Abhigya FF:Night To Remember LAST ch PG 75 NEW FF LINK pg 1 - Page 48

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Loved the update ..nice to see him caring for her and fixing her life ..can't wait to see them showing love for each other

please update soon

very soon they will confess their feelings. Trust me very soon. Thanks for the appreciation
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smala

Awesome update.

Loved it.

Looking forward to read what is going to happen next.

Thank you for the pm.

thanks for finding the update awesome. Will update soon hope you like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you, Rose!!! This story is so beautiful ... I love it!!!! Your narration makes the emotions seem so real 👏!!!! I'm totally enjoying 😊!!!!

I am so happy that you can feel the emotions through my writing. Thanks a lot. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Wow rose loved reading

Pranu update really it awsm
Abhi i liked his character much more on this chapter
waiting for both loving and accepting each

abhi has changed a lot and he has changed for the better. I am glad you're loving his character. Thanks for commenting 😊
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Loved the bonding of sisters !

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Chapter 17

Pushing the gates aside I was stepping in when I saw my past coming out of the house, overlooking her I continued to walk past her when she stopped me," Abhishekh." Turning my neck I gave her cold stare.

" I wanted to apologize ."

I wasn't interested in her sorry or her, as a matter of fact I didn't wish to think about what she did to me in the past hence showed her my palm which indicated all that I wanted to say. Moving just a step ahead she again spoke up," today because of you I got my sister back ..i'll never forget this." This time I turned around clenching my jaws firmly to clear out something," whatever I did I did it for pragya ..somewhere she was disturbed because of me and I couldn't see that." Stressing on each and every word that left my mouth to make it crystal clear that all this had nothing to do with her or myself, the only thing that mattered to me was pragya's happiness, the one who pulled me out of my dark past to show me a bright present, I wished to do the same for her.

" you deeply care about her." she said and I thought what kind of a statement or question was this? Of course I cared for her and why shouldn't I? she was..she meant .. well a lot to me.

Tears welled up in her eyes as she said," I betrayed you in love but you still accepted pragya.." I didn't let her complete herself because this love and all wasn't making sense to me, narrowing my eyes I told her," love? And you ? seriously I've no clue what was it ..today when I think back maybe it was some kind of an attraction toward your voice that failed to culminate into love after meeting you." I really wondered did I ever love her? Her singing in the rain had mesmerized me but beyond that we never connected with each other, no matter how hard I tried to but still a lot was lacking between us.

Her face started to lose color as I continued," there is a hell lot of difference between what I felt for you and what I feel for pragya." During that stampede incident I was on the verge of losing pragya and that had sucked the life out of me, just the thought of her not being with me anymore had shaken me up completely and when tanu left me on the wedding day I was heart broken, angry, furious over her for hurting my ego but still I didn't feel a sense of loss within me. It didn't pain me as much as it did when pragya went missing.

Looking at her intently I said," I wished to make you a part of my life ..but pragya...she's become my life."

Tears began dropping from her eyes and somewhere I felt sorry for her, I didn't wish to humiliate her but all this pent up frustration was coming out of me on its own. Closing my eyes, I composed myself and realized that instead of being rude, I should be thankful to her for cheating on me, had she not done so true happiness wouldn't have entered my life.

" if I've loved or love anyone then it's pragya. Not you."

She lowered her head in shame and folded her hands before me, she wanted to speak but couldn't, I don't know why. She took a minute to wipe off her tears and for the first time I felt she was actually guilty of her actions.

Just then purab came out of the house, in fact I'd come to pick him up, we were supposed to go for an important meeting, he saw both of us together and knitted his brows in confusion. I blinked my eyes suggesting that it was nothing, he nodded his head and said," abhi shall we ..we're getting late."

We both walked out to leave when she took a step forward and said softly,

" that night I wasn't the one singing in the rain."

I raised my brow to question her then dismissed the thought, it didn't matter to me if she wasn't singing in the rain that night.

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My heart felt really light as if I'd lifted a heavy burden off it after saying what was in my mind. There was no bitterness for anybody or anything, just a sweet feeling lingered within me. Thinking back how easily I'd confessed my love for her brought a smile on my face which didn't go unnoticed purab who was driving, at the same time looking at me from the corner of his eye.

Seeing me amused how could he stop himself from not pulling my leg,"what abhi, you're blushing in love." The grin vanished and I glared at him, wondering, how did he know that ...that I was in love?..i didn't tell him..forget him, I didn't even tell myself..then how come?

He let out a throaty laugh and said," oh ho abhi, its not rocket science. Anybody can make out that you love pragya... just that you took time to realize it ."

Yeah he was right, it took me such a long time to actually figure out what I really felt for her, had tanu today not brought up the topic of love, I would have continued to keep my feelings under wraps, because of her pragya came into my life and today again because of her I realized that pragya was the love of my life.

" so abhi, did you tell pragy? What did she say?" turning my neck I stared at him. He pressed the brakes hard, suddenly bringing the car to a halt and asked me in surprise," what you've not confessed your feelings yet?"

I glanced quietly in the other direction, when I myself came to know just an hour back then how could I tell her anything.

He took a U turn to drive back and I asked him," what are you doing? Why are we heading back?"

" because now you'll tell pragya that you love her."

Shaking my head I thought, he was simply impossible, what's the hurry in confessing my love to her?

" listen purab the meeting is really important... I'll share my feelings later ."

" no way abhi ..now means now ." He was adamant and continued," I'm telling you don't waste time."

I was silent, I didn't know whether I had the courage to pour my heart out to her, I didn't even know whether she was prepared for all this. He patted my shoulder and said," abhi, love is knocking at your door. Welcome it." I smiled back at him, love indeed was beautiful and the whole world seemed wonderful when you were in love.

Cool breeze was blowing and dark clouds covered the sky, it was lunch time but it appeared as if it was late in the evening. It was drizzling when we reached back home, the whole atmosphere was calm and soothing, getting off the car, I glanced at him, he winked at me and said,"let me handle the business deal. Meanwhile Let your heart capture her heart." Nodding my head I thought that I was really fortunate to have a brother like him.

I scanned the entire hall and kitchen area, she was no where to be found, I went up to our room, she wasn't there as well. Taking out the cell phone I dialed her number, it began ringing in the room, looking around I found her cell phone on the bed. Picking it up I noticed that she'd set our wedding picture as her wall paper, a smile crept my lips. I went out of the room and began calling her out," pragya ..pragya" bulbul came to the hall and informed that she'd gone to her mother's place. The nervousness and excitement to tell her about my feelings was getting out of my control, I couldn't wait for her to return hence went to her mother's place.

It felt a little awkward going there without any reason, I'd been to her mother's place only once and that too for the baby shower which was yesterday. As expected her mother was a bit surprised to see me nevertheless she told me that she was out in the terrace. With every step that I was taking my heart pounded loudly inside my chest just then I heard a familiar voice, someone was singing the same song which I'd heard months back. Reaching the door I was stunned to see her singing in the rain.

Roz sham aati thiMagar aisi na thi

Roz roz ghata chaati thi Magar aisi na thi

Yeh aaj meri zindagi Mein kaun aa gayaa

I recalled what tanu had said sometime back that she wasn't singing that evening, so it was pragya?

But how was it possible? My mind questioned.

It was very much possible my heart said, her presence in my life had that same soothing effect which that soulful voice had that evening. No wonder I always felt drawn towards her like I did when I'd heard her sing, that connection which was missing between me and tanu was always there between pragya and me, what all I wished to see in her sister I found in her unexpectedly.

Who else other than her could have touched my heart? It had to be her, just that it didn't struck me before.

She was twirling around in the rain with her arms spread wide open, unaware of her surroundings, unaware that a pair of hooded eyes was watching her so closely. Her innocence, her smile was breathtaking as rain drops touched, kissed and played with her. Leaning against the door with my arms crossed before my chest and my head tilted slightly I enjoyed the beautiful sight before my eyes. She threw her head back as water droplets tickled her cheeks, the radiance and happiness on her face made my mind wonder the reason behind it while my heart only took pleasure in seeing her sing and spin around carelessly.

Suddenly she stopped and started looking around, her dark eyes were surprised to see me standing, she dropped her gaze as she blushed a deep crimson. Without tearing my eyes from her I began walking in her direction, nervously or shyly she began stepping back slowly till her back hit the terrace railing.

I stopped in front of her and glanced at her, she was drenched completely from head to toe, she lowered her head feeling my gaze on herself. Lifting her chin up with my finger I made her look up and asked," that night you were singing this song?" she nodded a yes silently.

" then how come I spotted tanu instead of you?" My mind wanted all the answers, she too appeared confused then replied after slapping her head," oh I'd gone inside to change and tanu had come out to pick wet clothes ..maybe that was when you saw her."

I shook my head as everything started to fall into place, that night she was singing when there was a power cut, daadi caught me looking at her, I turned my back to her for just a minute when power resumed and we both thought that tanu was singing as by then she'd already left.

A smile spread across my lips as I realized that fromThis day one if at all I was in love then it was always with her.

" but why are you asking all this ?"

" now I know the girl that I'd fallen for was not tanu but you ..it had been your voice ..it had always been you pragya. Always you. And only you."

She smiled in surprise and bit her lower lip on hearing my words. I cupped her soft and wet face in my hands and looked into her ocean eyes before telling her," my love story started with you and ends on you." For long I considered her as the unwanted part of my story unaware that in reality she was my story. The fact that I'd always been in love with her thrilled me to no extent and I brought her face closer. Her lips quivered in a smile that could light up the whole area and I pressed mine against her forehead for a few seconds before taking her in my arms and whispered in her ear," I love you pragya."

The clouds thundered, making her shiver and she buried her face further in my chest, her head rested on my beating heart and her finger nails dug into my skin. I smiled inwardly holding her close and rested my chin on her head as the rain soaked both of us, how could I hate the rain anymore? It brought love in my life and now in my arms. Moving back a little I leaned my head against hers with my arms still wrapped around her waist, savoring this priceless moment, when she called out softly," suniye."

I glanced at her tender lips which either lectured me or remained silent or sometimes would call me out but whatever they said it always touched my heart. Angling my face I brought it near her, she was clutching my shirt firmly in her fists and kept her eyes shut when I brushed my lips against hers making her gasp.

She pushed me back with force and said loudly," NO.This Is Not Right."

She was breathing hard and tears welled up in her eyes while speaking," this can't happen. There's nothing between us..".I ..I .." she stammered badly ,"I'd told you on the wedding night, I wouldn't do this." I was rooted to the spot and looked at her in confusion as all this was not making sense to me. I couldn't believe and understand what I was hearing.

Without meeting my eyes she ran back in and I couldn't stop her.

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Shutting the door of my room I dropped myself on the bed and cried my heart out as everything changed within seconds before my eyes.

Hour back I was so happy when I overheard his conversation with tanu, where he confessed that if at all he loved anybody it was me. I'd went behind tanu to give her the handkerchief which I'd embroidered for her but stopped in my tracks when I heard her speak to him, fearing that she might say something bitter, I decided to overhear, it wasn't decent on my part but I didn't wish him to get hurt by her again and when he said that he loved me and only me, I was on cloud nine, giggling to myself while turning back to go in, purab spotted me. I think he noticed that grin, nevertheless I was ecstatic.

My heart was filled with joy, I wanted to share this with someone so sometime later went to maa's place, she was busy preparing the lunch and said would listen to me later but I couldn't contain my happiness and went to the terrace. It was pouring, a part of me didn't wish to step into the rain but still I went out and stood there silently as rain drops fell on me. His words echoed in my ears making my lips stretch in a smile and automatically my hands spread out to feel the rain, I began spinning around relishing the moment by singing the same song which I'd sung months back without knowing that this time I wasn't alone, he was watching me from a corner and what happened thereafter was beautiful as a dream but dreams broke once you opened your eyes.

The magical spell got lost as reality struck me and it struck me really hard. Grabbing the pillow underneath my head I questioned myself, why was my happiness so short lived? Why did I break his heart? Why did I stop him? And most importantly why couldn't I tell him that like him even I loved him and that too not from today but from the very first day I met him? He was, is and would always be the love of my life!

Maa knocked at the door and said," beta you didn't go with Abhi?" Wiping my wet face I got up and replied," I will after changing."

Dragging my legs to the cupboard I opened it and took out an old suit of mine, I was pulling out the matching dupatta when something else also came out with it, his blue waist coat Holding it fresh stream of tears poured out of my eyes as I recalled the evening when we'd accidently met.

Flashback

It had been only a few days since we'd shifted to this place. My holidays were coming to an end and before going back to the hostel I had to buy some important books. It was a dark cloudy evening and the place was new to me still I decided to visit the nearby market alone. The road was silent and deserted with puddles around, I walked carefully to save myself from not falling into any of those puddles filled with mud.

Suddenly a bike rode past me, two boys were riding on it, they made a u turn and came back to me. I stopped seeing them coming close, they began circling around me and started passing lewd comments. Even though terror gripped my body, I preferred to ignore them and started walking, this time hurriedly when all of a sudden one of them pulled my dupatta and I asked in fear," hey, what do you want?" they smirked and came close to me before replying," you" then tried to touch me.

I pushed the bikers hand but the other one ripped my left sleeve and I ran for my life, unaware where my legs were taking me till I stumbled and fell down badly in a muddy puddle. My face was fully covered with mud, still I tried to get up but it was too late, the miscreants had already reached and now they got off the bike.

My whole body was shivering with fear as they started walking towards me, one of them extended his hand to catch hold of me when someone dressed in a blue suit came in between and grabbed his hand and punched his face with his other hand," this is my hometown. Abhishekh Mehra's! how dare you even think of doing something like this?" his deep husky voice roared in the silence.

The biker attempted to attack him with a knife but he twisted his wrist and kicked him hard, he then turned to look at me, I was trying to hide my ripped sleeve with my hand. He took out his blue waist coat and offered me, I grabbed it instantly and covered myself with it. Next moment he was hitting, kicking and punching them left right and centre till both of them collapsed.

Then coolly went to his jeep and began fixing the punctured tyre as if nothing had happened. I stood still and watched him, the whole incident had shaken me up, had he not intervened I would have been ruined. I walked up to him to thank him, he stood up and turned around," should I drop you somewhere?" he asked, I nodded a no and parted my lips to thank him when his cellpone rang, he took the call and started speaking," yeah purab ..i'm on my way.." he raised his brow questioning me, I folded my trembling hands in gratitude and began walking down the road.

On reaching home I went to my room quickly before anybody could question me. Taking a fresh pair of suit I watched myself in the mirror, I was looking really shabby and dirty in fact beyond recognition with that mud all around my face.

Closing my eyes I stood under the shower, images of my savior flashed before my eyes, one moment he was angry, ruthless towards those molesters, the way he was beating them up I feared that he might end up killing them and the next moment he was so soft and gentle towards me that it touched my heart. Without knowing who I was he jumped in to save me, no wonder the people of this town worshiped him. Everything seemed so dramatic, fairy tale yet it was real. I was a damsel in distress and he was my knight in shining amour. Picking up his jacket I rubbed it against my cheek and realized that I'd given away my heart to him, love could happen so easily and so suddenly I'd never imagined.

Beaming in delight I ran out in the terrace and began getting wet in the rains, I loved the rains and now I loved them even more. I twirled, danced and sang in joy

Roz sham aati thi ...yeh aaj meri zindagi mein kaun aa gaya

Indeed the evening was really special for me as love had stepped into my life.

End of flashback.

Thanks for reading

Rose

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update ,loved it. But a bit confused why is she rejecting him if she loved him all along.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi thanks for early update, awesome update, way of confessing his love it's amazing. So she is girl loved by him. She also feel same, then y she is behaving like this ??? Waiting for the next chapter... Thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am a little confused. If she was is in love with him then, why reject him.
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I am in love with the way you write! This dialogue of Abhi - Looking at her intently I said," I wished to make you a part of my life ..but pragya...she's become my life." 👏

So happy Pragya is the girl he loved even then - if Pragya loved him all along I wanna know why she is still rejecting him? Please continue soon!

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