SACRED RELATION - Maaneet FF Note pg 60 april3/2016 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Today is the Day when a mere maid got married to Raja Maan Singh Khurana today is the day when geet a mere maid of the palace become the Rani Geet Maan Singh Khurana

Shi kaha hai kisi ne kismat ka khel bada nirala hai

In the royal yet modern bedroom of Devgarh Palace

A man is standing near Late Maharaj UdayVeer Singh Khurana and late Maharani Mrinalini Devi Singh Khurana's Potrait hanging on the wall...and his hands is locked behind his back

And behind him a lady wearing bridal attire looking extremely beautiful is standing with her head slightly bowed down like theirs is something interesting on the floor

After few minutes that man turned and face the bride and the man is none other than Raja Maan Singh Khurana

Maan : geet tum janti ho humari shaddi kyo hoi hai

Yes the beautiful bride is none other than geet maan singh khurana

Geet : ji (she replied in meek voice)

Maan : aur tum ye bhi janti ho tum kabhi riddhima ki jagha nhi le sakti

Geet : hum hum jante hai raja saheb aur hum rani sa ki jagha lene ki soch bhi nhi sakte na apki zindagi main a hi is mehal mai (she said meekly)

Maan nodded and said

Maan : mujhe tumse bas yahi kehna tha bhale tum is state ki rani aur is ghar ki bahu ban sakti ho par humari patni kabhi nhi ban sakti...duniya k samne bhale hi hum pati patni hai aur tumhare naam k saath humara naam judta hai but tum ache tareeke se jaanti hu is kamre k andar humara kya rishta hai

He left the room after saying all this

Geet : hum jante hai raja saheb humara kya rishta hai aap humare raja hai aur hum is mehal ki mamuli si naukrani (she said while looking at door from where he left)

Tears started rolling down from her eyes and finally she breakdown on the floor room is echoing wth her cries

Geet : kyo bhagwanji kyo kiya apne aise humne toh ye zindagi nhi chahi thi kabhi are humne toh kabhi socha bhi nhi toh fir kyooo hum khush the humari zindagi se toh fir kyo kiya apne aisa (she said all this between her cries)

Maan's situation is no less he'a also very upset with this marriage and drinking liquor in his private bar in the palace

Maan : kyo riddhima kyo kiya tumne aisa (he said looking at the riddhima's photo which is in his hands) mai tumhe kabhi maaf nhi karungi kabhi nhi

otherside geet lost in the past from where it started


Precap : geet's past life as maid

Ok that's it for today I know its short ok short is the wrong word its very short but enough for 1st update

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Edited by CuteStrawberry - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
that was a fab start
geet and maaan marriage...both were obviously forced...into this marriage..

maan drunk..and geet sad
awww


lets see what happens..next..


i want the next part asap...please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start.
Geet n maan is married. She is a maid and he is the king.
He is not accepting this wedding.
Eagerly waiting to know more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. Maaneet r married. Mann don't want to give Geet the place of his wife in his heart. They will be husband and wife only for outer world . Bcz Maan love only Ridhima and Geet is a mere maid. Geet said she will never take Ridhima's place. Geet was crying on his faith and here Maan was gulping alcohol.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm updt..Geet ws maid and maan clearly tld hr place...which definatly hurt her...bt she accept it...ws ridhima responsible fr their marriege...updt soon...thanx fr pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update . maan married to a maid name geet ...n also he said that he can't give geet the place of his wife . geet n maan both r upset with this marrige ...me getting curious to know the past ..plz continue soon..
Thnx for d pm :).
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome updates... Geet n maan is married. Geet is a
maid & she is the 2nd wife of maan. Eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt... continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Nice start...lkng forward to it...
ridhima must have ran away on the wedding day thats why geet married maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice cs
i thought ridhima is dead

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