2# MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Chappy 61 on page 119 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey u listen to me u r my live jano tumi (Bengali song) 😆 😉
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kamini were r u .update na
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Part B: Cause his belief on love is FRAGILE!
"Aiyyappa, why Manik don't believe in us why is his belief on love so FRAGILE? Why doesn't he understand that we can easily deal with the problem if we are together? Why does he always feel that staying away from me or abandoning me from him is a solution? Appa you are also listening to all this na then why don't you me? Appa you know after you and mom went away from me and Risabh, I use to hate stars but Manik he made me love stars again. He is perfect for me why doesn't he understand this? Arre Appa aap aise kya dekh rahe ho hmm acha aap confuse ho ke maine Manik ko maaf q kar diya? Arre Appa aap hi kehte the na ke humesha kisi ko samjhane ke liye unse door hone ki zarurat nahi hai, ke agar kisiko apni importance unke life main samjhani ho toh usne door jake nahi unke sath rehke toh wahi toh kar rahi ho. Appa Manik aur maine already bohut dooriyan ek dusre ko de chuke hai and Manik I know thoda impulsive hai and thoda stupid bhi but jaisa bhi hai Appa mera hi hai ab toh kuch ni ho sakta. Use khud se ur nahi kar sakti kya karu selfish hun na use tutte nahi dekh sakungi. Mujhe pata hai STAR family yeh soch rahi hai ke maine kaise use maaf kar diya par Appa yahin toh pyaar hai aap hi kehte ho na ke pyaar maafi hai toh bas maine use maaf kar diya. And sab ko yeh dikh raha hai ke usne mere sath kya kiya and that girl who dikh raha hai par Appa kisiko yeh q nahi dikh raha mera Manik, he was in pain all this three months. Usne khud pain liye cause mujhe pain na ho wo khud dard main tha mujhse rude hoke mujhe hurt karke wo khud had se zyada hurt hua hai. Kyu nahi samjhate sab its hurts him to hurt me and hurts me to go away from him. I know usne yeh mere liye kiya hai han usne mujhse bat karna zaruri nahi samjha han he failed me but main toh uske jaisi nahi ho sakti na main stupidity nahi kar sakti na kisi ek ko toh samjhdar hona padega and is baar its my turn and kyu bhul jate hai sab he forgave me twice... Once when I thought we were TOXIC and when I thought he could kill soha so why I can't I forgive him when he can ignore my all mistakes. I love him he loves me and he is back to me and now we need to fight together I can't leave him alone he has been punished for hurting me as he was getting hurt too. Main toh uspe kabhi gussa thi hi nahi ke use maaf karu Appa cause he gave me everything a girl deserve and he loves me more than I can imagine. Par Appa use yeh toh main zarur samjhaungi ke hum sath hai toh hume koi nahi tod sakta par agar hum alag ho gaye toj hum dono jee nahi payenge. Appa mereko ab jaana hoga aapko pata haina Manik kuch na kuch plan kar raha hoga mere liye for making up for his mistake he will plan something really very big. Pagal hain pura yeh ladka bye Appa love you", shared Nandini with her Aiyyappa and Appa.
"mujhe pata hai I failed you Nandini but I promise I will make it up for the mistake. I should have known that hum sath hi khus reh sakte hai hum alag nahi reh sakte. I am blessed to have you in my life, even after watching someone all over me you were angry cause I hid all the secrets from you not for the act you saw. You definitely love me more than I deserve but main kya karta Nandini I was manipulated by her. I was scared main tumhe humesha ke liye nahi kho sakta tha Nandini isliye socha tumse door hona hi sahi rahega. Mujhe pata hai ek bar fir I thought if leaving you but believe me I will never leave you alone after this but please forgive me today. I promise you will never forget this birthday of yours you will love it till the end and you will be mine forever", talked Manik to himself.

8pm:
It was 8pm star family decided to leave them alone as they need their space and they thought of celebrating her birthday with her tomorrow.
Bell rang at Nandini's door and she went down to open the door and she found a parcel she got it in and saw the parcel it had a beautiful white ankle length white sheer dress it was pure white and had a note, "cause white is your favorite and I like when you wear white and cause white is color of purity and you are so pure like our LOVE and ya HAPPY BIRTHDAY". She further found a white pumps and white earrings that were shining even there was a letter in the earring box she opened it, "cause they shine like star, HAPPY BIRTHDAY".


She opened another letter from the pumps and it was written, "cause you always try to match my height but let me tell you your height I so cute it allows me to bend in front of you and kiss you the only person in front of whom I ever want to bow my head and secondly your height is so cute that when we hug your head rest on my heart and I feel solace and peace, HAPPY BIRTHDAY LOVE".


She had tears in his eyes but at the same time she was blushing and thought I hope even you can wear white. When she was going to change she saw an another letter and it says, "of course love I will definitely wear white cause you love me in white and I know you can't take your eyes off me so I will definitely wear love and it symbolizes our color for PURE LOVE. So be ready I will send you a car I am sorry I can't come to you cause I want to give you a surprise I hope you don't mind cause I love you, HAPPY BIRTHDAY".


She was overwhelmed by the love he was showering on her she changed herself. She applied dark blacked eyeliner over the eyelids touching the line of her eyelashes and applied black kohl on her lower lid she applied dark black mascara on her eyelashes and the rich black color over her eyes made it look seducing, appealing and mesmerizing. She was about to tie her hair in a bun when Manik image flash asking her to let it be open. She managed her tresses in loose curls just the way he liked and let her fall over her shoulders reaching her waist. Her legs were pretty visible as the dress was sheer below the knee and she wore a beautiful anklet on her right leg just increasing her beautiful. Her wrist had the first gift of their love the bracelet with musical tie. She applied red lipstick as she knew he would like it cause red is his fav color. She wore the white pumps and adjusted it properly avoiding her to fall down and said, "Now I can match your height a bit", she chuckled on her own statement. She took the earrings and he was right the diamond studded earring where actually shining but when she wore it, she increased the beauty of the earrings. Finally she was ready and anyone who would she her would have stopped breathing she looked ethereal like a fairy came down to earth. She was leaving the house hearing the horn of the car when her eyes fell on a gift near the door she smiled at first and then opened it to find a silver glittering clutch and under which was a note, "I know I know you are thinking now what this clutch is for? Arre baba whenever you get nervous na you either start playing with your dress or your finger so this clutch is for maintaining your grip over it. How lucky the clutch is you will hold it tightly I hope I could be a clutch then I would have been in your hands. Ok chalo get in the car and stop laughing reading this PINK NOTES yes I know I dint like it once when you dropped it at my house but now I know their values so now please walk and get in the car I am waiting for you and yaa HAPPY BIRTHDAY".


She kept the note in drawer took the clutch and opening the door saw a huge gift and just face palmed herself cause of him being so cute gifting all the things but now she was confused what is left. She swiftly opened the big gift to find a big bear soft toy and again the famous pink note, "okay okay I know I am stupid sending you a bear soft toy but this is my replica and ya he will always be with you when I am not with you. This is the last gift till you reach here so now don't waste much time and come fast OKAY THANKS BYE and ya please shake hands with the new friend, HAPPY BIRTHDAY", Nandini thought he has gone crazy as soon as


she shake the hand of bear it read out a message, "Hello Miss Murthy I know you might be looking breathtaking so I request you to apply your kohl which I know you already had which makes your eyes look more describing but please put a little kohl behind your ear as it will save you from evil eyes and I m damn serious I will check that. Nandini I have failed you but I promise I will make it up for you please forgive me I love you so much be with me always cause today I promise to be with you HUMESHA.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETHEART.. I m waiting..!!", Manik voice came out from the bear and she hugged it and kept it inside and when to Manik by the car.

Manik's driver informed him they have left and will reach by half an hour so Manik got ready for final touch ups.
The venue was situated in a farmhouse located far away from the city and not known to anyone except Fab 5. The farmhouse had a big lawn where Manik made a tent sort of thingy of white curtain and inside was a white sheet laid on the grass and there were two white pillows and the sheet was covered with white rose petals and the lawn was covered with candles that were dug in the ground and covered with glass over it and that was the only source of light and the candles were white and where inside the ground covered with glass n only the light was seen. The farmhouse also had a swimming pool which was filled with red and white roses and floating red candles and the bedroom was a king sized and contained a round bed which was again covered with red roses and the entire room was enlighten by the lamp which he received as a gift from her on diwali...
Manik was in white blazer and blue denim he was looking not less than a prince charming but this was only for his princess the one for whom he can leave his life on. Manik was wearing a white tee inside the blazer and ha gelled up his hairs nicely and he had that signature bands of him in his hands along with the same musical tie which he gifted Nandini. He started to feel her presence and he hid himself so that she doesn't find him. She step out of car to find her legs on the rose petals and as soon as started walking white roses were showered on her and she twirled herself and her smile was carefree that he felt his heart started beating again which did stop the moment she left from the bar and then his voice echoed bringing her out of trace, "arre Nandini sambhal ke you have wore heels and welcome to our house oh yaa I know why not red rose cause white is the color of our love remember please walk to the lawn I will join you there and by the way you looked more breath taking then I thot I will check that kohl on the back of your ear don't forget now you go there am waiting there" Nandini moved to the lawn and was surprised to see the decorations a lone tear rolled down her cheek and then, "uffo not again please wipe those tears it pierce my heart and yaa be comfortable to roam I will be there in a min and let me tell you that red lipstick is looking so sexy on you that I want to wipe it off right now with my lips, she bites her lower lip listening to him and your this action is not doing anything but creating a havoc inside me so don't do that" he completed his words and suddenly she heard him singing..
He started singing with intensity in his eyes and tears filled his eyes and he meant each word of the lyric
Another day
Without your smile
Another day just passes by
But now I know
How much it means
For you to stay
Right here with me
He reminisced the 3 months and tears flow down his cheeks..
The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
But it hurt so bad I can't take it any longer
He kneels in front of her.. And bow down his head
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you
Sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you
He hugs her and tighten the grip n she held him so close to prove him its okay now.. N he sings
A thousand miles between us now
It causes me to wonder how
Our love tonight remains so strong
It makes our risk right all along

The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
But it hurt so bad I can't take it any longer

I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you
Sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you
He sings with so much love and truth that can be witnessed by neone..
Things can come and go I know but
Baby I believe
Something's burning strong between us
Makes it clear to me

I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you
Sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you

As he completed singing he her to the sitting area under the tent and ask her to sit with him. He arranged a table and placed in between them and got a chocolate cake in front of her which was her favorite and asked her to cut the cake by blowing the candle making a wish on which she answered, "my wish is seating in front of me mujhe aur kya chahiye I don't want anything". He was touched by her words and asked her to cut the cake and she did that but something stroked the knife and she took it in her hand to find a beautiful ring.


"Nandini I know I am not that good for you nor I deserve you I do a lot of mistakes and I have failed you but can you please forgive me for all this and be mine forever. I promise to love you till the end of my life I promise you to never leave your side I promise you to never pull this stupid stunts again I promise you we will fight together but for that can you give me a second chance. WILL YOU LIVE WITH THIS MONSTER FOREVER? WILL YOU GET TORTURED BY ME FOREVER? WILL YOU ALLOW ME TO LOVE YOU FOREVER? WILL YOU BE THE DAUGHTER OF MY FATHER AS HE ALWAYS LOVED YOU THOUGH I HID IT FROM YOU? WILL YOU HAVE THE PATIENCE TO TOLERATE ME ENTIRE MY LIFE? WILL YOU BE RIGHT NEXT TO ME TO GUIDE ME WHEN I CHOSE I WRONG PATH? WILL YOU CATCH ME WHEN I FALL? WILL YOU ALWAYS SHINE FOR ME HUMESHA? WILL YOU BE THE MOTHER OF OUR KIDS NANDINI MURTHY? WIL YOU MARRY ME MISS NANDINI MURTHY?" said Manik leaving a baffled Nandini and almost teary Nandini. All she did was whispering a "yes" and this made Manik go mad he took the ring from his hand and was about to slid in her hand but she stopped him. Manik was stunned on her act when she said, "yes I will marry you, I will be the mother of our kids but Manik this has time. Before I slip this ring on my finger I got to be sure you won't leave me again if there comes a part to chose. Manik your love is all I got so please don't hide things from me share with me the problems. I promise I will be next to you forever but for that you need to trust us Manik. Have faith on us I don't know why you always chose the path of getting apart Manik that is not a solution that makes us suffer more. Why you can't have faith on us?" asked Nandini. "MY BELIEF IN LOVE IS FRAGILE", Said Manik to which she replied, "Exactly Manik but y? I promise to be with you forever but promise me you will help me to make your belief on love stronger. You will never leave me you will share with me everything and we will fight it together promise me" "I promise Nandini", he replied. This Nandini saw the belief in his eyes and she knew now he will never leave her side she gave her hand in his gesturing him that now he is ready. He slides the ring in her finger and kissed the ring and then kissed her softly and she saw fireflies. He took her to the lawn and gave her a Chinese lantern and said, "it is said if couple lit it together and send it in air their love always shine", she took it and both lit it together and let it go in air but what was next in the sky made her go mad. Soon the sky got covered with millions of lanterns and she jumped with joy and hugged Manik for making her birthday beautiful. Manik went on his knees, "happy birthday Nandini and m sorry", he was about to complete when his lips were sealed with hers as she dint wanted him to apologize more. She wanted to feel every inch of his and to give herself to him... She gestured him to go somewhere and he took her to pool and seeing the sight..
"This are like millions of fireflies everywhere this can't be more bful manik", she praised him.. And then...

Precap:
Keep guessing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very beautiful update.
Loved all the surprises.
I liked their conversation before he slide the ring the promise to stay together hamesha.n also her talks with her aiyyappa n appa abt manik n their love.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow very nice update nice gifts and its really a pure bliss to watch the Mana love scenes... is the marriage on cards soon... so daddy Malhotra is going to come in next chapter or not... waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arey it's awesome yaar..beautiful the way he gift surprise one by one.. It's super.. If i m in the place of Nandini.. I'll definitely go mad.. But beech main Kyun rok di?? Kitna maza aarahe the pardne main.. Ufff... 😕 but it's really awesome.. I m just in love with that diamond ring.. It's really beautiful!! 😳
Ab plzz continue jaldi plzz .. Eagerly waiting for it..
Anyways thx for pm.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fab update
Loved manan conversation
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please make the next one sensuously hot! MaNan are perfect like this! <333
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohhh god after that day u r so into this line


MY BELIEF IN LOVE IS FRAGILE


wonderful update... splendid...

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Posted: 10 years ago
😳😳Brilliant👏👏
Today u taught me a very big leeson of lyf🤗😳
Never be away from ur lovd ones..jo tum unke saath reh ke kr skte ho woh der reh ke nhi kr skte😳😳👏...logo se door jaane se unhi tumhari importance nhi pata chalti but unke paas rehne unki care krne se pata chalti h 👏😳<3
Nandini's talk to her aaiyappa was written so well...cud actually connect wid her😳😳...brilliant👏
After dis update m so more in luv wid dis story...u wrote nandu's part so beautifulyy😉
Log wahi dekh rhe the jo manik unhe dikha rha tha ..even fab4 ..but nandu was d one jisne manik ke baare mein socha..how he must be feeling😳😳...dis is wat true nd pure luv is👏😳
Hatts off to u..for imagining so deep..feeling every emotion nd den presenting it so well 👏😳👏
D bday surprise was so good...from d dress to every accessory to d setup...it was just wow...nw manik will never leave nandu😳
Luvd d update very much❤️
Always keep writing😊

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