FF: Forever and Always........THREAD 3 updated pt 58/pg 130 - Page 95

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

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Guys I have some real bad news. My laptop's hard disk got crashed and now I just got back. I have back up but I lost the entire new parts I had written. I will update as soon as I can but please forgive me. I will need another week at least.Sorry guys. I promise to make it worth it.

hi thanks 4 da note! Np will wait! Do understand! no need 2 apologize
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Originally posted by: aditi_2010

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Guys I have some real bad news. My laptop's hard disk got crashed and now I just got back. I have back up but I lost the entire new parts I had written. I will update as soon as I can but please forgive me. I will need another week at least.Sorry guys. I promise to make it worth it.


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Thanks a lot everyone for all the lovely comments and likes. For pm please add me as buddy. Now here's next part. Please comment and press like because they mean a lot to me and inspire me to write better... 😊 Sorry for keeping you waiting and not replying to your comments but I am kind of really busy with retrieving all my works and other things in my lappy. I have read through each of your comments though.Thank you and I hope you enjoy this update.

Part 58

Placing his hand on Geet's shoulder Maan brought her back from her dream land. Geet looked up and smiled at him. She patted the space beside her gesturing him to sit. As soon as Maan had sat Geet snuggled into his arm. It was a beautiful starry night and they sat in silence listening to each others heart beat.

Geet:" We have come so far."

Maan:" We have. I still can't believe. If few years ago somebody would have told me that I would be engaged I would have laughed at the impossibility of the event."

Geet:" And I was too busy mourning over my loss to think about anything."

They both looked at each other trying to find traces of guilt or pain. But they both have truly moved on. Armaan would always be in their heart and they will always love him and mourn over his loss but that's it. They will remember Armaan with a smile on their face.

Geet:" Remember that day we visited Elephanta."

Maan:" Oh yeah!! Who can ever forget?"

Geet:" You were kind of mean you know."

Maan:" And you were really cute when angry. It took everything in me to not kiss you then and there when you were cutely pouting soo much."

Geet blushed at his proclaimation and Maan chuckled lightly.

Maan:" Tell me something mishty. When I had first asked you to stay back on your birthday night didn't you feel bad?"

Geet nodded in no. Maan made her look at his eyes and asked in the huskiest tone," Not even a bit?"

Geet smiled softly. She decided that Maan deserved to know her feelings from beginning.

Geet:" I trust you Maan. I had trusted you from that first moment we had laid eyes upon each other at the lake side. I was a living dead. Yet you were the first person I shared my feelings with. I think it was the familiarity of the same secutrity I felt with Armaan that drew me to you but then slowly you crept in my heart making a permanent place in my heart. I tried really hard not to love you, not to fall for you but it was inevitable. And now I truly believe that we were destined to be together."

Maan couldn't control himself anymore. He placed his lips on hers giving her the softest and sweetest possible kiss. He didn't probe for her to open her mouth. Unhurried and with utmost love they kissed each other. They were both hugging each other as if trying to mingle themselves into one being. There was no rush like they knew that in their heart and soul they were one. Once out of breath they let go of each other. Geet placed her head on Maan's chest as Maan encircled his arms around her.

Maan:" You know, I have always had this strange wish."

Geet:" What?"

Maan:" I have seen you mostly in jeans- top or in salwars and in some random occasion in some saree or at max some knee length evening dress."

Geet:" Where are you going with this?"

Maan:" Of course I had never dared but some days when I would hope of having a future with you I wanted to see you in some bold costume. I have seen you in every avatar of yours Mishty. I have seen you broken by pain, I have seen you as a compassionate friens, I have seen you as a passionate lover, even in few occasions as an innocent seductress."

Geet turned red hearing Maan. Maan chuckled and kissed her cheeks before proceeding.

Maan:" I have seen you shying in my love and also as a possessive one; even a little jealousy as well. But I want to see a bold Geet. I want you to be bold and confident and bringing me to my knees. I had fallen for my innocent mishty but I believe you can be a seducing vixen if you want to be. I want to witness that side of yours once."

Geet hit Maan's chest in an attempt to control her raging breath listening to his shameless words.

Geet:" Don't you think you are taking too much liberty Mr. Khurana?"

Maan:" I am a man in my thirties Geet. You are a woman I love. Wait till we are married would be Mrs. Khurana! I would make sure you know each and every fantasy of mine."

Geet hit him harder this time and muttered," Shameless man."

Maan chuckled and said simply," Oh you have seen nothing yet my mishty."

Then he brought his lips near to her ears and whispered into her ears," wait till our suhagraat Mishty!" and bit her earlobe a bit.

Geet looked at him with mock anger but her blushing cheeks ruined the image. Picking up a pillow Geet hit him as Maan moved round the terrace not wanting to be beaten by his fiance. The moonlight night was making the atmosphere mystical as the two lovers were busy playing round.

Labon ko Labon pe sajao

Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Labon ko Labon pe sajao

Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Suddenly Maan pulled her back making her fall on his arms as they both looked at each others eyes. Maan slowly bent down keeping his lips on hers capturing her lips for a hungry kiss while the pillow she held fell down. Soon she was returning the kiss with equal fervor.

Tod do khud ko tum

[Banhon mein meri

Banhon mein meri

Banhon mein meri

Banhon mein meri ]2

Maan was about to deepen the kiss when Geet pushed him a bit startling him. Using his surprise she freed herself and ran away. Maan stood at his place as Geet turned back and winked naughtily. Maan glared at her while Geet just showed him his tongue.

Tere ehsaasson mein Bheege lamhato mein

Mujhko doobati tishnagi si hain

Teri adao se dilkash khatao se

In lamho mein zindagi si hai

Soon it was Just opposite. Maan was running behind Geet instead as she tried avoiding him throwing things left over from party to him. Maan soon caught her and twirled her before turning her towards himself placing his forehead onto hers.

Haya ko zara bhool jao

Mere hi tarah pesh aao

hone do khud ko tum meri tum Raaton mein 3 [Labon ko Labon pe sajao

Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao]2

Geet tiptoed and kissed on his forehead and then on his nose before biting his nose a bit. Maan held her tighter as he slowly started giving kisses all over her face.

Tere zajbaaton mein mehki si saason mein

Yeh to mehek Sangali si hai

Dil ki panahon mein bekhri si aahon mein

Sone ki khwasish jagi si hai

Geet was squirming as Maan was kissng her everywhere but her lips. He moved her lips arund her lips and even swiped his toungue over her lips before lowering and kissing along her neck and collarbone.

Chehre se chehra chupao

Sene ki dhadkan sunao

Dekh lo khud ko tum Annkhon mein meri 4 [

Labon ko Labon pe sajao

Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao]2

Maan was near the neckline of her dress as he bent her down. He was like a man possessed. He bit her soft skin just above her cleavage earning a soft moan from geet,"Ah! Maan". Geet herself was lost in the passion of the moment as Maan was licking and soothing the pain of the bite. Geet felt like her legs were jellies and she would have fallen down if not for Maan. Maan slowly placed her near the penthouse wall so she could have some sort of support. His hands roamed round her back and then slowly almost unnoticibly he placed his hand on her bossom giving it a slight squeeze. Geet could not hold any longer. She placed her lips on Maan's kissing him carnally.

It had been minutes or was it hours before they come back to their senses. Maan watched Geet's disheveled state. Her hair was ruffled and her dress was unorganiged. He could see her swollen lips and blotchy skin.

Maan said softly," I am sor..."

He was cut off by Geet placing her hands on his lips. She nodded her head negatively and said softly," I loved what happened Maan. It was our love. Don't tarnish it please."

Maan softly kissed her forehead and said," Love you Geet. Get going before we both do something we won't be proud of. Goodnight my Mishty!"

Both left for their respective rooms. When Geet reached her room it was almost dawn. She quikly rushed inside the washroom to change and be ready for bed. Meer was sleeping tired from her travel and all the emotionally draining talks in the party.

However sleep had evaded Geet as she remembered the passionate eyes of Maan and his carnal touch. It was beautiful to be loved. Geet smiled and closed her eyes. After years she slept with a dream of a beautiful tomorrow instead of the sorrows of the past.

Next morning Geet woke up almost at the same time as Meer. They hugged and wished each other good morning. Truly over years Meer and Geet had been sisters more than friends. Meera noticed Geet's love bite and had a mischievious smile on her face.

Geet:" Why do I feel I will be in trouble watching you smile Meer."

Meer:" That's because you are. Tell me Geet, why were you late last night?"

Meera's question brought a beautiful blush on Geet's face as she fumbled for answers.

Meer:" Waise, I should not question watching that beautiful blush and love bite?"

Geet:" Love bite?"

Meer teasingly gestured towards herself and sure enough Geet found a purplish mark standing out prominently on her fair skin.

Sid had been standing on the doorway and had seen the entire gesture. He laughed out loud and said," Who would have thought our Geetu would tun out to be this?"

Geet picked up a pillow and threw directly at Sid's face who was startled at the sudden attack. Soon it was a full fledged war between three roaming around the penthouse throwing things at each other and laughing. That's how the trio reached the living room and finally settled down on the couch panting.

Geet:" I hate you both."

Sid:" Geetu...aww but we love you."

Meera placed a kiss on her cheeks as the trio hugged each other. Geet was engulfed from both sides by Meer and Sid and she smiled like no tomorrow.

Maan and Tej both were up and were helping themselves with toast and coffee when the trio had emerged screaming and throwing. Watching Geet smile with such abandon gave peace to both their hearts.

Tej:" This is the life she had deserved. She didn't deserve the pain and growing up before her age. She deserved this life of playfulness and laughing without reason."

Maan smiled knowing Tej's condition. After all he is also a brother to a sister. The year Annie had been hospitalized after the accident had been so tough for him. Similarly it was tough to watch her marry off to Arjun. Arjun was a great guy but the brother in him is forever worried.

Keeping his hand on Tej's shoulder he gave a light squeeze before promising," I assure you that I will try with everything in me to keep her smiling like this for every tomorrow that is to come."

Tej looked at him and said," I know buddy. You are the one for my baby sister."


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yappi first and its awesome update loved it😊
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not first but still second is not bad...hehe
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superb part...
both hv moved in their life thats y maan naughty side was showing infront of geet...now their is no inhibition or restriction...he can show his love without any fear...

always grt to see bonding between meera geet and sid...
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