MaNan- Awakened Love Destiny

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hey guys i m starting new ff. Will upload intro soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Updating directly the first chapter
Edited by 7_Sasha - 10 years ago
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Guys I don't think that this new ff of mine will need an introduction coz as the story proceeds you will understand it easily. Hope u like it n do give ur feedback coz it's important!
N those who want me to pm plZ add me as a buddy!
So here it goes...


Chapter 01:

In the city of New York there is a natural place which I think is very beautiful. It Is a place that gives the impression Of Natural beauty, serenity and divinity as it a vast green area besides the hills and a beautiful river has passed besides it. The flowers and fields are like scenery painted by a professional painter. The butterfly, the birds, the bushes, the long trees and tea garden makes it a more beautiful place. And between these there was a Fair-sized house built of red Lyons Sandstone with the most god-awful-looking picket fence and The weather-beaten slat cottage sat at the far end of a mostly brown lawn. Wood silvered by the sun. Roof shingles warped. Small stands of plantain and giant bird-of-paradise for privacy.
And in this beautiful place there lived a couple named as "MaNan"
Of course u all have got it...
It's Manik n Nandini

Manik Malhotr, the richest n most popular businessman of New York, stays in this beautiful cottage with her adorable wife Nandini Manik Malhotra. The place where they live is famous in whole New York by the name of "MaNan palace". And of course it has to b famous coz it's the most beautiful part of the city.
Manik usually comes to stay at this place coz nandu loves such environment. But their actual house is on one of the busy streets of New York by the name of "Malhotras Mansion ".

At "MaNan Palace":

A handsome hunk is sitting in the study of the house with a pen and a diary by keeping his leg on the other one n resting his back on the back of the couch n writing something...

"A new day and a new beginning. Another beautiful day with my cute n simple wife. All these years when she was with me was the most amazing part of my life. And today I m happily settled with her here in New York.
I know that again she will come to me n scold me for coming home late last night and for not having dinner... But all these scoldings of her helps me to realise that she loves me even more today. But yeah I love her more!
Today we have completed five years of our marriage but it was all not that easy. Ups n downs...highs n lows... But still a great journey. "

Suddenly a girl came shouting...
N: Manik...kaha ho tum..u know today I m not gonna talk. U r so mean. U know that it's our marriage anniversary but still u came late last night. Like how could you!!!!

Talking talking Nandini came in the study where she saw Manik hiding his face using a pillow.
N: so yaha ho tum...aaj ky explanation h tumhre paas??
Manik slowly slowly moved the pillow n kept it on the couch n held his years n went on his knees n said

M: sorry! Yesterday I was very busy in attending the meetings n I didn't realise that it was late. Plz sorry.
N: no Manik. No more excuses today. Aur ye tum ky krte rehte diary me!! Ky likhte rehte ho...

Manik stood up n picked his diary n said
M: Nahhh! Kuch nhi nothing special! Bas business deals n ol. Leave it yaar! But I m sorry Nandini.

Nandini smirked at Manik n said
N: when u make such faces na I can't stop myself from loving u more n ol my anger just vanish away.

Manik came to Nandini n hugged her n said
M: I love you so much!
N: I love u more.
They broke the hug n Nandini asked
N: but seriously Manik ye diary kuch zaada hi special h ky. Like tum hamesha ise apne saath rakhte n kisi ko b nhi batate.
M: aisa kuch nhi h Nandini. Confidential information hoti h isme dats y.
N: acha vo sab chodo. Ye batao breakfast ky khaoge?
M: anything u like my star.
Nandini blushed n said ok.
M: Nandini can u give me five minutes. I have some work. I ll complete it n come back immediately.
N: yeah but only five minutes Manik.
M: yeah pakka.
Manik kissd Nandini's cheek n went outside the house with the diary n a pen n took his car n went to a silent place.

After reaching the place he removed his diary n wrote..
" now don't need this diary to express my feelings n for keeping myself busy"
Manik wrote this n left the dairy on the bench n went back to his car n immediately got back to MaNan palace.

But when all this were happening there was a guy who was watching all this. As soon as Manik left he went to pickup the diary n sat on the bench n opened it. The guy's name was Abhimanyu.
As soon as he opened the diary he saw that many pages were written but the first thing he saw was some lines which expressed sadness of a person. So in eager he took the diary n went to his place.

After reaching his place he settled himself on his king size bed n started reading...
The date that was mentioned was July 2010!

"How do I mend a broken heart?
My entire world has fallen apart.
How do I find hope in a brand new day,
when the one I love has gone away?My mind overflows with memories of you,
of all that we've shared, all that we knew.
I long for your touch and your warm embrace,
the look in your eyes, the smile on your face.My dreams are filled with your soft gentle kiss,
I wake and cry for all that I miss.
How do I mend a broken heart,
when my one true love and I are apart?
My heart knows to love only you, it won'tlet go, what do I do?
Our moments together were precious and few,
but I cherished them all more than you knew.
I love you, my angel and I will always do!"

And after reading this Abhi was impressed n he said
A: my god! Amazing lines. Have to read this whole diary.

Then he turned the page n saw another sad lines.
". After 2 years n 2 months I can still dream of my ex. I'll see her eyes, her cute nose, her smile, and her beautiful blonde hair when I close my eyes. I wonder everyday if she's thinking of me or if she missing me. Some days I tell myself that we well be together again and that one day this pain will be gone."

Abhi again in shocked
A: oh my god. So true love! I don't believe that still true love exist. Alag q hua ye banda uss ladki se. Now the story is killing me!
He continued his reading...

(Note: all those things which are written in double quotation marks are read by abhi from the diary)

"I m alone today. It has been 2 years n 2 months of my breakup with a girl named Nandini murthy.
I still love her but gradually due to some circumstances we are not together. So after this break up I m going through a psychological problem so my doctor suggested me to make myself busy. So today I have decided to write about my life n my lady love Ms. Nandini Murthy and I will express my feelings coz my doctor think that I m going through my psychological problem coz I don't express my feelings. So now here it goes! I will express every feeling here.
Before starting lets go 2 years back n see how i met that stupid yet beautiful girl...Haha that was really very funny..." Index: chp 1 -1 chp 2 -3 chp 3a-3 chp 3b-4 chp4-5 chp5 -6
Edited by 7_Sasha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...!!!abi reading manik's diary...awesome...
eagerly waiting ...to read more...beautifully penned.
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon dear
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u sooo much just lvoe it
plzzz upload soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ty for d pm...
D story sounds vry interesting...
loved d first update...
luking forward for more updates...
loving d concept...
continue soon...
'll b waiting eagerly for d nxt part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start sweety update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow interesting
I actually love to read a story that has Mr and Mrs manik and here I got one i hope it'll be worth reading full of romanceee and abhi isn't doing any negative role in your story plzzz
Do pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written..
concept very nice..
excited to know as to what happened that they got seperated..
and now how again they came close to each other..
awesome start...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous one
I don't have words to describe it
update soon
nd PM me

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