LOVING HER WAS RED- A Manan ff Updated (DEKHO DEKHO KAUN AAGAYA) PG64

Hello my beautiful friends, My name is Aqsa and am a huge crazy fan of kyy .. like a mad mad one... and a crazy parthian too.. i love everything about kyy except for my increasing obsession for the show for which am sure will lead me into an asylum... SO do pray for my well being😆

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Originally posted by: aashnachawla

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LoviNG HER WAS RED (PART 1)

A very pretty girl is blabbering in her sleep... [no mom plz plz dont do this mom plz dont lock me there mom plzzz mom ...!!Mom please someone plz help..] and she wokes up with a jerk fear was clearly written on her face she touched her forehead she was sweating all d while she grabbed a glass of water frm d desk whch was next to her bed and drank it...she got up from her bed reached to her study table opened her diary and started writing...

Dear Diary, again I woke up with this horrible nightmare which is haunting me from past 7 years and not to my surprise at d same time "3:30am"...some time I wonder y me always what did I do? I never hurted anyone ... I never did bad things but still I have to suffer all this...I dont know when I will get the answers to my questions..do they even have a answer yes!they do ...all my questions have a single answer "her" yes my mom... how could she do this how does she manage to hurt me every time...it seems like she doesn't want me to see happy...but y? This question keeps coming in my mind every time...

[FLASHBACK]

Nandini: mom when will I cut my cake...as always he haven't reached even today..it's my fifth birthday maa I want him to be here with me

Nyonika: baccha he might b busy in his work ...you want to cut the cake right so lets do it..let's cut your cake

Nyonika's p.o.v
( Am sorry sweety he will not be present at any of your birthdays...but he is a gud father )

Suddenly she heard a man screaming outside the villa she ran towards the gate..nandini came with her...there she saw him all drunk he started cursing her for his situation she took him in ...nandini was scared she moved to her room and hugged her teddy tighter then ever and started crying...
That day nandu heard loud noises from her parents room she was scared alot scared after a hour or two her mother came to her and hugged her tight and started crying then soon after tht they slept

Next morning nandu saw cabir she came and hugged him tightly they played alot and were soon off to bed tht day

After two years cabir's mom passed out due to cancer he was 10 at dat time

3 years later

Cabir: niyo maa just come down na see pari is waiting for uh

Nyonika came down kissed both of her child on their cheeks and smiled and said

Nyonika: happy birthday my princess so c'mon lets cut d cake now

Nandu: no am not gonna cut the cake until he wishes me ..Maa its my tenth bday I want him to be with me ri8 here now n today

Cabir: pari he might b bzy na baba let us cut d cake vaise b am hungry

Nandu : No bhai I want him ...

Nyonika: okay lets gv him a call

Nandu called her father

Nandu: hello Appa where r uh am waiting for uh its my bday u haven't wished me yet

Rajesh: aww sorry mera baccha ...acha wait a sec give d phone to ur mom

Nandu: okay

Nyonika held d phn listened to what he said and widout uttering a word she kept d phn

Nandu: Maa what happen he is coming na?

Nyonika: sorry baccha he couldn't but he promised that he will make up for it by giving u d bst gift acha chalo lets cut d cake

After few days nandu got d news that her dad was gone some where for a while and couldn't come back as he is suffering from a mental disorder

At the same night nyonika came to nandu's room she looked at her took her hand in her hand and began to walk towards d store room...she locked her yes she locked her for few hours...

<<FLASHBACK ENDS>>
I took a sigh remembering those dreadful memories I couldn't understand till now ke y she did that to me that single night changed my life forever aftr that night my mother never used to talk to me casually she spoke to me only on my results day or for when she has some work...My mother who used to love me alot was changed..changed towards me completely aftr that night..I dont know what had happend...Soon I got up from my chair moved towards my bed and slept...

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Next morning

MURTHY'S VILLA

I woke up at 7am took a shower and got ready for breakfast

I reached towards d dining hall around 8:20 as soon as I got there ..I greeted them, she saw me wid a cold expression and left like always this was a daily routine for me...and it became a habit..now it doesn't hurt ..it doesn't hurt when she acts like this..

Cabir: kya baat hai aaj humari pari itni jaldi uth gayi? Said bhai in a mocking way

I glared at him for few seconds and said "haan bhai kal raat jaldi neend aagyi thi"

Cabir: vaise meri sridevi ka mode aaj fresh lag raha hai lekin phr b ek cheez missing hai...! Said he

"Oh.!aur meri drama queen ko kya missing lag raha hai?" Said I while drinking juice

Cabir: Areee tri vo muskaan dkh tu na murjhaya chehra rkhti hai toh bilkul acchi nai lgti muskuraya kar ..that suits uh..

"Muskurane ke liye reason bhi hona chahiye" said I looking at her chair with a disbelief..

Cabir: Aree yarr c'mon tu abhi b unke bare me soch rahi hai tujhe pata hai na vo aisi hi hai

"Par vo aisi nahi thi" said I with annoyed expression

He was about to say smthng when I interrupted "chuck it bhai I dont care..,I wont spoil my mode for her"

Cabir: ok ok fine meri maa ...but mujhe koi smjta hi nai tm dono ke beech mai phasta hu..said he with wiping fake tears..

"Omg! Really u r a drama queen" said I pulling his cheeks

He is d only person who makes me smile ...after all d stuff I got through ... the person I can only trust is him my "bhai"

I was brought out of my trances when he said

Cabir: accha sunn pari we need to go for shopping u knw na 4 din baad clg start hai yr damn pissing

I laughed at him..he wasn't a brilliant student but always managed to get gud grades

"Ok fine we will" said I

Cabir: chal lemme inform mukti we will pick her up..is that okay with u?

"Yes, I wont have any problem" said I

Mukti is a gud person but we dont mingle along...we r jst nrml frnz..

Cabir:chal go get ready

"Fine , I will b there in 20" said I and went towards my room

I opened my wardrobe and gave a frowned expression as I cant even wear what I like cuz all my dresses were designed by her.but one thing was gud that she atleast respected my choice and designed only indian clothes of course with her western touch...yes I dont wear western I only wear indian
...I took out my ink blue anarkali which was backless but tied with a small dori(knot)
And also took my golden small jhumka's and changed soon as bhai was impatient

I reached down d hall and moved towards the car he saw me and didn't said any thing and stared at me

"What" said I

Cabir: kiss ka katal karna hai? Said he

"Huh! What r u saying...mai q kisi ko marungi?"said I

Cabir: aree meri bhartiya naari agar aise tayyar hogi to koi na koi toh mar jayega

"Aap bacha lena unhe" said I with a smirk
He laughed at my words and ordered me to sit in d car

Precap: abhi bata du?
Hope u guys like it...do like and comment share ur views and ...see ya stay blessed and forget d rest

Hlo Aqsa!!!
I have read this ff of yours on fb!!!
N i love this ff!!!
Glad u thought to post it in forum too!!!
I hope u will get great success for this ff in forum also!!!
Babyee!!!

Regaurds,
Garima

Oh my my... My sweety started writing an ff and I was oblivious of it... Bas yahi rah gya that din dekhne ko...ufff...lolzzz

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Oh my my... My sweety started writing an ff and I was oblivious of it... Bas yahi rah gya that din dekhne ko...ufff...lolzzz

If I wouldn't HV opened the ky2 forun page...mujhe toh pata hi nhi chalta... Lucky me😆😆

About update... It was awssome...

This rajesh thingy looks like a big master piece to me... 😆

My jaw fell reading nyonika as nandini's mother...hehehehe...😕

Loved the character sketch...👏

Shit!!! Manbir and that to rivals...nahiii...

Its gonna be fun reading them if it doesn't gets into serious rivilary...

Loved nanbir bond...👏

Update soonishhh...

Take care ...

Love uvdear...

Mishaa!!😳😳😃

hahaha thanks a tone misha it means alot n dont worry manbir will have their own mystery in the story and about Rajesh yes u guessed it right he is a master piece 😛 love u too

Originally posted by: KewlaniGarima

Hlo Aqsa!!!
I have read this ff of yours on fb!!!
N i love this ff!!!
Glad u thought to post it in forum too!!!
I hope u will get great success for this ff in forum also!!!
Babyee!!!

Regaurds,
Garima

thanks for the appreciation, wishes and compliments garima am overwhelmed😃 luv ya

LOVING HER WAS RED[part 2]

We reached to The Malhotra Mansion...it was surely a Mansion ..it was designed so beautifully that anyone can fall in love at the very frst site...though even I lived in a villa it was too big but had vintage touches to it cuz maa liked it...SHE (nyonika) is a fan of vintage collection...but Malhotra Mansion was just beautiful d awsum interior inside which will mKe u feel like home it was simple yet beautiful one...i've entered here about 4 5 times and not much as I didn't like to visit any one...iam not a friendly person at all... I came out of my thoughts when bhai spoke

Cabir: we reached...! Accha chal lemme go n get mukti vaise b aaj Saturday hai lagta hai aunty ne kuch awsum banaya hi hoga vo bhi khakr aajaunga

I was like oh my god he and his luv for food god..!

"Okay" said I

Cabir: u wanna join?

"No,am okay" I said with a smile

Soon he got out from d car and moved in to the mansion...I was left all alone but then I heard some one calling my name I turned towards the lawn as I heard the voice and saw Malhotra uncle sitting on a beautiful white table it was round in shape and had four chairs there he was having his tea while reading the news paper he called out my name again ..I smiled and braised myself to walk forward to join him for a friendly talk ..I hated these things that's y I avoided many parties to b safe from these stupid kind of friendly conversation ...I thought that it would be disrespectful if wouldn't go and have a chit chat session with him...

Soon I got near him,he offered me to have a seat ...and I sat by plastering a fake and forceful smile on my face

Mr.Malhotra: how r uh child? I must say u r looking damn beautiful haan? Kaash meri bhi beti kabhi betiyo ki tarah bann skti

"Iam fine uncle, and thanks for the compliment,aree u have a beautiful daughter and she is best the way she is" said I giving a broad smile

Mrs.Malhotra: kisse baate chal rahi hai aapki... As soon as I heard d voice turned to look towards the owner of such a beautiful voice it was none other than Mrs.Malhotra ..she is a lovely person and a very gud mother ...I wished to have a mother like her

"Gud morning aunty, said I

Mrs.Malhotra: oh! Hello nandini beta what a pleasant surprise...finally aap aayi humare ghr last time toh maine aapko Mr.Singhania ki party me dekha tha

Mr.Malhotra: haan vo bechari kya kare..use chodti thodi na hogi vo said Malhotra uncle with a frowned face

Mrs.Malhotra:oh please! Aisi baate nahi karte said aunty in a calmed tone but scolding him at his words

"No aunty, its okay, uncle cant help it...after all that's the truth she is like that" said I smiling but a irritating look in my eyes

Mrs.Malhotra: leave it...hum bhi kya baate kar rahe hai...Aree nandini beta tum batao padhayi kaisi chal rahi hai asked aunty

"Um...its going gud aunty,Ab soch rahi hu ke koi college join karlu MBA complete krne ke liye" said I smiling

Mr.Malhotra: toh finally ab u r going to study outside ur house... I mean the home schooling is finished? Asked uncle with a concern

"Yes,uncle iam soon going to join college and am free from home schooling now as maa has decided" said I in a not so interesting tone

And yes there expression were happening as they were concerned about me as iam cabir bhai's sis ..Bhai is like there second son ... and yes to mention that I was home schooled for two years...that was maa's decision

My thoughts were interrupted by the loud and horrible noise of a car yes that was horrible for me and very common for uncle and aunty as I saw there was not any expression formed on there faces it was like normal for them

Soon I turned towards my back to find who idiot was that and I saw a tall figure coming out of the passenger seat in a blue denim jeans and a black shirt his back was facing towards me and I must say he has a very sexy back...I came out of my judging session when I heard uncle saying

Mr.Malhotra: lo aagaye saaheb zaade said uncle chuckling

Mrs.Malhotra: please stop saying that to my son said aunty and soon I recognized of whom they were talking about it was Manik there lovely son and not so lovely friend oops or to say rival of my brother...I haven't seen him even for once though I visited the mansion for few times but never opted to look at him as I was busy in my own mess... how weird it is my bhai's bst frnd's brother is his rival strange I thought to myself...Bhai used to talk about him some times and I must say the irritating look that he has while talking about him is just enjoying to see hehehe ya I mean some one irritated my brother Mr.Cabir Murthy who used to irritate others...I chuckled thinking about this

Then some one came and hugged me from back...I was used to these "Mukti's hugs" yes that's what I call I the Mukti hug , she was full of energy all the time ready to do anything ...I hugged her back and greeted her ...

Cabir: mujhe bhul gaye tum dono ...
Said my drama queen ...we both didn't gave any reaction to his words

Cabir: acha fine chalo I will stop my emotions now and will take u for shopping...but..but..but u ppl have to deal with me later

Mukti pucnhed hi playfully in stomach and said

Mukti: abe o Joker chup chaap chal smjaa

By this we the trio took leave from uncle and aunty and sat into the car we had lots of fun while shopping we irritated cabir bhai alot as we dint allow him to go into the boys section and handed him our bags...

With this it was evening we were done by our shopping stuff and soon reached to my VILLA here mukti was too damn tired and said that she was going to stay here tonight yes this was quite normal for me as from the time there frndship started they used to land up at any one of the houses for the weekend... I took a leave from those two buddies and gone to my room took my stuff from the shopping bags placed it in my wardrobe and dozed of to sleep...

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From here manik is the narrator

MALHOTRA MANSION

I woke up at 8:00 pm after completing my precious sleep as d hangover was still on my mind I began to reach towards d hall and reached the kitchen for a glass of lime water I asked one of my servants about mom and dad he said that they were gone out for some work and before I asked about mukti he said that she is going to stay at cabir's house as it is weekend ...I glared at him for answering the thing which I havent asked he soon said sorry and left as I ordered him

I reached towards my lawn holding a glass of lime water and sat at the lawn table I was looking at my mom's gardening around when I found a golden earing it was quite beautiful and to my surprise was having a indian look what do girls call it ah!jhumka yah it was that I thought of whom it would ...mukti toh doesn't wear such kind of things and maa she always love to keep it simple by wearing shot tops in her ears... I wondered who it was when my phone grabbed my attention I smiled looking at caller name and moved towards my room...

Precap: manan meet
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And here I was being blamed that I leave chapters at last moment suspense...