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Here I'm.
Arz kiya hai
Teri Update pe khana chor k main unress karne ayi
Tu mera shoq daikh mera pyar daikh😆

Gosh what has gotten into me😆 Zyada sona and bht sa khana makes aimmy insane😆
I remember when you told me about this OS. On hearing depression I was thinking about a typical story where one has lost interest in life and other comes with all the colors and happiness to cheer the first one. But having faith in you I knew there would be something different. And yes I was totally right! Main kabhi Galat nahi hoti you see😆

Coming back to the OS. Title draws you towards it. Being a reader I totally enjoyed it and Being your shister I'm so so so proud of you👏. I want to hug you for writing something on this topic. Depression is faced by all of us but we never notice it. I myself was in depression over an issue. The issue you very well know. And believe me it is worse. Depression itself is not as bad as people around us make it. Problems become horrible when people around us start noticing it. I think it is only people who make a thing a problem. If it is up to us nothing can be a problem.

Depression is the topic which is very rarely taken by our writers. And the reason is the trend that has been set in. But I'm happy I have a versatile writer who can cover any situation and any topic. So kudos to you Bsanti <3

Banner is beautiful. ❤️ When it started I knew it was our hero who was a victim of depression in this OS. And believe me I didn't like Khushi at all during their first encounter in the OS. Reasons are obvious
*She was talking too rudely with our Hero
**She was in a relationship with that Snekwa.
Both are enough for me to dislike Khushi 😆. The way she taunted him. But woa! the reply she got from him! HAHAHAAH. Tit for Tat😉
Ladki ne chhoda hoga toh duniya chhodne chala tha!
that was rude! that was way too rude! Why the hell she needed to say this?
The paragraphs describing Khushi's routine were awesome. I wasn't shocked at all to know Mr Jha cheated her. Ye Uss ki purani bimari hai you see😡 Aww I felt bad for her! She was so heart broken! A girl who is as simple as she is can never bear such a betrayal from the person she has fallen in love with. Her reaction was so appropriate. The girl who has woven all her dreams to be with a guy can never bear such a heart break. This reminds me the dialogue of our very own Sanka devi.
"Sapno Ki Dunya Mein Rehna Hi Acha Hai. Asli Dunya Mein To Sirf Dil Toot'te hai"
Seriously This world is not for innocent and sincere people like her.
Lav and Nk were darlings! I loved them!
one incident changed everything in Khushi's life. She was about to give up! I can very well relate to this! Such a huge blow can push you in the darkness of depression and when you are in depression the solution to every problems seems only one thing! Suicide! This is why doctors advise us to keep ourselves away from it.
He caught her at time. His story was more painful. Sexual harassment! The most horrible thing on Earth! Love you for raising this issue!
Finally they both found solace in each other. The ending Paragraph was the highlight of the whole Os! Such a beautiful ending! Two shattered souls healed each other! What can be more perfect!👏
Hats off for writing this re!
You rocked again👏
Love you and again hats off👏




P.S for the dedication I love You Damn it😳
Edited by ..Aimmy... - 10 years ago
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Beautiful os 👏
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That was such a beautiful and sensitive topic...
I really loved the way you gave the ending as most of the people lost their lifes when the were in depression...

I really really loved the concept...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really a nice os
as always u have written it v well..
depression is also a silent killer which has to be treated on time!!

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Cheeseji, That was so good. Arnav's childhood is very sad, no kid deserves such type of abuse. Pedophelia is the worst crime that anyone can do on this planet. Its natural that Arnav has turned to drugs to lesson his pain and anguish. I am glad that NK and Lavanya were there to help him. Khushi was living in la la land and got crushed with the brutal reality. Both were each other side, which started with Freindship to relationship and to companionship.
Awesome.
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It was beautiful os
Loved it
Thanks 4pm me
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Dats really a very sensitive topic "depression".. And my friend you have write it wonderfully..!! Loved it
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Seriosuly and you say you don't write well...😆

Girl this was fab 👏...it's the toughest to write about disorders / incapabilities ..and you have done a fine job out of this ...😳

The OS I think it's a one-shot was PERFECT. Shyam was well Shyam 😆
I loved khushi , she was Fiesty and yet lonely.😛
Arnav was a lot sober than what we have seen ..and probably Arnav 😃


And finally, Thankyou so much for recommending my story 🤗..honestly you have already helped me so much here on the " new" IF that I think without you I probably would have been lost 😭

I may come back to edit ...after I feel better ...I am down with fever ......under the weather ...
Thankyou So much sweety ...Cheeni ...🤗

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