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Posted: 10 years ago

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Really Missing
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actually mujhe site scenes likhne hai

isliye beech mein nhi likh paa rhi hu

sunday ko araam se likhungi

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Posted: 10 years ago



Part 13

after darshan , both left for saurabh van vihar ...

maan : geet tumne kya maanga waise

geet : aap har 10 minute ke baad ek hi swal kyun puch rhe ho

maan : kyun ki tumm bta nhi rhi

geet : nhi bta rhi hu

toh simple hai na

nhi batan chahti

.

Maine kya aapse pucha

Maan : isme puchna kya hai

Mein bta deta hu

Tum bs yuhi muskurati raho

Humare pariwaar mein sb kuch acha raha

Aur

Geet : aur kya

Maan : sameera ki memory wapas aa jaaye

Aur usse koi acha

Mujhse bhi jyada pyaar krne wala mile

.

Geet

.

Geet tumhe kya huya

Geet : I want to go back

Maan : kaha

Geet : cottage

Mujhe khi nhi jaana hai

Maan : achanak ab tumhe kya huya

Tum toh aur ghumna chahti thi na

Geet : mood nhi ab mera

Maan : geet dekh lo

Fir mt khehna mujhe

.

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Maan : geet tum thik toh ho na

Geet : hmm

Maan : toh tum ase kyun aa gyi wapas cottage

Geet : mood nhi tha mera

.

.

Maan : geet

Geet : ji

Maan : am thinking

Kyun na hum aaj ke bjaye parso chalte hai

Hum kal aur jagah dekh lenge

Geet : jaisi aapki marzi

Maan (think) ye toh abhi bhi khush nhi huyi

.

Khi meri koi baat buri toh nhi lag gyi

.

He thinks and realize he take sam name in conversation after this her mood gone off...

Ye ladki bhi na

.

Isse kaise yakin dilayu

Why she so insecure

***********

Maan go and sit beside geet, before she go, he take her hand into his.

Maan : geet

Ydi tumhe meri koi baat buri lagati hai

Toh mujhse kaho

Ase kaise mujhe pata lagenga

Tum naraaz kyun ho

.

Geet : am ok

Maan : no

You not ok

.

Geet

Meri zindagi mein jo tumhari jagah wo aur koi kbhi nhi le sakta hai

.

Aur sam toh kbhi nhi

Geet : ya

Sam

Kya maine uski jagah le li aapki zindagi mein

Maan : geet

Mein tumhe kaise smjhayu

.

Now she is only my good friend

.

Geet : aur kitne dost hai ase aapke

Aaj hi bta dijiye

She takes her hand back and held his collar...

.

Jinhe aap apni dua mein humesha rakhte ho

Jo aapko tb bhi yaad rhte hai

Jb apni biwi ke sath hote ho

.

Maan : geet

Geet : bolo maan

Aur kitne ase hai

.

Taki mujhe ek baar mein hi pata lag jaaye

.

Maan : geet

How I make you understand

He cupped her face and she take her hand back, try to turn her face...but he held her hands tightly and pinned her on bed, and with another he held her chin and make look her into his eyes...

.

Geet

Sam is my special friend

But you

.

Geet : what about me

.

.

.

Maan

Tell me

Maan : kya kahu

Geet : nhi khehna kuch

Ok

Leave me

Maan : ye hath chodne ke liye toh thode na thama tha

.

Humesha yuhi aapne pass rakhne ke liye pakda tha

.

Both lost into each other, he bend little, his lips touched her jaw, he start placing kisses, along the curve of her throat, all the way down her collarbone...she moaned, his grip loosed from her hand ...she hugged him by neck ...his hand go towards her back, making pattern , he passionately kissed on her neck , she take his name...he unhooked her blouse and pushed aside the sleeves from her shoulders , her skin shivering with anticipation , his free hand moving on her back, and his lips claiming her...she clutch his shirt tightly , she melting in his embrace...

Geet : maan I love you

He makes little space and sees in her eyes...

.

Geet : I love you a lot maan

He smiles on her confessions...whenever she says she loves him, he feel happiness...he kissed on her both cheek and take her in embrace ...

.

After some time maan said: geet tum ready ho jaayo

Tb tak mein dinner order krta hu

Geet : hmm

**************

Geet : maan hum kal kaha jaayenge

Maan : saurab van vihar

Bundla stream

Gopalpur zoo

.

Geet : saurab van vihar kyun

Wo toh hum aaj bhi gye the

Maan : wo isliye geet

Wo tumne enjoy nhi kiya

Tumhara mood jo off ho gya tha

Geet smiles...

****************

Maan shows old bridge of neugal khad to her...

Maan : aaj hum breakfast neugal caf mein hi krte hai

Us din tumhe wo snacks ache lage the na

Geet : you notice this

Maan : now a days I only noticing you

She blushed ...

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Saurabh Van Vihar sprawls over an area of 35 acres and there is a green park located here. The area is surrounded by the Dhauladhar mountains and offers a scenic view. The park has been established to enable the visitors to enjoy the nature and make them aware of the importance of nature and environment.

saurabh van vihar


Maan and geet come at the time of morning, nature & environment of this place giving peace of both ...

saurabh van vihar

Geet : maan yaha kitni shanti hai

Aur yaha kitna acha feel ho raha hai

Maan : geet khudrat ke pass aake asa hi lagta hai

City ki bag dhod mein itna poluution ho jaata hai

Waha se sb hum feel hi nhi kr paate

Geet : hmm

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Gopalpur Zoo (14 km from Palampur): This zoological park, officially known as Dhauladhar Nature Park, developed by H.P government, is a good place for animal lovers and children. The park has a wide range of animals such as lion, leopard, bear, porcupine. It is a perfect place for picnics, weekend getaways and for spending your time exploring the natural and scenic beauty of the Dhauladhar mountains.

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Bundla Stream scenic beauty of the lush surroundings and spectacular mountains when you take a walk along this beautiful stream!

bundla stream
Just 2 km from Palampur, it makes for a lovely walk to the stream through the surroundings of lush green forests and mountains. It has a wide chasm that is more than 100 meters wide, which swells up and rises madly in monsoons taking stones and boulders along with it and making a loud noise like that of continuous thunder. You will surely enjoy the beauty and serenity of this place, particularly with the mild sunshine creating perfect hues.


neugal khad

Geet : maan

I never seen this type place

.

Thanks mujhe yaha lane ke liye

.

Maan is river ka paani itna cool hai na

Asa lag raha hai saari thakaan hi utar gyi ho

And this trees, mountains

I loved it

.

Kash humara ghar yhi hota

.

Maan : tum kaho toh hum yhi rh jaate hai

Geet : asa ho sakta hai

Toh perfect hai

.

Maan : geet

Geet : maan

Apne hi kaha tha

Maan : wo bs ek line thi

Tum toh serious sound kr rhi ho

Geet : toh kaam ki line bola kro

Maan : acha

.

Mein abhi btata hu tumhe

She starts splashing water on him...

Maan : geet stop it

Tumhe mehnga padenga

Geet : oh really

Maan : yes

He also splash water on her...

Geet : maan abhi hume hotel bhi jaana hai

Ye aap kya kr rhe ho

Maan : kyun

Ab kya huya

Phle toh tumhe bhut mjhe aa rhe the

.

He held her wrist and encircled his hand around her waist, her wet face and trembling face inviting him...her lips were wet and shivering in his intense gaze...

Geet : maan

Mujhe ase kyun dekh rhe ho aap

Maan : I want to kiss you now

Geet : maan

No

.

Before she says more, he kisses on left corner of her lips, then take her lips into soul touching kiss...

**********

i post this part here , but this time too i want good response 😉 waiting your likes and comments

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update...geet and maan are coming close to each other...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update maan understood that geets mood off because he mentioned sams name n she is very insecure he tried to make her understood that sam is just his friend again geet confessed hope maan will confess soon amazing part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet is still insecure about Sam. Maan realising this tries to pacify her and make her understand that he only thinks of her as a friend.
Maan still hasn't confessed but is happy every time Geet confesses her love for him.
They spend a lovely day seeing the awesome sights and the ending is a cherry on top.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice update maan geet are getting comfortable with each other and maan also start liking her but geet is till insecure of sam as she don't trust her so will be waiting for next part so give it soon
Loved this ss😊👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks dear awesome ss loving it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing dear.at first geet got.annoyed when maan took Sam's name. Maan a realized later this thing and tried.to.clarify things. Geet was really very upset but when maan made her understand , she become fine
Maneet's intimate.part.was beautiful. Finally their.relation is growing with passing time. Waiting for.next.dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
So maaneet together enjoying nature awesome
Loved the way u describe palampur

Mee too wants to enjoy this natural gift of god

Geet confess her love ... Maan loved it

Hope they will move ahead soon in their relation

Hope sam na aa jaye bich mai
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi priya
nice update
geet jealous ofsam ..hogi na ..
maan bhudhu ..
wifey ke hote friend yaad kar raha haa..
happy ki geet ko maana liya usne
thank u for update
waiting for next

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