Abhiya OS: The SMS lady

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Aliza

@Fierce.Dreamer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: bellaaa

yeah i knw ... busy in life
dont worry now i will come daily on forum😃

Yeh hui na baat 😃

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

haha 😆😆😆😆😆

Edited by bellaaa - 11 years ago

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Very Sweet Innocent and simple love story loved it please write more loved it

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Like dis SMS wife aka Pia n finaly abhay came back on track means good hubby
keep writing more

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Aliza

@Fierce.Dreamer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya
Like dis SMS wife aka Pia n finaly abhay came back on track means good hubby
keep writing more

Thank u 😃

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Anon

@raintrifle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Finally I am giving my review on this 😛

I think It should have been more detailed and longer . And I would have loved to read the extended version of the ending . The idea of abhay getting happy bcoz of receiving some attention from a random woman ( as he thought ) is peeving and irksome on so many levels to me . This indeed is a strange sort of plot .

Edited by withered - 10 years ago