NIBIR SS : CHUP CHUP KE (DISCONTINUED)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii my k khandaan...its me sonu again...with my new story...i know i know i still have to complete my previous ff but uska ek hi update baki hai...thats why m starting my new story

My story is about two families...Rathores n Gangwals or shall i say Rathore V/S Gangwals

They r neighbours but still they r competitors...they just hate each other wo kehte hain na khandaani dushmani type bas wohi hai woh bhi 40 saal se

They r competitors in business in society infact their children also compete with each other...in school n colleges...weird na

But still they are very powerful in business n society

Par wo kehte hain na nafrat se badi hoti hai mohabbat so what if inki nafrat par mohabbat ka tadka lag jaaye

Character Sketch

Gangwal Family

Same as the show...except nisha she is a little bold...nature wise(aap logo ko kya laga 😉 )

Rathore Family

Abhimanyu Singh Rathore-head of the family

Devyani Singh Rathore-his wife

Arjun N Vasundhra Rathore-Abhimanyu's elder son n DIL

Viraj Singh Rathore-Arjun n vasu's elder son(he is too obedient...agyakaari beta arey totally shravan kumar type 😆 )

Kabir Singh Rathore-Arjun n Vasu's younger son(totally k 😈)

Siddhant n Gaytri Singh Rathore-abhimanyu's younger son n DIL

Saurav Singh Rathore-Siddhant n gaya's son(Kabir's best frd cum cousin)

Priyanka Singh Rathore-the only daughter in rathore khandaan...sweet like a dessert sabki favourite n laadli😆

So here is my SS

CHUP CHUP KE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHUP CHUP KE

PROLOGUE

(outside the conference hall)

Nemichand Gangwal(NG)-what the hell itna important contract wo bhi un rathores ko mil gaya

Viren-i know bauji...pakka kuch jhol kiya hai inhone

Ramesh-arey bhaiya i don't think its possible...we all know how intelligent their elder son Viraj is

Dolly-chachu hamne bhi toh mehnat ki thi na

(Rathore clan came out)

Abhimanyu Singh Rathore(ASR)-arjun beta see someone is feeling j right now

Viraj-dadaji lets go na

NG-tumhe kya lagta hai tum jeet gye

ASR-haan bilkul jeet toh hum gye hi...we actually won(with a pause)over u...n we will win...always

NG-we'll see that

ASR-yep we will...chalo viru beta...party time

(Rathores went from there)

Viren-koi nhi bauji aaj inka din tha...kal hamara hoga

NG-nisha kab a rhi hai

Dolly-kal daadu

NG(monologue)-Abhimanyu singh rathore my princess is coming back...now u n ur family will just wait n watch(and he smiles)

Now tell me shall i continue n if u want pm then plzz like the prologue warna main confuse ho jaati hoon😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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love ,love love this😛
chacters sketch esp rathore family😆😊
nishu bro is bold🤣
i felt lik swaragini when i was reading the 1st paragraph😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg..awesome story...gangwals vs rathores..and uska beech ma nibir ki love story. ...continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nishu bro is coming!!
dadu waits fr nisha😲😆
dolly is also into the business?😊
nice prologue sonu..
keep writing..
and what question you are asking?u should continue😊
sonu ne ek stry liki,aur forum wasis na padhe..aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya??😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dhamakedaar prologue...yr i really like dis plot...
viraj k aagyakari hone k sath kabir ke k panti ka tadka...
nisha ki entry hone wali h lgta in dathores ka ab band bajne wala h...
plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshiss

love ,love love this😛

chacters sketch esp rathore family😆😊
nishu bro is bold🤣
i felt lik swaragini when i was reading the 1st paragraph😆

thanks khushi😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinelove

Omg..awesome story...gangwals vs rathores..and uska beech ma nibir ki love story. ...continue soon..

thanks dear😃
Hey yaar i dont know ur name plzz tell me yaar😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshiss

nishu bro is coming!!

dadu waits fr nisha😲😆
dolly is also into the business?😊
nice prologue sonu..
keep writing..
and what question you are asking?u should continue😊
sonu ne ek stry liki,aur forum wasis na padhe..aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya??😊

yep
In my story they all r very open minded😃
N hey irs not swaragini😆

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