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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 17

Sam takes Geet for a long drive so that Geet could come out of her day dreams and get to know more of the real world...

Sam wants her to understand that there is no Khrish in real life and maybe Geet's problem is that her over protective family shieled her too much from reality that she is completely ignorant of what's going on in around her for she is always comfortable within her fairy land with her Prince...

Sam has to get her interact more with real world, real people, people like MSK, what would have Geet done if she was in Sam's place, Geet all senti and emotional and MSK the living robot, Maan is no where near Geet's loving, caring, ever so gentle, protective, always there to save her from troubles, in short a larger than life super hero...

Wait wait...according to the books of these are the qualities of an ideal lover, there is not even a single trait of them in MSK and why the hell Sam fell in love with him?

Is it necessary that all childhood friendship should always end in love and later marriage...

Sam is here so confused after chatting with Geet, and now she is trying hard to fit MSK into the dreamy prince of her choice...but Sam never had the time or interest in dreamy prince and all...

All she knew is that MSK used to be the most sort after partner amongst the young ladies of her circle, be it family friends or her school and college friends...

They are jealous of Sam for she is MSK's buddy and she has the privilege to hang with him everywhere, Maan usually asks Sam to accompany him for the family functions that he oculd not avoid b'coz of Dadi's orders so that he can make a quick exit leaving Sam to take care of Dadi and being a psychiatrist Sam knows how to make the people believe that Maan was there with them all the while...

Sam inturn asks Maan to accompany her for all the parties she attends for she too needed a BF to look cool and also she could easily avoid other boys hitting on her, which she doesn't like much, with Maan around no one dares to near her...

Though Maan doesn't like the attentions he gets from the opposite sex he easily escapes for he has got Sam as his GF...you could say Sam is the reason that Maan didn't have the chance to hang out with other girls...he could have if he wanted to but by nature itself he is never bothered about girls, neither he had any interest in any girl nor he believed that a man needed a woman to survive...

That is generally people say that a woman is your better half, and your life is incomplete without a woman, you need that special person to make your life meaningful...Maan thinks otherwise, he sees this as a trick that women use from the time of Adam and Eve to beslave men who are superior and being the weaker sex women use men's weakness for women and make them as puppets in their hands...

As you know MSK has his own style of living and no one can ever command him...

As Sam is thinking about her love life our princess is back to her dreamland...

Geet is occupied by the thoughts of that day when Khrish actually saw Geet...

Khrish was angry with himself for he could have averted the accident had he been a little more alert...

Khrish then got out of his car and looked at the bike, it's a little damaged and the rider is also safe, he could see movements...luckily there was not much trouble as Khrish expected...

Khrish was afraid that he had committed a blunder, MSK never makes a mistake...but that day was an exception...he should not have driven the car...what if someone lost his life, Khrish could never forgive himself for that...

He was also in a way responsible for that accident and he was relieved that nothing serious happened to that bike rider too...

But his relief short lived for he saw a speeding truck nearing that girl and the driver seemed to be out of control...

Khrish reached out to the girl within a second and pulled her back in time...

She had a narrow escape but she fainted in his arms...

That's what Geet is known for, fainting in her prince's arms...

When Geet regained her concoius she was in the hospital and Khrish was standing beside her with a worried face waiting for her to open her eyes...

He was so happy that she is OK...

He leaned forward and asked her..."How are you my little angel?"

Yes, Geet looked too small and childish for she had just finished school and khrish might have mistaken her for a school girl, haina? That's why he called her little angel...

But Geet would have loved to hear him call her angel...

But that's not a matter for Geet knows that everything is fine for she has met her Khrish again, and now she nows it's all her babaji's wish that the two meet again...

Isn't babaji wishing to convey her some message...like she just heard a babaji telling her that she'll meet her humsafar soon at the mandir...

As Geet listened with seriously to him Annie made fun of her that she is too nave and she shouldn't take such things for real...

Geet: babaji, woh kaise hoga?

Babaji is stunned...none has ever asked a question back like this before...

Babaji: kya?

Geet: mein usse kaise pehchanoon?

Annie: seriously Geet, you have gone mad, now come on, we are getting late

Annie catches hold of Geet's hand and grags her out of that place...

Geet: Annie, rukho, mujhe babaji se baat karni hai

Annie: ha ha ha ha

Geet: kyun hasthi ho?

Annie: wahan dekho Geet

Geet turns back and finds the babaji running into the crowd...

Geet: babaji

Annie: no use Geet, ye sab humbak hai, don't believe in them

But still Geet wanted to believe that she will meet her Prince soon...

And she was right...there stood her Prince...staring at her with concerned eyes not even moving from that place for 2 hrs since they came to the hospital...

The doctors said that it's just the fear that she fainted and she is fine otherwise, she would wake up anytime and they just want to keep her under observation for that night in case there was any complications...

Khrish could have left and came back in the morning but he didn't...why?

Geet knows that it's all b'coz babaji wanted him to be there for her...haina?

Geet was thinking on this line when Khrish panicked once again seeing her not responding to his question...

He caught hold of her and shook her when she came back to her senses...

What's wrong with her? There is her khrish speaking with her for the first time and she couldn't even speak a word...she was awestruck...silly Geet...

Khrish: what happened Angel? Why can't you say something? Are you alright? Shall I call the Dr?

Geet loved the way he asked her with utmost concern and care...that's really her Khrish, her dreamy Prince she had always wished for...

Geet: I'm fine Khrish

Khrish: Khrish?

Geet: yeah...you are my Khrish, you just saved my life like khrish

Khrish laughed and nodded his head as if he too liked that name...

Khrish: and you are my Angel, my savior, ohhh you just saved me from killing someone, if not for you I might not have reacted that way, looking at this cute angel how could I let that truck hit you, I just had to don this Khrish avatar to save you, thank God for giving me all the powers to save you

Geet: thank you Khrish, friends?

Khrish was all smiling and relieved hearing that...

He hugged her and kissed her cheeks...

Khrish shook hands with her...: Friends

Geet: I love you Khrish

Khrish: I love you too Angel

Geet hugs him and he too ...

Khrish: thank God you are fine, I'm sorry Angel, it's all my mistake

Geet: but Khrish, why are you sorry? You just saved me

Khrish: I promise you it won't happen again

Geet: I'm hungry Khrish

Khrish: OK what do you want?

Geet: ice cream

Khrish: ice cream?

Khrish is surprised by her answer...

Khrish: you want ice cream?

Geet: kyun khrish? Won't you get me ice cream?

Khrish: but let's ask the sister what you should eat

Geet: but it's my hunger, I know better what my stomach wants

Geet places her hand on her tummy and looks at it and continues her conversation...

Geet: you want ice cream na? she speaks with her tummy...

Khrish couldn't stop admiring her cuteness...

After a pause...: dkeha, issko ice cream hi chahiye

Khrish: achcha?

Geet: haan, you ask for yourself

Khrish leans down, puts his ears on her tummy and pretends to listen...

Khrish: haan Angel, I can hear

Geet: toh ice cream lekhe aao

Khrish: par Angel, iss waqt ice cream nahi milega

Geet gets angry and starts crying like a baby...

Geet: ice cream ice cream ice cream


Part18

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
sam taking geet for outing
n geets way of despcreption about love
leaves sam to think
sis she or maan love each other
geet n her krish nice moments
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab update! well written! Sam takes Geet! Geet thinks abt Krish! update soon
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part 17 - seems she was dreaming about krish
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Part - 18

Geet keeps chanting ice cream ice cream...

Khrish tries to stop her but couldn't...

Khrish: no no Angel, stop, we are at the hospital

Geet doesn't listen...

Sister comes running hearing her...

Sister: no ice creams

Geet is frightened and she keeps staring the sister...

Sister says sternly... : only milk

Geet remains silent till the sister leaves and starts again: ice cream ice cream ice cream

Khrish shuts her mouth with his hand...ssshhh Angel, you are a good girl na?

Geet nods her head...

Khrish: good girls don't behave badly, haina?

Geet nods her head again...

Khrish: now listen, you stop this or the sister will come again

Geet is scared...she shakes her head...nooo

Khrish: my Angel is a good girl, she'll have milk mow and I'll get you ice cream in the morning, I promise

Geet: and Teddy bear too

Khrish: OK

Khrish smiles and gives the milk to her: come on Angel, have it

Geet makes faces looking at the plain milk...

Khrish: what happened?

Geet: I don't like my milk plain

Khrish: but Angel, this is what you should have now

Geet: no I don't want this

Geet shoves it away...

Khrish: now look at me

Khrish shows his abs...

Ohhh Geet is amazed ...

Khrish: see how strong I'm

Geet: hmmm

Khrish: do you want to be strong like me?

Geet: yes

Khrish: then you should drink milk

Geet: you like milk?

Geet asks as if milk is something so bad...

Khrish: yes I do

But even khrish doesn't like his milk...

Geet: then you have it first then I'll have it...

Khrish is embarrassed...he stares the glass of milk for a while and gathers his courage and acts to take a sip...yuck...but he pretends as if he loves it...

Geet: ohhh you are pretending

Khrish had to drink it...

Geet then drinks the rest...

Khrish: now, you take some rest, Gud night

Geet: gud night

Khrish also takes rest...

Khrish stayed with Geet till she left the hospital and promised to meet her often with her gifts...chocolates and Teddy...

Sam stops all of a sudden seeing that they have come a long way...

Then she turns to Geet...

Sam: Geet

Geet: hmm

She just thinks that it's her Khrish calling...

Sam: it's almost lunch tme, tumme kuch chahiye?

Bang comes the reply...

Geet: ice cream

Geet is stil thinking about her ice cream na?

Sam smiles looking at Geet's kiddish wishes...this is good, she can get it for her immediately but what about Khrish? That's the only problem with Geet, else she's such a citie pie that Sam loves her innocence and silly conversations...

Sam: toh chalo, let's have ice cream

Sam stops at a ice cream parlour...

Sam gets down and waits for Geet who is still dreaming...

Sam: Geeet, come on, let's go

Geet comes back to reality...

Geet: Sam, hum kahan hai?

Sam is shocked, how many time this girl will shoot this question at her?

Sam: Geet? you wanted ice cream na?

Geet: haan, par tumme kaise patha?

Sam: are you kidding? You just asked me na?

Geet realizes her mistake...: ohh haan

Geet gets out and joins Sam...

After having ice cream Sam asks Geet what they should do next...

Sam: ab kya?

Geet: I'm done, lets go

Sam: go home?

Geet: what? Khrish ko dhoodhna haina?

Sam: ab hum kahan se shuru karein?

Geet: how would I know, I'm new here

Sam: idea, kyun na mein tumme Mumbai dikhaoon, I mean if you like to

Geet is excited...it should be fun, and this way she can get to know Mumbai better and then she can easily look for her Khrish on her own next time without disturbing Sam...haina?

Sam and Geet Mumbai goomne chale jaathe...

Aaise hi Khrish ko bhi dhoondh sakthe haina?

They enjoy Mumbai's famous vada pau and Geet's favourite pani puri...

It's already 4'o clock...

Sam calls Maan...

Ab toh Maan ka gussa thoda tanda ho gaya hoga?

Maan: Saaam

Geet could hear his voice...it was that loud...

Sam: MK, tum abhi bhi gusse mein ho?

Maan: nahi toh, tum mere office mein aayi thi woh bhi mere absence mein. Aur tumne kissi pagal kid host ko naukri dedi, wah Sam wah... aur mein toh bahut kush hoon , ye toh achcha hua ki kam se kam Adi ne mujhe kabar karne ko socha tha, warna mujhe toh patha bhi nahi chaltha

Sam: ohhh, sorry MK, hum KC gaye aur Pinky se mille toh

Maan: tum uss pagal ko yahan kyun lekhe aayi thi?

Sam: MK?

Maan: achcha tum ab kahan ho?

Sam: hum juhu mein hai, pav bhaji kharahe hai, tumme lekhe aaoon kya?

Maan: juhu mein? OMG Sam tum teek toh haina? Aur sadak ka khana? I can't believe that you are a doctor

Sam: toh kya? Mein pani puri nahi kha sakthi?

Maan: kha sakthi ho,lekhin beach mein kya kar rahi ho?

Sam: mein Geet ko lekhe aayi hoon

Maan: Sam, sach mein tu pagal ho gayi ho, tum apna kaam chodke uss pagal ke saath goom rahi ho? What's wrong with you Sam?

Sam: MK , humme na tummari madat chahiye hai

Maan: ohh no, not again, just leave me alone, and listen carefuly, tum bhi uskke mamle se dhoor hi raho, just stay away from that stupid girl

Sam: tum madat nahi karoge?

Maan: kabhi nahi

Sam: teek hai, I don't need your help

Sam gets angry...

Maan: Saaam? Phone kadthi?

Maan ka gussa badthe jaatha...

Maan can't understand why Sam is after this Geet and how could she believe in some stupid girl's faltu stories?

Maan's logical mind immediately rejects Geet's so called Dreamy Prince story as rubbish and he is surprised that someone like Sam could buy this crap...

Maybe staying closer to Geet has made Sam too loose her mind...

Maan has to stop this non sense and put an end to this now itself before Sam gets into more trouble b'coz of this Geet...

Maan couldn't believe that Sam is out there with Geeet, searching for her BF?

What a stupid idea? Where on the world could they find someone who resides only that stupid girl's stupid brain?

Maan decides that he should talk to Sam about this before it is too late...


Part19

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Fabulous Update

Sam is thinking and trying to fit Maan as her prince but he indeed has his own style while Geet is again thinking about her Krish

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Sam thinking of maan n geet about krish
Will maan try to help sam
Eagerly waiting for Maaneet meeting
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hi lovely update! well written! Geet thinking abt Krish! Maan wonders y Sam is helping. Geet! he is upset! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
maan upest y sam helping that stupid girl
and her so called story

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Posted: 10 years ago
maan geet ka amna samna kab hoga...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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