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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Part 3
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Loved the Flashbacks
The three of themsetting up home for Tahir with fun Loved It
Tahir doesn't want to meet his parents
Loved the wind-chime Tahir too like it
The last scene Supper Awwssmm Haya knocking on Tahir's eyes
Wonderfully Written
Thanks for the PM

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Part 4
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It very much
Poor Tahir he got everything but never get his parent's love
Tahir missing Haya but little did he know she was just beside him
Finally he wanna go home
Flashback was Supper Awwssmm
Loved Tahir-Haya first meet Lovely
Loved the way he said "Oh... so you are the wind chime girl..." Just Amazing
Beautifully Written
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Tahir-haya... nice intro,Haya already made her place in Tahir's heart, like Noah,

loved the blend of past and present... you know how much i love it.

do continue... keep writing.

Thanks a ton for PMs.

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kunchu

@kunchu

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

A thousand apologies for never having commented on time!

The way you have integrated Haya's spirit into the scene, even though her physical existence is into question, her spirit plays a larger role than any of the other roles in this novel *hope it turns into a novel*

Tahir, man my heart bleeds for this man. Truly, pyaar maut ke baad bhi zinda rehti hai. The way he yearns for Haya gives a shame to other lovers.

Noa is the perfect best friend and a wonderful boyfriend for Sia 😳 The equation they share acts as an important catalyst in this story!

Sia is wonderful, the love she feels for her sister/friend Haya makes me emotional and you very well know why.

Waiting for next update!

Yep I admit that I am very selfish...

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 32

Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Awesome update di

loved it

an interesting twist! Sia can see Haya.. Tahir too! hmm.. it's getting more interesting!

Sia's POV was beautifully written.. so much in store for her.. let's see what happens next! Sia noticed many things.. she's a true friend really!

Tahir at flat.. he blames himself for everything.. Tahir-Noa's convo was nice!

Tahir felt Haya.. he saw her!! That dream was a reality.. heavenly beautiful!

Sia is getting restless..

The last convo was interesting.. discussion in the stars.. wonderful!

the questions will be answered soon..

then do continu soon

thanks for pm

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Wow di...

Mind blowing update..

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm..

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Awsum Update Heli Di. 😊 The emotions were penned down beautifully..👏 Spcly Tahir..❤️ Loved The Cute FB and Tahir-Haya's Tender Moments. Sia-Noa do share a perfect equation..😳 Hmm.. So The Divinity conspiring to help Haya. Intresting! Thanx fr pm.. Continue Soonz.

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Dude.

I am stunned.

Like. Literally.

Or maybe I am just being weird and emotional this weekend. I don't know what is wrong with me. Trust me, it rarely happens even though I might seem otherwise.

So anyway.. KK. This was...

Your writing at its best.

There's no two ways about it.. I absolutely LOVED the update and I cannot explain how much the little scene when Haya's spirit visits Tahir touched me. Truly, deeply... I had tears in my eyes.

Just ... his state makes me feel all hollow and empty... and I love Noa.. his friendship with Tahir, his love for Sia... it's all so .. heartwarming.

I think I am a little weird right now.. maybe it is the update, maybe it is a few other things... Just... continue soon, will you?

Roka bhi toh kahan?🤔

Khairrr... even though it was a tiny update, you did wonders with it.🤗

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Hey its a mindblowing update
its s heart touching
i rly love it
Tahir n Haya they r incomplete yet prefect
thank you for the pm of this wonderful story
plz continue soon

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