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a poem dedicated to nbt and mm before i started this new ff 😉


CHAPTERS COMING NEXT.

NOTE- it may have grammatical errors as i wrote it three years ago .
as that time i was a kid😛


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CHAPTER 1 - SOME MOMENTS OF PREVIOUS LIFE

As in the serial we saw Mohan and Megha have been always sacrificing their from their happiness for their family and also for else people Mohan and Megha will remain in the hearts forever and no one can take them away from us as they have put their carbon foot print on our hearts .

But all things that have come on our earth have to go one day and leave the world and go back to the place from they have been end . we all our assigned with some work which we have to do in our lifes which GOD has given us and after that we go to the place we come from . and so was with mohan and megha which was to happen one day but it happen first with mohan and megha so what they will be together forever in the next other births and ever .

Sometimes GOD does the things we not have even thought in our lives and that what happened with nanhi when her spiderman and maa died for saving the lives of some human beings . that day was the most difficult day for nanhi to accept when her father mother had gone and now she knew that they have left her forever from their bodies but not from their hearts .

She remembered the beautiful moments she spent with her spiderman and maa and most her spiderman who was the hero of the lives of her mother and hers and first she was the only one who met "her spiderman her hero ! ." tears rolled from her eyes as she came back home and was sitting on the top of "her spiderman "house which he had gifted her and she has remembering "her spiderman" and "her maa ." she thought may that morning time had stopped at that time only and she had stopped her parents from going outside in the bike for a ride in the morning as they went every day .

" Spiderman where are you going so morning with maa . your work I can do with beera and you shall remain home as you have grown old ! " she remembered she spoke to mohan when he was there in the morning taking the car keys . " I will be back nanhi in an hour or so . don't be so worried ! we have become old but our hearts our as young as ever I first met megha your mother ! and we have to just go for a work at the orphanage and then we will be back here ! " saying this he hugged nanhi and then just megha came and then mohan hugged megha also .

Nanhi did't knew that this was the last time she was seeing her parents alive as they would then go to that place from where they have come . nanhi had just come from London with beera to meet her parents after many days and she wanted t spend time with them . she didn't knew but a tear came down her eye and her parents standing in front of her started laughing mohan saying " aye chavanni ! sunn na ! don't cry like a small child ! we are just going for an hour outside " and then both megha and mohan hugged nanhi and mohan wiped her tears .

Mohan and megha sat into the bike and went from their and nanhi seeing them going . addu had already settled in delhi and rimjhim was in twelve standard and just gone for her school in the morning before mohan and megha . may GOD had only decided to nanhi to meet her parents last before their death . mohan and megha drove in the roads in the morning which were just empty due to the cold weather and mohan drove just like the days when megha first met mohan and he drove fast. Mohan was driving and then they together looked at the mirror on the side and saw each other and as if remembering the old days .

megha hairs were all open as mohan always said her to make them open as she looks very beautiful in that . and mohan was again drumstruck looking at megha she was looking as beautiful as she looked through the years since mohan had met her and mohan said " mirchi madam aap itne saalno mee aaj tak nahi badli ! ekdum waahi lambe baal ,ek khubsuraat sa chera , apki muskaan jisko dekh kar meri zindagi muskura uthi thi aur aaj bhi aapko muskurata dekh me muskura utha hu ! " listening to mohan word of praise megha just blushed and her cheeks were as red like red tomatoes ! then megha spoke " Mr.Musibat aap itne saalno me kaha badle hee ! wahi pura bike chalane ka andaaz wahi chewing gum ko lamba kheechna aur wahi purana "aye mirchi madam " aur wahi aankh marna jise dekh laadkiyan ka kya hota tha ! " both laughed on these lines by megha and then megha just put her hands around mohan . mohan driving fast to reach to the place and then ...

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CHAPTER 2

mohan was driving and suddenly the brakes of the bike failed and mohan was not able to control the bike and the bike was at great speed . the time had come for mohan and megha to the place from where they had come from that's why nothing was happening in their favour and then a ruck came in front and then it hit mohan and megha with such speed that they both with the bike feel much far apart down the road in the forest near the river bank rolling down and mohan and megha hurt very badly and blood flowing from both body badly and mohan and megha the distance was not much but they both on the ground down trying to reach other hand .

a very emotional sequence and they both knew that they both would now not be alive and all the days of their togetherness came in front of their eyes and all the moment spend by them . a sum up of the whole journey came . mohan said " megha ! mee aa raha hun " as he move forward towards her . megha said " mohan mera haath tumhare haath ke paas hai hamesha " as she also move forward towards mohan . blood was coming out like water but then also mohan and megha moving forward to touch each other hand once . they both at last reached each other hands and mohan said to megha "hame au koi alag nahi kar sakta na tum ,na main ,na bhagwan na kuch hazar kilometer ,aur na hamari moth ! me tumara tha aur hamesh tumhara rahunga " as he put his hand on megha face and then megha said " mee bhi tumhari rahungi hamesha aur hamara pyaar hamesha amar rahega mohan ! " megha also put her hands on mohan face and then both smiled and then ..

absolute silence all around and the cold wind blew making sound all around and mohan and megha both together the eyes closed and the hands were still in each other faces .the heartbeat stopped and then it was known that mohan and megha had left their bodies . the faces were still as when mohan and megha were alive with a smile and a sense of relief on their faces . the birds stop speaking and bowed and then flew from there as if showing their grief . the flowers petals fell down and the dogs and the cats became silent and went from there making voices as if showing their grief and hen the sky was filled with clouds and the cold wind blowed very fast . mohan and megha had gone to the places from where they had come from but together and their relation will be evergreen forever . nature was also very sad for the going of such wonderful persons and such a wonderful relation .

after sometime somebody passed and saw mohan and megha and called the police and also took mohan mobile out and called nanhi and she came running with beera and was shocked to see what had happened and seemed like all the problems and all the sadness has come to her . her spiderman and maa had left the world today . she shouted and cried loud but now nothing can be done as mohan and megha had gone . GOD had wanted them just now so they went . beera came and hugged nanhi to lessen the pain of her put he somehow managed to control himself .

the next few days were very difficult for nanhi and beera and the family . nanhi called addu from London where he was doing his job and rimjhim was already there . rimjhim was big enough to be told this news . when rimjhim listened she was just shocked but nanhi controlled her and herself also as the both sisters hugged themselves tightly . addu came and also hugged nanhi and rimjhim and all were very emotional and could not speak anything on what had happened . it seemed like everything has finished after their parents left this world . addu but then said that as mohan said "Megha aur mujhe koi alag nahi kar sakta na tum ,na main ,na bhagwan na kuch hazar kilometer ,aur na meri moth ! " and mohan and megha will be together forever

nanhi wiped her tears and addu also and rimjhim also and now they believed that wherever mohan and megha would be they would be together forever and they cannot be separated . they both left this world together and now they will take reborn also in a new place maybe not here anywhere else but they will be together forever . that day the sunrise over there in the town was the most beautiful ever as if symbolizing the ending of a beautiful relationship which lasted long for years and will remain in the hearts forever. Rimjhim said to all other members of the family that "we should not be unhappy because its gone but be happy because it happened to us and we experienced it ."

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Adi=love fic!!!!
Hard to digest..🤣
Now ..that was something to read😆
I must say..i like the length of the chapters n the way the story unfolds like pages of a favorite book..smoothly n calmly..it clearly symbolises u'll go a looong way in life😊
Sorry.. Bt keeping in mind u r in icse board..n its ur class 10..n the me is the lady shakespear😎
I wont overlook grammer mistakes🤣🤣

Yaar..baaki sb to theek h..
Pr ek prblm h..
This prblm na..i felt in ur first fic too..bt i tried to overlook n deak with it..bt yaar..ab nahi ho paega..wo na..main naa..
Wo..
Yaar..main naa..maine naa..aaj tk nbt nhi dekha
To na..meko characters ke beech bahot confusion h
Mtlb i knw smthin..lyk who is spiderman n megha. N unki beti..thts it..uske aage nhi pta..tu meko bta dena kon kya tha..😆
Plzz na...
At the end..
Love u..keep smiling
Trisha:)))).
N ye tere liye fr sucha a beautiful fic
Purple one is me n orange one is u😳😆
N yaar..ruk pehle let me dance
The me was the first to comment😎
Kya btun..hamare aane se hi to line shuru hoti h😎
Did i blabber aftr tht "keep smilin"?
Such a chatter box i am..
Bs..isse pehle u go mad..i m goin..
Waise bhi 2 chapters main itna hi milega🤣
Bye
Love u
Keep laughin n having fun:))))))
Edited by arrodil_smile - 10 years ago

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