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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi everyone I have written a story on ishra in the past but I left It incomplete as I find it hard to write really long stories so from now I will be writing but just one long part or may be a few parts but not long stories so hope you enjoy this

All characters in my story are exactly same as in the show But in my story adi lives in hostel and ruhi with Raman . Shagun and Raman are together but Raman really hates her he can't stand her she left him for money just like in the show but the twist is that Shagun comes back to Raman using ruhi and adi as a trump card because ashok dumped her and went to America. And Raman loves ruhi a lot. At this point in my story Raman and ishita never knew each other


Raman : ruhi wake up beta it's time to go to school
Ruhi : 5 minutes papa
Raman: I know your five minutes
He said pulling ruhi out of bed
Raman : I know how to get up
He starting tickling her and she started laughing and also started to tickle Raman and both was having fun and making lots of noise
Shagun : RAMAN can't you see I'm sleeping
Shagun was still the same she only cared about herself thought Raman
Raman took ruhi to his room and hit her dresses
Though Shagun came back into ramans house and life he never let her anywhere near him no matter how much she tried. Shagun and ruhi would sleep in ruhi room while Raman would sleep in his own room

After dressing himself and ruhi he gave ruhi breakfast and left to drop her to school

At home !
Romi had finally changed he was a responsible man and would go to office with Raman
Mr and Mrs Balla

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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue... Nice build up ..look forward to read...

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