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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

Ress for chap 4
Unress 😊
Lovely update dear
Jo purposely wore saree and jalal couldn't control his desires after seeing her in that outfit
But poor man controled himself when he remembered doctors words
Jo is very hurt now but jalal knows how to handle her junglee billi 's desires 😆
Smart boy
Aww he prepared dinner for both of them
He is so loving and caring 😳
Waiting for next chap
And sorry for my late comments
Thanks for pm 😊


thats not a problem dear, I have no problem in late comments, but yes I am akways waiting for a comment hehe
thank you for your reviews on both chapters, my jallu is very caring 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: erning_w

As usual.. it's superb update dear..

I love this Jalal soo much... he's soo lovely and soo caring with Jo..
Continue soon...
Eagerly waiting for precap
And thanx for the pm Noureen 🤗


thank you so much 😳 😳 😳
I will update very soon 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

hey 😃
lovely chapter
now how will jalal deal with jo and harmones 4 the remaining months?😉
thnx 4 the pm
update soon


hahahah only if India Forums had that laugh-cry emotion, I would've been posting that hahah :'D :'D :'D
just wait and watch how halal controls his horny wife 😉 😉 😉
thank you so much for your comment!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Very nice update ... beautifully written👏.

All the romance was beautifully blended with the plot..not like odd thing out😳
Wondering how will Jalal conrtols horny JO..😆
That would be interesting 😉.
Really loving this story😊
.Continue soon & Thank you Noureen for PM😃


Hahahaha I hope you can wait to see how jalal controls his horny jodha
:'D :'D :'D
I'm glad you're enjoying the story, hope I can continue to entertain you all with my story!
thanks for your comment! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing story. Keep updating soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
will update today! please give me a while 😊
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Di update soon waiting for it...
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Originally posted by: mohammadnoureen

will update today! please give me a while 😊

update fast noureen
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NOTE: I was requested to give translation IF there is any types of HINDI in my chapters..
So my translations will be in this color, thank you and enjoy the chapter!
Don't forget to hit like and do comment, your positive and negative comments are always welcome
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Chapter 5


Next week, early morning jalal woke up as the suns fresh first rise fell on his face.
Jodha was still asleep, cuddling him with her face hidden in his chest.
He looks at the time and it was 7:30am.
He looks at his beautiful wife, smiles and turns over, to hug her properly!
jodha feels a little disturbed and slowly her eyes open.

"Good Morning my sleeping beauty" says jalal.

jodha smilingly closes her eyes, hugs him tighter and replies back saying;
"Good Morning babe, were you staring at me sleeping?"

jalal: I just woke up myself! By the way, you know we have an office party tonight, right?

jodha: What?! Why didn't you tell me before? Omg I need to take out something to wear, I don't know what I should wear though..

jalal: *smirks*, maybe wear a saree again. I don't think your suits will fit you right now.

he then caresses her belly as they can now see a little bump on her tummy.

jodha lifts her head up from his chest, looks at him angrily and says;
"are you trying to call me fat?"

jalal: not fat my jaan, but my daughter is growing up so fast, now we can see the bump on your stomach, right?
and all your suits wouldn't fit you right now!

jodha: yeah, yeah, okay, whatever, I love the way you just called me fat but in a nice way.

she then adds;
jalal, can we go for shopping today? I want to buy a saree for tonight's office party!
I don't want to wear the old ones, after all I'm the wife of the company's owner, I have to look special! She says proudly!

jalal: company malik ki biwi ho, toh itna ghamand?

(wife of the comany's owner, that much pride?)


jodha: aur nahi toh kya, akhir hum Mrs Jalal Mohammad hain!! I have to look like his wife!

(of course, why not, after all I am Mrs Jalal Mohammad!!)

jalal: okay, we will go for saree shopping once we're done with breakfast, but we shouldn't take long in shopping! okay babe?

jodha throws her left hand on his left side cheek and pecks on his lips.

jodha: sure babe, I'm gonna go quickly bath, then I'll get breakfast ready.

jalal let's loose of his hold on jodha's waist and let's her to get up!
she gets her clothes out and makes her way to the bathroom.
jalal still in bed.. lazy to get out of the warm blankets.

jodha throws her clothes on the rack all together, takes off her night gown, and gets undressed. She looked at her clothes which she threw on the rack, she sets them up properly, to wear straight after shower. she then suddenly realizes that she's forgotten her towel.

"babe, can you please give me a towel, I got everything else with me, but just forgot the towel" says jodha in a loud voice, loud enough for jalal to hear her.

jalal: just a second!

he gets up and grabs a towel.

"here you are!" jalal says standing right outside the bathroom door which was attached to their bedroom.

jodha opens the door a little bit and pushes her hand out to get the towel.

jalal smirks seeing her bare arms.
he gives her the towel and slowly pushed the door open and rushed inside.

jodha gets shocked at what her husband just did. her head automatically slightly went back. She frowns at her husband and says;
"Jalal, what the hell?!"

jalal: let's shower together, it'll be quicker, and we will waste less time!!

jodha smirks at her husbands naughtiness and says;

"No, you're completely shameless. you go get your things ready while I finish shower then I'll get breakfast ready while you shower"

she opens the door again and tries to push him out.

jalal grabs her hands, rests her soft palms on his bare chest.

he slowly kicks the door back to close it... once the door closes, jodha feels a beautiful feeling inside her, she calms down. he holds jodha's hands which were placed on his chest and slowly walks forward.

jodha starts walking backwards. slowly she reached to the wall and her warm naked back touched the cold tiles. she shivered with the sudden coldness on her warm soft body. she swiftly got her back off the cold tiles by taking a step forward, she moved her hands from jalals chest, and took it around his neck and hugged him very tightly. She hissed as their naked bodies touched and joined together. jalal wraps his arms around her waist and hugs her tightly. they both closed their eyes and relished their warm naked hug.

jalal was in pants, but he was shirtless from the start as he has a habit of sleeping with no shirt on.

when jalal felt her warm breasts on his chest.
he closes his closed eyes tighter and with a sensual voice he says:

"what happened?"

jodha shyly says; "tandh lag raha hai jalal" and digs her face in his neck.

(feeling cold jalal)

jalal then hugs her even tighter and slowly walks under the shower tap with her in his arms.
he slowly turns the hot and cold water on, water hits jodha and jalal both at the same time. they both slowly got drenched in water. jodha shivers and starts breathing heavily while hugging jalal tightly.
jalal breaks the hug, and slightly pushes jodha to the wall. he grabs both her hands and pinned it to the top. he was holding her hands over her head, resting in jalals hand on the wall.
She closes her eyes as the water touches her face and drops on her breasts.
jalal holding her hands above her head, planted a kiss on her bare neck. jodha softly moaned and opened her eyes.
she bought her hands back down and cupped both of his cheek and chin together. she pecked him on the lips.
he knew not to go further, but he couldn't control himself.
to avoid going further with her, he turned her around, so now her whole bare back and body was touching jalals chest and stomach.
He then grabbed the body wash, flipped the lid open and started to pour it all over her shoulders and poured more body wash over her neck and chest.
As he poured the body wash over her chest, the cold slimy liquid of the body wash touched her breasts and she softly hisses.
he shuts the lid of the body wash and slowly chucks it on the floor.
the warm water was pouring over their bodies.
he puts his hands on her shoulders and starts to rub and massage the body wash all over her shoulders. jodha all this time had her eyes shut, she was enjoying his touch. breathing heavily, she couldn't ask for more.
once he was done with her shoulders, he hugged her from behind and cupped her breasts. she then loudly moaned as her hands automatically rested over his hands which was resting on her squishy round breasts.
jalal started to kiss under her earlobe and started massaging her breasts, spreading the body wash all over her front side. He continued for a minute and moved down to her stomach.
he slowly caressed her whole stomach and said
"My baby will learn how to give showers too".
jodha chuckled when she heard jalal say that. she says;
"jalal your son isn't even born yet, let him enter this world and grow up first, then you can teach him how to give his wife a shower like you do"
jalal quietly continued. he smooches on her shoulders as jodha turned around and lovingly looked at him. suddenly jodha frowned and glared at him when she saw he is wearing pants.

"Why the heck are you still wearing pants in the shower for?" she cracked at him.

he smirks and pulls it off with his undergarments.
now jodha did the exact same with jalal.
Jodha smiled and she started to pour the body wash over his broad chest and started rubbing it all over his chest with both her arms rested on him.
she was smiling like she's giving a baby a shower.

jalal: why you smiling like you're giving your son a shower?

jodha looks at him with frowning eyebrows and eyes and snaps back at him
"You're not my son, but you're like a baby" she sticks out her tongue and continues to scrub his back with both her arms under his arms.
jalal swiftly locks his lips on her tongue and kissed her.
jodha participates in kissing him back,
once they were out of breath, they broke their kiss and quickly finished giving each other a shower!

they both came out of the shower and realized there's only 1 towel in the bathroom which was for jodha but jalal also joined in the shower. jalal gets an idea, he grabs the towel, wraps it around him and grabs jodha inside his towel and swiftly carries her and starts walking towards their room.

jodha in his arms wrapped in the same towel with him, resting her forehead with his forehead, laughing and giggling.
she felt his manhood on her womanhood moving.
She realizes he is getting a boner.

She smirks and says
"Tell your babies to stay in there! No sex now, we need to go out"

as he hears what jodha just said, he realized that she felt his boner, he gives her an 'aww, fine' look.

he then laid themselves on bed and starts wiping her body with the towel.
The water droplets was slowly running on her cheeks, he slowly kissed the water droplets away from her whole face.
jodha was just still as a statue, enjoying his kisses.
he moved down and dried her breasts and stomach.
he kissed her belly and moved down and dried up her womanhood, thighs, and legs.
he grabbed her hands and gently pulled her up. She grabbed the towel off him and started to dry him up. They both were off the bed, now standing up.
She dried his chest, back and now she sat back down on the bed and dried his manhood.
As she touched his manhood, jalal moans
"Ohh my. Jodhaa"
Jodha giggles loudly and says
"Shut up"
She entirely dries him up and they both quickly got dressed.

9:30am
Jodha walks in the kitchen with her long wet hair open.
She quickly made coffee for jalal.
Jalal was drinking coffee and started watching the news as jodha prepares breakfast.

they quickly had breakfast and got ready to leave.
jalal grabbed his car keys, wallet and phone. jodha grabs her handbag, phone and they both left the house.

Jalal has been driving from 10:30am, it's now 11:00am.
They had to go to another area for saree shopping, where they could buy the best saree's from. It was a little far, jodha was napping.

Jalal stops at traffic lights, looked at her and in a dim low tone, he says
"Jab se pregnant hui hai, tab se bachon ke tarah naps lete rehti hai.. My jaan, you look absolute divine while sleeping."

(shes been napping a lot like a little baby ever since shes became pregnant)

He lovingly caresses her stomach.
jodha in her nap turns more to jalals side and puts her hands over his hands on her tummy.

she wakes up as she feels his hands under her hand.
She looks around and sits back up properly.
Jalal starts driving again.

Jodha rubbed her eyes, she wasn't wearing any make up! She yawned an asked
"why don't you ever wake me up if you see that I've fallen asleep."

jalal: why would I even break my babe's sleep, you're a true sleeping beauty!

jodha: I don't know jalal, these days I feel too tired.

jalal worriedly asks;
"is there something wrong in that?
I mean, isn't it normal for pregnant women?"

jodha: yeah it is! but still, I don't want to be asleep when you are around me. so if I fall asleep again, anywhere. please wake me up.

jalal: yeah okay, whatever!

they reach to their destination!
there were a whole lot of Indian clothes shops in that area.
they picked the best saree shop and entered..
after an hour of searching for a good saree, jodha couldn't decide which saree to buy. jalal then chose a bright dark red georgette netted saree, with shiny, glittered, and thick heavy worked black curls all over the red netted material of the saree.
jodha was stunned at her hubby's choice.
She got very happy and said
"You got a very good taste babe, I love this!"
Jalal sexily smirks at her and replies back saying
"If my taste was bad, I wouldn't have had a sexy wife like you.. "
he quickly kissed on her cheek!
the men's who worked at the saree shop just smiled at their cute talks and romance.
jodha smiled and says
"Let's get this one! After this I want to go for jewellery shopping. I promise, this is the last thing on my shopping list for today.. I only wanted a saree and jewellery!"

jalal: that's fine, let's go!

he buys the saree.. it cost him $450

jalal and jodha entered a jewellery shop, they searched and searched.
jalal spotted a beautiful diamond necklace. It was simple, but very beautiful and would match perfectly with the saree they got today!

"babe, this one!" Says jalal.

jodha looks at the necklace and says
"Wow this is so beautiful!!"
she then tries it on herself.
she looked in the mirror, she loved it. she brightly smiled while she adored the necklace on her. she was glowing brighter than the sunshine.

jalal loved her in this shiny diamond necklace. he melted like ice on fire seeing her beautiful smile. he could tell how much she loved it.

she takes it off her and has a closer look again.
she notices the price and says;

"ahh jalal let's look over there, iss mein kuch, khass nahi hai"

(this ones not too special)

jalal knew why she said this. he saw her gazing at the price tag.

"Jodha, I'm getting you this one, it's beautiful" he says.

"jalal nahin, yeh wala bohot mehanga hai, kuch aur dekh lete hai na, aao na! let's see here" Says jodha.

(jalal no, this is too expensive, we will look for something else, come on..)

jalal then says okay as you wish.

after 20 minutes, their shopping was over! They went back to their car.
jodha sat in the front seat and jalal sat in the drivers seat.

"Oh damn." Jalal smacks his head.

Jodha having ice cream and wiping her mouth says
"Kya hua?"

(what happened?)

"I needed to recharge my phone. I'll be back, you don't go anywhere okay?"

Jodha smiles at him saying; okay!!

jalal gets out of the car and locked her inside for safety!

jodha was enjoying her ice cream. After 5 minutes, jalal came back and they drive back to their town.

jodha in the car.. her stomach starts rumbling.
jalal hears it and asks
"Is my wife and daughter hungry?"

jodha: no, your wife and your son are hungry!

jalal: what would they wanna eat?

jodha puts her hands on her stomach and leans her head a little down and says
"Son, what do you want to eat today?"

jalal smiles widely and thought, my wife is the cutest women out!!

jodha pretends that she's heard the baby and says
"Ahh, so you don't want to eat anything healthy today! Hmm. Jalal, your daughter is asking for some indian food."

jalal: healthy khanna se bachne ke liye, beta se beti ho gayi?

(trying to get out from eating healthy, so it changes from son to daughter?!)

jodha stops her smile and acts to be annoyed and crosses her hands and elbows together with a slight pout on her lips.

jalal chuckled and says
"okay, how bout we go to an Indian restaurant and have something like biryani or something. at least it's better than fried food and stuff"

jodha gets happy and slightly jumps in her seat and says
"YES YES JALAL, THANK YOU!!"
and she leans forward kisses him on his cheek!

She was very happy to eat biryani today.
they went to an Indian restaurant called
"Sangam"

they happily ordered their food and both happily ate their lunch together.

after their lunch, jodha intertwined her fingers with jalal and leaned her head against his shoulders and lovingly says

"You're the best husband and the best father jalal"

jalal throws his arms around her shoulders and says
"And you're the best wifey and mother jodha"
they both looked at each other, smiled and locked their lips with each other.
they kissed, for a minute and broke it when they noticed the waiter coming with the bill!

The waiter comes and hands in the billing to jalal. She blushed and broke the hug.
Jalal paid and they left for home now!


4pm
they reached home. they enter the house and jodha just wanted to rest a little.

jalal: Babe, go rest up a little. be ready for the party by 7pm. We should be there by 7:30pm because guests will start coming by 8pm.

she goes, okay sure. but do you need anything before I go rest up? Do you want me to take out your suit, shirt and iron them?

jalal: no babe, you go rest. I'll do it.

jodha: sure?

jalal then picks her up in his arms and takes her to bed.
He lays her down in bed and stays on top of her.

"I'm sure"
he pecked on her lips with his wet lips.
jodha closes her eyes.

jalal adds: now rest up, I'll manage to do everything.

"I love you jalal, thank you for everything you've done" says jodha.

he looks deeply in her eyes and says
"Love you too wifey. I can't imagine my life without you. You don't need to thank me.. You're the one who came in my lifeless life and made it heavenly beautiful"

jodha: don't talk about the past.
I'm your present now, and our baby is our future"

he kisses her on her forehead. And they both hugged each other..
jalal then broke the hug, got off her and finally pulled the blanket over her, pulled the curtains to make the room dark and left her to rest a little..

jodha shuts her eyes and falls asleep as soon as jalal walked out...



PRECAP: office partyy!

I am so sorry for the boring chapter i am not well.. But I wrote this chapter in a rush.
Hope you all understand.
Next chapter should be an interesting one!

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Edited by mohammadnoureen - 10 years ago
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nice update
jalal jodha spend some quality time together
jalal is a very caring husband
continue soon
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Edited by mamtasingla - 10 years ago

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