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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys i m shreya
im n old member of this forum
wanna write an ff
this story revolves around following couples-
Kavi-bulbul
ranveer-kashish
aabha-anurag
adi-lara

i want ur suggestions for this couple if u want anothe couple then plz inform
if u are intrested then i will update it

plz cmnt
bye

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey shreya!!
I'd be glad to read an ff..
Do continue soon..
Will be waiting for an update..
And pls pm me.. since I am having a busy time I would read only pmed works.. I hope its fine with you.. 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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intro-
kavi n bulbul are married, ranveer n kashish are engaged ,anurag is dead bt i will show abha n anurag's story , last night was engagement of ranveer n kashish

new morning-
in buero -
ranveer n kashish are reading a file (chup-chup ke romance)😳😳😳

mayank ,aabha n lara are watching them
Ma-dekho ranveer sir n kashish mam ko
Aa-vo to hoga hi na naya naya pyar hai
La-vaise mayank tum kab kar rahe ho?
Ma-kya?
La-shadi
Ma-shadi??mai ?kyu?n kisse?
Aa-roshni se
Ma-roshni?
La-ha hame sab pata hai
Ma-kya pata hai?
Aa-yahi ki tumne n usne number shumber exchange kiya hai
Ma-ha to vo awai
La-awai? ab itna bhi mat bano yar
mayank was about to say something kavi came speaking on mob
Ka-are ha bulbul mai aate hue sabji lekar aaunga n tere liye kam vali bhi dhund li hai doper tak aa jaegi chal ab rakh bye
Ra-wah kavi tu to ekdum patni vrta ho gaye ho
Ka-bhai karna padta hai ek bar shadi ho gai na fir to gulam banke hi rahena padta hai,abhi tereko time hai sambhal ja
Kas-what?tum ise bhadkao mat
La-mam ko bahot jaldi hai shadi ki??
n kashish blush😳😳

then ACP comes
All-gud morning sir
ACP-gud morning,muze abhi abhi call aay hi bandra ke ek godwn me ek lash mili hai to ranveer n kashish tum dono vaha jao aur uski info yaha send karo
Ra,Kas-yes sir n they leave

ACP-adi kaha hai?
Ma-pata nahi sir aata hi honga
ACP-call karo use
mayank call adi bt his phone is switched off
Ma-sir mob band hai
ACP-thik hai thodi der bad try karte hai
again ACP got a call
ACP-khandala road par bhi ek lash mili hai kavi n mayank tum dono vaha jao
they leave

after sometime Adi comes
ACP-report kitne baje karna tha?
Aadi-9 baje
ACP-aur abhi kitne baje hai?
Aadi-10
ACP-late hone ka reason?
La-kahi rat ko party karne chala gaya hoga
ACP-party? aadi?
Aadi-nahi sir ye scientist kuch bhi bolti hai gave an angry look to lara😡😡😡
ACP-to late kyu hua?
Aadi-sir vo
Aa-sir ranveer sir ne info bheji hai
ACP-ha dikhao
Aa-vaha jiski lash mili hai vo ye hai ,shows pic of body, iske pas mobile ,kuch paise mile
ACP-matlab khoon paiso ke liye nahi hua
Aa-aur uske gale me ek ICARD tha MK college ka,iska nam vishal hai, n sir kavi sir ne bhi jo info bheji hai usme ek ladki ki lash mili hai uska nam neha hai n uske gale me bhi MK clg a ID mila n dono murder goli mar kar hi kiye hai
Aadi-sir lekin ID me year to 2013 ka hai yani do sal purana
La-lekin koi do sal purna ID pahenkar kyu ghumega
ACP-ek kam karo aadi tum n lara dono MK clg jao n pata karo
they leave

outside
Aadi-tumne ACP sir ke samne ye kyu kaha ki mai party karne gaya tha balki mai to kal tumhe chodne aaya tha, n aise nahi ki rat ho gai ho to jaldi chale bt nahi mam ko to aadhi rat ko icecream khani thi
La-ha to
Aadi-to matlab?muze tumhari vajah se late hua n upar se mera mob bhi band ho gaya tha , tum ho ki ACP sir ko mere khilaf bhadka rahi thi
La-use tit for tat kahete hai. tumne us din mayank ke yaha muze bhoot banke kitna daraya tab nahi yad aaya ye so called sharif insan?
Aadi-vo vo
La-vo vo chodo chalo abhi
n they leave

end part
hws it?
plz cmnt?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey dear !
amazing update..
aww ! Mayank ki chori pakdi gayi !😆😆
Hmm .. so case has started...
cute nokh jokh between lara adi .. lara ko late night ko icecream khana tha ..!! 😆😆
bechara adi ..😆😆😆
thanks for pm..
continue soon..😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nise update please continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey
Amazing start!
Ranvir-Kashish chup chup kar romance 😳
Aabha teasing Mayank about Roshini was so funny and cute! 😆
Kavi talking to Bulbul on the phone and warning Ranvir was hilarious! 😆 😆
Aadi-Lara part was so sweet and adorable!
Loved it <3
Please please please update soon!
Really want to read more on this story 😊
Edited by SaNa_sTaR - 10 years ago

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