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Heyy guys this is my frist time writing so hope you guys like it and let me know how was it.



CHARACTER SKETCH


Manik Malhotra: 26 year old smart handsome tall with deep brown eyes and terribly fair complexion in short a total GREEK GOD whom every girls dream off also A rich handsome guy with a mesmerizing voice who has everything. he love his family more then any thing in this world and for his family he is also very important also Manik is owner of malhotra industries...his father gave him all the property when he was 21 n he also runs a music company and fab5 are famous and do lot of concerts in different cities and country. Also have a sister name Navya. In a relationship with nandini for 4 years.


Namdini Murthy:23 year old beautiful girl with an angelic face and the most captivating smile with her big doe eyes making her look like a fairy just landed on earth she is very cute, simple, intelligent girl also fab 5 and Navya's life they can't live with out her. In a relationship with manik for 4years who means her world and fab4 and Navya is her only family , they mean everything to her just like manik. And abhi who's her childhood best friend and after her Family died in a accident abhi's family look after her. Abhi raise her just like his own sister.


Cabir Dhawan: 26 year old cute, funny, caring and also in love Navya n she too as they are in relationship yes u read it right in my story cavya are in relationship and everyone knees about it and happy for them all thanks to nandini and cabir also love nandini like a brother always there for here no matter what just like abhi.



Navya Malhotra:22year old very beautiful and innocent girl who loves music. In a relationship with Cabir and best friend with nandini they're like soul sister her friends mean everything to her and he love her brother manik also force him to get married to nandini already so that she can be with her always.

Dhruv Vedant: 25 year old A shy, sweet and an innocent boy who loves his family and his friends the most. Music is his passion. Manik is the most important person in his life as much Aliya they're dating for 2yeaers now.

Mukti Vardhan: 23 year old A hot rich spoilt brat. Her 4 best friends and nandin and Navya are her life and she loves them the most.also very fun loving n has a big crush on abhi only nandini and Aliya knows.

Aliya Saxena: 22year old A sweet yet sexy rich spoilt brat who love her 4 best friends and nandini and Navya the most. She believes in love and lives in her own bubble.also in a relationship with dhruv for 2years

Abhimanyu Thakker:26 year old A tall and handsome boy with a very cool and jolly personality. He wants to complete MBA and believes in social work. He is very strong and smiles in every situation and has the ability to make the people around him smile also nandin's childhood best friend and love her like a Little sister and life mukti a lot only manik and cabir knows.


PROLOGUE

After college everyone had settle down in their life and also our fab5 got famous and Manik be come the owner of malhotra industries...his father gave him all the property when he was 21 n he also runs a music company and fab5 are famous and do lot of concerts in different cities and country... Taking he's star family to goa for the weekend and to propose nandini to her married .


LET ME KNOW IF YOU GUYS LIKE IT AND WANT ME TO CONTAINING 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really good character sketches!! Pls continue! Would love to read ur work 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Quite exciting concept
plzz continue ..
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Hope you guys like it

Chapter 1




Summer was at its peak and the heat was getting to Manik. Damn those suits, they were fine in an air conditioned office or car but in a place like Delhi with its high humidity, suits were a real pain in the neck!

Unbuttoning his collar, Manik loosened his tie as he asked the chauffer to take him back to the hotel. Thank God today's review meeting with the investors was done and in a few days, he'd be home.

As they waited for the traffic signal to turn green, he mused over a hoarding that screamed, "Summer in Goa! Good times at incredible prices!" Hmm... a short getaway might not be such a bad idea... so what if it was the off season. A long weekend was coming up and Navya's exams were done. Plus, he couldn't remember the last time they'd headed out as a family for a vacation.

He called cabir immediately, "Bro.. what's the plans for this weekend?"

Cabir was surprised to hear his voice in the middle of the day. It was unusual for him to call him during work hours especially when he was out on business travel. "Nothing bro, we're going to stay in. Why, what do you have in mind?"

"How about a weekend trip to Goa?" Manik asked.

"Huh?! Uh... sounds like fun. Navya will be thrilled... she's always wanted to go to Goa and enjoy the sun and sand, and beaches," Cabir replied, not wanting to disappoint his bro but at the same time, wondering what brought this on. It wasn't like Manik at all... he never thought of fun. It was all work and no play with he's friends or not even nandini even tho he's in madly in love with her cause he's so busy with he's work now days cause after he turn 21 he's feather have everything under he's name and also wishes him and nandini for they're beautiful future.

Manik's dad love namdini like he's owe daughter ( like always our nanu won he's heart too just like other, they all love her and can't live they're like with out her)
"Great! So I'll have the tickets booked once you confirm with Navya and other and I'll my self will ask Nandini.


I was thinking it might make sense for y'all to join me in Delhi by Thursday and we can head to Goa for the weekend. Hope that's ok?" he's bro happy voice on the other end of the phone, brought a smile on Cabir's face.
of course bro that's fine we'll be there on time.Manik also plan to propose and settle down with he's shining star and even he's dad want that sense they be in a relationship for 4years and he shares he's plan with cabir so that he can help him .
But cabir ask him why he want everyone to come and manik said cause I want my family to be there for my biggest happiest moments in my life. They hang up the phone and cabir was soo happy for he's best friend and he's lil sister so he called other and tell them everyone was soo happy for them that they just can't wait.


Manik calls nandini and nandini was so happy to see manik called her after 12 hours so he happily pick up
Nandini: Hi manik I missed you soo much baby.
( manik felt soo pace at that moment after hearing he's life)
Manik:hii Jaan I missed you too
Nandini: no you didn't stop lying
Manik: yes I did Jaan
Nandini: if you did then why did you call me after 12HOURS
manik felt bad buh he was really busy in he's meets
Manik: Jaan you know na I was really busy buh I'm sorry next time this won't happen I promise
Now nandini felt bad
Nandini: it's ok baby I know you were busy or else you will never do that .
Manik: ok nandini I was thinking ki we all should go to goa this weekend what say?
Nandini was most then happy to be with manik and her star family
Nandini: baby really I would love too after soo long we all will be together
Manik was soo happy that nandini was so happy
Manik: ok Jaan I have to go I LOVE YOU COME SOON
nandini:ok baby I LOVE YOU TOO AND SEE YOU SOON MUAAH 😳
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