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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: gill123

sab log geet ko blackmail kar rahe hai hope. maan jaldhi hi thik ho jaye



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteeagle65

lovely update how can geet leave her maan geet father so selfish he cant see in which geet happiness hope maan become well



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: samidsamid

Geet is in dillemma now...what will happen with hr...hope maan will bbe soon reovered...


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Posted: 8 years ago





Part 5

Maan please wake up

I need you

.

Maan please stop all this

Mein kissi aur ke bare mein kaise scoh sakti hu

.

She tries to wake up him, but as usual him not responding...

              **********

One week passed, and she waiting any magic happen, and this engagement stop...in her hand nothing, she not lose maan or nor her parents..How any girl chooses one life ... For her both relations are most important...if one is heart another is heartbeat... How she choose...

Shilpa came in room and break her thoughts...

Shilpa : geet you ready

Looking beautiful

.

Abhi hume chalna chaiye

Shahid bs puchne wala hai

Geet : tum sb jaayo

Mein khud aa jaayungi

Shilpa : par

Geet : I said go

Shilpa : ok

             ***********

She sat in cars and thinks about own life...

How mostly all one playing her life, her emotions...and she have no option actually...

 

fawad isse dress aur card bej dena

.

ye aayi toh thik hai 

.

nhi toh isse kh dena

.

mere marne pe bhi mt aaye 

 

                ***********

Amjhad : shilpa geet kaha hai

Shilpa : wo bs aa rhi hai

Amjhad : dekh liya sabhana

Is ladki ne hume toh apna dushman smjh  rakha hai

Hum toh jo kr rhe hai

Jaise aapne liye kr rhe hai

Shilpa : uncle

Geet aa rhi hai

Sabhana : hmm

Amjhad aap aaiye mere sath

              *********

Sabhana : amjhad

Aap shant rhiye please

Geet aati hi hongi

Amjhad : sabhana

Kya karu mein

Mujhe bhut darr lagta hai apni beti ke liye

Kaise wo akele apni puri zindagi bitayengi

Aaj hum hai

Savitri ji hai

Par kal hum sb nhi honge

Aur rhi fawad, zaira, karan , shilpa, asad, jenny

Ki baat

Wo bhi kb tak rahenge

Aange unki family badengi

Wo apni zindagi mein busy ho jaayenge

Rh jaayengi toh akeli humari beti

Sabhana : amjhad mein smjhti hu aapki fikr

Geet ne HA kaha hai na

Wo aayengi

  .

Lo aa gyi

.

But her family shocked to see her with him...

.

Amjhad : why he take her here

Sabhana : hum baat krte hai geet se

               *********

Amjhad : geet isse yaha lane ki kya jaroorat thi

Tumhari aaj shahid se saghai hai

Uska pariwaar kya sochenga

Geet : abbu

Maan mere pati hai

Jaha mein jaayungi

Ye bhi mere sath jaayenge

Amjhad : geett

Geet : jaldi saghai khatam krte hai

Fir mujhe ghar bhi jaana hai

.

Let's go maan

            ***********

Hello shahid

I want to say something

Shahid : bolo geet

Geet : tum mujhe shaadi krna chahte ho

Shahid : tum nhi chahti

Geet : mere chahat mere bass mein kaha hai

Yaha toh apno ne hi hume katputali smjh rakha hai

Aur ko kya kahe

Shahid : geet of you

Geet : in sb baato ko chodo

Siddhe kaam ki baat krte hai

.

Shahid : bolo

Geet : you very well known

I love maan

But after this I said yes for this engagement

Mein tumhe kbhi wo pyaar nhi de sakti

And

Shahid : and

Geet : after our marriage

Maan aur sia bhi mere sath rahenge

.

Amjhad : geettt

Bs

Ek aur sbd nhi

Shahid : uncle bolne dijiye isse

Geet I have no problem

.

But I have some condition too

.

Maan aur sia humare sath rahenge par

Geet : par

Shahid : par ye

Jb mein ghar pe aayu

I want your full attention

Uske baad hum saara time sath spend karenge

No maan

No sia

Un dono ki dekh bal ke liye

Nurse aur maid hongi

Geet : mein ase kaise

Shahid : geet am your would be hubby

And u want your boy friend or his child

Stay with us

I agree simply

I understand your feeling

Now your turn

Mein bhi chahunga na

Tum kuc h waqt mere sath bitayo

Mein tumse bs whi maang raha hu

Waise bhi baki ka time tum un dono ke sath hi hongi

.

Let's exchange the rings...

                 ************

Both exchange the rings...

But, both think on same topic...

Geet (think) maine ye sb isliye kha

Taki shahid mna krde

But he says yes

Her helpless tears fall from eyes...

Shahid (think) geet I know

Tumne ye sb kyun kaha

But what I say

I want you beside me

One time I lost you, but not now...

.

.


      But in this between, no one notice maan... his helpless, his tear, but he can't do anything...

 

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb part
maan in tears ðŸ˜­ðŸ˜­
Edited by heemasomani - 8 years ago
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In sab me ye paapi samaj ya destiny ka koi dosh nahi hai mere pyare friends!!
Ye sab writer ka kiya dharaya hai😡

Kos na hai tho writer ko koso

Mera poor maan n uski dukhti atma😭

Waiting for the next! 
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg..sagayi hogayi
maan in tears ..
matlab he is recovering
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsm updt...borth r in gr8 pain...maan is helpless nt able to express his pain...