JAB WE MET IN TRAIN( asya ) OS

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Hola folks this is an os on yeh hain ashiqui series episode I just twisted the story and wrote an asya version of it and this is dedicated to sue dii shailu sim di and gita di😆 and tehs dii 😊bass aise hi dedication karne ka maan kiya so kiya

Jab We Met in train... banner credit Psychobaiko aka Nidzz dii😳
Time 2:46 pm

Zoya's uncle gaffur slaps her at the train station as she is refusing to marry. The marriage is in two days and the boy's family is waiting.

zoya's aunty razia asks her to agree as the boy is very good, and he belongs to rich family.. you know na dear how much we owe ourselves to Akram..

Zoya thinking : oh no shuru hogayi emotional athyachar

Razia: last time when your uncle met with an accident...Akram came to the rescue and he saved him and admitted your uncle and also donated his blood to your uncle...

Marrying him will give us the power The status, The std in the society and also baccha your uncle has spent a lot on your BBM studies

Zoya is from bhopal but she studies out of the city. She has always accepted her uncle's choice and felt suffocated. All of them board the train. zoya gets Akram's call. "akram" her uncles choice " Her aunt says great, talk to him, you will feel good. akram talks to zoya in video call and asks her not to be shy just speak your heart darling

Jo blona hain kulke bolo joya

Zoya : its" z" zoya..

Akram : haan joya

Zoya : thinking iss kamine ko tho mera naam tak teek se pronounce karna naahi aata aur bada aaya mujse nigaah karne ...dumbo

zoya : well I'll talk to you later

Akram : But joya ...

zoya : cuts the call.thinking Akram main tumse tang aagayi hoon..dont want to marry you

zoya stands at the door lifeless just like shahid kapoor in jab we met...The train gets slow. Asad throws his bag and gets inside the train, looking gorgeous and hair flying cute smile with dimple

which would drive any girl mad. But it seems lik the bag that he threw went on to hit zoya s stomach aaahhh zoya whined in pain

He says I m sorry, where you going down, come I will help you, go down.

Zoya angrily says no, why will I get down, and the train is increasing its speed again. I was just standing near the door

Asad : well I am really sorry I was in a hurry to catch this train aur hadbadi main galti hogayi...smiles

Well I am asad a passionate singer and you ??he forwards his hand for a handshake..

Zoya : well I don't really love speaking to strangers

Asad : But asad simply continues did you travel before

She says yes, last time when I travelled, the train met with an accident. What a tragedy it was..

Asad smiles and understands that she must be annoyed with something and her mood must be off

He goes to his seat saying nice meeting you. His seat is to the left of zoya's family seat and behind few seats are ocuupied by zoya's relatives... zoya wanted to jump off the train as she did not wish to marry Akram. As she has seen a new world and studies to fulfill her dreams..her dream was to study further and to do her MBA and work for a MNC seems blurr cause her uncle never liked the idea of her doing MBA and working in MNC he thought girls should not study further...He was very conservative in his thinking

zoya's aunt razia says she can't go to her upper seat as her knees have pain. zoya asks her to lie on her seat. gaffur asks her to sit quiet if she can't go up, and not to disturb relatives. Asad hears this and offers help. zoya's uncle says he won't accept help from strangers. Asad introduces himself and says now we are not strangers. he asks zoya's aunt to take his side lower seat. he argues with zoya's uncle. zoya's aunt says I m sitting here by my wish. Asad talks non stop and asks her not to follow her husband always, self respect is something. he asks her to sit and not ask uncle. gaffur gets annoyed and what he is saying is wrong, following husband is wives duty and its in our traditions and values.

zoya simply looks on. he calls her Fattuuu and She looks at him with open mouth . Asad comes to know about zoya's marriage through her relatives conversation which he overhears. The relatives asks zoya's aunt to have some music. Asad helps them by using his speakers and asks them to dance. Everyone dance in the compartment. asad looks at zoya who is simply standing folding her hands showing disinterest rest of them dance and sing as they do that

her relatives comes to zoya , Motioning her for dance but she turns her back to them and They pull her to face them but accidently her shoulder back gets torn. asad sees it and makes her realize. She looks at him and says thanks. Time passes. zoya changes her dress and comes to keep her bag. Asad roaming from one compartment to another sees zoya keeping her bag and asad intentionally drops his book that he was reading.zoya takes the book from the floor and gives it to asad

zoya :lagtha hain books ki kadar nahi aapko

asad :Taking the book from her hand gives a chit in her hands and smiles. Zoya's uncle gets angry seeing his carefree nature and attitude. Asad goes and zoya sees the chit. She reads it .. if She has to live the life, do what She wants, not that what her uncle wants, he is waiting for her outside door. zoya goes to meet him near the door. She greets him. They have a talk. he says your face is like pressure cooker. She says what to do, my uncle don't understand, I even breath by my uncle's permission. he asks him to go and tell them what She wants. He says he is going on 2 month holiday to spend with his frnds and calls her a Fattuuu. She says I m not Fattuuu, I respect my uncle, your parents are different to give you money and freedom.

he says my parents don't have time for me, as they are busy by themselve and business..truth hurts but I never got their love cause they were career oriented they have time for meetings and to travel the world only problem is they don't have time for me but I want to live the life for the fullest and enjoy each and everything even this train ride... he says don't be after me, as I said I m rich... she smiles ..but hey wht abt your parents ??

zoya : she says they died in the train accident near pune ... I was just a 13 yr old gal

Aftr that incident zeenat my cousin sister took care of me but her husband ...she stops there and pauses ahh and thinks how can I share so much with this stranger... she stamers ahh I need to take rest I am feeling sick ..and turns back

asad : ok but don't hestitate in sharing your pain ..coz pain needs to be subsided feel free to share your feelings anytime cause I am your friend

zoya : friend ! when did we become frnds ?? you still remain a stranger

asad ; The moment you shared the piece of information about your parents..he winks and he goes.

Zoya smiles. zoya started feeling her family is like strangers, she also felt she should live her life, she was an ideal daughter, and topper in studies, but all she gets is babaji ka tullu ?? she doesn't even get a chance to choose her own soul mate..she wanted to choose her own groom for herself, asad was right he has become my trust worthy friend ..zoya also felt asad is the guy she can share her feelings with. Well she never had a genuine friend all this time.all her life. zoya goes to the upper seat and her phone falls. asad catches her phone and smirks and from her phone dials his number ..his phone buzzes and he gets her number by just fraction of seconds... zoya asks him to give her phone. He says yes and gives her. Zoya's uncle sees them and asks zoya where is her focus. He asks zoya to stay away from that guy. He says my business is not doing well and I need Rs 10 lakhs and Akram is ready to give 10 laks for my business.

Zoya ignores her uncle and yawns I need sleep.. zoya gets in her upper seat and smiles seeing Asad. He messages her. He writes...Fatuuu I m sorry, I did not know about your parents..

She asks how did you get my cell number. He says he stole it when her phone fell. They chat and he asks her to become daring. Her uncle coughs and sees her upper seat and she instantly acts like sleeping.

he says Fattuuu.

She messages him asking him to become like her boyfriend who took her to her room one day. he messages and asks did She go alone. She smiles and says chippo, don't get ideas, I went to his home in my imagination. asad smiles and says yes, I did many things like this, and they kept on chating through messages and came to know lot about each other So do u like this akram. She says no..we didn't speak much .. Actually he is going to come to receive me in the railway station..well he is a guy who cant even pronounce my name properly ...

Asad : does he love you ..did he ever told you that..

Zoe : yep he said that so many times but I didnt feel his love..

Asad : guess you don't feel for him...

Zoe : yep I don't love him..and I don't feel for him ..

She asks him to meet him at 12am when everyone sleeps.

Time 12 am in the train

she gets down and signs him to come. asad goes to meet her again near the door. asad turns and she pulls his hand and gets him in the bathroom. He gets tensed as she closes the door. She moves her hair and shows her mole on her neck. She removes her jacket and shows the accident burns on her shoulder. He is shocked and closes his eyes. She says this is my truth, so I did not go in any guy's room, I m also a Fattuuu, this scar will be with me all my life, this scar if not on my body, but on my soul. She says after my parents died, zeenat my cousin sister took care of me but her husband my brother in law didn't lik me much as the days pass year after year I scolded myself like my dad and pampered myself like my mum, The world thought I m handicapped and useless. The day I got the compensation, My brother in law (BIL) changed and wanted the money, so I left his house and running from him, and he is after me to get money for his election campaign...but I came to Bhopal with the money after that gaffur uncle my dad's brother and razia are taking care of me. Tears start rolling from her eyes. Asad after hearing all this hugs her softly ..bgm music ... Hai sarphiri.. ye Ashiqui...
Madmast bhi...Ye Ashiqui..
Kambhakht bhi.. ye Ashiqui

He asks the scar you have hidden form the world, how did you show to me, who is a stranger to you. She says don't know and cries saying some questions does not have answers. He says he got the answer and says she actually looks hot with this scar. She says chippo... He says what to tell you, you are mature and sensible, and you are going to meet your groom akram, with whom you video chat sometimes, you don't feel for him. You don't love him...then why are u ready to marry him.. she asks what should I do. He asks her to be courageous and tell everyone tht u don't want this marriage ...she cries I cannot ..He asks her not to cry and wipes her tears holding her face. He gets attracted to her but stops himself from going close, but she goes close to his lips and closes her eyes...a strange attraction, a connection...Her heart beats increase and she pecks his lips softly but asad stops her by saying you are going to get married, save something for your hubby. She gets awkward and embarresed and goes out of the bathroom

And rushes to the upper seat to sleep...and closes her eyes tightly pretends to sleep with eyes closed but her mind is restless...

Asad too goes to sleep in his seat but sleep seems to be far away..he gets the visions of their close moments in the bathroom..

Its morning and they reach Mumbai railway station

All come out one by one with their luggage and bags

Zoya too comes out lifeless with her trolley

And is shocked to see her brother in law (BIL) with his goons in Mumbai central railway station...she asks how come you in Mumbai..he says heard from relatives that you are getting married to a Mumbaikar..So I thought why not screw up everything for you.. She asks why he is after her. He holds her and says I don't like running after you like this, you are golden bird, and I will free you. She asks him to think about her aapi. He says he needs money to win elections, and asks her to give money. Asad comes out and asks what's going on. He gets threatened by her brother in law (BIL). He holds zoya and zoya asks him to leave her..zoya's gaurdians see zoya getting troubled. zoya's uncle rush to her and says stop it now leave her alone anwar..she is like my daughter now..Zoya's BIL says keep quiet or else shows his gun from his pocket..

I can do anything..i can even cause harm..So just make my way clear..And let me take her peacefully

asad sees zoya being dragged by her Brother-In-Law. He keeps quiet in a delimma zoya asks them to leave her. She sees akram who has come to receive her in that station He runs to rescue her. But the goons beat up akram..and he falls down hopelessly.. zoya screams somebody please help...plz she cries, she pleads she begs loudly in the station so many people around her but nobody bothers to resue her as they are scared for their own lives..cause they have family and kids.. asad could not see it anymore

something strikes him mitwaaa ..he could not see her stuggle anymore so he himself gets down the train enough is enough .dont dare hurt her ..a single scratch on her and I swear I'll wont spare you..ohooo ohoo mitwaaa

all of them surround shocked

Anwar : arrey wah zoya tumne bathaya nahi ki tumara ek ashiq bhi hain hahaha

zoya gets scared

asad : Ab tumari kair nahi he punches anwar hard on his face..anwar falls down thud..

and beats the goons black and blue he even spots the stick and beats them with that too. Zoya's BIL gets up with the big glass bottle comes from behind tries to hit asad from back ..zoya shouts asad look behind aak holds the glass bottle from front and snatches it and spuns it on anwar...anwar falls on the ground again unconscious Asad beats all the goons a lot fuming in anger action takes place between them

and he defeats them all..

zoya thinking wow six packs ne tho sab ko do dala...and remains stunned...akram gets up from the ground wiping his blood from his forehead and is relieved that zoya is alright.. asad comes to zoya and holds her hand...mitwaa.. He takes her to Akram and joins their hands. He says I hope you guys take care of each other and remain happy . He goes back to the train. zoya looks at him he walking away from her back to the train zoya's uncle sees asad's wound on his face and is angry.. asad keeps looking outside the window and thinks how he has beaten the bad guys, for her ..he thinks about zoya...he thinks about their little close moment in the bathroom.. zoya keeps on seeing asad leaving her and the train moving she thinks she is not a Fattu and is daring. she thinks of her uncle's words and thinks to dare and tell She can't marry. She thinks about Asad. The train moves crossing the station ..but asad gets down in the end moment and zoya turns back lifeless I guess I am a fatuu and I really cant voice my opinion..I guess I have lost him forever and will never get to see him... and zoya's uncle asks her not to do anything wrong. Akram's family welcomes them. Asad is already at the station, and calls out her name loud zoya and zoya turns back to see asad rushing towards her zoya smiles seeing him and he comes running and hugs her infront of everyone.. and she too embraces him tightly

kiski majaal... koi rokle...
kiski majaal.. koi tok le...
ishq k junoon ruke nahi...

Hai baanwri... Ye ashiqui...
Gustaakh si...ye ashiqui...
bekhauff si... Ye ashiqui...

Everyone is shocked... he says I m sorry, I think what I m going to say, you all will feel its wrong.

he says if a boyfriend gets the bride and makes her run away, it will be wrong. he tells akram's family that zoya can't keep akram happy as she loves me. Akram's family leaves. But akram asks zoya to come to corner for a while I need to speak to u alone asad gets tensed and hopes ki yeh fatuuu gadbad na kare.i hope she speaks out her heart for once and doesn't remain darpok anymore plz god plz ...aftr 5 minutes of talk akram says ok I am not marrying her and leaves from there... Zoya's uncle gets angry and is about to slap asad for ruining the relationship, but zoya holds his hand asking him to stop it, as they all are sad for her happiness. She reasons him why everyone did like he wanted, and you did not care for anyone, what does he want, shall we all die for you. zoya's aunt asks her to be quiet. zoya says I decided I will work in MNC and will marry the one I love, I won't let my uncle sell me for his business. asad says he will give him money for his business, he has money, he will sign cheque and give him, but he should not compromise with his zoya's life. gaffur leaves. Razia says this had to happen some day and your uncle will agree don't worry u guys will get married by elders permission itself meri ashirwad tum logo ke saath hain hi baccho... The elders leave them alone. Yeh Hai Aashiqui Besharmiyaan barbadiyaan...

Asad : asks about Akram... what made him say no.. guess finally miss fatuu opened her feelings infront of akram..and confessed that u loved me..

Zoya : says no, but he definitely got scared by my scar cause I showed it to him

Asad : kya ! hahaha

They laugh and hug. She thanks him for giving her courage and asks will he keep her happy. he says excuse me, you are doing what you wanted to do. she says you mean I m happy because of you. he says indirectly by winking yes

she thinks yes I am doing whatever my heart says and I am happy for once that I have raised my inner voice and spoke out my feelings

she asks am I a fattuuu now..

asad ; no you are jansi ki rani now...

she smiles and both walk holding hand in hand in the railway station,,,

Love does not happen at fixed time or place, it can happen anytime..

The end😆🤣.
ps :thanks for taking your precious time and reading

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pehela post mera hi hai n thanks nikku for this cute OS🤗 wow asad is so cool😎 n call her fattu😆 aww love bathroom wala scene😳 n glad that zoya spoke for her aur bhi aise likhti reh😉
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pehle to congratulations for another story nikita🤗

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update to bilkul mast tha badmaash
wah kya maza aa gaya😆
all the while reading i was literally like🤣
omg!!!
can't stop laughing...
zoya wo bhi fattu🤣
hahaa...maze dila diye tune...
i really loved asad...😳😃😆
and gaffur to aur bhi melodramatic tha yaar😆🤣
pta he meri bohat tabiyat kharaab he...i mean thi...ab to tera os padh kar mai has bhi ri hu😆
u made my day yaar
thanku
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aur tujhe bohat bohat eid mubarak🤗
and thanku so much for the dedication yaar
cho chweet of u😃😛

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Aur ab wait ni hora
jaldi update kar meri ganaa.com
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Waiting eagerly 4 something gud to read
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.Kitna likhegi? Nahi par tu likh.likh meri badmaash nd make it quick
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Dekh page 2 already aagaya...ab aur na tadpa mujhe
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a new os on the way shailu

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