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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Neetu u said u will take few minutes but u took one hour

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: mamtasingla
jaldi update kr neetu

bs 5 min more

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Monucute

bs 5 min more

ok
last 5 min😡😡😡

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

...Chapter - 37...

Jodha
got scared the
devil in him was
awake now...
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Arth was in a dilemma... He had never felt so much strongly for a girl... He was a practical guy who doesn't belive in things like love...

But he never know that god had made someone who can make him fall of herself... She has affected him like no one has ever done...

Jo i don't know how when where why but yes one thing i know that i had badly fallen for you and will make you mine soon... Though you are married but i will not let that jalal to snatch you away from me He thought and left for his house...

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Here each passing second was increasing the fear in her viens... His penetrating intense gaze, clenched jaw and dangerous proximity was terrifying and numbing her senses...

Tears were flowing from his eyes confusing jodha why he is crying? She has never seen him crying like this...Jalal tightly clutched her shoulders, seeing his blood shot eyes she tightly shut her eyes...

She can feel his hot breath travelling from her lips to cheek then to her ears... "where the hell you had gone? Huh?" he spoke in a low yet stern tone...

She shuddered as his lips made contact to her skin while speaking , his tears were soaking her shoulder... But before she can speak, she got trapped between him and the door...

Without giving her any chance of speaking, he started again...

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

"do you know meri kya halat hogayi thi? What i have felt when i didn't found you? I had searched every damn place of house but i couldn't found you... I was scared, hell damn scared for you... I would have died jodha if u had left me... Mai mar jata tumhare bina..." his tone got changed from anger to helplessness, with this broke down in front of her and came on his knees...

Tears broke their barrier in her eyes too... And trailed down her soft milky cheeks...

He is so broken and lost... I know he is lonely, he has nobody to said as his but me... He is really getting obssessed with me... He is looking like a vulnerable lost child... So afraid to loose me, he don't want me to go away frome me...

For the first time i can see love, want and concern in his eyes... He is just sobbing like a small kid from whom his favourite toy got snatched... I can't see this man like this, whatever he had done with me but i can't stop loving him she thought...

And she too got on her knees and took him in her warm embrace...

Jalal got the needed warmth and consolation in her arms... So he tightly clutched her almost crushing her in him... Both cried one for his insecurities and other for his pain forgetting her own pain...

After some hours of peace in each other embrace... Tears got dried eyes became puffy and red due to excessive crying and lack of sleep...
He is now also holding her near him, the iron grip didn't loosen a bit... His head was resting on her shoulder her chin on his head...

sunrays hit her eyes peeking through the big glass window announcing the arrival of morning...

"Jalal" jodha wishpered

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...
I'm here😆

finally 😆

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: Monucute

yep gayu

ok and where is precap?
i liked the update neetu👏👏👏
slowly jalal is turning into a lover😉
and i think jodha also started liking jalal
kabab m haddi arsh is playing his part
continue soon