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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Asad in a dilemma he can't get justice for his wife as they have threatened him
Poor thing don't know what to do he can't lose his Zoya
So Zoya is falling for her hubby
She asked him to sleep on bed
Aww she had some memories SR and sangeet
Even I am afraid of she gets bad memory
So love their roti making scene
Precap is scary will Zoya believe will she leave
Continue


yes yes zoya believes😡
it was in promo
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashleshapriya1


yes yes zoya believes😡
it was in promo


I think u missed sumthn. Zoya does not believes them but he himself cannot lie to her n at dat time Zoya recalls some of d bad moments.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


I think u missed sumthn. Zoya doea not believes him but he himself cannot lie to her n at dat time Zoya recalls some of d bad moments.


oh my mind na😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Asad was worried as GaziaRin threaten him. He told everything to Dilshad. She remembered few memories. Nice precap. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
gaziarin!!! dhishum dhishum !!!
loved asya moments but the precap... i am skeptical.

hope zoya won't misunderstand asad

cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
please add me in PM list just started redaing ur stories asya ones :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyakabhidreamy

It's really beautiful

U know I was stalking your stories from since god knows when
But never comment
Kyoki mai if pe nahi thi
But must say u r really good writer
Well written
Haaye asya should be together again nd zoya will remember everything 😛




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Part 46

D bonding between Asad n Zoya kept getn stronger n stronger. Zoya became more n more comfortable wid Asad much to his n other's except GaZiaRin's happiness. Zoya finally learnt to make rotis properly n happily thanked Asad for dat.

2 days later, Asad called 4m his office cabin to Zoya who was also in her office cabin.

"Hello," said Zoya.

"Zoya, wat u will wear for d party?" asked Asad.

"I will wear blue hoodie sweatshirt n black track-pants," replied Zoya trying hard to control her suppressed laughter.

"Wat?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Wat happened?" asked Zoya.

"Nothing," replied Asad.

Zoya was again trying to control her laughter.

"Wat u will wear?" asked Zoya.

"I have not decided> I will decide after cumn home," replied Asad.

"Okay," said Zoya.

"How r u?" asked Asad.

"I am fine," replied Zoya n asked, "Wat abt u?"

"I am also fine," replied Asad.

"Okay, come soon home. Party me jaana hai na," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Yaa sure baby," said Asad wid a smile.

"See u in d evening," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Yaa," said Asad wid a smile n hung up.

While talking wid Zoya, Asad forgot abt wat Zoya told dat she will wear in d party. He was not knowing dat Zoya was actually playing a prank on him.

Asad returns in d evening. Wen he was abt to enter his room, he recalls wat Zoya told dat she will wear in d party. He is tensed. Wen he opens d door n sees Zoya, he becomes surprised. He is surprised to see Zoya in a knee-length blue party dress wid trendy necklace n white heels as he had thought dat she will be in casuals.

"Zoya," said Asad shockingly.

"Why r u shocked, Asad?" asked Zoya wid a smile, "Party me to yahi pehna jaata hai na."

"But tumne to kaha ki...," said Asad but was cut by Zoya.

"I wanted to see ur reaction isliye maine kuch aur kaha," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"So, u again played a prank on me?" asked Asad in a puzzled tone.

"Aisa hi samajh lo," replied Zoya wid a wink.

"Youuu," said Asad annoyingly cumn 2wards her while stepped back.

"Asad sorry," said Zoya as she moved back.

He caught her hand n wid free hand he twisted her left ear.

"Someone loves to always play prank ha- dat day prank of pyjama party n bikini party n 2day dis prank," said Asad pretending to scold her still twisting her ear.

"Aahhh Asad, I am sorry na. Plz, leave my ear. Its paining," pleaded Zoya.

"Okay," said Asad wid a smile n left her ear.

She rubbed her eat n hits his chest annoyingly while he smiles.

"U also get ready now," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Give me some time," said Asad wid a smile n went to d washroom.

Asad got ready in a red t-shirt, black washed jeans & a black blazer.

Asad n Zoya left for d party in Asad's car.

They reached d party at 8

n were greeted by others. Everyone cud recognize Zoya but she cud not recognize anyone as she lost her one year memory. D party was held by Asad's friend Abhay Raichand(Vivian Dsena) n his fiancee Piya Dobriyal(Sukirti Kandpal).

"Zoya, ur hairstyle is so cool," said Piya wid a smile.

"Thanks," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Zoya, u have forgotten us. Hope, u remember everything soon," said Abhay.

"I want d same, Abhay," said Zoya.

"Still, she has remember 3-4 things in these times," said Asad.

"Dats nice," said Piya, "Hope he soon remembers all."

"Well, lets enjoy d party now," said Abhay wid a smile.

"U sud dance," said Piya wid a smile.

"U both also," said Abhay.

"Wat?" asked Zoya confusingly.

"Yaa, we danced 2gthr many times," replied Asad wid a smile.

"Okya, lets dance," said Zoya wid a smile.

Soon, d music of Mar Jayian was played n all couples started dancing.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1DkBxchvnk[/YOUTUBE]

Lamhe vele lamhe, vele pal yeh
Idhar-udhar tahel rahe

Sehme sehme dil bhi
Keh rahe hain bina tere

Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re

(Asad offered his hand to Zoya n she accepted it. She kept her free hand on his shoulder while he kept his free hand on her waist. They started moving to d music n moved closer to each other as they danced.)

Dil mein koi rag yun
Dhadakti hai, ki jaise bijli si daude
Saansein teri saansein
Jalaati hai bina tere
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re

(Asad twirled her around. She then holds both his hands n does some dance moves along wid him. They gets engrossed in their dance like other couples.)

Girhon ko suljhaao, tere bin kya jeena o
Bata mujhe, bata mujhe...
Girhon ko suljhaao, tere bin kya jeena
Aa bhi jaa, aa bhi jaa, aa bhi jaa
Aa bhi jaa, aa bhi jaa...

Lamhe vele lamhe, vele pal ye
Idhar-udhar tahel rahe

Sehme sehme dil bhi
Keh rahe hain, bina tere

Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re

(Asad came behind n held both her hands 4m behind in front of her n she kept her hands on his hands. She then held his hands n spreads it horizontally in d air along wid hers doing Titanic pose. They then leave each other's hand n move. Zoya then dances alone wid some slow moves while Asad slowly circles her. He then takes her hand n dances again wid her. 2wards d end of d song, she does a slip move n falls in his arm. He catches her waist n she puts her hand around his neck. They stare at each other passionately till d song ends.)

After dance, Asad n Zoya had a great time talking wid each other n others. They then had a feast. After dat, they decided to leave at 10 wen d party ended.

"D party was nice," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Glad u liked it," said Piya wid a smile.

Asad n Zoya left for home in Asad's car. On d way, they talked wid each other.

"I loved dancing wid u," said Zoya wid a smile.

"U will dance wid me very often," said Asad wid a smile.

"Exactly," said Zoya wid a smile.

They reached home. Razia n Shirin saw them going happily to their room.

"These 2 are lukn so much happy," said Shirin unhappily.

"But not for long," said Razia wid a smirk.

At night, Asad has slept while Zoya is still awake. She luks at Asad's sleeping face n smiles.

"2mrw, I will confess my feelings to u, Asad. I know we wud have surely done dat earlier but I will do it again," thinks Zoya wid a smile n closes her eyes to sleep.

Next day, Zoya decides to confess to Asad in d evening after they returned 4m their respective offices. After cumn 4m office, she changes into a short-sleeved blue t-shirt n black jeans. She comes in d hall n sits on d couch wid a smile on her face.

"Some minutes more. After dat, I will confess my feelings to Asad," said Zoya wid a smile.

Just then, GaZiaRin comes before.

"U r going to confess to a man who is is not good as u think. U don't have any idea wat his real face is," said Razia.

"Bhabhi is right, Zoya," said Shirin," said Shirin.

"Shut up, stop ur nonsense," yelled Zoya

Wid her yelling, others also comes out.

"We did not said anything wrong," said Gaffur.

"Wat do you 3 mean ha?" asked Zoya angrily, "Don't dare to speak anything against Asad."

Others including Asad r shocked wid dis argument.

"U r so innocent, Zoya. Luks like no one has told u dat u nearly divorced Asad. In fact, u filed for divorce just after 2 weeks of ur marriage cuz u were tired of his mental torture on u. He used to always insult u n mentally abuse cuz according to him, u were shameless n characterless just cuz u wore modern clothes n was a working woman," said Razia.

"U r lying. I know 3 of u very well. U all don't leave a chance to taunt me, Asad, Najma n ammi. And now u all talking nonsense against my husband," said Zoya angrily.

"Luks like Asad has trapped u so well. U left his house just after 12 days of marriage. I can't believe a man like him cud be Dilshad's son," said Shirin.

"Apna bakwaas band karo," yelled Zoya.

Asad was feeling bad to see Zoya fighting like dis. He was d only reason for it.

"If u don't believe us then ask Asad only," taunted Razia.

Zoya went to Asad n held both his hands.

"Asad, see they r talking bad abt u. Tell them dat its all lies," said Zoya.

Asad cud not luk at Zoya in d eyes. He was quiet.

"Asad, luk at me in d eyes. Why r u so quiet?" asked Zoya.

Wid great difficulty, Asad lukd at Zoya in her eyes. His eyes filled wid tears. Others except GaZiaRin r lukn tensed seeing them.

"Zoya, they r saying d truth," replied Asad in a choking voice.

Zoya is shocked at wat he said. Just then, she recalled several things abt their past wen Asad insulted her. She recalls how Asad told her dat she is a bad example for d women wen she came 4m jail, Asad told her to wake up at 6 instead of 8 n teln her to wear only Indian clothes while she refused, Asad insulting her wen she tuk a kebab to eat while Dilshad was making it teln her dat she can't wait for some time to eat wid everyone n he feels ashamed to call her as his wife outside as she will ruin his reputation he has in d society, throwing away d food rudely which she made n insulting her for making bad food, tearing d dress which she designed n teln her dat she will not work as women of his house only manage d house. Zoya is shocked recalling all dis. Her hands starts slipping 4m Asad's hands. Asad is shocked to see Zoya's shocked n troubled face. Tears filled her eyes.

"Zoya," said Asad softly keeping his hand on her shoulder.

She removed his hand 4m her shoulder n said angrily thru her tears, "Don't u dare to touch me, Asad. I recalled some of d things of d past. U betrayed me. I thought u such a nice man. I thought u truly loved me but now I got to know ur true face. U never loved me but always hated me. U turned to be a jerk like several men. I hate u, Asad."

She ran to her room in tears while he n others lukd on shockingly. Tears filled Asad's eyes. Asad saw GaZiaRin lukn happy having smirk on their faces. Asad luks away 4m them. GaZiaRin leaves 4m there while others remain lukn unhappy due to wat happened just now.

Precap:

#Zoya packs her things n leaves Asad's room for guest room. Asad tries to stop her but she does not listens.

#2 days later, Zoya gives divorce papers to Asad teln him to sign it. Asad luks at them shockingly n asks abt it. Zoya tells him dat she can't live wid a man like him who don't respect woman n judges people by their clothes n is regressive. Asad luks unhappy. He luks at d divorce papers n then at her. He takes d pen to sign it but then keeps it back on d table. He then takes d divorce papers in his hands n tears them shocking Zoya.


A/N: So, how was the part?😊 Finally, the separation of Asad and Zoya came which of course is not for a long time.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written and shocking update juhi.
Don't take much time for this seperation.
Even more shocking precap.
Continue soon.

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