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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
too short
geet lying in maans lap
sanjana laughing at her
maan took both back 2 home
where is geet mom
what geets dad did to her
n y he asked to forgive their mom
n maans way of asking date with geet
lolz..she is confused is it dream or real
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Posted: 10 years ago
Family time...every father is a daughter's superhero
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very sweet update. Waiting to know about maan's past. Loving maneet's moment.update soon plsss
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 14 ...
Awesome... Superb ...
Thanks for updating..
Continue soon..
what happened to Riya handa ...
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call me
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As I promised..i will be active... so here is the next update

But before this update.. I want u all to help me..

Guys Last week we had celebrated HUM TUM ANNIVERSARY

The thread was initiated by LAKSHMI , PRIYA di

But dunno y... I haven't seen many readers responding to that thread...

Guys a lot of hardwork..have been put up there... Plz at least visit the thread...

The sole reason of making the thread was...to awaken the readers of GF..

Plz...support them...

I want to req all my readers...to visit the thread...please guys !!

CHAPTER 15- DATE???????????

I mentally smacked myself shook my head...before strolling inside...

My next few days were heavenly... It was like a beautiful dream I always dreamt of.. Me sanjana...and dad.. I did miss mumma..and I guess everyone did but none uttered a word..because we had to keep our promise to dad.

Me sanjana and dad the three musketeers..were on roll. We went to parks to movies... all of a sudden we had...so many moments to live..

Despite o all the fun we had at night...when we sat for dinner... I could see dad's sad eyes looking at the vacant spot next to his..

I swallowed my lump not able to see him... but dad dint once let me ask him..whats wrong.. he just assured me..that everything is fine... many times I thought to ask him about mom's whereabouts.. But he didn't answer him and wisely changed the topic...

And perhaps later I decided to quit.and spent my quality time with sanjana and dad.

Apart from this...maan was missing too... after that day... I did not see him...Like he had disappeared..completely gone... In mornings... I used to peep from my balcony...But KM was deserted.. I knew dadi wasn't there.. But even maan wasn't been seen..

Sanjana kept teasing me...on my craziness... I had turned crazy.. I groaned at myself...urging my stupid heart to control...

Finally Friday arrived...

Dad was out for some work...and I was feeding my sister...palak soup...which hated..

" blahhh its soo bland I cant have more geet.." sanjana uttered making a face..

" sorry siss u got no choice...doc recommended u to have it " I said chuckling...and stuffed a spoonful of soup in her mouth...

" that's like a good girl..." I kissed her cheek..and stood to leave...

As I kept the bowl in kitchen..i heard the bell rang...

Knotting my brows..i dragged myself..to the door...and opened it..

" huuuh??" I uttered...finding no one...outside...

I stepped outside...but found no one... and then my eyes fell at the doorstep..

My eyes widened...in awe...watching white roses...placed with some white lilys..

I smiled..and picked them up..

" sanjana..look what have we got.." I smelled the flowers..oh they were goregeous..

"geet there is a letter in there..' sanjana pointed out... Since I was lost in the flowers..

I picked up the letter... and froze...

" Be ready..ill pick u up at 7...

Maan"

My eyes popped out and jaw dropped... oh crap it wasn't a dream..i said to myself..

" what are u staring at...??" sanjana...asked me.. But I was numbed...

" show me..geeet.." she grabbed the letter...from me.. " sanjanaaa...wait.." I bit my lip and turned..crimson...as she read the letter...

" wohooo..a date..with maan...ah ha..." she smirked...and giggled...

I blushed..lowering my head... Gosh I didn't knw he actually wanted me to go on a date with me...

" geeettt stop daydreaming at get ready..u just haave half n hour..." sanjana...yelled...at me...

" oh..my...crappp..." I quickly..ran upstairs...But paused..

" sanjana...I can go...na??' I asked her meekly... She was my elder sis.. I needed her permission..

Sanjana..pretended to think...and then smiled.. " offcourse u can go..."

I smiled..brightly..and ran ..

******

" I hope its not too much..." I chewed my lip..standing outside... my hpuse..waiting for maan..

God knws..what came over my mind..that I decided to wear this... anarkali...

This anarkali just popped..up in my mind...and I decided to go with it..


I had left my hair open...and just applied..a light stroke of kohl...and coloured my lips..

" i hope he likes...it...i hope..."

" geet..this is not a typical...date..okay..."

I taunted myself... But i knew.. i my heart or my mind wont buy it... i was soo elated...with just the word DATE


I was startled out of my thoughts...with a loud screech sound of car...

My heart began thudding..so loud...and my hands turned cold... as he stepped out of the car... He was wearing..black..see through shirt... and blazer...which made him look..extremely Hot...and sexy...

My mind...recalled the first time..i saw maan... I was standing at the same place watering myself... and he was...zooming out of the car..

I smiled...cheekily..thinking of what he had said...to me then..

" umm..someone's very excited...getting naughty thoughts??" his voice surprised me..making me...shudder...

My cheeks warmed..up and then I realized what he said..

" no.. i.. i.. dint think of anything like that.." I replied...almost inaudibly..tucking my hair..

Maan smirked...at me...and gazed me...in such a way..that I could not hold it...and looked away..

"lets go...geet..." he said in his deep...voice..stepping close to me... I looked up at him...finding him so close...and kept looking at me..

This time..his gaze was soft...he was smiling...He gestured me..to look down..and I did knotting my brows..

I smiled..a bit ...observing his hand held out for me...

Blushingly I..placed...my hand..in his...and he held them...

" I promise..to behave .like a totally gentlemen geet..." he said ever so sensuously...in my ears...as he drew me close...

His words...stirred anxiety my whole body...I was freaking excited, nervous, scared, happy all at the same time...

Okay guys so... this was it..

Next two parts will excusilevly be just their date..

So.. do comment and let me knw.. if u r okay with this...

Because I promise.. this date session..wont be typical one :P :P

dont forget to visit the HUM TUM ANNIVERSARY THREAD

here is the link


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4416833/hum-tum-anniv-celebrations

Love

sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update geet sanjana n their dad spending their time together with lots of masti but they also missing their mom especially her dad no matter what she is his wife liked that geet n sanjana became so close geet got her sis back umm their date geet is very excited nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahh... Thank u for the update... But please update the next part soon.. Will comment later
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Posted: 10 years ago



hii sabina how r u 😃

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