MRMRW Season 2 ' My version ' Part 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Link to Part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4430391/mrmrw-season-2-my-version


PART 2

Radha stirs awake. Something is wrong with her pillow - it's different. Then she realises her "pillow" is LD's arm. She snuggles closer to him and watches his breathing. Poor LD. He has suffered so much in the last one year. LD stirs and opens his eyes. He sees Radha in his arms and holds her tighter - as if he is afraid that she will fly away again if he loosens his grip. Radha whispers "It is time for the morning Puja, we need to get up." LD says "just a few moments more."

LD and Radha arrive at the Mandhir. Dadibua asks Radha to sing the prayer song. Radha sings beautifully. Dadaji thinks again how mistaken he was about Radha. She was right, he had been hastily judgemental about city people and the young generation.

After the Puja, Sadhna calls LD and Radha. She tells them that her brother who lives just outside Mathura wants to meet Radha and bless them. She suggests that they go there after breakfast and have lunch with him and come back in the evening. LD asks if she is not coming. Sadhna says no, she has to start making the arrangements for Janvi's wedding. It is the last wedding in the family and so Dadaji wants it to be grand. LD is happy. He will get Radha to himself for some time.

LD and Radha start off. Radha asks him if he really knows the way this time. LD gets an idea. He tells her that he hasn't been to his Mamaji's house in a long time but he remembers the way. On the way, LD deliberately loses his way so that he gets more time with Radha. They arrive late at Mamaji's house. Mamaji is waiting for them in his room as he is bed-ridden. He calls Radha close to him and looks at her. He says he is happy that his sister has got such a graceful and intelligent Bahu. LD smiles sheepishly. His cousin comes in and says lunch is ready. They have lunch and go back to Mamaji to get his blessings before he leaves. Mamaji takes a necklace and gives it to Radha. He tells LD that it belonged to his Nani and he wanted Radha to have it as a blessing from her too.

LD and Radha start their return trip. Meantime, Sadhana and Jeyshree have been giving LD's room a makeover. Sadhna comments on how LD refused to change anything in the room including the bedcover and pillow cases as he wanted to keep the memories of when Radha stayed in the house. But now, it is time these were changed. She takes the new sets that she had kept ready at the time of the wedding. She and Jeyshree change the bed linen. Jeyshree tells Sadhna that she has really been bad to separate these youngsters for over a year. Sadhna says not to worry about that any more. The separation has made them realise their love for each other even more. Sadhna says they have done enough and Shamilee and Janvi can finish the rest of the work.

LD drops Radha off at the door and says he needs to go to the office to look at some files. Radha tells him to be back before the evening Puja. Radha enters the house washing her feet first. She is so happy that the old practices are back. She is about to enter her room but Sadhna calls her and asks her for some help in the kitchen. LD calls and says he has some urgent work with a new client and will be late or may only be able to come in the morning. Radha is disappointed. Sadhna tells her to come with her. She takes her to her room and takes out a new outfit. Jayshree and Shamiliee also come. Together they dress Radha up. Radha asks them if there is a function. Jayshree giggles.

They take Radha to her room. She enters the room and sees that it has been decorated. She understands that the preparations are for the Suhag Rath. She feels shy. Jayshree teases her good-humouredly. They are so happy that Radha doesn't have the heart to tell them that LD will be late or may even return only tomorrow morning.

Radha sits on the bed and waits for LD to come home...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am so liking this part 2 of #MRMRW concept please please continue !!! Your writings are really expressive..waiting for next part update sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it. I am still grieving for MRMRW. I have started Part 3 but this will take some time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sgc68

Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it. I am still grieving for MRMRW. I have started Part 3 but this will take some time.


cute pillow 😳
LeeRa ❤️
b2n its lovly 👏 So take ur time no problem ..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Very interesting.

But what kind of job does LD have to keep him out the whole night?

I hope this won't be a frequent thing.
Please don't let Radha wait for him the whole night.

Edited by fatma201 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why don't you continue the story on the previous thread so the whole story will be on one thread. It will be easier for fans to follow it up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatma201

Why don't you continue the story on the previous thread so the whole story will be on one thread. It will be easier for fans to follow it up.


I'll put links to connect the parts. Otherwise it will be a long post. I have vague ideas for another four parts. Let's see where it goes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatma201

Wow! Very interesting.

But what kind of job does LD have to keep him out the whole night?

I hope this won't be a frequent thing.
Please don't let Radha wait for him the whole night.


He works in security remember. Security guys keep odd hours. You will probably have to wait till the weekend for part 3.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sgc68


I'll put links to connect the parts. Otherwise it will be a long post. I have vague ideas for another four parts. Let's see where it goes...


I think it's better to write the whole story in one thread but everytime you update it you send us the link of the page otherwise the story parts will be spread out in different threads and it will be difficult for other members to follow it.

This is also how most of other writers of FF/OS/SS does.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sgc68


I'll put links to connect the parts. Otherwise it will be a long post. I have vague ideas for another four parts. Let's see where it goes...


You don't have to continue writting on the previous part. Like now we are on page two of the thread, so if you should continue writting, you will give us the link of page two.

Anyway, these are just my ideas but do what you feel comfortable with.

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