SwaLak OS -The beats of my HearT( 4,5,6 parts updated)

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so guyz dis OS is not written my me..it is written my someone on fb..and wen i read the story i found it very interesting..so isliye i thought to share with my swalak friends 😳😳

and the best thing abt dis is nagini is not der yet in dis Os 😆😆🤣


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1- The Entries

Here it begins wid
In Excel college...As it was d frst day of clg all were showing der tallents n were introducing to all
A boy was dancing on d sng kukad kamal da ...All were very amaizingly watching itt.. d dance cmplted..D boy was soo handsme wearing a black Tshrt n a red Blazer...
As d dance was cmplted by him and he started to introduce him self
Boy-"Hy all of u guyzz am a new student of dz clg n my name is LAKSH MAHESHWARI...aap log muje pyaar se lucky b bula sakte ho"
All d students crowd ws shouting " Lucky Lucky Lucky"
Laksh came dwn frm d stage n said to his frnd OMI...
Laksh-K sa laga yaar omi .. clg k frst day se sab apne diwane ho gaye..
OMI-Woh toh h lucky sab tere diwane hi ho jaate h. ..
Dey both were talking lyk dat n walking..
Near d clg gate a Girl parked his cycle n ws cming inside wid his Guitar..n phn.. n watching in phn..
Laksh n omi ws at back of dat girl n dey were so buzy in der talks dey dint saw d girl..n Laksh ka dhakka by mistake us girl ko laga n her phn fell dwn
Girl-"Dekh k nai chal sakte.. andhe ho kya. Kya smhte ko khud ho. .. Jaan k buj maara dhakka "
Laksh-"Oh plz koi jaan stressed buj kr dhakka nai he ... glti se lag gaya ... am srry fr dat "
Girl-"Ek toh mistake kr te ho n uper se srry bolte ho... Tumhare sorry se mera phn thik hoga kya.. nahi na.. pata nai kya smjte h ameer log apne aap ko (she calls laksh rich by seeing his drss n car keys n cell in hand)"
Laksh-Itni si baat "on PADH q angry bigades rahi ho. .. glti is laga yaar ... lao phn me thik karwa deta hu '
Girl-"koi zarurat nai me kara lungi..."(and goes frm der)
Omi to Laksh
Omi-"lucky usne tuje itna sunaya tune use kuch nai kaha yaar q "
Laksh-"Arey yaar Omi sweet bandi h yaar...n bold b...bt kuch jyada hi bol gai.. janede chor.."
While d girl ws going sme of her frndz came n told
Frdz-"Arey SWARA tu yaha h .. chl late ho raha h .. first day marwaygi kya"
(D girl who argued wid laksh ws SWARA)
Swara-"Arey nai yaar kisi se bhes ho gai gate k pass( n shws laksh to her frndz)
Frndz-"Aery yaar kitna handsm h .. tune isse bhs q ki yaar.."
Laksh was watching all dz frm d back n came to knw her name as swara..
The bell rag n all were wishpered to clses

...To Be Continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part #2 - "From clg to pub-Hangout"

In clg Swara entered d cls room n sit on a seat...D laksh n omi enterd d same cls...Swara sees laksh n is shoked
Swara (in mind)-"Arey yaar yaha b aa gaya.."
Laksh n omi sits together n suddenly laksh turns round n is also surprised to see swara
Laksh (in mind)-:Toh ye bi yehi cls me h.."
Prof.suri enters d cls..n all wishes him n prof.suri gives d guidelines to d freshers..
After d clg hours r cmplited..Swara n her frndz goes to canteen n laksh n omi goes to d parking area where dy r parked d car..

At canteen (Swara friend name Panchi,Dia)
Dia-" Chalo yaar pub jaate h aaj raat...Enjoy karenge "
Panchi-"Haa yaar idea to mst h...thoda relif b ho jaayega..kya khti ho swara."
Swara-"Arey man nai h yaar..."
Panchi-"Arey mana mt kr yaar plz tuje clna hi hoga."
Dia-"Haa swara tuje aana hi hoga..Hamare sath b nai calegi hum tere frndz nai h kya ??"
Swara-"Dia unta b senti mt ho..ok aa rahi hu bss bt no late ni8 haa!!
Dia n Panchi- Haa thik h ..ok done toh aaj clte h .."

Near d parking area..

Laksh-"Chl yaar aaj kahi ghum aate h ."
Omi-"Kya yaar tune toh mere mann ki baat cheen li..chl yaar kai din hue disco pub gae hue jaakr aate h .."
Laksh-"Ok thik h bhai..so raat 9 baje."
Omi-"Ok bhai done."

All goes to der home...Eve passes n finally ni8 ..swara n her frndz goes to pub...coincidently Laksh n omi have also decided d same venue coz itz d cities bst clb..
At dance floor swara n her frndz r dancing..(Song-Suraj duba h yaaro)..
Laksh n omi too come der n again laksh n swara r hitten each other .. laksh n swara turns to each other ..

Swara-"Tum !! "
Laksh-"Tum!!"
(Both together said it)..
N started to fi8
Swara-"Idher b dhakka mukki krne aaye ho...clg me toh krte hi hoo..."
Laksh-"O hello..Akdu ye disco pub h .. yaha dhakka toh lagta hi h..brdash nai hota tih aati hi q ho"
Swara-"Tum kon hote ho bolne wale me kahi b jaaun.."

Manger cmes n says..aap ki wajah se sab ko dstrb ho raha h plz .. bhar jaa kr fi8 kijie ..

Swara n laksh r nw out of d pub gate n der frndz r inn

Swara-"Tumhari wajah se uss maneger b ne muje sunaya .."
Laksh-"Oh plz haa ladai tumne strt ki thi.."
Swara-"Tumne ki thi .."
Laksh-"Tumne ki thi .."

Mean time d police comes n rades d pub..
Swara n Laksh ran n hide beside d car...

Swara ws so tensed laksh ws also scared swara cought laksh hand...n wa looking at police...Laksh ws just looking at swara as ge cought his hand...A police man ws just to cm near d car...Swara was so scared dat she closed her eyes n hugged laksh...d police cnstable says..sir yaha koi nai h n goes...Laksh ws so surprised to see swara hugging her...swara ws so tensed dat after going of police she dint left laksh...Der ws soo cool breeze in d atmosphere...n no 1 ws der on road...
D swara den relised d police is gone..n leave laksh..laksh is still surprised n looking at her...dey both got up...

Swara-"Aaj toh baj hi gaye wrna kya hota tha.."
Laksh-"Akdu hume ladai ki islie hi bach gaye h."

And dey had a smll argument der..

Swara murmerd-"Abb me ghr k se jaoungi..mene to cycle b nai laayi.."
Laksh asked - "Tume kuch kaha kya Akdu.."
Swara-"Kuch nai mene cycle nai layi h..n muje akdu khna bnd karo haa.."
Laksh-"Akdu ko akdu hi kahunga na.."
Swara-"Jao jo khna h kaho.."
Laksh-"Ok calo me tume ghr chor deta hu ..itni raat me koi auto b nai milega.."
Swara-"No thnxx ill manage.."

Swara search fr auto bt she couldnt find 1
Laksh came wid his bike ..n ws making d horans cnstntly ..

Swara (in mind)-"chli hi jaati hu..itni raat ho gai h.."

Swara sits on bike...

Laksh drives at a place a puppy comes to save dat puppy laksh has to take a brk fr sudden n der swara cmes very close to laksh...n her lipstick mark comes on d blazer.

Laksh-"Sry vo puppy aagaya tha bich me"
Swara-"Itz k .."

Dey get to swara's home..
N swara ws going..towrdz her house..
Laksh-"Akdu tq toh boldo.."
Swara-"Mene lift nai mangi tume de thi ..me q bolu.."

N she goes .. laksh also goes ...
At home..
Dida -" kya hua shona..itni der kaha lag gai..
Swara xplns all.."

******To Be Continued******

#Patel

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part #3 - "fighting turns to frndship"

At Maheswari house..laksh got frsh n ws about to go to slp..

Laksh at bed..thinking in mind..wid all flash backs..

Laksh-"Bht hi Akdu h...bt cute b h yaar...pata nai mujse itni ladai q krti h...(he gets omi call)"
Omi-"Kya tu toh rade padte hi bhag hi gaya..baal baal bache hum log.."
Laksh-"Am sorry yaar..vo Akdu ko ghr chorne gaya tha bhai..islie bhul gaya.."
Omi-"ye Akdu kon h?"
Laksh-"Omi Akdu vo swara"!!
Omi-"Yaar ye abb swara kon h?"
Laksh-"Swara vohi yaar jisko glti se dhakka lag gaya tha clg me"
Omi-"Ohh toh usne tuje itna sunaya..jhagda kia n tu use ghr chorne gaya..n usk piche muje bhul gaya..bhai chl kya raha h ha tere dil me?"
Laksh-"Kuch nai clra omi..vo bht dar gai thi n koi auto nai mil raha tha islie use chorne cala gaya..n vo sweet h yaar(laksh ws smiling)
Omi-"toh lucky vo tuje itna sab bol kr sweet ho gai n hum kuch b bole toh tu bigad jata h..v se toh lucky tere lyf me bht saari ladkiyan aayi tune unhe toh kabi ese nai kia? Fir ise hi q"
Laksh-"arey omi vo sab flirty typ ladkian thi..bt she iz diffrnt..k bhai toh kl clg me milte h..gud ni8"
Omi-"Haa ok ... Gn"

In d mrng all comes to clg...Swara talking to her frnd sits on d bench in clss
(only 2 members cn sit on 1 bnch)

laksh cmes n unkningly sits besides swara..dey bth dnt knw dey r beside each other..as prof. Comes dey all Stands n greet him..at dat tym swara n laksh looks at each other..bt cnt tell anything to eachother as the prf has came ...

Swara Talks to her frnd n says abut d subjct..
*(d prof. Ws so strct dat he wnted a pin drp silence in clss..)*
He points at laksh n swara n says

Prof.-"Whts goin on der.. hey u both get up...who ws taking amg u"

Swara n laksh gets up.

Swara-"Prof. Vo pen ..."

Laksh cuts swaras sentence n tells

Laksh-"Sir vo me books puch raha tha kl k notes k lie...am srry sir.."
Prf.-"notes cls k baad b puch sakte the abhi hi q..meri cls me te sab nai calega..Mr Laksh..ill punish u ..aap ko ye assinment 5 tyms kr k aana hoga..."

(Swara ws again trying to say d prf.. truth..bt Laksh holds her hand n says)

Laksh-"sry sir .. n ill do dat ..n will also nt talk durng cls.."

Swara ws looking at laksh's face n d hand he cought
Dey both sat..
Laksh ws still holding her hand..swara looking at dat n wndring

Swara-(in mind)" mene itna bura kia fir b usne muje bachaya...he is nt bad frm heart ..(n rember dat ysterday he drped him at home n his politeness)."

Laksh leaves swaras hand...dey both say nothing..

Swara-"(in mind) Muje isse thnx bolna chiye..(she ws about to say bt stopped luking at prof.)"

Laksh-"pata nai mene esa q kia..bt muje usko punishment lete deka nai jaata..mene kabi apna kaam thik se nao kia by pata nai q isklie naa baat krne pr b punishment le li"

Dey both listens d lecture..
After d cls is empty..swara try to talk Laksh bt he goes away wid his frndz..n Swara frndz takes swara frm der !!

******To Be Continued******

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asha07

update next part yar


yup 😆😆😆
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Part #4 "Fighting turns to Frindship"

At canteen swara thinks y did Laksh saves him n flash backs of holding her hand..n she thinks

Swara-(In mind)"mene usk sath itna bura kia fir b usne muje bachaya...Pata nai q bt vo acha h..dil me burai nai h usk..i think muje ussey srry n tq dono bolna chiye"

Swaras frndz were talking n swara ws soo deep in laksh thoughts..her frndz shaked her

Dia-"Swara kab se dek rahi hu tu kuch bol hi nai rahi...kaha kho gai"
Panchi-"Haa swara clss k baad se tu kaha gum ho gai h..mind absent n body prsent type..??"
Swara-"muje jana muje usse maafi mangni h..i need to go"
(She murmers n goes frm der to find laksh)
Dia-"Hello madam kaha chli"
Swara dsnt listens n goes
Panchi-"Ese phle kabi nai deka yaar ise..Gulab jamun toh kabi nai chorti pata nai kya hua h use"

Laksh n Omi at clg corider...were talking..
Swara cmes der
As swara comes Laksh was about to go swara stops him

Swara-"Laksh muje tumse baat krni h"
Laksh-"per muje tumse koi baat nai krni(as he ws lil angry wid swara on first day incident )
Swara-"Tumne cls me muje q bachaya ..plz bolo"
Laksh-"Me batana jaroori nai smjta"
Swara-"Laksh mene tumse itni buri tarah baat ki fir b tumne q bachaya...am srry Laksh mene tumse ese baat ki..n tq fr saving me"
Laksh-"tumne mujse ese baat n srry boldia...kitna ezy h ye sab bolna"
Swara-"mene srry bola na laksh meri galti ho gai..i ws a lil bit angry dat tym"
Laksh-"Toh tumne muj pr gussa nikal dia"
Swara-"me bol rahi hu srry toh b tum itna ye kr rahe ho...huh"
Laksh-"Mene kaha tumse maafi mango nahi na."

At dat tym a boy cms running hurry n mistakely swara n swara falls on laksh(*Awsm movmnt na*) Laksh ws looking at swaras face n swara ws looking at laksh face..dey both ws vry buzy at looking each other omi comes...dey both sets dem selvs ..

Swara-"Bht hi gussel ho tum"
Laksh-"Aur tum bht hi Akdu ho..miss.Akdu.."

Dey both goes to d opposite direction ..

******To Be Continued******

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part #5 "Fighting turns to Frienship"

After d fi8ting ws cmplted omi n laksh left frm der..n swara went to her frndz..bt both were thinking about d fi8 ... swara ws murmring

Swara-(murmrng)"Samjta kya h apne aap ko .. srry bola to b itna gusse khadus kahi ka"
Dia-"Swara tune kuch kaha kya"
Swara-"Khuch nai yaar(n tells wht hpnd der)
Panchi-"He is so cute"
Dia-"Haa yaar dam awsme"
Swara-"Panchi,dia tum dono mere frndz jo ya usky"
Panchi n dia-(together)"Tere"
Swara-"den iski taarif mt krna mere samne.."
Dia n Panchi-"ok"
Dia-"swara aaj raat hum mere ghr pr rhte h padai krne me b maza aayga n swara plz mana mt krna plzz ..ok panchi?"
Panchi-"gr8 Idea ok "
Swara-"per..."
Dia cuts swaras wrdz n says
Dia-"plzz mana mt krna"
Swara-"ok..me maa ko imfrm kr deti hu"

Swara calls sumi..

Swara-"Hello maa ...aj hum pachi k ghr pr rukna h studies h lie .. vo maan nai rhi hai.. ?? "
Sumi-"ok beta toh ruk jaao na .. "
Swara-"ok maa"

Swara to her frndz

Swara-"maa ne haa boldia"

Dia n panchi screems

Der Omi to laksh
Omi-"kya mst bola bhai tune usy"
Laksh -"kya omi muje ab bura lag raha h bichari srry bolne aayi thi"
Omi-"bhai bura mt feel kr...usko sida krna h toh kr cntinue"

Der ws nly 5 mins lft fr clsng of auditorium

Swara-"arey yaar bhul hi gai..us k chkkr me..mera guitar auditorium me h .. n 5 mins hi bache h"

N she leaves to go to auditorium

Laksh-"oh no me apna bag toh auditorim me raka h.. n clsing tym me 5 mis bache h".

He to runs towrdz auditorium

Laksh gets inn auditorium n scrh fr his bag.. den swara gets inn unkwningly dat laksh is also der... The auditorium door is nw locked by d watch man ..swara n laksh both runs towrdz d door n noks..open

Dey both look at each other n says

Swara-"Tum"
Laksh-"Tum"

(Dey both r locked in guyzz...nw lets see wht happns..in nxt prt ;))

******To Be Continued******

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Part #6 "Fighting turns to Frienship"

As d Swara n Laksh r locked up in Auditorium

Swara-"Tum yaha b aagaye..."
Laksh-"me apna bag bhul gaga tha so lene aaya n tum yaha q aaye ?"
Swara-"Me mera guitar bhul gai thi...Abb kya karu k se hoga ye open"

Swara ws shakking d door lyk any thing...

Laksh-"ye door pr b itna gussa karogi to yeh khulne wala nai h"
Swara-"Toh tum hi khol k batao na pyaar se..(Swara angrliy)"

Laksh in a joke mood

Laksh-"Hello door am laksh..so cool name na..deko hum kse undr fhas gaye h plz khul jaao..vrna ye akdu aap pr b gusaa karegi..door ji plz khul jao"

Swara lough out ... laksh sees her laugh n he to laughs..

Swara-"Kya hua door khula kya"
Laksh-"Nahi pr kisi ka gussa zaroor kam ho gaya n hasi aayi"

Swara smiles..

Swara-"Me tumhe srry bolne aayi toh tumne srry q accpt nai kia?"
Laksh-"Tumhe b samajna chiye na ki tumne muje hurt kia .. meri glti nai thi"
Swara-"Toh mene tab bola na ki me gusse me thi n upser vo sb hua.."
Laksh-"itz ok"
Swara-"bina baat k tumne prf.suri se assinmnt le lia abb kya karoge.."
Laksh-"phle yaha se bahar toh nikle..phir vohi krna h"

Swara takes a tool n keep it near d door n standz on itt n ws tryng to see frm ventilatn is any 1 out der?.

Laksh-"kya kr rahi ho gir jaaugi..."
Swara-"Khuch nai hoga yaar"

Tool moves n swara ws about to fall laksh catches her in his Arms...

******To Be Cntinued******

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