FF~Oru Naal~ NOTE: Pg 19

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@Enigmatic_Charm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Chapter - 13

Days passed...and one fine day,the most expected moment of Karthik-Sukanya's life came!!!

~Register Office~

Vishnu: Dei machan...nee matum nalla ponna paathu love panni,ippo kalyanamum panni settle aaga pora.Apadiye enakum oru ponna paathu en life ah yum konjam set panni kuden da...

Karthik: Podanguuu...Itho paaru,iniku en life la mukiyamana naal,thevai illama en vaaya kilaradha.Purinjatha???

Vishnu: Purinjuthunga Sir!!!

Just then Sukanya entered draped in a simple blue saree,adorned with simple jewellery along with two of her friends.

Sukanya: Enna Karthik...apadi pakura?

Karthik: Nee ivlo azhaga irupa nu naan ninaikave illa d!

Sukanya: Oh apadiya??? Appo naan azhaga illa na enna vitutu poirupa la?

Karthik: Athu nadakave nadakathu!

They shared a cute smile.

Vishnu: Unga romance lam apram ah panunga pa,nalla neram poguthu la...

Karthik: Yen da??? Iru varom...

He turns to face Sukanya,and lends his hands.She takes it and both walk together hand in hand.

Sir: Enna pa,rendu perum paaka padikira pasanga maari irukinga??? Avasarapatu mudivu edukathinga!

Karthik: Sir! Athellam engaluku theriyum!Time aaguthu...

Sir: Seri...seri...Maalaiya maathikongo!

They exchange the garlands and finally Karthik ties the knot with Sukunya!

Karthik(whispers in her ears): Congrats Mrs. Karthik!

Sukunya just smiled and a lone tear of happiness escaped from her eyes.

Sir: Inthaga pa ithula sign panunga.

They both signed followed by hearty wishes from their friends.

Vishnu: Sukunya,payan romba apaavi,neenga thaan avana kan kalangama paathukanum!

Sukunya: Kavala padathinga Vishnu,unga friend ah paathuka vendiyathu en porupu!

Karthik: Hello!!! Enna unga rendu per time pass ku naan thaan kidaichena???Adinguuu...

They share a good laugh....

They were interrupted by the calling bell.

Karthik: Vaanga doctor!

Doc: Enna achu karthik?

Karthik: Therla doctor,konja naalave amma ku romba mudila.

Doc: Seri bayapudatha naan paathukuren.

All of them go to Rani ma's room and the doctor inquires about her condition and starts to check her.

Karthik: Raji...nee kelambu...unaku late aaguthu la

Raji: Illa paravala...naan iruken

Karthik: Illa raji...nee po...enaku inga vela iruku...nalaiku paapom

Raji: Ok! Bye!

Karthik: Paathu po!Bye!

Raji starts moving and before stepping out she gives a last glance to karthik who busily watches the doctor.

~Raji's house~

Raji on phone...

Shiva: Enna Raji solra? Ennala nambave mudila

Raji: Ennalayum thaan...

Shiva: Aama antha Sukunya ku enna acham?

Raji: Therila...athukulla thaan doctor vandhutare

Shiva: Seri...innoru naal pesipaaru

Raji: Innoru naal ah? Enaku itha pathi Karthik ta pesave ennamo maari iruku.Pavam intha vayasula avanukulla evlo kashtam???

Shiva: Ama Raji...karthik romba nalla aalu,avaruku poi ipadi oru kashtam!Seri vidu...nee itha pathi yosichu night full ah kan muzhikadha! Poi nimadhiya thoongu!Namma thaan karthik ku moral support ah irukanum.Ok va?

Raji: Hmm...seri gud night!

Shiva: Gud night!

~Next morning~

Karthik enters the workstation.

Raji: Hi Karthik!!!

Karthik: Hi!

Raji: Err...antha walmart project sambandha pata mail ah enaku konjam forward panuriya?

Karthik: Haan sure!!!

Raji: Thanks!Apram...Karthik...

Karthik: Sollu Raji...

Raji: Rani ma epadi irukanga?

Karthik: Haan...ippo paravala...doctor full bedrest eduka solirukaru!

Raji: Oh! Apram Karthik...intha Rani ma...

Just then Vishnu enters.

Vishnu: Dei machan,antha David unna avar cabin ku vara sonanru da!

Karthik: Enna va???

Vishnu: Therila! Oru vela unaku ethavathu promotion kuduka porangalo??? Dei...apadi ethavathu aachuna,ennakum konjam sibarisu pannu da deivame!!!!

Karthik: Ada chi!!!Velaila senthu muzhusa 1 varusham kooda agala athukulla promotion ah???Poda moola illadhavane!

Vishnu: Enna thitradhu na matum epadi da ungaluku pakkam pakkam ah dialouge pesa varuthu???Po da poi antha aala sikiram paaru,illa na athukum en thaaliya thaan arupan!

Karthik leaves,but Raji gets disappointed.

~After a while~

Vishnu: Enna da etho theevarama yosichite vara?

Karthik: Ellam intha David sonna vishayatha pathi thaan da!

Raji: Apadi enna karthik sonnaru?

Karthik: Illa,etho puthu project varutham,athu sambandham oru meeting irukam,Banglore la.Lakshmi,Kaushik and Susan lam poranga.

Raji: Athuku enna?

Karthik: Illa naanum antha meeting ku poganumam

Vishnu: Ithu enna da aniyayam???Nee matum Banglore la nalla enjoy pannuva,naanga matum inga intha computer ah katitu saavanuma?

Karthik: Dei...verupethatha!

Vishnu: Yaaru naan verupethurena???Paarunga Raji ivana

Raji: Ithu unaku kidacha nalla opportunity thaana Karthik,apram en yosikira?

Karthik: Illa...athu vanthu...

Vishnu: Enna da vanthu bonthu nu izhuthutu iruka?Enaku matum intha chance kidachirunthathu nu vei,chumma oru kaluku kalakirupen!

Karthik: Dei...en nilama puriyama pesatha!Rani ma ku udambu mudiyama irukura po naan epadi da Banglore poga mudiyum???

Raji: Karthik...

He calms down and turns to face her.

Raji: Rani ma va naan pathukuren

Karthik: Venam Raji!!!

Raji: Yen Karthik??? En mela nambika illaya? Naan avangala nalla paathupen!

Karthik: Illa,unaku ethuku kashtam?

Raji: Ithula enna kashtam iruku? En amma ku ipadi irunthiruntha naan paathurka maten na?

Karthik: Raji...

Raji: Nee ethum pesatha,olunga Banglore po!Naan paathukuren!

Karthik hesitantly agrees.

Vishnu: Dei eppo da thirmbi varuva?

Karthik: Therla da!3-4 days aagum pola!

Vishnu: Seri seri...aaga vendiya velaiya paaru!Etha pathiyum kavala padatha!

Karthik nods hoping everything goes good!

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Thanks for the update

You stopped at the crucial point... waiting to know what actually happened...

Shiva seems supportive of Raji hope he isnt a weird character..

Karthi going bangalore and raji going to look after rani ma interesting to know and see what happens next

please do update soon :)

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Thanks Ammu for the Update...

Adada...enna ippadi suspense a mudichuteenga...Sukanya ku enna aachu??..aana karthiku kalayanam aairuchula?..am sad..

Shiva...eppadi pattavanu poga poga than theiryum..

Raji...so sweet..Rani ammava paarthukarennu solrale..Karthik othupannu ninaikaren athuku..

Vishnu...asusual rocks with his counters..

Inga paaru ma..seekarama update pannirunga..suspense thaangala..pls😃

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

NOTE:

Friends I'm so disappointed with the number of likes n comments! :(

Looks like none remember me nor my story...Ok fine! I accept I took ages to update coz of my studies n other commitments :(

But there's no point in writing a story now coz many wud have lost d track! So I have no other go than end this! I'm really sry to d ppl who supported me from d start!

Thanks, Sorry n Gud bye!

Edited by AmmuKryan - 10 years ago

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

What no please do finish waiting to know what happens next will raji and karthi ever get together

what happened to sukanya?

please finish this off...

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Abinaabi

@Abinaabi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Hello frnd.. Ennapa idhu? Ippadi ellam panna kudathu... Ippadi padhilaye engala deal la vittutu poringa... Plzz continue this story...

Neenga romba nallu kelluchi update kudthu irukkingala adhan ellarum update vandha surprise la irukkanga pola...

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Hi Ammu, thanks for the update. There could be different reasons as to why you feel there is a decrease in response. However, it's up to you and your wish with the story. I would enjoy reading this story with Karthik and Raji for sure.

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Prema

@prema27

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

yaru intha suganya ... aiyooo mande vidikuthe... KR last part le serthu vapingala? .. pls.. update

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Thats a good one Ammu.. 👏 getting to know the past slowly.. waiting for u to reveal the rest..

I wish you continue writing it 😊

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Aylu

@Aylu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Hello.. A new reader of this story..

The story s vryy gud n interesting.. Luv d way Raji n karthik r maintaining a healthy frndsp. Y u want to end it wen u hv this much luvrs f ur story.. V would luv to c u continuing this story further..

Just a suggestion, try to upload soon. I mean six months a gap fr an update its really disappointing fr a true story luvrs like us.. I understand u r busy but I hope u can get time once in a week or twice a week.. N am sure u will get lot f likes n comments.. Hope u will take my suggestion in a positive way

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