LeeRa FF:Vowed 2 Love U & Trust U forever

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LeeRa FF:Vowed 2 love U & Trust U forever
(My imagination)


What if Reel become Real?


Will they accept this new turn?!


What if Past Tries to spoil their Love Story?

Will they b able to overcome every types of obstacle together ?!

Lets C How they Fulfil their promise


for the 3rd time in MRMRW Forum im disturbing 😡 every1 with my story 😉 if any1 interested in reading my previous stories dn


1st = Leera's Short Story : Love LIFE (complete)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/mere-rang-mein-ranganewali/4383899/leeras-short-story-love-life-complete

Leera's Short Story : Love LIFE (complete)



2Nd = LeeRa:Togetherness with Love,care& Promises
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/mere-rang-mein-ranganewali/4410888/leera-togetherness-with-love-care-and-promises

LeeRa:Togetherness with Love,care & promises


wel its my 5th attempt in my life to write something hope U'll like it & i really really hope this time will b able to write something tolerable 😊


Again Credit Goes to My sweet ,lovely & special friends ,always support me ..

Wnt say Thanks
😊 🤗 👍🏼

sorry for mistakes 😊 😆 😉 Forgive me if possible 😉
😆 😊




will update this FF

LeeRa FF: Vowed 2 Love U & Trust U forever


LeeRa FF:Vowed 2 Love U & Trust U forever
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Character:

Samridh Bawa as Leeladhar Chaturvedi / L.D. :
College going fun-loving, cute boy sometimes stubborn child & sometimes mature boy ,pampered By M.D. & chaturvadi's beloved 'Chote/Chotu' , Whatever he is Talented, serious about study & loves his family,Mom & Bro much ..

Pranali Ghoghare as Radha Pathak / Radha Leeladhar Chaturvedi :
college going fun-loving,sweet stubborn child , Papa's princess, Mama(Mom)'s Doll, younger sis's friend support, loves her family & respect her Riya aunty (Bua), serious /damn care , weakness towards acting bt its not her dream..


Rashmi Gupta As Shamli Murlidhar Chaturvedi :
Daughter-in-law of Chaturvadi simple, sweet & mature, loves M.D. and accepted his beloved family ,bro & Mom 😊 ,
owner of Boutique Shop


same actor of MRMRW...As Murlidhar Chaturvedi /M.D. :
Loves his family,Bro 'L.D./Chote/Chotu' , mom & his wife , possessive towards L.D. Always try to B with him (bcz of past ) , helps his Grandpa, Dad , Uncle in business And also His wife ,loved to go gym thats y build a small gymnasium in their house "Mathura & mumbai"..

Alok Nath as Shankarnath Chaturvedi :
Head of Chaturvadi family Modern, broad-minded & cultured ,Famous for his Jewellery business & Chaturvadi Group of industries which is established by Govind, Mohan & Rohan , Loves his 3 Grandchild A lot..

Mahesh Thakur
as Govind Chaturvedi :
Famous hardworking business Man ,established 'Chaturvadi Group of Industries ' , modern, friendly but sometimes strict when its his family ...

Dolly Sohi as Sadhana Chaturvedi :
Sweet lovly wife ,responsible DIL , Friendly & supportive Mom & amazing human ⭐️ ...

Imran Zahid as Sudhakar Pathak :
After Mr. Pathak's death settled in India & Handle their family business 'Pathak company' loves his family -wife,daughter & only Sis , Hate some1(bcz of past) ..

Surbhi Zaveri Vyas as Suhasini Pathak :
friendly supportive mom , sweet S-I-L (like Sadhna) loves her family much .. ⭐️

Suchitra Bandarekar as Ishaani Chaturvedi Mukharjee :
keeps smiling 😊 even after losing ...
After an accident she is in wheel-chair 😭 ..
Mother of Rohan& Rima

Harsh Vashisht as Mohan Bhanwari Chaturvedi :
hardworking Business man & loves his only child 'Janvi Chaturvadi'

Karuna Pandey as Jayashree Chaturvedi :
loves to speak English & little bit lazy 😉 and dnt trust any1 expect chaturvadi family so sometimes ppl had to face her interrogation 😉 😆

Rupa& Janvi is same as Show

Rohan Mukharjee
:
Son of Mr. Mukharjee- Ishanni chaturvadi Mukharjee & turning point of past or key to solve past problem

Rima Mukharjee
:
Daugher of Mr& Mrs Mukharjee (Cameo)

Mr. Mukharjee: 1st family friend of
Chaturvedi & close friend of Shankarnath Chaturvedi then Son-in-law /Brother-in -law,has own business which is added with Chaturvedi group of industries (cameo) ..

Mr. Pathak : Famous business man (cameo)

Riya Pathak :

Daughter of famous business man Mr. Pathak & her bro sudhakar helped her a lot, Most of the time stay abroad (bcz of past) but loves Radha-Rupa a lot, important role in past

Isha:
radha's friends & daughter of lawyer "Renuka Shahane"


Rahul:
LD's friend

and

both will play an important role in LeeRa's life


Chatuvedi lives in Mathura & mumbai both place
1 thing is common every1 loves his/her family , and chatuvedi always hires/appoint extra security guard for their family trip .. and their child's r well trained in martial art 😉 & Appointed full-time security guard in both house for every1's safety




if possible will add actors name playing rohan-riya's role
but wnt add actor's name of
Mr. Mukharjee,
Rima Mukharjee,
Mr. Pathak

Well i changed 1 thing
of main plot which will change 1 more itself ... some1 ❤️ ⭐️ wished to change this after hearing my plot .. will reveal her ID in Changing part
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Part :1 - Meeting /Introduction

Early morning in Mumbai

An Apartment:

Suhasini : Radha my child Wake up, otherwise u'll b late in Ur 1st day at College, 1st impression is last impression...
(while caressing her child)

Radha : mamma 5 min more (sleeping in mothers lap)

suhasini: nooo (pulled radha from bed & pushed towards wash room )

Same time in opposite Flat
Sadhna: Good Morning Chotu wake up 😊 its ur 1st day at college...

"give me 5 min"

sadhna : giving 5 min from last half an hour ,LD

L.D.: hummm

"Chotu" !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bt its tooo late

suddenly water splashed on LD's Face 😕


M.D. : Good Morning Chote 😊

L.D. : what is this !!! 😕


every1 🤣 🤣


L.D. : Bhabi atleast u could have told me 😔

Shamli: sorry bro,tried bt ur bro is supetfast

Sadhna : now Go and freshen Up ..U'v 20min ..

After few min every1 in dining table &

LD In superfast mood

Sadha: Chotu y r u eating like this..

LD : mom dnt worry,Wnt die soon

every1: Chotu 😡

LD: 🤢 ups sorry ..i'v done..bye

M.D. : Wait , im coming with u

LD: Bro Driver uncle can take me,dnt worry

M.D. : LD im nt asking im telling U thats means im coming,will meet u after 5 min in parking area Go & take blessings from Grandpa,Bua,Papa & every1 ..(leave)

LD (MV) : LD means bro is hurt..
(MD always call "Chote" bt when he is angry/upset use LD)

Sadhna: Now talk to every1 ,Grandpa in line 😊

LD talked with every1 & every1 wished him & after little convo

LD: Bye Mom,Bye Bhabi 😊

Suddenly collide with some1

LD: Oh! God! , Where is the Dog!?

Radha: Dog !!!!!! where!! 😕

LD: How could i know after all its chasing u! 😆


[few min ago in Opposite flat after Having breakfast Radha talked with her Riya aunt & then took Aunt & parents blessings & came out in a Hurry &. . ]

Radha: what !! NO,No i was just walking towards parking area

LD : walking !! It was a mix of walking+running+jumping... .. 😆 😃


Radha: What!!! ..

LD : Anyway plz next time b careful ,Bye
(leave)

at a same time

Sudhakar: Radha lets Go ,i'll drop u at college

meanwhile in apartment

Sadhna is packing her luggage & shamli is helping her

Shamli :Mom may i ask U a question?

Sadhna : Y not dear 😊

Shamli: i know parents loves their child & its normal bt whenever chaturvadi's went for Family trip they appointed extra Security guards when already we'v full-time Security Guards around us ,infact MD,LD& Janvi trio is black belt holder in martial arts & as far as i'v seen we dnt have any enemies who can harm us then Y All of u took extra precautions,i'v noticed fear in ur eyes in family function & sometimes saw sadness its like all of u r missing some1 &Sometimes i noticed fear in Murli's eyes for LD bro!! Y Mom?

Sadhna : 😔 its a long story,only i can say now its bcz of an Accident occurred in 16 years ago.😊 Now we'v to Go for shopping then tomorrow have to mathura,so hurry up,we'v to complete lots of works...


Whole Journey MD informed LD about college, teachers & their rules..


after reaching


MD: within a few min teacher will enter in class room,Go..Guards will b outside & Driver will reach b4 time bt still call me if needed ..


LD: bro im sorry ,wnt say it again I promise .. Sorry Plz 🤗 (hugged him ) 😉


MD: ok 😊 Bye Go!! ..

LD ( MV) : 😔 All time had to b with security huhhh!!,dnt know Y!!! Who will tell im Black belt holder !!! .. Oh nooo 5min late ...

In class Room :

it was 1st class so its bcm introduction class for teachers & students..
so as usual teacher asking their names ,where they come from etc..
Girls will introduce 1st
so being a 1st in 1st row Radha introduced herself 1st

suddenly some1 " May i come in ? "

teacher: may b,10 min late in ur 1st class so 1st u'v introduce urself for 5 min then i'll decide whether u can come or not

Boy: 5 min !!!! ❓ 😕


Teacher: yes my boy..

Boy: Ok , my name is Leeladhar Chaturvedi ppl call me LD, completed schooling from JK international School,Mumbai.here im living with my brother&Sister-In-Law & sometimes Mom-Dad/Grandpa comes here to meet us or for other work ..

Teacher: sometimes!

LD: Actually im here bcz of Study and bro& bhabi is here to take care of me & handling work..

Teacher: still 3min

LD: i love to play football,reading books & listening music

Teacher:2min

LD:what to say!!

Teacher: Do u'v any Quality?!

LD:Black belt holder in Martial Art ,won few medals in painting competition & few trophies in Football..

Teacher: ok Come in,LD its similar to MD!

LD: Murlidhar Chaturvedi! my elder brother ur ex-student

Teacher: 1 of the talented student of our college 😊 i hope we'll C another extra-ordinarily performance in Xm & sports this year...

LD: will try my best sir 😊


& after few min teacher told them about exam's patterns & Sport/cultural programs etc.

After few weeks

Invisible Competition started B2N LeeRa infact they didnt realized when they r started to consider eachother as a Competitor whether its study or sport they want to B better performer than others & sometimes they started to argue with eachother ..



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Part-2
Silly fight

In Campus :

students r entering class rooms...

suddenly LeeRa bumped with each other actually both of them at fault bcz both r walking while Chating on FB 😉

But both blaming each other like

"R U blind!?"
"Couldn't u walk properly?"

& then pick up their Mobile from ground & walkes towards class room & as usual Class finished then1st Both searched each other then called ..

after few min

Radha/LD throw their phone towards each other
bt both caught nicly
😉


Radha: Ur bro was calling, unfortunately received it & Ufff!!
😡 anyway inform him that u r fit&fine,called 10times in last 5 min ...

LD: ur mom& Dad called me, 1st received ur mom's call now ur dad too calling ..ufff!!! inform them too...

LD: anyway sorry its happened bcz of same phone set

Radha: me too sorry bt if possible then plz change ur mobile set

LD: Y? ! Its ur problem so u'd change urs

Radha: Y ! Its nt my problem

LD: ofcourse its urs,dnt u find any1 else to bump with !!

Radha: what!!! Its u who always comes infront of me ,did u ever look at ur body ,pillar !! 😆

LD: what!! I'll ... 😡

(Suddenly Principle come out to attend teachers meeting in meeting room & the place where they r fighting is visible from meeting room so they stopped their silly argument..)


Next day:

today teacher will divide students among groups for Group study/ assignments etc so every1 is excited to know their team mates..

Teacher comes & started Grouping suddenly he called Radha pathak, Leeladhar chaturvedi,Isha, Rahul... In group D
(each group consist 10 member)

LeeRa (together) :What!!! 😲

Teacher :Any problem 😡 (actually teacher is little bit strict 😉 )

LeeRa: 😊 No 😊 No 😊sir No problem actually im so happy for getting wonderful mates ..

Both just glared each other 😡

then teacher advised to spend time/play games with Team that will helps them to communicate ,to understand each other etc.

Every1 decided to play "Kick the Can"

there was toss & LeeRa in 'it' bt at last min their opposite kicked using their absent mind

now both r blaming eachother ,rahul -Isha trying hard to make understand thats "it just a Game"

Next day :

team plans to do something different "picture guessing"
(now they r afraid to play games bcz of LeeRa) 😆 😆 😆

bt peace & LeeRa together is impossible so as usual Team witness another Blaming Game Bcz unfortunatly Radha guess wrong & guess who Drew the pic.. 😕 exactly its by LD 😆

Now team mates r praying for "Peace" in LeeRa & A "miracle" (nothing serious they r praying for friendship b2n LeeRa 😉 )



After 3 days :

today they have to submit their assignment bt LD & Radha Made separate assignment to submit & no1 is ready step back and suddenly in anger both torn their assignment..

Next day:
team mates r 😔 bt LeeRa blaming eachother

suddenly

Rahul: Enough!!!!!!! 😡
Dnt forget im leader of this team &
team dnt need to b sad we'v submitted our assignments

LeeRa: How ?! 😕

Rahul : already seen ur bond 😳 thats Y i kept a copy of ur Assignment in pendrive when u finished it, do u remember i was there so did Isha after all we know both of more than others ..
Then Isha & me adjust both Assignments ..
lets wait for teachers feedback...


And yes its best after all its LeeRa's hardwork ...


After class Rahul is Trying to make them realise importance of working as a team.. though he told it for team mates bt his main target is LeeRa

Isha: Do u think they will ever b friendly with eachother!! 😕

Rahul: im hoping so bcz as far i noticed they have amazing bond 👏 infact they r strong point of our team bt dnt know from where silly fight comes & spoiled everything.. 😡


Isha: may b its bcz both loves to win bt Group's success should b the 1st priority rather than individual's

Rahul: Hoping for the best

Isha: yeah right waiting for some miracle

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Part 3

Ice melting slowly

Finally Almighty decided to fulfill their Wish Bt Slowly after all it takes time to Melt Ice...

In class:

teacher announced

Selection for sport Competition will b began from Tomorrow & its rules like any1 can participate in 3 category Football, cricket (Girls& Boys team) Basketball (Girls&Boys) high jump, long jump Etc

so every1 started their practice including LeeRa..

Next day:

LD elected for Football while Radha for Cricket etc ...

while playing Radha somehow Hurt herself (its not serious injury) & teacher decided to inform her parents

Radha: No sir,dnt need to inform my parents they will b worried for no reason & its not serious..

Teacher: i know its not serious 1 bt still i cant Allow u to Go alone & its my duty to inform them

Radha: sir i'll manage..

LD:Sir she is my neighbours,lives in opposite flat so i can take her with me & meanwhile u can inform her parents

teacher: Ok..

So LD brought her in Apartment with Care

In apartment:


Suhasini already called their Family Doctor and he ensured that its minor injury &

Suhasini is pleased with LD's manner/behavior 😉


Next day (holiday) :

1st LD was confused then Shamli helped him to decide
& then he goes to meet her
after little convo b2n Suhasini-LD

Rupa takes him to Radha's room

LD: Hi! 😊


Radha: Hi! 😊


LD: How r u?

Radha:fine 😊

LD (little hesitation,little bit awkwardness) : Actually bhabi told me to ...actually "Enquiring about classmates health through phone isnt looks Good moreover when she is ur Neighbour" .. Thats Y .. anyway Take care & Bye ..

LD is about to leave bt

suddenly Radha says "Thanks a lot" from behind

LD: Why?

Radha: whatever u did for me yesterday...

LD: its ok afterall we r neighbour Classmate.. Bye 😊


Radha: Bye 😊


After that day equations between LeeRa is changing slowly...

may b bcz smile has the power to claim ur anger to erase enmity..

now both passes a sweet 😊 smile whenever they C eachother..


Sports Day:

Finally the most awaited day come..

Team Green VS Team Red


" Members of green's team r junior while Red's r Senior ...
Captain of green team is Rahul & Joy of Red team ... lets C who wi
n "



Same time In Patkak's Office

Sudhakar Pathak holding a family pic crying "Once i find out Mukharjee's will make their life hell ..😡


while in Chaturvedi Mension

some1 crying holding a Family pic


Sankarnath chaturvedi /Dada ji : Ishani! Dnt cry 😔 we need to b strong for who is alive ,who need us most ..

Ishani/Dadi bua : I know Bro/ bhaia i'v to b ..bt how long we'v to keep this secret... 16 year passed bt still ...

Dadaji: for his/her safety ..

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Part 4

Sports,Injury, Family &friendship

Green vs Red

Green's players r in Blue & White

while

Reds r in white & Blue


Match starts...

10min
suddenly LD get the chance & shot but Goal-keeper was Quick enough & yes he just Pushed the ball bt fortunatly/unfortunatly Rahul got the ball & used the chance ..

"Goal"

Isha ,Radha ,Shamli (after all LD is here) every 1 is 🥳 So happy

"Its Shocking Goal with in a 10min 👏 well done lets C how Red handle this & come back,score of Match is
Green Vs Red
1- 0
"

Now it bcm little bit difficult bcz red r now Trying hard to Goal ...

1st Half finished

Break time:
every1 is discussing & taking rest while
Shamli gives update to M.D. ,he couldn't come bcz of Business Meeting..

2nd Half :
Green gives much importance in 'Defense'
LD/Rahul is trying to add 1 more bt Red somehow handle them

"only 5 min left still Score Green 1 : Red 0, time passing & both team r trying their best "

suddenly Red broke Green's defense wall &

Goal

"Now score is 1:1 &only 2 Min left i think we'll have to wait for "Extra-Time" to know which team will win "

"Again LD is moving towards ..."

"Chotu" 😲 (shamli shouts & left her place )

"LD" (Radha,isha & others too left)
"Upps 😔 ... "

few min ago,
when LD was moving forward 1 of opposition tackle & he fall..

Now Sports teachers come & Checking &

"Teacher & Players of Green team r talking with LD & its looks like every1 is trying to convince LD bt..finally Teacher Give permission "

"Back to the Match..well Its a free kick from 30meter distance & The player That is LD have to cross opposites Defense ,What! LD is calls Rahul & Its Rahul 😕 who will Kick.."

"Free kick in last min & Who knows this might change Score ,otherwise they have to play for
Extra 15+15 =30Min "

"WOW!!!!!!!!!
what A shoot!!!! 👏

perfect trick !!

Rahul Kicked the ball towards LD & LD who is standing close to Opposites "defense" Kicked it within a min





& Goal-keeper still in A Shock not only Goal-keeper Whole team in A Shock ,Well done Green Team ,though they r junior bt their perfect planning, team spirit ,Bonding specially Rahul-LD's bond Made them winner ,Score is Green 2 : Red 1 That is Green wins"

Now players r Leaving Ground after Wishing opposites & team mates..


In Green room/players room:

Rahul is cleaning LD's wound ( there is A 2/3 small cuts bcz of that Tackle)

LD: im sorry

Rahul : (silent)

LD: Sorry , Didnt want to leave in last min..

Rahul : im angry with u bcz of this Wound not for play u'd have told Us bt No what u'v done !!! U can fool every1 not me by keeping ur hand here ..

LD:sorry, already no1 ready to allow me & if every1 saw then no1 might not allow me to play ..
Rahul: its ok ,i hope there is no muscular pain ..

Suddenly they notice Shamli 😔 & others

LD: Sorry Bhabi!

Shamli: Murli told me to take u in Hospital as soon as possible..

( So Bhabi is a angry with me 🤢 )

LD:Sorry bhabi but Bhabi im fine ..

Shamli: he wanted to come here So i think i'd inform him

LD: 😲 NO! 🤢

Shamli turn to leave


LD: Bhabi im sorry ,i know that time i'd leave Ground bt only few min left & they wanted to stop me when i was moving towards "Goal Post" So y i'll leave Ground without giving them answer & most importantly when my team needs me .. Sorry 😊
Shamli: Ok ,But ..

LD: really 🥳 how sweet 🤗 b2n u didnt wish me

Shamli: Congrts 😊 i hope its not hurting much ,is there any muscular pain ? I hope murli already Informed Dr.Sharma ,so lets Go

LD: 😔


Shamli: what happened? R U ok?

LD : Prize Giving Ceremony Will b held after T20 Girls Cricket match

Shamli: So !! Now plz dnt tell me u want to stay here till then...

LD : Nodded "yes"

Shamli: But Chotu what will happen to ur injury ?

LD: Rahul did first Aid & already used spray for muscles pain ..

Shamli: But murli !!

LD: bro ..
* suddenly every1 🤣 🤣 *

LD: hey why all of u laughing !

Every1 : "Chotu" 🤣

LD: bcz ...

Its call time for Girls Cricket Match So Radha-isha & girls leave ..

Shamli: R u sure ? U can stay here ?

LD: 😊 yes bt we'd inform bro

Shamli: Ok

Back to the Ground

"Now its time to Watch T20 Girls Cricket Match
between Blue & Pink ,both Captain come & toss , Pink won the toss so they chose bating 1st
"

LD,Shamli & others r present ..

(sorry wnt drag it much)

Pink Scored 200
so
201 target for Blue

" T20 Match is totally unpredictable Blue needs 15 run from 6 Balls to win ,Radha - Isha is trying lets C"

1st 2 Ball was dot
2nd 2 is 6, (12)
5th is Dot

"its last ball ,Blue need 3 to win & Radha-Isha discussed about something,So Radha will face last 1 ball"

"Its 4 "
"Blue wins"


Prize Giving Ceremony

"Today we'v watch Wonderful matches & its a rules/tradition 1 had to win /lose bt both team played well" 👏

1st its for "Football"

Player of the match goes to LD For perfect trick.. 👏


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when LD moving toward stage he was about to fall bt
Some1 Hold him & Actually Not 1 they hold him from Both From both side ,
he looked at the person Who is in Right with a shock,not only LD another person is in Same position

Person: They r Calling so lets Go

That person helps him to Go Stage..

(and he Smiled + Greet teachers )

Then Principle Gave trophy to winning team Same Goes with Cricket team,

Radha for Highest runs ...

Now every1 is leaving ,

LD& Shamli r scared 🤢 and That person still holding LD's Hand

LD: Bro O im fine and we r

Shamli: to meet Doctor,talked with Doctor he said ..

Murli : Did i asked details !!?? 😡

..

Next Day:

whole night radha was thinking about something then decided to meet LD,Servant informed that trio is in LD's room

LD's Room:
Radha is amused to C the scene infront of Her

LD is sleeping in Bed Murli is Beside him Holding LD's Hand & Shamli is in chair in otherside of Bed ...
Couldn't resist just click this lovely ❤️ Pic ..

She is still confused about "That"
Radha: Will he accept it ?
Should i give?
Better i'd leave

about to leave

"Radha"

its Shamli who noticed her (few min ago she just opened her eyes & Saw radha standing in Door)

Radha: Good Morning Bhabi 😊

LD: Good morning bro& Bhabi ,Radha (still closed eyes) 🥱

Murli-Shamli too wished

After few min

LD (noticed Radha's tensed /confused Face ) :
what happened?

Radha: Actually im thinking about something 😕 if i give u something will u accept this ..

LD: 😊

Radha: this



LD forwards his hand & then tell her to forward her's




LeeRa: "Happy friendship day" 😊

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Now all r well between LeeRa & every1 is happy ..Team is preparing themselves for Cultural program..teacher selected 2 among listed play..actually teachers was confused between 2 story both r good,most of them liked concept of LD's "Family based innocent love Story" so they leave decision to audience Here Radha & Kishor is lead4 selected as friends,4 As Parents,1 priest &hero's Brother, 1 as hero's Sister-in-law & 2 as grandfathers & His Sister ..(Ld wrote so obviously he'll include his Family member) & LD is in direction plus he will ensure that boys r using correct lines including kishor & Same goes Isha she is helping Girls including Radha, where rahul will act as hero's friend& rest of the time he will help others so Every1 is busy,whole team working hard & helping eachother teachers also helping them specially the 1 who supervises cultural programs ..Finally the Day has come everything goes well without any types of Disturbance..Every1's family came including Radha's mom-Dad & Rupa & LD's Mom,Bro& Bhabhi..Shamli is busy in recording program for rest of Chaturvadi's ..Here Only 1 Thing is different Teacher-Guardian- participant will watch Recorded Play through projector..Just before announcement LeeRa & Team handover CD All r Excited..Play starts- ( from backround Rahul informed That because of some reason LD is replacing Kishor in play & 1 more change will b seen but As u All r watching Play i cant reveal it now!!..) LD & Radha shown in class room ignoring eachother then being team member they slowly starts talking & then Friendship And gradually they Fall in love when family comes to know they didnt accept and both r ready to sacrifice their love but when friends came to know they convinced LeeRa for secret wedding in temple though both r not but fear of losing eachother Compeled them to take this step..(Again every1 heard Rahul's voice who informed that the other change which he referred is non other than priest & They will tell every1 exact reason behind changes after Play) Now LD -Radha is in temple along with their friends Priest is conducting wedding & few friends r present others r standing Far as if Their family comes they will stop them ..Rahul & Isha is sometimes missing looks like both r busy in Other works ..LeeRa r completing ritual with Sad face it was visible that they r still in Dilemma specially LD he is pain ..after completing vowsLD Put vermilion radha's forehead & Blood drops from his hand & only Radha realised that (camera caught this) .. Whole Auditorium Whispers "it looks like Real Wedding.." "Its Real indeed "priest confirmed ..Poor guys! whole team is in shockLD: What! How its possible U r an Actor How could U ..cut by priest .."Who told im an actor,im priest of Nearest Radha-Krishna temples & I conducted this wedding according to ritual " now its time to get Another shock for whole team and only 1 question coming every1's mind "how its possible!! is that reason he was Asking for Wedding chain& Vermilion !!So they had to brought for market with in A Short notice!! is that mean LeeRa get married for real !! But how!!" Mr pathak was already furious with whole issue it was Suhasini who is holding him but now its his turn "It was LD's plan he knows my daughter have no idea about wedding thats y he .." now its MD-Sadhna-Shamli's turn "Dnt utter A single Word about LD" MD: tell me what the reason Why u replaced kishor & Whats happened to Ur Right Hand! & rahul y look tensed? Why U guys reached late ? "Mr.Pathak: sir why u r not doing anything ! Principle: plz let them to tell their Reason Please..LD& rahul: Bro we found him little bit Strange but we dnt have enough time So we skipped that Topic And most Importantly everything happened quickly we didnt get time to re-think .. *Flashback*Every1 is busy in checking decoration or revising script..happy happy environment..Girls r giving finishing touch of make up in room beside stage(where they set Stage), room is divided in two portion Girl & Boys ..And for security teacher told both team to Use Room Beside Auditorium As their Set but they have Shot before Time .. In Boys section Rahul & LD is checking Monitors conection because from here they will check/watch every things on stage..well IT teacher helps them for setting all those instrument ..Suddenly Rahul shout in frustration "Whats wrong with connection" LD: i think wires must b disconnected but few min ago re-checked all this.. Dnt worry im going to check .. Kishor who present there also Joined ..After few sec everyone heard Kishor's screamso all come out & saw Kishor sitting in Ground holding his head while LD seen fighting with A person wearing mask,LD was trying to uncover his face,he was about to uncover but That person throw dust and
Edited by Sana_J. - 9 years ago
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And LD who is unable to See losen his hold & using moment that guy trying to run but others where surrounded him including girls (except radha she went to check LD) so out of fear he threaten every1 by showing his knife & act to hit some1 in air So every1 moving back but Radha who is taking care of LD is unfortunatly standing that guys way & when she saw him coming rooted her place after all she is experiencing all this for 1st time & That Guy was about to attack her when LD hold knife and others Hold that person and ties him (only hand) and takes kishor & LD in Room..
kishor is semi conscious though wound doesnt seems to b serious but send him to hospital to avoid further problems & Ajay takes him .. Rahul done LD's first-Aid..in the mean time they repairs Wires & Found few pieces of Rope that mean he was carrying pairs of Knife ..
So to avoid further attack they closed entrances & Exits
& already its too late it was difficult to find hero so Rahul suggested LD to play hero after All he wrote Script & it'll b easy for him to Adjust here but Ajay was selected for priest,Now ..
1 of them found way he informed that he knows 1 of Senior Brother /student of this college who always participate in cultural program so he might help them and yes he Send some1 giving instructions &when priest Entered they locked main door carefully ..
they found priest little bit Odd but They R running out of time so didnt think much ..


*Flashback End*


Dnt worry Kishor is fine now ,Doctor told its minor injury Ajay taken him to near by city hospital ..


Rahul: thats y we all r little bit disturbed & u have found me& Isha missing in few scenes that time either we r busy in checking arrangement or Talking with Ajay ..

MD: (MV) why i have a feeling that rahul is still hiding somethings !!!


LD: but sir we dnt know how real priest come here..
priest: they didnt call me ,i was crossing road with others Priest we found A injured person ,somehow he hurt his leg & he was in priest's attire so others takes him hospital before leaving he told "play" indicate this college & and i heard "Pray" & came here to complete his work ,believe me i dnt have any Idea
Rahul: But when we asked about script& instructions u told that its ur work ..
But ..(thinking few sec) Oh no u refered ur work and we thought Acting ..but when we r acting why didnt u ask anything ?
Priest : was busy in observing decoration & listening Religious Song , put off them when u called me..

To add Fuel Sudhakar Pathak isnt ready to believe because he thinks its LD's plan & Same goes kishor's parents ..there is heated argument between Chaturvadi-pathak

Principle: Enough!
(Looking at Boys-Girls) Some1 Attack inside !! Outsiders r nt allow here !!
Do u have any proof ?

LeeRa-Rahul-Isha: No but sir Why ..
Principle: child may b i can trust Ur words though its tough but i need proof & overall college committee might ask answer of this incident because everyone presented in Program saw this...

LD :Right sir We need to prove our innocence 1st & for this purpose We need Time .

Principle: 24hours ,tomorrow at 11am ..

Same goes others every1 is determined to prove their innocence 1st bcz now its about their Honour ..

Sadhna-Shamli : u dnt need to prove anything..let go
MD:look at ur wound its still bleeding 😭

LD: may b bcz of movement but..
MD:not A single word Already Called Dr. Sharma he is on his way ..
LD: ok..
Meanwhile every1 packed their bag and returned instruments they have taken/collected from teacher..

And also changed attire ..
After completing dressing & Bandage every1 left for mission

at 1st they went temple & here priest blessed LeeRa as A couple bcz of Radha's forehead
(she herself dnt know Why She didnt remove this)

Radha smiled little this was caught by 3 pairs of Eyes isha & Rahul and other 1 is some1 else who is following LD from college ..1st they called Ajay and Informed everything & asked if Kishor can remember anything about Mask man ..
Then they planed to find clues about Actors accident.. team in two car
LD& Rahul is driving ..finally they found clues Actor too was attacked by mask man ..
Meanwhile Radha notice that Car which is following only LD's car
so she decided to tell him but Rahul is 1 step ahead he went to talk with that person
Radha: LD look! the car is following u ,they might be planning to Attack again,mask man have a car but ( she stopped looking at LD's smiling face )
LD: Dnt worry,I know him

Radha: then why he is following U?
LD: to save me from everything (looking at that direction)
this time Radha notice mix emotions of love ,affection & respect in his eyes ..

after few min Rahul come back and this time he is little bit relaxed Radha thought its bcz of clue but LD guessed something else ..

Now team went same direction from where those mask man came,they split up for searching consisting 2 member as A team
LeeRa ,Rahul-isha etc
after Few min Radha c few people coming towards them
Edited by Sana_J. - 9 years ago
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So she decided to inform LD who is talking few people & they pointed him opposite direction when he looked back its too late now its time to self-defense,well its difficult to handle goons while ensuring Radha's Safety,yes he is Holding Radha Hand ,both r fighting actually Radha herself dnt know when LD is lifting her to kick goons 😉 , 1 of Goons is about to hit LD from behind but some1 kicked that Goons Now Radha See his face its MD
Radha (MV): So Murli bro is following LD,Wow!! How much he loved LD ..

& now Chaturvedi brothers r beating goons and asking about leader or person who told them to attack & after few min police come & take them Away ..
Now its time for brothers hug MD is happy to See his chotu safe & Sound ,Though he is scolding him for being careless,what if that Goon hits him ...
Radha tell slowly : Murli bro loves LD so much
"More than his life" added by Rahul who is listening their conversation..

MD: Chotu its evening so lets go home
LD: but
MD: ok atleast our office ,dnt tell me that All of u r planning to stay in car in whole night ..
Every1 agreed..

*Chaturvedi Group of industries-head office ,mumbai *
Every1 is settled in Murli's Rest room,
while Radha is Exploring Murlidhar's room its well decorated ,lots of picture is hanging in Wall , 2 large family pic of Chaturvedi (Old + New) , 1 old picture of 5 person, 1 is of 3 person titled Govind Chaturvedi, Mohan Chaturvedi & Rohan Mukharjee, others is Awards ceremonies but only 1st few pic 3 brothers is visible & rest 1 is absent in every program ..
Radha (MV) : there is huge change between their old & New family picture..Few people r missing..
She Notice picture stand in Murli's Desk 1 is MD,Shamli,LD & their parents 1 is of MD-Shamli & other is of LD-Murli..meanwhile Shamil comes with meal now every is busy having food ..while MD is feeding LD & Shamli- MD is feeding each other..
Whenever Radha Saw them she found their bond is somewhere special, the way they cares/respect/loves eachother.. sometimes she wish having Brother&Sister-In-Law like them..
after half an hour
LD : Bro did inspector call U?

Md:no ,called him ,all of them r local Goons So may b some1 hired them nothing else

"So whats our next step?"

LD: watching recordings of play,if im not Apart from Main camera , Me ,Radha, Isha & kishor also recorded our off-screen chating ,masti & All ..who knows 1 of them might catch that persons picture..though i know who is the person but i dnt have any proof ..now we'v to watch every clips carefully..
Isha: credit Goes to Radha-LD otherwise we never Brought our camera to shot offscreen moments
LD: hope any1 of them captured entry ,1st of all give me ur Memory cards need to Copy of All video who know he might att..(stopped looking at MD's face) 😊 try to stole this..
And then they found few clues & full picture of mask man and LD& kishor's camera captured whole fighting bcz they kept it on table facing stage before leaving ,while Radha-Isha's captured sounds of fighting, shouting,screaming & their Actions or discussion onwards..
Isha's Camera caught 1 things Only LeeRa noticed before leaving for hospital Kishor said Something in Rahul's Ear which brought sudden change in his face its mix of Anger& tension..
Shamli leave for Apartment bcz sadha is Alone & MD stays here And he'll come home with LD , Girls r sleeping in Another room & Boys r in Murli's rest room , every1 is sleeping except LeeRa both r thinking about Sudden change in their relation & LD's mind is searching answer of Few question
why Rahul was looking Tensed?
What was His conversation with bro?
Why that priest of temple blessed us as A couple? Radha Changed her Attire into normal jeans-shirt So how could priest recognized them as Married couple!!

"stop thinking much,will give answer all of ur question in Morning"

"Bro"

"Yes , now close ur Eyes"

LD immediately closed his eyes while smiling because he knows his bro..
Edited by Sana_J. - 9 years ago

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