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Part 16

Now time to execute PLAN B

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Next day maan ready to go office but daadi and geet is not ready for this...

Naintara : veerji daadimaa thik hi toh kh rhi hai

Aapko rest krna chaiye

Rhi meeting ki baat wo dev handle kar lenge

.

Geet : ha maan

.

Ye lo dev bhi aa gya

.

Dev tum gurgaon chale jaayo

Aaj waha ek meeting hai

Dev : ok geet

Geet take file from maan and gives to dev...

Par geet

Wo fir office

Mein kuch paper sign krne the

Bro nhi jaa rhe hai

Toh adi ko bol du wo yaha le aaye

Maan : mein jaa raha hu

Geet : aap khi nhi jaa rhe hai

Maan : no one stop maan singh khurana

Geet : but geet can do

Dev tum jaayo

Dev left.

Maan : geet

Geet : maan aapki tabiyat thik nhi hai

Aur mein koi risk nhi le sakti

Maan : am perfectly fine

Daadi : chup ho jaaiye aap dono

.

Geet beta maan manane wale toh hai nhi

Aap bs itna dhyan rakhna aaj ye office mein hi rhe

Aur jyada stress na le

Geet : ji

Maan : thanks daadi

Chale ab

Geet : hmm

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Sb kuch mere plan ke mutabik hi ho raha hai

Ab aayenga mja

Dekhti hu kb tak maan veerji chup rhte hai

Kb tak maan geet ka rishta yuhi bna rhta hai

.

In dono ne mujhse mere dev ko china hai

.

Acha huya humne maan veerji ki baat sunli

Aur humare hath shi mauke pe file hath lag gyi

.

She burns some papers ...

.

Jb dev office puchenge

Aur file uncompleted paayenge

Tb mja aayenga

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Maan : geet

Coffee

Geet : laayi

.

In this between her phone buzzed, maan sees dev name and pick the call...

Geet ek problem ho gyi hai

Bro ko mt batana

.

He cut the call without listen anything...then switch off...

Mujhe kya pata nhi lagana chaiye

.

Geet : maan aapki coffee

Maan : hmm

.

Geet jaake ye file complete kro

Geet : hmm

.

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Adi : geet tumhara phone ko kya huya hai

Geet : wo phone toh maan ke cabin mein rh gya

Adi : wo sb chodo

Dhayn se suno

Dev ka phone aaya tha

File mein se quotaion wale paper hi nhi hai

Geet : asa kaise ho sakta hai

Adi : asa hi hai geet

Hume jaldi se sbhi paper firse ready krne honge

Geet : ok

*********

Naintara : good work

Tumhe tumhare paise mil jaayenge

.

.

Ab kya karngi geet

Kaise itne important papers tum dev tk pucha aayungi

.

Waha electricity nhi hai

Toh mail option toh cancelled...

.

Dev ke phone ki battery bhi jyada der kaam nhi karengi

.

Bechara dev

.

Phone dead

No electricity

Poor KC

.

Tum meeting chaho khi baar arrange kr lo geet

Par uske liye bhi

Tumhe waha toh jaana hi honga

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Geet : adi sir aap maan ke sath rhehna

Mein bs dev ko ye file deke aayi

Adi : geet kissi ke hath bejwa dete hai

Geet : adi sir

Itna time nhi hai

Important papers hai

Phle hi aaj subh se na jaane ye sb kya ho raha hai

Ase kaise ho sakta hai

Short circuit ki wajh se puri wiring mein problem aa jaaye

Kuch din phle hi toh sb test krwaya tha

Tb toh sb thik tha

Adi : you mean

Kissi ne ye sb kiya

Geet : ho sakta hai sir

Koi na chahta hi ye project KC ko mile

Adi : you right

Mein dekhta hu

Tum jaayo

*********

Meeting going well and again KC get contract...

Dev : finally geet sb thik ho gya

Geet : hmm

Par kafi time lag gya

Let's go

Dev : geet tumne lunch bhi nhi kiya

Phle kuch kha lete hai

Geet : dev late ho jaayenge

Dev : geet 10 minute mein kuch nhi honga

Bro ka dhyan rakhna hai

Toh khud ka bhi dhyan rakho

Geet : hmm

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Maan : adi geet sayad cabin mein nhi hai

Usse bolo mein car mein wait kr raha hu

Adi : wo sir geet

Maan : geet kaha hai adi

Adi : wo geet gurgaon gye hai

Maan : kyun

Adi : wo dev sir

Maan : am going

Adi : sir

Maan left...

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Mujhe ek baar btaya tk nhi

.

Usse kya jaroorat thi

Waha jaane ki

.

Daadi : maan bte

.

Maan

Maan : ji daadi

Daadi : aap kis soch mein dubbe hai

Maan : bs office

Daadi : ghar mein toh office mt laaiye

.

Naintara : pata nhi ye dev kaha rh gye

Unka ohone bhi switch off hai

.

Vicky : bhabhi

Geet bhabhi ko phone kr lo

Wo bhi unke sath hi hai

Naintara : par wo toh veerji ke sath gyi thi na

Fir dev ke sath kaise

Daadi : naintara aapko dev se baat krni hai na

Toh geet ko phone kr lijiye

Naintara : ji daadi

.

.

Geet ka phone bhi switch off hai

.

Meeting toh kbki khatam ho gyi hongi

Fir kaha rh gye dono

.

Her words directly hit maan on exact point.

.

Maan : daadi am going to see geet

Already its 9

Vicky : bro

Bhabhi ka thoda aur intzaar kr lo

Intzaar ka bhi apna maza hai

Kissi kissi ko naseeb hota hai

Maan : vickkyy

Naintara (think) bechare geet dev

Chaha ke bhi jaldi nhi aa sakte wo dono

Bina fuel ke car bala kaise chalengi...

.

.

Daadi : maan bte

Relax

Bs geet aati hongi

Vicky : thank god bhabhi aa gyi

.

Bhabhi

Aap kaha rh gyi thi

Pata hai

Bro kitna pareshaan the aapke liye

Geet : wo

Maan : geet

Tum mujhe batake kyun nhi gyi

Meeting kb ki khatam ho gyi hai

Ab aa rhi ho tum

Geet : maan phle saas toh le lejiye

Maan : geet tum phle

Naintara : dev aapke phone ko kya huya tha

Aur aapke phone ko bhi geet bhabhi

Dono ka mil hi nhi raha tha

Pata hai

Veerji kitne pareshaan the

Aur hum bhi

Maan glares her and turn to left...

Maan : daadi good night

Daadi : maan aapne dinner nhi kiya hai

Phle

Maan : daadi mujhe bhook nhi hai

Am tired

He left...

Dev : geet bro lagta hai

Kafi gussa ho gye

Geet : unke gusse ko shant krna aata hai mujhe dev

Don't worry

Naintara (think) geet is baar tum gusse ki asli wajh jo nhi jaanti ho

.

Abhi ye chingari hai

Dheere- dheere aang bn jaayengi

Fir mja aayenga

Movie dekhne ka

Geet : daadi

Aap sb aaram kriye

.

Aur dev tum bhi khana kha lo

Dev : hmm

geet : daadi mein aur maan room mein kha lenge

daadi : thik hai beta

.

From above maan listening all words of geet , then he left...

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Geet : maan

.

Maan suno toh

.

Maan : kya sunu mein

Geet : maan aap itna gussa mt kro na

Maan : tumhe toh mere gusse ko shant krna aata hai na

Toh kro

Geet : maan sorry

Mein jyada late ho gyi na

Maan : nhi

Bilkul nhi

Abhi toh bs 9:30 huye hai

Geet : maan

Dev jis meeting ke liye gaya tha

.

Kuch paper missing the file mein

Bs ussi ki help ke liye gyi thi

Maan : wo kya koi chota bacha hai

Jiski help ke liye tum gyi

Kissi aur ko nhi bej sakti thi

Tumhe jaane ki kya jaroorat thi

Geet : maan mein chali gyi

Toh kya ho gya

.

I know

Aane mein late ho gya

Par wo humari car ka fuel tank leakage ho gya tha

Jis wajh se hum highway pe fs gye

Fir waha se kissi anjaane se lift lena mujhe aur dev ko thik nhi laga

Then walk

Fir khi aange jaake taxi milli

.

Maan kuch bolo na

Maan : geet am tired

Tumhe bhi chalna chaiye

Geet : no maan

Phle kaho

You are not angry

Maan : nhi

Geet : smile please

Maan : geettt

Geet : dekha gussa ho

.

Nakul knock on door and hand over the tray of food to her...then left.

Geet : maan mera gussa please khane pe mt nikalo

Aapko medicine bhi leni hai

Maan : nhi khana mujhe kuch

.

He lay on bed and held blanket, but geet held another side of blanket...

Maan : geet tum ye kya kr rhi ho

Geet : dikh nhi raha

Maan : leave the blanket

Geet : no

Both set on opposite side to each other and pulling the blanket own side...

Maan : geet bacho jaise behave mt kro

Geet : aap toh bde budde jaisa behave kr rhe ho

Maan : geettt

Geet : maan

.

.

Maan : thik hai tumhi rakho ye blanket

From another side geet pulling blanket forcibly, suddenly he left, she going to fall backward, maan held her wrist and pull her, both fall on bed , she fall on him ...Staring to each other ...he placed palm on her cheek and caressed. With another hand his hand pulling her so close...his lips going to touch her, but due to knock both separated...

Dev : sorry bro

Aap please geet pe gussa mt kriye

Ydi mein file ysi se check krke nikalta

Toh geet ko waha aana hi nhi pdta

.

Geet : it's ok dev

Maan ka haq bnta hai

Mujhpe gussa krne ka

Tum jaake araam kro

.

Dev : good night bro

Good night geet

.

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Geet : maan mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maan : toh khana kha lo

Kissi ne tumhe nhi roka hai

Geet : jb tak aap nhi khayonge

Mein bhi nhi khayungi

Maan take sit and starts eating... she also sit beside him and both eat dinner peacefully...

Geet : maan

Sorry once again

Maan : it's ok geet

But I want one promise from you

Another time any where you go

Inform me

Geet : ok

Now smile

Please

He assured her, now he is fine...

**********

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Note : now this is long update

I want proper likes or comments

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Precap : hum tum ek kamre mein bnd ho

But who

Maan and geet

Ya

Fir

Dev aur ?????

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Posted: 9 years ago
ohh no plsss no dev geet ,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 9 years ago
plz no more mu...kitne time tak nt yeh karti rahi gi aur kameyab hone lagegi...maan sach ko samjho...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Friendship's day! Thanks 4 da fab update! well written! This NT😡 she tries 2 create mu btwn Maaneet! she creates problems! Bt Geet handles it! Maan angry wen Dev calls her! Maan answers her call! Geet helped Dev! Maan annoyed! Geet apologises 2 Maan n manofys him! Loved her answer 2 Dev - Maan has a right 2 b angry with her! Maan fight 4 the blanket! Maan says she must tell him wen she goes out! update soon! Oh no please nt Dev n Geet! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
NT is up to her tricks to make Maan doubt Geet and Dev.
Maan is upset and angry that she left without telling him and once again Dev disturbs them at the wrong time!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg nt once again causing doubts in maan about dev geet. Looks like she is going to lock them in a room again and make maan MU again. When is this going to end. Poor geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
That naintara is playing very safe game.she is gelding maan's mind with a doubt which is not at all good for maneet. She is making all situation in that way , in which geet always have to dev for helping him. But maan started to take all things negatively . waiting for next dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ud
NT trying her best in creating mu
maan doubting dev but he still didn't
doubt geet the way Nt wants
geet again success in manofying maan
geet innocent antics always do tricks
on maan and now wat maan said its
clear warning to geet to tell him this is
not big thing which he demand
precap hope Nt and maan ek room main
maza aye ga
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update.

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