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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update. loved it.
there is so much change in taani which is for good.
she was worried for rey as he is late. swaron has gone to banglore.
rey asked her to come with him to party.
she was confused for dress so rey gifted her red dress.
waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Can't describe its beauty in words
Just Loved it to the core
Can't wait to read further
So PLEASE...
Continue ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Taarey part was adorbale
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am loving the way taani changed fr good
So so so enchanting updt
Pls updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Di please update next part
Waiting waiting waiting waiting
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(edit by Purva)
Part-14

Rey was standing in his room after getting ready for the party, waiting for Taani, he was not sure

whether she will wear the red dress or not, it's not that he want to force her for something which

she is not ready for, but yes he really wants to bring her out of her dark past, to make her forget

everything about her past and help her to live in her present, enjoy her life and let her dream

about future.


Coming to the red colour, he has seen that dress before when he ordered the baby pink gown on

her birthday, and that moment he had a strong desire yes he admits he want to see her in red,he

loves her a lot and he really wanted to see her in the colour of love and passion but he was

sure she was not ready that time but now after months he really wanted to take this step forward

when she has already started wearing modern dresses.

One more thing he couldn't deny was with time his longing for her, his love for her and, his wish to

make her hold his hand and work in the path of life was increasing day by day. And today after a

lot of argument in his mind he gifted her that, but when he saw her reaction he felt little bad, he

came out of the room because forcing her was not his motive, moreover she looks pretty in all

attire and he has accepted her the way she is, and for her comfort his wishes even doesn't matter

to him. His self reverie was broken with her sweet melodic voice,

T-Rey I am ready (she was facing his back)

R-Hmnn tum living room mai ja ke beheto I am coming

T-aap dekhenge nahii mujhae...

R-Taani please... You have your liberty to wear anything you like, and I will never force you for

anything and you look good in all colours and dress, so it's ok, jo bhi tumne pehena hai its

obvious you will look good so go and wait.

Hot tears were scorching down his cheeks, he didn't want her to see that her not wearing red had

affected him so much; somewhere down his heart he had started believing that she belongs to

him, she may not have confessed but she trust him and deep down she loves him, but today

actually it was not about the colour red but the fact he felt that still now the tag of Mrs Veer

Shekhawat is all that matters to her, his existence is still in her heart and that is what is breaking

him down. He was quite, and then rubbing his tears when he was just about to turn, he felt a soft

touch on his shoulders. Her touch immediately cooled him, he was not angry at her he can never

be but yes he was feeling broken.

T- aap ak bar bhi mere taraf dekhenge nahii?

R-Taani please don't make things complicated go down I am coming. We can talk later.

T-Kuch bhi kahene sae pehelae mujhae aap sae kuch kahana hai. Rey mai aap ko Reyansh jii

bulati thi, aap mere bhai ke dost ho, mujsae barae ho, par aapne kaha tha ki we are friends mai

aap ko Rey bulayu and it was you who said that I can share anything with you, mai aap ki haar

baat manti hu, and aap ki diya hua kuch bhi gifts matter to me a lot, jab apne mujhae red dress

diya I didn't reject your gift but what was my thinking I shared with you, kya mujhae haq nahi hai

apnae friend sae aapne dil ki baat share karu, specially mere woh friend sae jisne mujhae mere

complicated thoughts sae bahar nikala, apnae mujhae us waqt samjha jab maine Mumbai anae

ki peheli raat mai apne frustrations aap pai nikala tha, appko yaad hai us raat mainae kaha tha ki

I trust you that night I slept in your arms I felt protected and secured.

Agar bhai nai initiative lekar mujhae physically Rajasthan sae yeha le aya, apnae mentally

mujhae har waqt support kiya hai, and today once again I am saying Rey mai aapko blindly trust

kartii hu.

But when you said that the tag of Veer Shekhawat matters to me, you know what today first time

apnae mujhae bohot hurt kiya hai, I wish I could show you ki Veer Shekhawat ki taq aaj bhi

kitna painful hai mere liya, but ...rehena dijiya aap nahi samjhenge.. it hurts ki aapne mujhae

galat samjha, I am going down... you come soon.


She was hurt, her eyes became blurry coming out of her traditional thoughts she wore that red

dress only for him because she trust him and that it was his favourite colour, all she wanted was 2

words of appreciation from him, she thought that he would understand all her emotions but the

fact that he didn't even look at her once, made her sad, she was going when she felt a pull on her

wrist, she turned back, she was still facing his back, whereas Rey stopped her just that he didn't

want to make her sad as he realized that his unintentional harshness has affected her, slowly he

turned and both eyes met, he was surprised and was staring at her, because he didn't even

imagine that she had wore the red gown for him, he was mesmerized seeing her in that red

sleeveless gown her pinkish skin shining in contrast of red, waist length open hair, the soft curls

touching her skin and arms, the depth in her hazel dark eyes which has increased more with a

touch of Kohl, her pink natural lips which was shining with the touch of red gloss, she was looking

like a raw beauty, he felt an immediate urge to pull her in his arms and kiss her red lips till eternity,

she was making her go mad in his desires, but above all the fact that his wish matters to her was

something that was making him feel wanted it made him realize that she truly trust him.

whereas slowly she made her hands free from his grip, turning back was about to go, it was

then he realized that her eyes were blurry, as soon as she took the first step, she felt a hold on her

left shoulder, she stopped only to hear


" Sorry, apne Rey..(With a pause) I mean apne friend ko maaf nahi karogie?"


she didn't answer, his hold tightened and he made her turn, holding her both shoulders, her eyes

were watery, he felt a pang on his chest, he knew she is sensitive, just now she has began to

show her emotions, and his little harshness has made her cry and that is what he never wanted,

he held her cheeks in his palm, took a step close to her

" I am sorry, please maat rona (rubbed her tears with his thumbs) tum mujae trust kartii ho na,

believe me you are looking beautiful, (he was looking at her but she was looking at the ground)

kuch nahi kahogie, maaf nahi karogie, sorry na princess",

She immediately looked up, her eyes held a question, but before she could ask, she got her

answer,

"aj bilkul ak princess ki tarha lag rahi ho, hamesha khush rehena, jobhi maina kaha Taani, I didn't

intend to hurt you, but jabhi dakta hu ki your past is pulling you back, I really feel frightened I have

seen you suffering back in your in-laws house, Swayam ke samnae mai kuch nahi kahana cahata

because it may hurt him but I have witnessed your pain, aur mai tumhae pain mai nahi dakh

saktii, pata hai Taani, maine tumhare liya I mean for your college admission I have brought the

admission form 5 days back but still I couldn't fill it, you know why?

(She was looking at him blankly, she knew his feelings but she didn't imagine his feelings were so

deep)

Because I just can't fill the column of your name, whenever I try writing my hand shakes, nahi

likhna mujhae TAANI SHEKHAWAT, and your paternal name also I can't write because tumharae

10 and 12 results mai pehele hie tumharae parents nai shekhawat likha hai as you were already

... I guess you understand, tumharae kuch bhi identifications is still not made, You need to get

your voter card, pan card but I am sorry Taani I can't, Swayam ne kitnae baar kaha to make your

identifications, but I can't, Taani I can't write Shekhawat, aur aj jab red dress dakh kar you

thought that you are a ..wi...d...o...w... sorry Taani bardast nahi hua, sorry princess sorry I was

harsh towards you mujhae maaf kar do,"


by the time both were crying, there tears were running down their eyes, the pain was

unbelievable, Taani always knew in her heart Rey loves her and she too loves him, but she

needed time, but today she came to know the depth of his love and emotions, none could console

the other both were in extreme pain, Rey was holding her shoulders and then unable to control

the emotions any more, Rey pulled her in his arms, she came crashing too but there was no

hesitation she held him tight, the more Rey pulled her in his arms the more she plastered herself

in his chest they were crying them self , yet each one was consoling the other, and first time

knowingly Rey started kissing her forehead, her eyes, sucked her tears, he started placing open

mouth kisses on her each cheeks and then rested his head on the crook of her neck placing wet

kisses there, on the other hand with his each Kiss Taani was feeling better, for even once she

didn't felt it wrong, rather some unknown emotions were rising in her heart, some desires were

pulling her more, she loosened herself more in his arms, tightening her grip on him and resting

her head peacefully on his chest.


(edit Anzana)


After a few minutes Rey slowly separated her from the hug, he was holding her by her shoulders

her eyes were still closed, they were wet, he decided to change the situation, today what ever

happened both have let out their emotions and somewhere it was really a positive sign,

"Look at me Taani, saach mai tum bohot beautiful lag rahii ho"

she slowly opened her eyes, one last time he rubbed her tears, she smiled

"aap bhi bohot handsome lag rahe ho",

he pulled her cheeks and slowly bending near her ears he said "but filal bhootni lag rahii ho,

roro ke tumharae kajal smeared ho gaya hai, so puri bhootni..." before he could complete teasing

her she softly smacked his arms, "aap ke bhi aankhae lal hai, so jayiyaa and wash your face, I

will redo my make up" saying so she ran away. Rey was feeling light that she was smiling and he

knew she had forgiven him, he smiled and went to the wash room. After about half an hour being

ready Rey remembered that along with the dress Rey had also brought something else for her,

so taking the box he went to Taani's room.


Taani took a shower because with crying and all she was sweaty , she came out of the washroom wearing the dress, she was then in her room in front of the mirror, trying to tie the dorie of her dress which had frills at the back. She had already managed to tie the others, but the last one at the lower end was left. She had pulled all her hair on her left shoulders and was busy in her act , when Rey entered, he was facing her back, he froze seeing her like that. Rey was staring at her without even blinking, he was mesmerized Taani was unaware of his presence, she continued her attempts to tie the dorie but was miserably failing, she was trying to look at her back to tie it and was making cute frustrated faces when she was not able to do it. Rey was watching all this, he was in his dreamland, he was completely lost in her , slowly Rey took steps towards her and stood just behind her, he slowly placed his hand on her bare shoulder, immediately she felt millions of goose bumps all over her body, feeling him she looked at the mirror to see him, she was even lost in his eyes, they both were looking at each other through the mirror, after a long time when Taani felt a pull on the dorie, she was out of her trance and realized their current situation, their closeness her bare back and the touch of his fingers, she instantly pushed her hair back to cover her back. he was looking at her with intensity, he smirked at her action and that made her blush furiously, Taani was stealing glances, slowly she looked at Rey shyly, and unable to bare his intense gaze she bowed her head down, she was looking at her own feet she could still feel that he was still looking at her, he steeped a little closer to her and then he made her turn towards him, he cupped her face and makes her look in his eyes "I know you trust me, tumhe mujh pe bharosa hai " she smiled and nodded in approval. Rey kept his palms on Taani's waist & pulled her towards him she came crashing to his chest, Taani felt different for the first time, previously whenever he hugged her it was a feeling of protection, warmth and affectionbut today first time she was feeling different as if thousands butterflies were fluttering in her stomach...both were staring into each other's eyes passionately Rey could feel Taani's hot breath on his neck, when she rested her head on his shoulder, He too felt goose bumps all over his body, it was something different not the hugs they usually share..he slowly moved his hands from Taani's waist and catches her both palms which were resting on his chest and placed it on his both shoulders, then he once again places his hand on her waist and pulls her closer plastering her on his chest, Rey was still looking at her intensely then he slowly brushes her hair from her back and puts it on her left shoulder, her heart skips a beat as while doing so he lingers his fingers on her shoulder and neck, he moves his face closer to her shoulders both could feel each other's breath Rey then slowly moves his hand along her back finding the both ends of the dorie looking through the mirror, her heart was beating fast she could feel her swells plastered on his chest and his fingers roaming at her back she closes her eyes in pure raw passion, her heart was beating faster as if any moment it could jump out, she digs her fingers deep into his shoulder, she was sure with his touches that he will lose his control and may end up loving her, it was not that she would stop him, because even her emotions were flowing high, her desires were burning too, but then she slowly opened her eyes and sees Rey's eyes closed and his fingers were working on her dorie. He finishes tying all the dories, he slides his hands down her back and holds her by her waist, he separates her and then looks at Taani, she had again closed her eyes, there was a shy smile curved in her lips, he too smiles looking at her smiling face it makes him feel good that she not only says that she trust him but she has even showed her trust in every steps, Rey then remembers something and smiles, whereas she was feeling shy, with the thought that she felt Rey is going to be intimate with her, she started blushing and to avoid being caught she tries to escape Rey hold her wrist from back and pulls her towards him. Taani once again comes crashing to his chest her back was facing his chest she feels awkward and tries to escape when Rey snacks his one arm on her waist and places the other hand across her neck from one shoulder to other, putting his lips near her ears " bohot chulbili ho, bhaag kiu rahi ho, party mai sirf koi dress pehenta hai kya?" he moves his face more towards her and she could feel his breath on nape of her neck. He now brushes his other hand across her neck..&places both his hands near her neck slightly just above her cleavage, causing her breath fasten then he brushes his hands across her neck, she was feeling ticklish she closes her eyes, and she feels something cold against her neck and chest..Taani slowly opens her eyes and sees a beautiful diamond necklace she gets lost in admiring it whereas Rey putting the lock makes Taani turns back to let her see the mirror, she runs her hands over the necklace and feels shy, she looks down & was blushing like hell Rey was watching all her action through the mirror, Rey hugs Taani from behind holds her by her stomach and places his chin on her shoulder she was not at all uncomfortable, she feels like she is in heaven she places her palms over his hand "bohot khubsurat hai, it's so pretty" but she was cut in between "tumsaae jyada nahii" she closes her eyes a drop escapes, Rey was looking at her he could read her emotions he knew all her responses were positive yet he didn't want any confession, he knew with time she herself will confess her love she opened her eyes and looked at him through the mirror she smiled " You know Rey it really means a lot to me" "and you mean a lot to me ( she once again closed her eyes trying to feel his words and he trying to divert her attention) , I mean our friendship means a lot to me, aab jayo jaldi sae ready ho jayo." and he starts walking away to the bed feeling him away she opens her eyes and turns to see him facing towards the bed, looking at his retreating back she turn towards the mirror and starts brushing her hair Rey sits on the bed and keeps on looking at her, she feels shy, looking at him "ok, aab bohot daaree ho gaya so mam,so please mujhae dakhna band kijiya and please apna make up jaldi khatam ki jiya", she smiles and then putting a little blusher and putting kajal and gloss, she gets ready, and turn towards him "I am ready let's go" and she was walking passing him, he held her wrist and made her sit on the bed, "ak minute, abhi bhi kuch baki hai,( he opened the small box holding her right palm) he slides the diamond bangles in her hand (feeling his soft palms in between, she was looking at him, she felt that it was now time to speak her emotions out, to convey her exact feelings, she was sure she didn't need to think more, her thought was broken when she felt his breadth near her ears, tugging the hairs behind her ears, he touched her ear lobes and slowly placed the diamond tops on her ears, his touches on her cheeks, the sensitive spots on the back of her ear was making her desires strong.


(ornaments Raddhi, edit Purva)


she couldn't control herself she hugged him" Kya hua Taani", " kuch nahi, bass sorry, even if I have thought about something else for a fraction, I promise aab sae kabhi bhi I will never think about my past, mujhae agae barna hai Rey in all sense kya aap mere saath dogae?"pulling her more caressing her back " mai humesha tumahare saath rahunga , in all steps of your life you will find your friend right beside you, I promise Taani", He was still holding her waist and her waist a bit lower rubbing his palms on her back to assure her about his promise, but suddenly she shrieked in pain he was startled "kya hua Taani?' "kuch nahi", she tightened her grip and he was once again patting her back, and once again a painful sound came when he touched the muscle above her left waist, he immediately departed her from the hug, looking straight in her eyes, "Taani what's the matter, saach saach batayo, tum pain mai ho, kahi chot to nahi lagiee, did u get hurt, bolo na kuch, actually wait turn back let me check" Taani held his palms, " kuch nahii hua, woh... woh... mujhe tickling feeling ho raha tha," "Taani please jhoot maat bolo, mai tumhae pagal dikta hu? I don't know the differentiation between a giggle and a painful shriek, the sound that escaped your throat was not out of tickling feeling rather it was caused due to pain,""aap bhi na kuch bhi sochtae ho, peheli baar I am going to a business party with you, I don't want to be late, please lets go na, I am so excited" Rey didn't drag the matter but he was sure she was hiding something, but then he mentally noted and decided to find it out later in his way, right now even he was happy that they really spent some beautiful moments which both will cherish after wards in their life though she didn't say or confess anything but he was sure she felt the same way as he did. They headed towards the main door and as soon as she was going to were are pink heels, she spotted a red stilettos matching her dress,

(raddhi your wish granted)

she smiled and looked at him, he too smiled, she wore it , Rey held her hand and pulled her out, both headed towards the car hand in hand.



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Edited by taani.priya1997 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres..
first of all sorry for late unres😔
I was waiting for this chapter..
and trust me it was worth waiting..
Luvd each and every bit of it..
Taani Trust Rey sooo much and she wore that dress...
Rey was little harsh... but can understand his feelings..
Taani's outburst is justified..
Then little Taarey moments were awesome😳
I luvd when Taani asked Rey to help her move on...
In total it was an amazing update...😛
Continue soon..
Edited by VDfanforever - 10 years ago
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Awsm update rey gift nice taarey talks taarey romances dori scene nice updatevsoon.
Edited by _Cupid_ - 10 years ago
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unres
thankuu so much dii...for my mentioned edit.!!!!
really dey both r soo much in love.!!!
jaldi taani ko accept karva do uska pyaar...
she unknowingly does all things for him.!!!
update soon.!!
Edited by Twinkle_TaaRey - 10 years ago
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beautiful update
the way u write every emotion is just amazing
cant get enough of it although it was very long update
but it still look short coz i want to read more and more
eager to read next part
update it asap

Edited by princess_tara - 9 years ago

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