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Thank you for all love till now 😳



PART 16- THE UNUSUAL DATE



As soon as we climbed in the car..i felt butterflies in my stomach. It was first date ever. I never dated any Guy.. I did have crushes before maan but those weren't like this one. I blushed at my own thought and lower my face...

I straightened myself...when I heard his chuckle..

" someone's blushing a lot..." He smirked..while driving..

I bit my lip...and cleared my throat ... " umm...whom r u talking about " I replied..faking a silly smile..

Maan smiled..." No one.." he promptly said..and continued driving..

I shrugged my shoulders and..looked away sighing in relief..

" btw...geet.. I love red tomatoes..." his next words... made me squeezed my eyes tight...and go more red..

" i.. I..m not a tomatooo...okay..." I uttered... grumpily..Still not looking at him..

"whatever..But I loveee tomatoes...red ones..."
Once again his husky voice drove me to the edge..

" oh god...whats in store for me..next.." I murmured... I knew his teasings wont stop...and they will keep..making me feel mushy... I lowered down in my seat and he chortled..at me..

We reached our destination...and it wasn't less that a jungle haunted place..

I gulped my saliva..climbing down from the car. It reminded me of..old..hindi horror stories...

" lets go " Maan said strolling ahead...

My eyes turned big...watching my surroundings.. and I ran behind him..

" grrr...what type of date is this " I cribbed..following maan..

I was walking slow due to my heels... and Maan was running ahead... he didn't even look back at me... I made a face... and cursed him under my breath .." woohooo" I screamed...as I was about to fall...

On impulse I closed my eyes tightly... But surprisingly the fall never came.. I landed on something soft yet hard... it was comforting n warm ..

I slowly opened my eyes...feeling glad... Only to find myself in his arms..

My lips curved into a small smile..and my heart thumped..loudly.. whispering " Knight in shinning Armour..." I traced my arms..around him

My smile widened...recalling the day when I had fell in his arms..

" are u okay..what r u staring at??' maan said gazing..me..

"ah... nothing..." I uttered roiling my hands n biting my lip..

I straightened myself...and tucked my hair...feeling flushed..

The next moment I was raised up in the air... By him

" maaan..." I gasped...startled

He slanted his face..looked me in the eye and replied.. " I cant let u keep falling everytime..geet.."

Those words touched my heart... No one had ever said them to me.. For me it meant a lot...

As he walked along the path..with me in his arms.. I felt solace... I felt happy... the feeling cant be described... I felt blessed..

Maan placed me..down ... and seated himself... I smiled...and looked around..

My expressions changed ...and I made a o shape face..

" whats dis..." I shrieked in horror

" what??" Maan replied..casually seating next to me..

"Is this a place for date.. this is scarrryyy" I mumbled...in low voice..

Gosh I was in the middle of scary dark forest...

"so.. its fun right..." Maan winked at me.. and stood to his feet...

" are u carzy..u think this is fun..no ways..."

He didn't reply me..and moved inside the tent..

" are..are u listening..." my voice trembled...I was...hell sacred..

He probed out of the tent and..made a blank face...

" geet don't bug me.. Already.. u have..irritated me soo..much..now..just shut up and have this..." He passed me...pizza..

"pizzaa!!' My face beamed...finding something normal... I neglected his words..and looked at my pizzaa dreamily..

He chucked... ya.. I thought of camping..But ur heels..ur dress...wont go with it.. and camping food wont suit u so...pizza.." He said arrogantly...and sipped his coke..joining me...

" hawww..." my jaw dropped...listening to him..

I was literally burning.. But no words..came out of my lips.. I nipped the pizza.. and ate..It angrily..

I felt soo stupid... to have wore this..suit .. This wasn't my style... But I thought of the indian dress..he had given me.. and that's y I made up my mind to wear..this suit..

Gulping 4 slices of pizza..took me..nearly and hour.. And maan.. he dint speak at all... he was lost somehwhere..

And I was mum.. in all there was total silence..

My patience was fading...And finally I bursted..

" maan..what the hell are we doing.. this isn't like other dates.. infact this isn't a date..." I screamed...at him..

He seemed astonished...and his eyes tapered on me..

" yes..." I pointed my finger at me.. " u called me for a date.. I came in a jungle...for u..ate a whole pizza...in this place... and..u..u dintt even do anything...people dont behave like this on a date"

I sighed..angrily...and looked away..

"what do u want me to do..geet" I heard him say..

I pressed my lips tightly...and turned..my face.. " oh.." I gasped..finding him...soo close to me..

I blinked my eyes... And he repeated " what do u want me to do...geet..ummm..." his husky voice... fluttered my heart... My lips sealed, eyes were...gazing him...and shying away..

" bolo...geeet..." His hand...grabbed my waist..drawing me close..

His hand..moved...up to tuck my tresses... His fingers touched my skin..making me jolt..

" bolo na" his face..was mere a inch distance from mine... hands...ruffling my hairs...

We grew extremely...close...

" I knw..what a date means..geet.. I just wanted..u to..." his voice...trailed..off...as his nose..traced...my cheek...

My lips parted...i knew..what he meant.. he wanted me to take the first step... ..

" don't u..feel scared...of me...umm" his lips brushed...my cheek...while his finger...ran along my hand..

I was a little nervous .. But the feeling..which I felt for him had overpowered it.. It wasn't attraction..

Our noses touched...and breaths mingled...

I was prepared for a kiss... But he again surprised..me.. by pressing his lips on my forehead.." bolo geet aint u scared.."..

I smiled feeling his kiss.. That kiss told..me all his feelings which he never did..

" no..maan.. I trust u.." I stated..with confidence..

I said it with all my heart...

As soon as I spoke...those words.. I felt him going stiff... His body...grew cold... and he..parted from me..

" what??" his face...was red..in anger...and shock..

I was confused..what happened to him all of a sudden..it made me...awkward..

" did.. i..say anything wrong.." I said... looking at his frantic expressions..

He clasped..my shoulder..tightly..

" u cantt geet u cant trust me..u r not serious...right..." his voice was. Remorseful...and eyes were spitting fire..

" ah...' I groaned.in pain... his hold was hurting me.. It was painful..

" maan..u r hurting me..." I moaned...hissing...

" u cantt trust me..geet u canttt.,.tell me u r not serious...teeell meee." his hold was..tightening more..

"maaan.. u r hurting me..." I cried... trying to pry off his hands...

He glanced at me..sorrowfully ...and closed his eyes in pain...before... leaving me..

" ahhh...sss" I rubbed my arms..which were aching...

I was..throbbing in pain..when I heard..His car's honk..

A shock wave ran through my veins...

Did maan leave??

" maaannn" I screamed...for him..but he wasnt around me.. I stood up...and called for him...again

"maaannn" Finally it dawned upon me.. Maan left me alone..

I fell on my knees...tears pooling my eyes..

maan left..me..." I gasped...loudly...tears rolled down my cheek..


fingers crossed for this update😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeah me first
nice update
a date in jungle what an idea
Romantic ki bjai scary :p new one
hehe me too love pizza
geet akela mat khao
yeh kya maan ko kya hua waiting for next update
continue soon
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wow!! right entry ..
very nice update
really an unusual date 😊
scary ...😳
babaji maan left her in jungle ..😲
this was really a very wrong step ...
waiting ...😕 ab kya hoga ?

Love it


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Whattt
Yeee kya tha yaar
U r on a roll to totally shock me
Ishqiya was a sweet one n dis is kinda horror one
I knew dis maan had sone locha dats y v love him lollz
But dis was totally surprising
Unexpected yaar
TRUST a big story behind dis i guess
Total teda maan wondering kya back story hai maan ki
Oopsss geet k saari mehnat waste lolz dress heel
N mila kya horror camping place
Ahhh pizza on a date weird location weird
Thoda Romance toh socha tha he is good perfect arre situation ka advantage bhi nahi liya phir kya ho sakta hai
Nw im damn curious
Leaving her all alone understood he doesnt want her to trust him
But i feel he wont leave without any support all alone
Lets c ki hota
He was so casual drinking coke hahaha
Dis is going very intrestinggg
Super shocking rocking update
Waitinggg for more
Edited by shruthiruchs - 10 years ago

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