tell a mother he didn't love her daughter when she was his wife. But love? He was put back into his thoughts about what feelings he had for Ishita when his mother in law continued talking...

"Yes, I know you're probably thinking this old lady is yapping on, but Raman I just don't know how I should tell you what you have done for my daughter...your wife."

"No not at all, speak your mind..."

"She always wanted just one thing in her entire life... to be accepted and loved. She created this fairy tale with Subbu in her mind, but it shattered and she was so lost. I was worried for her more than anything. She had always been the more vulnerable between her and Mihika, and when she was left pregnant, she was at her worst point. She started to crave the love and acceptance that she thought Subbu would give. And you know I think her fairy tale will come true now. Because at that bad time, you did come like a hope in her life, more a hope for me to see my daughter happy. And you seemed to have swept her off her feet. I'm her mom and I can tell she has love for you and that very love reflects in your eyes Raman. And I had never thought I would see my daughter this loved and cherished by someone even with her baby ever...Raman all I'm trying to say is thank you for coming into Ishita's life and giving her so much love. You've given her love and trust me that has won over our entire family!"

"Amma, my wife will always be cherished by me. In fact I respect your daughter, care for the mother of my children, trust my mother's daughter-in-law and lo...cherish my wife."

He excused himself from there under the pretext of a phone call and walked into their room to be alone for some times as his mother-in-law got his mind going crazy again and he couldn't decide on his feelings for his wife, his madrasan, his Ishita anymore.

~~~~~

On the other hand, Ishita had been facing something similar as she stepped into the kitchen. Mrs. Bhalla was there as well checking on the dinner prep when she looked at Ishita coming in and starting to boil some water.

"Ishita, don't do any of this. Please just rest." She asked her to let someone else to all this and Ishita laughed wondering if she had made Raman so caring or if Raman had made her so caring after she came to their house.

"Mummyji you're just like your son, he wouldn't step off the bed if it was in his control. And then while doing that he forgets about everything else...even himself." She whispered the last bit, but Mrs. Bhalla heard and couldn't stop the tears in her eyes. How she had longed for her son to get the love and attention of his wife ever since his first marriage and now it was finally happening thanks to Ishita.

"Thank you so much!" she hugged Ishita who was taken aback but hugged her back as she knew something was up with her Amma getting emotional too a while ago.

"Ishita, how do I thank God for sending you to Raman? I'll honestly be grateful all my life that you agreed to marry me son. I have been noticing his smiles and his happiness visible on his face. I always used to say I can understand his pain like no one else, but seems like you can as well...maybe even better then me. His small headaches going away to his old happy go lucky attitude are starting to come back. He's finally getting all he ever wanted, some love from his partner. All thanks to you!"

"Love?" she didn't know how to react. She couldn't tell a mother she didn't love her son when he was her son. But love? She was put back into her thoughts about what feelings she had for Raman when her mother in law continued talking...

"Ishita, he was so shattered when his dreams of a happy family broke. It was all he ever wanted. A family that he would shower all his love on and get the same in return. That very dream has be broken so many times now. When his father left him, I remember how young he was. He had cried for 2 days. Just 2 days and then he became silent. He kept his feelings in and smile for the world and me. He started to sleep with me despite being mocked at because he became so scared of losing. He would cry at night to his dad's picture after he thought I had gone to sleep.

Ishita didn't realize when tears came into her eyes imagining Raman's pain. She remembered the time of her Bidaai how he cried about his dad, but never mentioned it again. He still had pain and hurt from his death deep down in his heart he had not let go of. And she wouldn't ask him either because he seemed to want it that way. He could control his emotions about his dad and they helped him always remember him. She wiped her tears as Mrs. Bhalla continued...

"And the same happened when Shagun left. She had created that dream again and shattered it with her own hands. They seemed to be happy & normal couple, but soon things started to get bad and Shagun left him alone with Ruhi. But now he has gotten one more chance. You...you. Raman and the kids look like a complete family and you give him that love he's craved for since his first marriage. You are a hope in his life and that why in my life as well! Thank you for coming into our house and making it a home." Her mother-in-law engulfed her into another hug as Ishita told her it was all fine.

"He's my husband. I will do anything I can to bring a smile on his face. Because more than him, I need his smile. I really do have a lot of respect, trust, and lo...admiration for him. You've raised him right Mummyji. He's so wonderful."

She made his mother laugh as she excused herself under the pretext of checking on Ruhi as she needed to think about what had just happened. She found herself reconsidering love when she thought about Raman, her husband... her Raman.

~~~~~

She rushed into their room blushing about what his mother just told her and bumped into him as he was walking back and forth ruffling his hair. He held her shoulder instinctively making sure she wouldn't fall or get hurt while she looked away from him embarrassed and he also let go quickly thinking about their respective mother-in-law's words.

But before both of them got a chance to think about each other or say anything to each other, they were called out into the living room by his mother and they rushed out to see what the matter was. They were asked to sit down just for some coffee and to chat as they returned after so many days. But both of them couldn't think about anything else except...love. They were both stealing glances at the other, occasionally getting caught and looking away when they did and returning back to their thoughts from before.

It was only when Mr. Iyer spoke up and said something that got a strong solid reaction from them...

"Mrs. Bhalla actually, Madhu and I were wondering if we would be able to have Ishu over for a few days."

"What?! No!" they both spoke in union as their parents looked shocked, but Madhvi and Santosh shared a small thumbs up and wink before they looked at their surprised kids in shock...

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That was all! Hope you all liked it and will leave your feedback! Looking forward to reading it!

Chapter 57 - Page 30
Edited by smilesforever98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

reserve...
chalo koi to kaam pehle kiya.. 😆



Unres

As usual.. Res First and unres late 🤔 Mai Pata nahi kab sudhrungi??

Prabh 🤗

Raman was so tired still was responding Ishita with his hmms. it shows he doesnt want to let her feel he is not listening even going into a deep slumber.. I loved that part where she caressed his forehead ..



You fullfilled my wish where i wanted both of them to have a conversation with their in laws but the cherry on the cake was their mentioning of term "LOVE" and their still not ready to accept this feeling as love phase..





I liked Raman getting angry on the fact that Her mother didnt support her when she might have needed her the most.. This is love Puttar.. Wake up..

So now the realization phase has begun and the teachers are going to be the mothers..


But chaahe jo bhi ho.I dont want Ishra to get separated even for a day.. Look even they dont want it..



But guess realizing love is also very important.. Isn't there any other way??😳


Eagerly waiting for the next part..

Love
Sakshi



Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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again repeating the same words but yeah it was beautiful

few updates back i had mentioned how you handled the emotions of a women so well being young yourself but today you amazed me once again and even more but handing emotions of the mothers that well

i dont know how you do it but you are just amazing...there is nobody better than you at handling emotions

both the mothers' happiness was clearly evident throughout the update

and Raman he was so happy to be back home to his room...that attachment looked so real


totally in love with the update Prabh

P.S. sorry for this hurried and late comment but i am really not getting any peaceful time

i will be back with more elaborate comments very soon
Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Surprise ----- res

Us se b jaldi----- unres 😉

Prabh.. Raat nahi din hai yahan haha. N I AM here. Even I am shocked plus I m third one to comment

Aaj toh mummy log ne emotional kar Diya ... N these mummies are more acting like catalysts than cupids in their lives. Just making them think faster about"they are in love" thing.
The last Line... N their reaction must be so embarrassing hehehe.

Prabh what I like the most in your writing is.. When u write about a particular character. His or her way of talking u put the right amount of maturity in their talks. Like amma n mummy are most serious types but if its mihika then there will a new generation type touch might be teasing or casual way.
Edited by sukanksha - 10 years ago

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