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Hi Kutties...😊

Here goes the next part.
After this one there won't be regular updates 😳
Not proofread
Ignore typos and errors.

MATURE CONTENT AHEAD so weak buddies READ AT YOUR RISK 😈

enjoy reading 🤗


Chapter-20

SOMETHING SHOULD NOT BE TOLD



"Main darvaza todunga...kholo Lax...Ish...ita..."

(I'll break the door...open Lax...Ish...ita...)


Raman said nervously pushing the door. The door opened easily surprising him. He couldn't believe that she opened it silently without letting him know.


He remained at the passage looking at her form. She was on the middle of the bed burying her head in between her knees in a sitting position hugging her legs. He locked the door behind him and walked to her. She didn't looked up at him but ignored him royally making him getting naughty.


He sat beside her and touched her shoulder to shake her. She shrugged it of angrily and got out of the bed. He didn't pester her more. She looked at him spitting fury which he found so cute. He tried to get cosy with her but she pushed him by his chest and said in a dangerous tone, "It was a one night stand right? Toh ab kyun aya mere paas ? Mujhe apko nahin dekhna. Voh...uskeliye...koyi aur aurat ke paas jaana..."

(Then why have you been here? I don't want to see you. Go to some other woman for it)


He very well knew it is not genuine. The words are fake but the anger was not. But cajoling his madrasan was so easy and entertaining for him. He moved close to her and touched her waist with his milky hand. She clinched her fist to suppress a moan. He softly pulled her closer. She couldn't help but hug him tight crying her heart out.


"Ab kyun aya ap?"

(Why you come now?)


He replied while caressing her hair, "Mujhe sorry bolna dha...I shouldn't have done this..."

(I wanted to say sorry)


She tightened her grip around his neck while saying, "Agar yeh ap shaadi se pehale kar deti toh main mar jaati Raman...main ek pal bhi zinda nahin rehti. Mujhe pata dha ap...aise hi react karoge...mujhe darr dhi...isiliye kal nahin bola..."

(If you have did it before marriage I would have died. I wouldn't have lived for a moment. I knew that you'll react this way. That's why I didn't say it yesterday)


"Shush...it is OK. Main bhi over react kiya dha."
(I did overreact) He said lovingly making her sit on his lap. She cuddled like a baby while he brought her closer.


"Mujhe kuch poochna hai tujhse..." He said nevously.

(I want to ask you something)


"Hmm...?" she hummed quizzically.


"Tum...voh...Abhi...Abhi se pyar karte ho?" He asked in a shaking voice.

(You...that... Abhi... Do you love Abhi?)


He was scared. Scared if what she told him that night that she "loves Mani" is true. She never said that she loves him ever before...and till now. He was scared if it is just a physical attraction. For the first time in his life, he wanted to hear that whatever transpired between them was not some sexual yearning but something more.


"Ap aise kyun poocha?" She asked confused.

(Why did you asked like that?)


"Voh..tum...tumne hi toh...kaha dha...us raat...ki tum Mani se..." He stammerd not being able to complete his words.

(That... You...you're the one who said that...that night...that you...)


She cupped his face and said naughtily, "Voh Ravan ko gussa karne keliye kaha dha"

(I said to make Ravan angry)


He pushed her on the bed and rolled over her. She touched his chest with her hands not to let him touch her bosom.


"Ravan tab bhi gussa dhe...ab toh bahut gussa hun..." He said biting his lower lip gesturing her hands.

(Ravan was angry then and now also)


"Ravan ko gussa hone dona..." She said playfully but darting her eyes blushingly from him.

(Let Ravan get angry)


"Aise gussa mat karona...Ravan ko acha nahin lagta..." He grizzled.

(Don't make angry. Ravan doesn't like it...)


"Toh kya kya acha nahin lagta Ravan ko...?" She asked while pressing her hands on his chest to keep up the distance.

(Then what else does Ravan dislikes?)


"Ab Ravan ko yeh haathon bilkul acha nahin lagta...hatao nah..." He pouted while caressing her cheek.

(Now Ravan doesn't like these hands. Move it)


Her lips curved quivering under his gaze and eyes moistened in the heat coursed in her entire body. He looked at her expecting her to move her hands. She was confused. Confused if she should smile or breathe. She couldn't do both at a time under his spell.


He could see her confusion. He wanted to give her some time. He had already rushed and messed everything between them. But it is time to take their relationship slowly to make it more powerful. He needed her to trust him. He have to do a lot to win her trust...!


When he prepared himself to move out from above her, he felt a softness touching his chest. He closed his eyes feeling her spongy bosom touching his taut muscles. He couldn't believe that she does everything as his wish. But what had he done to her ! Used her to fulfill his wishes. Now it is payback time. He should treat her the same way she does. She was inviting him wholeheartedly... Rightfully... Making him beam in happiness.


He kissed her forehead and mumbled an I Love You against it. She hummed and hugged him tight. Burying his head in the crook of her neck, he kissed her senseless while letting his hands travel all over her body. She pushed him and rolled over stopping him from doing anything further.


He looked at her messed up look. How easily he made her flushed and red like strawberry. But she stopped her to know something. She very well know he is in dilemma of whether to ask her or not. He was finding difficulty in asking her something. She looked at his eyes intensely.


"Kya poochna hai ab?" She asked while panting.

(What you want to ask now?)


"Kuch to nahin" He said while unpinning her saree pallu.

(Nothing)


"Jhoot..."(lie) She crinckled her eyebrows while he made her lay on the bed.


He came above her to rain kisses on her neckline while his hands stroked her belly in sync to his lips.


"Haan...jhoot..."(yes lie) he mumbled while kneading her bosom. She moaned and voiced to say his heart out.


"Tum...mujhse pyar...karte ho?" He asked while unhooking her blouse.

(Do you love me?)


She was confused. She doesn't know the answer clearly the way he doesn't. He always adds a "maybe" when it comes to love. But now he opened up truly to her. Still, she is not sure whether she loves him or not. She doesn't know if it is love. She do want to be with him, only him. She want him to be hers. She had said that she loves him to Mihika in the fit of the moment. However, she is tensed about his feelings hearing her obvious reply.


He felt her body stiffening under him. He was playing with her orbs while she was in a world of questions. It was the pain of his teeth sinking in her bosom that broke her trance. She found him glaring at her for making her body rigid.


"Kya hua?" (What happened) He asked coming upward to face her.


She caressed his bare chest and blew some feathery kisses asking, "What you feel. Main apse pyar karte hai yaa nahin...?"

(Do I love you or not?)


He smiled lightly enjoying her caresses and replied, "I feel you love me so much. No one did this to me this way other than Shagun..."


TO BE CONTINUED...

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
UPDATED PART 20
ENJOY READING 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

Res...
Btw mdg ka kya hua...
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To sare mu clear ho gyi...tumne fir abhi ko acha kar diya 😆...I should have expected it...Waiting for mihika to be jiju's fav...I know tu yeh bhi kar sakti h...

But ab ishu ka kya hoga...raman ne jyada nhi bol diya...hope she is not too angry...still shagun curse has not came...thank god kam nautankii thi...

Tujhe jo karna h kar...main nhi mangti agli update...
Jaa jile apni zindagiii...😆


Toh mujhe baksh diya abha be meri zindagi 🤣
Lekin darling I've updated the next part..
Read it
Waiting for your reply 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just one...just one story where I thought there was no Shagun 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishu27

Hi gayu, superb da. Thidirnu oru twist. Sema twist darling.. Ayyo i am loving it. Thank god it was a dream. Now ishra should patch up pls..


Thanks akka 😳
Do read the 20th part also...
Waiting for your reply 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Divancraze

Just one...just one story where I thought there was no Shagun😭


FYI, this story was started with Shagun...
How can I give her a guest appearance 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
phir se shagun!!!!!!!!😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh...maine baksha or tune update dedi 😆... 🤣

So tum shagun ko le aayi...yaay...since she was alerady with someone so I am not fearing...but expecting twist...kyunki ishu still have not voiced out I luv u...

I think b kuch hoga ...like dhamaka types...

Excited...

Jab marzii aye tab diyo... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

Ohhh...maine baksha or tune update dedi 😆... 🤣

So tum shagun ko le aayi...yaay...since she was alerady with someone so I am not fearing...but expecting twist...kyunki ishu still have not voiced out I luv u...

I think b kuch hoga ...like dhamaka types...

Excited...

Jab marzii aye tab diyo... 😆


Is it abha saying...
Or am I dreaming...
So I can update this one whenever I want 😉
Thank you ji 😆
Coming to Shagun...
There won't be her entry...
It's just a slip of tongue...
But can't say that there won't be any drama 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar Shagun ko laneki kya jarurat thi??? Abi abi to in dono ke beech sab kuch teek hua Phir se shagun??? Ab Ishita kya karegi?? Tum hame chein de rehane nahi dena chahti na??? So evil u r aur ab to regular update bhi nahi de Rahi ho hamara kya hoga???

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