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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mskfan

Lovely part .
maan is jealous ,
oye hoye he confessed tht he loves her ;)



LIKE HER DEAR
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PART 15

Both sited on bench, her head placed on his shoulder, her finger entangles with him...

Geet : maan

Maan : hmm

Geet : you like me

Maan : geet abhi toh bola tha

I like you

Geet : par mujhe toh lagta tha

You hate me

.

Maan : wo kyun

Geet : Miss khurana

Ya geetanjali

Geet toh bulate nhi the shi se

Why

Maan : wo

Geet : am listening

Bolo

Maan : geet why you talking about past

Jo bit gya

So bit gya

Geet : saaf- saaf bolo

Batana nhi chahte

.

Maan : geet

I want to clear some thing

I like you

But now am not ready for any commitment...

I hope you understand

.

Before she says, her phone buzzed...

Geet : oh no

How I forget

.

She picks the call and start saying sorry

Sorry

Sorry

Big wala sorry

Maan : geet

Geet : b

She stops in mid and takes name of person...

Romy sorry kaha toh maine

Raman ji jyada gussa toh nhi hai na

Romy : raman ji

Tu thik hai na

Bhai ko tu kbse

Geet : romy am coming in two minutes

.

Maan bye

He held her wrist and stops her...

Maan : tum khi nhi jaa rhi ho

.

I not like anyone come near to you

Tumhe ye simple si baat smjh nhi aati

Geet : wo aapki problem hai

Meri nhi

Maan : geett

She removed his hand, but this time maan pull her by waist and slammed lips on her ...start kissing her passionately...

She pushed him & pointed finger towards him...

Mr. Maan singh khurana

Never try to come close to me without my will

You have no right on me

.

Maan : geet

.

Geet : listen me first

Yes we like each other

Isse aapko koi haq nhi mil jaata hai

I hope you get my point

Jb aap commitment ke liye ready ho

Tb baat krna mujhse

Now am leaving

Some close one waiting for me

*********

Two days passed, she talks with him only on officially matter, no another talk...

Geet : my work is overed

Am going

Maan : geet listen me

Geet : sir

Maine saara work complete kr diya hai

Kuch rh gya hai

Maan : why you behaving like that

Try to understand my point of view

Geet : aapne try kiya

Mujhe smjhne ka

.

What you want

Mein aapke sath rahu

Aapke pass rahu

Par kis haq se

Kya rishta hai humara

Boss - secretary

Aur ye society kya kahengi mujhe

.

Maan : geet friends

He forward own hand towards her...

Mujhse dosti karongi

Geet : do din laga diye ye khehne mein

Maan : kya karu

Mujhe baat der se smjh aati hai na

So you accepted my friendship

Geet : sochungi

Kal parso kuch kahungi

Maan : geet

Geet : maan

*******

Geet : ye dinner kis khushi mein

Maan : humari dosti ki khushi mein

Geet : not bad

Good going

Maan : geet dosti se better kuch nhi ho sakta

Ek dusre ko smjhne ke liye

Isse hume waqt bhi mil jaayenga

Geet : hmm

Bs budde hone se phle smjh jaana

Mein itna jyada wait nhi kr sakti hu

Maan : geet

Tum bhi na

Geet : am right Mr. khurana

Aap tortoise ki baati chalte ho

Maan : don't forget miss geet

Last mein tortoise hi jita tha

.

.

Piya : mom chachu

Nandini : maan yaha kya kr raha hai

Karan usne toh tumse kaha tha

Uski koi meeting hai

Isliye wo hum sbke sath dinner pe nhi aa sakta

Karan : kaha toh yhi tha nandini

Nandini : lagta hai unki life mein koi special aa gyi hai

Karan : am so angry on him

Wo geet ke alawa kaise kissi aur ke sath

Nandini : karan

Humare hath mein kuch nhi hai

Maan ki life hai

Hum usse force nhi kr sakte

Aur waise bhi us baat ko ab ek saal hone wala hai

Piya : mom

Mujhe chachu ke pass jaana hai

Nandini : nhi beta

Wo apne friends ke sath hai na

Ase disturb nhi krte

Piya : mom mein bs unse milungi

Aur fir wapas yaha aapke pass aa jaayungi

Nandini : par

Karan : jaane do usse

Jaayo beta

Jaldi aana

.

Aapke daadu aur daadi bs aate honge

************

Piya : chachu

Maan : princess

He picks and takes her in lap...

Aap yaha

Piya : chachu aap humare sath khana kyun nhi kha rhe

Maan : princess

Meet my new friend

Geet

Piya turn and happy to see her...

Piya : chachiii

Maan : chachii

Piya : chachu mujhe niche utaro

Maan : hmm

Piya go to near geet...

Piya : chachi piya gussa aapse

Maan : piya aap inhe chachi kyun kh rhe ho

Geet : maan piya choti bachi hai

Usne hume sath dekha

Bs isliye

Piya : par cha

Geet : piya beta

Aapke mom dad

Wait kr rhe honge na

Piya : par mujhe aapke pass rhehna hai

Pata hai

Mom mujhe choco bhi nhi deti

Geet : mein bhabhi se kahungi

.

(Think- geet ye tune kya kh diya)

Ab aap jaayo unke pass

Piya : nhi

Aap chalo

Maan : geet hum hi chalte hai

***********

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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
4 july

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Maan geet became friends
Piya calling geet chachi maan confused
Nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part priya.
maan not ready for commitment bt don't want to let her go away from her.
as started to go he became restless nd hold her n kissed her.
geet ignoring him bt maan getting restless with her cold behaviour.
he offered to get became frnds first n it give time to them .
both agreed nd hving dinner together.
nandini n karan misunderstnd that maan hv any other girl in his life.
piya is ssooo cute .
really love piya n maneet convo.
eager to read nxt part.
thnx for pm dear.

nd update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow great update
Maan ko sach pata chalega kya ab?
jaldi se next update do
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's amazing. Maan told geet that he is not ready any commitment . although geet felt bad but she didn't show it. She talked with romi casually and with addressing him bhai which made maan jalealous. IMG he kissed geet forcibly. I think what geet did and warned him is right. When he doesn't want to do any commitment that from which right he is intimating with her. Pia recognized geet. Will karan and nandini disclose the truth. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice story, read all parts bravo Geet she is here to an her husbands love. As usual our maan is being dumb ass rejected his wife and marriage with her. Good to see Geet progressed a lot with the tortoise pace of Maan. I hope Karan and nandini will be shocked once they see geet with maan.
Waiting to for next update

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