Sahir Arzoo FF | Love, law, inter alia | Chapter 20: Pg 91 [COMPLETE] - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hema, i have said this earlier and i will say this again that you have written this ff amazingly well. The most beautiful chapter ever written and i could well imagine harshad and shivya doing this scene and believe me humsafars would have been the number one show with your ff.

Well the kissing scene where sahir kisses arzoos lonrly tear was amazing and the horror of reality when she had to go to shiraazs apartment was aptly described because when you are tormented you dont feel like seeing or bearing anything to that person. It was amazing that sahir knew arzoo was not feeling well when she realised the reality.


Another scene which was amazing was the embrace scene when sahir kissed arzoo. It was beautiful and mindblowing. The suno scene was really nice. Also loved the fact when sahir said to arzoo you would not have applied ointment and this scene reminded me of the scene when arzoo applied ointment on sahirs back. 😳

Btw loved madhus wish for season 2 and her wish for evil curls was fulfilled😊😊😊. Well another scene which was nice was of when sahir said ammi wanted me to marry to have a humsafar. Another nice scene was when sahir tells arzoo that he met pervez saheb who told him to make peace with his abbu. Well it is true this happens a lot. And yes when distances grow apart people do change for good but what about those people who never change like shiraaz.

I just want to know one thing the scene where arzoo wakes up after sleeping she thinks that someone drew the curtain and then kissed her was it arzoos dream or real.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you Madhu for your lovely comments!😊😃 You are just so sweet! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Hema, i have said this earlier and i will say this again that you have written this ff amazingly well. The most beautiful chapter ever written and i could well imagine harshad and shivya doing this scene and believe me humsafars would have been the number one show with your ff.

Aw, thank you, and thank you to Fatima and everyone else who said they would like to see Humsafars Season 2 with a script similar to this FF. It sounds crazy to me, but I am deeply flattered to know that you feel this way. Thank you so much! 😳

Well the kissing scene where sahir kisses arzoos lonrly tear was amazing and the horror of reality when she had to go to shiraazs apartment was aptly described because when you are tormented you dont feel like seeing or bearing anything to that person. It was amazing that sahir knew arzoo was not feeling well when she realised the reality.

True. Strangely enough, even though Sahir is kind of socially awkward, he manages to read Arzoo's silences really well, perhaps even better than Arzoo. I think that introverts intrinsically have that capacity. Because they remain silent, they observe a lot. At least, that's what I, as an introvert myself, feel 😛 Also, lawyers are trained to pick on people's body language, because that's one of the things that effective cross-examination in court requires. And then, the biggest reason is that he connects with Arzoo, so he can sense that sort of thing 😃

Another scene which was amazing was the embrace scene when sahir kissed arzoo. It was beautiful and mindblowing. The suno scene was really nice. Also loved the fact when sahir said to arzoo you would not have applied ointment and this scene reminded me of the scene when arzoo applied ointment on sahirs back. 😳

It's awesome to know in such a detailed manner of all the little things that you liked to read! As a writer, I feel it makes every effort worth the while when one sees how all the different parts of the story have been received.

As for the ointment part, glad it reminded you of that lovely scene! That reminds me that, at one point, I was thinking of the possibility of having a scene where Sahir applies the ointment to her (not her back because that would be too inappropriate), but maybe just her wrists. But I figured it would just make the chapter longer than required, and might also require an element of physical proximity that may have felt uncomfortable for readers (and myself) to digest. So we can assume that Arzoo did it herself, even if she would have struggled as well to get the ointment on her back where she may have scars too. Artistic license 😛

Btw loved madhus wish for season 2 and her wish for evil curls was fulfilled😊😊😊. Well another scene which was nice was of when sahir said ammi wanted me to marry to have a humsafar.

Thank you for the idea of having Sahir talk about his mother! It really took the chapter to another, more deeper and heartfelt, level 😳

Another nice scene was when sahir tells arzoo that he met pervez saheb who told him to make peace with his abbu. Well it is true this happens a lot. And yes when distances grow apart people do change for good but what about those people who never change like shiraaz.

I completely agree! People, parents included, may change, just as they may never change. That is the ambiguity and uncertainty that Sahir is facing (and to a lesser extent, Arzoo as well). We can never know if the other person has changed unless we give ourselves the chance to realise that. But taking that first step is perhaps the hardest thing, because one may be at a point where one has moved on and is relatively happy, and to have to face the past again can be extremely painful. In Season 2, both Arzoo and Sahir will take the first step - where that will lead to, I don't know (or won't say.. hehe), but once that is done, at least they will know that they tried.

I just want to know one thing the scene where arzoo wakes up after sleeping she thinks that someone drew the curtain and then kissed her was it arzoos dream or real.

Aha, I am sooo glad you brought that up! I don't know 😉 😆 I will intentionally leave that open-ended, because just like in real life, we are not able to know everything for sure, and there is something beautiful about that, I feel. It is completely up to the readers to interpret that scene in the way that they think makes sense to them 😃


Thank you so much for such a detailed comment, Eshita! Much appreciated!
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it a beautiful story and a wonderful ending...keep on writing
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flowers4u

loved it a beautiful story and a wonderful ending...keep on writing


Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well really missing you Hema and your ff. Can't believe that the story has ended and waiting for your comeback and saaz's nok jhok.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yes, we miss you a lot :'(
BTW, waiting :-p
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Well really missing you Hema and your ff. Can't believe that the story has ended and waiting for your comeback and saaz's nok jhok.


Originally posted by: madhu31

Yes, we miss you a lot :'(
BTW, waiting :-p



🤗 Aww, you guys are sooo sweet! Miss you all too.
Here's a little something from my side - the song that Zaki sang to tease Sahir and Arzoo 😛

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9ANgzH9Pwc[/YOUTUBE]
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Waise happy (belated?) friendship day 😳
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^ Aww, thank you! Same to you and everyone else as well.

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