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-This thread is where I will post anything I happen to pen out. (Won't happen very often, unfortunately). Much of it will be short drabbles, not necessarily one shots because there really is no specific plot line or story to it.

I had written two in the past, most recently. I'll post those two beneath this post. If you're interested in receiving a PM if and when I feel motivated to write something else out, drop me a comment. 😃

Side note: The two previously mentioned pieces were posted in a blog earlier by me which I no longer update. I can't provide the link here because of forum rules but if you're interested, drop me a PM? 😆 (There's nothing on it except the two drabbles that'll be posted here now).

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Posted on September 2, 2014

The rain pelted down against the ground. The sky, a stark black, did nothing to help the darkened street. No sound other than the rain could be heard from that deserted street. Yet, there she was - standing alone, hands on her knees, panting, soaked from head to toe.

She wiped away tears that were almost non-existent, having already camouflaged themselves with the rain. She quickly glanced at the object in her hand and felt her fingers give away as it hit the wet ground with a loud clank. She cringed away from the sound, as if the object had harmed her. Her hand shook as she bent down and picked it up. Her eyes closed shut tightly, hiding away the deep chocolate eyes, haunted by horrors she's seen and experienced.

She pressed the object down into her arm and pulled upwards, wincing quietly as she tore open yet another wound. Blood dripped down her drenched white shirt, staining it. She took a deep breath of relief and finally, smiled.

"And that makes you feel better?"

She gasped, spinning around and came face to face with a pair of dark eyes. Almost instantly, her gaze dropped to his straight, thin pink lips. Unable to speak, she merely nodded. He reached out and brushed his knuckles against her cheek. She sighed, letting out a shaky breath as more tears dripped down.

"I never pegged you as weak. Passive, yes but not weak." She knew better. She didn't feel like or even feel the need to reply to his statement. He grabbed her arm and began to pull her, pull her back to where she had ran away from. But he was right. She was passive. Therefore, there was nothing she was going to do about it. She was going to let it happen because the one thing that gave her the strength to go on was clutched in her hand, tightly, now smeared with her blood.

"You've changed." She whispered, as she always did. And he ignored her, like he always did. Thunder roared above angrily, as if yelling at her to not let it happen this time. To step up and protect herself. Do the right thing but she just couldn't. She wished she could but she couldn't.

"Go on." He muttered when they came to a stop. He motioned towards the door of their house. The streetlights shone above them, and it almost seemed like the darkness had been left behind. But in reality, the darkness was there. It was in that house, now lit up with warm lights that seemed to emit a warm glow but only hurt. She bowed her head to avoid staring at the house that once seemed like a home to her. But not anymore. He nudged her when she didn't move. This time, she responded and took a step forward.

Thunder roared again in response and the rain quickened. It got harder and louder. She felt her shoulders shake as soundless sobs tore through her body. It hurt. It hurt so much. And he watched quietly, emotionless as always. When she heard his footsteps approach her, even with the rain, she took another step forward and kept walking until she had arrived at the doorstep.

He reached from behind her and turned the knob for her. He pushed the door open and the heat hit her face forcefully. Unwanted comfort never did appeal. She had liked the cold, wet rain. It made the pain bearable. The darkness engulfed her, it allowed her to push away everything that hurt to think about. It allowed her to stop pretending when she couldn't see anything. With the light attacking her eyes, compelling her to look, to accept, it was intolerable.

He pressed his firm, cold hand against her frail, shivering back. She stepped inside and heard the door shut behind her. Something inside her broke and her eyes glazed over. She shoved the sharp knife in her pocket and ran a hand over her hair to smooth it. She turned around to face him and smiled at his handsome face. His thin lips responded and smiled back.

"It's good to be back home." She stated. He nodded grabbing her arm and squeezing. And he squeezed until it hurt. Hurt enough to give her another wound but it gave her relief. It made her smile.

(728 words)

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Posted on December 25, 2014

The birds were chirping, the sun shining bright. The grass felt soft and heavenly underneath her weightless head as she let her eyes drift closed. A smile forced itself on her face and she sighed defeated. Her moment of peace was interrupted when flashbacks of the argument with her fiance troubled her mind. They had been together for almost three years and yet, not once did he mention her. Until she showed up and the bubble of a blissful ignorant life she was living in burst.

She clutched the grass underneath her in her fist and ripped at it viciously.

"You're making a big deal out of nothing. We broke up years ago."

The words were crystal clear, his deep voice silky and smooth as ever. She clenched her teeth together and refused to let it bother her any longer. "You're making a big deal out of nothing."The same words her father had repeated to her when he had chosen to get remarried after her mother had passed away. He hadn't even mourned her death for a month before the step mother was introduced.

"At least I didn't lie to you. I just didn't tell you about her."

The same way her father hadn't told her about the step mother before she had walked into their home and embraced her as if she were her long lost daughter. She hadn't been able to cope with it and had made the decision to shut her father and his new wife out of her life. She knew the reality. She wasn't as naive as her father assumed she was. There was more to the story he gave her about the step mother. There was more to the unsteady rocky relationship her parents had before her mother became severely ill and passed away.

There was always more. It was just easier to turn a blind eye to reality and accept what you are told. Many a times she had convinced herself that it was time to step up. It was time for her to accept that she deserved much better than what she dealt with. But at the end of the day, words and thoughts she had many, but actions very less. She lacked the ability to ensure her actions mirrored her thoughts. She lacked courage.

"There you are. Are you going to be difficult or are we going to deal with this in a civil manner?" Sneered the same smooth voice that haunted her thoughts moments earlier. She flinched but her face remained stoic. The serene weather no longer appealed to her with a storm brewing inside her.

"Deal with what?" she whispered. I can't do this anymore, she thought. She heard a condescending chuckle fall from his lips and she shut her eyes closed tightly. It hurts, please stop. With that thought, she pushed herself up on her feet and began to walk away.

"Is this the best you can do? Run away instead of facing me?" He asked her gripping her elbow tightly in his stiff, cold hands. You're cold, inside and outside. A tear slipped from one chocolate brown eye and a shaky smile was plastered on her face when she turned around to stare at him, smirking at her. It's scary what a smile can hide.

"No. I just want to believe you. I just want to forget anything ever happened." were the words that slipped out of her mouth. She writhed in agony from within, her mind and soul a prisoner to her own body. His eyes lost the coldness and returned the warmth that she now knew to be fake.

"Good. Can we go home now?" He held out his hand to her and she took it, a tiny portion of her heart that remained breaking and crashing to the ground. It's okay, I love him.

(653 words)

Edited by Angel-Jot. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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those are dark and painful and very well written.
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I loved the drabbles. So much! The first was dark, like really dark! 😲 It took me a few minutes to let the drabble in! Nevertheless, I feel if was marvelous! I loved it! The second one was softer, but yes the last bit. I love him, I think that just bowled me over!

Are you gonna write more? If so, PM me?
Edited by caffeineaddict. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Both the drabble are nice. Esp I liked the first one the most. I would like to get PM notification further to your updates. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Surprises, surprises. Is there anything you don't do? I mean when you aren't feeling lazy? Lazy bones.

Nonetheless great drabbles. For a lazy personality, you are a very dark writer. I don't know if that's good or bad or if I'm indifferent. And if you ever get around to it do PM me when you write more, lazy bones.
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Omg. Why are people reserving so much? Its like you're preparing yourself to tear me apart. *freaks out*
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Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.

Omg. Why are people reserving so much? Its like you're preparing yourself to tear me apart. *freaks out*



I only reserve where I want to write a river.
No, where I might have the chance to.
But it takes time.

☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: caffeineaddict.

I loved the drabbles. So much! The first was dark, like really dark! 😲 It took me a few minutes to let the drabble in! Nevertheless, I feel if was marvelous! I loved it! The second one was softer, but yes the last bit. I love him, I think that just bowled me over!

Are you gonna write more? If so, PM me?

Unreserved ji!

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