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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Summary Discussion - Chapter 1

Chapter starts with Nisha's chori...1st or 2nd in the series. She escapes narrowly.

Ramesh wakes up in a nightmare, nightmare about the kidnap.

Dadaji is looking at Nisha's picture sadly. It's the day she was kidnapped.

Kabir's intro somewhere...

Nisha's intro somewhere...or Kabir and Nisha meeting.

Shekhs' intro somewhere

Ramesh receives the case - Case of Nisha's.

Nisha's identity wouldn't be revealed till the time Ramesh and Kabir finds out about the chor being a girl.

Ramesh still works for CBI. Him being an ex official, Mohan being a police officer bringing the case, Dadaji receiving the case and him persuading Ramesh to take the case...All scrapped for shortening and simplifying the story.

Kabir would have completed his studies, given his exams to get into Police may be...He received a call that he has got the job...But he doesn't know he is getting into CBI and going to work under Ramesh...and about the case.

All the above are subjected to NO CHANGE from now on...😆😆

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Had to post before i forget what we discussed 😆

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Lekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

so sonce i took the 1 week break there have been no changes😆

we'll discuss later , right?

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Shwetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shwets1502
Scenes Distribution😆

Scene 7 - Dadaji talking about OLXing, may be shows a boy's photo and Ramesh fights but Nisha agrees...Puneet

Scene 8 RL confronting Nisha...maybe she responds like i have done my mann ki and failed i dont wanna make more mistakes andbring more badnaami etc...Anu

Scene 9 Nightmare and RL comforting her, scared themselves. Anu

Scene 10 Something with the family? Viren or Rupan taunting? Can be nisha becoming the old tomboy nisha with a haircut and all and rupan viren taunting.. Rema

Scene 11 Cousins worried about Nisha and finds something off..Lachu

Scene 12 RL talking to Dadaji-Dadi that Nisha is under stress and is depressed? RL strongly tells Nisha won't be marrying...and Dadaji tells he would go ahead. Shwetha

Scene 13 Cousins planning to cheer up Nisha.

Scene 14 Planning executed...but Nisha gets panic attack? Blind fold game..Rema

Scene 15 Cousins confront Dadaji-Dadi and they tell the truth to the family. Cousins furious.

Scene 16 RL with Nisha. Putting her to sleep and discussing about the past incident and understanding she is haunted by Pilani incident and deciding they are taking her to counseling.Lekha

Scene 17 Next day, Cousins talk with Nisha and ask why she never told them about this. Lekha

Scene 18 RL tell Dadaji and others that Nisha won't get into marriage till she overcomes her past and they are taking her to counseling. Lachu

Scene 19 Cousins try persuading Nisha for counseling...Dadi enters (with RL) and convinces Nisha...Dadaji also comes in and apologises. Shwetha

Scene 20 Counseling...RLN together. Anu

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