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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful story
loved the family reunion
it was too good

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Posted: 10 years ago
I can't believe it's over...😭

What a wonderful ending though... love the way you brought everything together.

Simmi is amazing and the past between the families so well described.

I really appreciate that she still had remnants of the scars on her and the proposal was wonderful too.

Terrific job overall with this one.

Hope to see another one from you in the near future.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was lovely..romantic nd heart touching story..loved it..u r very good writer.. plzz write an epilogue also..plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...such a beautiful ending...really loves this ff to the core...
it proves.. it is all about love..and inner beauty...
everything was just perfectly described...
i really enjoyed reading it...will miss this story alot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey I need an epilogue
the after marriags life of ishra
will love to see
thnks for this wonderful story
keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...
last two updates just amazing...

--- Raman the way kissing her tears, soothing her was just speechless, forgetting entire world...
each and single thing was just perfect,
i liked the explanation of Hug just wow yaar, beautiful...
raman kissing ishu
Shagun -ishu convo, ishu was just amazing, her confidence just wow,
raman saying "She has me" 👏👏👏
ishu speaking to her family and friends abt incident - 'I am so sorry for this, my boyfriend can mean to be a little over protective sometimes.'' esp- raman smirk just amazing...
Raman- iyer talk just sensible...

ishita getting jealous lovely, their convo superb...

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raman family's convo with ishu wow just superb...
flashback amazing
ishu - raman convo lastly just fab...

just loved it...
thanks yaar for the lovely story...


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Posted: 10 years ago
this is such a brilliant piece of work!!!!!!
i must say i am impressed to the core...
story line u chose for ishra in this is so heart touching 😊

just loved it 👏👏👏👏👏

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