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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear LM

I just go away for 10 days and you write so many updates !! That is sooo not fair !!
Read all of them at one go and gosh they are beautiful !! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I just love the way you depict their feelings, the turmoil they go through when other is hurt and how much they care for each other. It was just brilliantly done in all these chapters.. ⭐️⭐️

The way Ranveer collapsed after seeing Ishani in pain and punished himself going out in rain was so heartbreaking.. It seems to me that it is his destiny to destroy himself in love and again rise like a Phoenix. The physical pain is nothing compared to the mental one he inflicts on himself. 😭😭😭😭😭

And I never though you will give the same pain to Ishani twice, of seeing him dying.. 😭😭 That was quite unbearable.. The way you described her, my heart really ached. But she has emerged much stronger now IMO. It was a great touch that she decided on her own to move into his room. Now at least they don't have the artificial separation of two rooms ! 😃

I loved the chapter about the nightmares .. these two have given so many to each other that it is high time they open up about them.. At least they know what the other goes through ! But I love the way you have created so much understanding and compassion between them apart from the love they always had.

I do get their need for having some security, after all, they have been through so much, it has scarred them forever.. Getting insecure is only natural.. I hope you find some solace for them to give justice to that yearning and fear.

Lovely updates, all of them !! Your FF is one thing that brings me back to the forum .. otherwise the whole stretched track of IshVeer separation has really lost me.. !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: matsh

Dear LM

I just go away for 10 days and you write so many updates !! That is sooo not fair !!
Read all of them at one go and gosh they are beautiful !! ⭐️

I just love the way you depict their feelings, the turmoil they go through when other is hurt and how much they care for each other. It was just brilliantly done in all these chapters.. ⭐️⭐️

The way Ranveer collapsed after seeing Ishani in pain and punished himself going out in rain was so heartbreaking.. It seems to me that it is his destiny to destroy himself in love and again rise like a Phoenix. The physical pain is nothing compared to the mental one he inflicts on himself. 😭

And I never though you will give the same pain to Ishani twice, of seeing him dying.. 😭😭 That was quite unbearable.. The way you described her, my heart really ached. But she has emerged much stronger now IMO. It was a great touch that she decided on her own to move into his room. Now at least they don't have the artificial separation of two rooms ! 😃

I loved the chapter about the nightmares .. these two have given so many to each other that it is high time they open up about them.. At least they know what the other goes through ! But I love the way you have created so much understanding and compassion between them apart from the love they always had.

I do get their need for having some security, after all, they have been through so much, it has scarred them forever.. Getting insecure is only natural.. I hope you find some solace for them to give justice to that yearning and fear.

Lovely updates, all of them !! Your FF is one thing that brings me back to the forum .. otherwise the whole stretched track of IshVeer separation has really lost me.. !!




Heya Matsh! I have missed you so much!


I am surprised that you managed to read so many chapters in one go. It must have been tedious, given that almost all of them must have been longer than the usual ones that I write. And thank you so much sweetie! I'm sooo happy that you liked all of them so much.



These past couple of chapters have been pretty challenging for me to write and as I was saying earlier too, these chapters were very dicey, given that I had to maintain an equilibrium between Ranveer's and Ishaani's emotions, but I am more than happy that my effort paid off.



Yes, it is a part of Ranveer's destiny to keep rising like a Phoenix from the ashes of his from we self in love and every time he is reborn, his love only gets stronger, along with his will to set things right between himself and Ishaani.



This was something I did have in mind and the circumstances that poor Ishaani had to see him nearly die in were extremely harsh. But as you said, Ishaani has emerged stronger than she used to be and is now much more braver than what she used to be. And yes, these two are a married couple who are now on terms with almost everything that has happened with them and are more than ready to move on, so it was about time that she shed her inhibitions and let herself go with the flow. Though her real motive for moving back will be revealed in the next chapter.



The last chapter was certainly the hardest of them all and as I was telling Elvish and MM as well, I had a lot of concerns about making sense with this chapter but I'm glad that you all liked this so much. They needed this understanding and compassion to take a step ahead and I'm glad that I could give it to them. Those two have certainly given each other quite a lot of nightmares now, haven't they?



They will find their solace in the next chapter. I do find it dicey as well, but the next chapter is again a game changer in their dynamics and relationship, so it's pretty huge for me as well.



Thank you so much once again, Matsh! You have indeed been so encouraging right from the start and I'm glad that you find this FF good enough to bring you here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Before I say anything, they both need to go for IT. Thats the thing between them. Bhavnao ko samjho IshVeer 😆 btw, you have any restriction on writing mature scenes?


Finally RV is in home. Ishaani took the next step and shifted in his room. His reaction when she asked to remove shirt 🤣 and then he blushed. Aww he is cute. I can actually imagine him doing that.

How awesome was that quote? It summarize them and every soulmate out there. Both partner are essential for each other, like Donne had said lovers are part of a circle, two halves.

Gosh those nightmares. Somewhere I think RV just jumped on the recovery phases when he was shot as he was too busy on hating, those phases are rushing back now and making those dreams more horrible. He cant supress his fears underneath anger or insecurities like he did earlier because all is okay now. He is financially secure, Ishaani supporting him, even M and C are okay. The uneasiness they both feeling is, I think, lack of physical intimacy. They went through frienship, courtship, lovers, now they need to connect on the ultimate level. Its not lust, just the next step. Correct me if I am wrong.

I think Ishaani should stop making RV feel guilty about the accident. He didnt do this to him. Give the recovering guy a break !

What gonna happen to I's professional life? And Martin? Is there more to RVs injuries than just a freak accident?


Update soon.


Oh btw, how hot Radhika Shakti looked in the party masquerade eh? 3 dances in one party, her JDJ warm up I guess 😆 who is after Falguni murder? That killer's monologue is so unwanted, edit those pls CVs. Dunno why but I feel lawyer is not what he seems. Just a feeling.

Riya

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Chapter 40: The Falling of the Veil

A/N: Hey there! :D :D Here is the next update. :D :D

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December was always Ranveer's favourite month. The white blanket that the month covered over Mother Earth was always something that caught his fancy and this year was no different. He stared out of his window as the snowflakes fell slowly, a serene calm overcoming the entire atmosphere. He stared at the sky, his mind falling in a peaceful meditation, when he heard a door knock.

Turning around, he saw Martha standing near the door, a small smile on her face. Ranveer beckoned her in and freed her off her overcoat and hat, while Martha took a seat opposite his table.

"Good Lord, it's snowing so heavy. I just hope that we don't have a blizzard on the way." Ranveer gave her an apologetic look before speaking to himself more than her.

"It looked so peaceful from high up here though."

"It always does." Ranveer smiled at her and she took a seat. "Snow still has the same effect on you now, doesn't it?"

"Oh yes. Obviously I don't relate myself to it anymore given the changes my life has been through in these seven months, but it still feels peaceful." Martha nodded her head in understanding and spoke shrewdly.

"That's true enough. In these seven months, I've got to know a different Mr. Vaghela altogether. And thankfully, I got to know the real one." Ranveer frowned at her and asked, his voice laced with confusion.

"What do you mean?" Martha smiled lovingly and understanding dawned over him.

"I think you understand."

"Well, you've been with me in these three years. So naturally, you must know the difference between me being as cold and aloof as the icy nature of snow, and being as warm and pleasant as a flowery spring. Martin and Claudine tell me the same thing as well."

"I couldn't have explained that better." Martha gave Ranveer an impressed look and the latter smiled sheepishly.

"Glad I could help. So how did the hearing go?"

"The hearing went pretty well. The final verdict will be out on the 24th." Ranveer sighed heavily and gave Martha an earnest look.

"I just hope that I manage to set atleast one thing right." Martha stared at him deeply for a couple of minutes before she spoke cautiously.

"Still stuck on to the nightmares?" Ranveer gave her a helpless look and shrugged her shoulders.

"Yeah. I spoke to Ishaani yesterday, and she shares my frustration. Goodness knows what's to happen now." Martha gave Ranveer a sympathetic look and Ranveer sat opposite her, a perturbed look on his face. He offered her refreshments, all of which she politely refused. After some time Martha spoke again.

"I don't understand." Ranveer gave her a bewildered look.

"What?"

"What's the problem?"

"What do you mean?" Martha sighed and gave Ranveer a curious look.

"Things are alright between the two of you now. Infact from what I've been able to sum up, your spiritual bonding with each other has only strengthened. Then why the demons? Why the insecurity?" Ranveer gave Martha a guilty look and the latter understood.

"I put her through hell and revisited a different hell of my past altogether." Martha nodded her head and now asked him inquisitively.

"Agreed. But what's with the veil?"

"Veil?" Ranveer looked confused for a moment before his eyes widened in realization. He felt the colour creep up his cheeks before he asked swiftly. "Wait, Ishaani spoke to you about our conversation?"

"Yes. She wanted an extra understanding on the matter." Ranveer felt his throat burn and gave Martha a shrug.

"I don't know. It's like we have the security of being in love with each other. We know that we are soulfully bonded and that nothing can do us apart. Maybe, perhaps death." Martha narrowed her eyes and Ranveer could see a strange light dance within them.

"You know that failed." Ranveer caught on to Martha's implied meaning and let out a hopeless huff.

"Which is why the added frustration. It's like we are giving each other the best of our soulful assurance, but it isn't enough. It's as though we need to assure each other without physical presence. She needs my presence around her. I see her eyes wander about when I'm away for more time than necessary. I can hear the despair in her voice when she asks me whether I can make it home early today. And it's not just her. I have the same reaction. And ever since Martin told me what nearly happened, I can't stop thinking about it. It's as though both of us are living in this constant fear of losing each other. And it's really stressful."

"I'm sure you guys will figure it out." Ranveer nodded his head and Martha spoke again. "When do you intend to tell Ishaani about this?" Martha pointed towards the case file in her hand and Ranveer took a minute to answer.

"Once the final verdict was out." Martha stared at Ranveer intently and mustered her courage again.

"Can I ask you something?"

"Go ahead, Martha."

"Why haven't you told her about it?" Ranveer gave Martha a deep look before he confessed truthfully.

"I didn't want to get her hopes too high." Martha smiled at his childish honesty and continued.

"Ranveer, you know very well that our chances look good." Ranveer smiled at her innocently and Martha could sense the love in his voice.

"I do know that, but still don't want to take any chances. Which reminds me, does this make for a good Christmas gift?"

"Oh yeah, it does. Kind of celebrates the spirit of Christmas now, doesn't it?" Ranveer smiled and Martha gave him a meaningful look again. "Make sure to have things sorted out and let the veil fall." Ranveer smiled to himself as he remembered the countless times he had confided things to Martha and taken her suggestions. He could see the same thought running through Martha's mind and he grinned.

"How do I let it fall without knowing what it is?" Martha gave it a good though before replying slowly.

"Let things unwind themselves. It will fall off on its own."

"Easier said than done."

"Touch, but then again, I love the spring-essence Ranveer much more than the snowy one. Same goes for my girl as well. I like the bubbly and lively one far more than the quiet, pleasing-to-the-sight one." Ranveer smiled as Martha got up and quickly walked up to make her wear her overcoat. He smiled to himself as he admitted bitterly.

"I must have been pathetic to handle in those three years." Martha turned around and took her hat from his hand and put it on. Patting Ranveer's shoulder, she spoke admiringly.

"For all I know, you inspired me far more in life than I could help you. You are a fighter, Ranveer, and it's your love that has brought you this far. You and Ishaani are both survivors. You both have survived and fought off a lot in life with nothing but love. I'm sure you both will fight this out together." Ranveer smiled and Martha patted his cheek. "I'll take your leave now."

"Alright. Keep me updated on the situation."

Martha nodded and gave Ranveer a reassuring nod, before she left his cabin. Ranveer once again took to staring outside the window, a smile now etched over his face as the raw sunlight cut through the icy snow.

Ranveer entered the house and saw Ishaani's head drooping over the magazine. Ranveer's worried expression dissolved into one of relief and he walked up to Ishaani. Ranveer patted her shoulder and Ishaani gave a startled jerk, before seeing it was Ranveer. Smiling, she got up and gave him a hug and he hugged her lovingly. They swayed in the same pose for several minutes before they finally parted, Ranveer still holding her by her waist.

"How was your day?" Ishaani let out a soft yawn and Ranveer grinned shamelessly.

"Boring as usual. What about you?" Ishaani smiled at him and took off his coat.

"It was pretty eventful."

"How come you didn't call me today? Your phone was switched off as well." Ishaani could see the tiredness on his face and gave him a reproving look.

"That can wait. It's a pretty interesting story. Freshen up and I'll get the dinner warmed up for you." Ranveer pouted childishly and Ishaani smiled, putting her arms over his neck.

"Can we have it in our room today? I feel lazy to come down all the way for dinner again." Ishaani narrowed her eyes as Ranveer gave her a puppy look, her gaze faltering after a few minutes under his appealing ones.

"Alright, I'll get the food up." Ranveer smiled and kissed her forehead lovingly, before making his way up the staircase. Ishaani looked towards his retreating figure and smiled, making her way to the kitchen after five minutes.

Twenty minutes later, Ranveer and Ishaani both sat together in their room, discussing trivial topics. Ranveer was halfway through the dessert when he remembered the main topic of discussion and asked curiously.

"So tell me, what happened today?" Ishaani chuckled before speaking quickly.

"In the morning, I missed falling from the staircase."

"What?!" Ranveer looked aghast and Ishaani smiled.

"Don't worry, I caught my balance at the right time. My phone slipped out from my hand and feel the length. Poor thing didn't survive." Ranveer gave Ishaani an angry look and she shrugged her shoulders innocently. "Don't look at me like that. It wasn't my fault. My pantaloons got caught up in my stilettos."

"Why do you have to wear such long ones when you can't handle it?"

"You don't expect me to roam in knee-length nightgowns now, do you?" Ranveer was about to retort when he fell silent, his cheeks burning.

"You are impossible." Ishaani gave him an approving nod and continued.

"Well, that was just the start. Martin and the one of the helpers had an ugly argument."

"Why?"

"Apparently, when dusting your brilliant life-size Iron Man, the helper dropped it whole. The thing cracked from the feet." Ranveer could hear the badly suppressed glee in Ishaani's voice and scowled at her.

"What did Martin do with it?"

"Oh, he has treasured it for you. Says he will get it rectified." Ranveer shook his head in disappointment and Ishaani snorted, Ranveer distinctly catching the phrase 'boys with toys'.

"What happened next?"

"Claud went into labour." Ranveer choked over his strawberry jelly and stared at Ishaani dumbstruck.

"What?! And you are telling me this now?"

"Oh, relax. It was a false labour. Claud got the contractions pretty bad, but the water bag hadn't burst. Then too, Martin and I took her to the hospital. Over there, the doctor checked her up and told her she was having a false labour. Ever since that, Claud has been in a bad temper."

"Why? She should be happy that it wasn't a premature delivery. Atleast she is going great so far."

"Go figure. Martin and I got good lectures from her about how we handled the situation most poorly."

"That's insane! Besides, how on Earth would you know that it was a false labour? We haven't even had kids..." Ranveer trailed off his sentence to look at Ishaani, who suddenly took to staring at her bowl of lemon mousse. She looked up and gave him a blazing look while Ranveer reciprocated it with equal intensity.

"But if Claudine as a doctor couldn't make it out, how could you have done it?"

"Actually all three of us got a bit carried away. False labour is pretty common during a pregnancy but given that Claudine was having the contractions for three hours straight and we knew that it was too long for the false labour and then we took her quickly. And it was a false labour. Martin and I were relieved but Claud got a bad swing of hormones. Trust me, it's been hell trying to pacify her. Both of us gave up in the end."

"Good Lord. Pregnancies are such testing times for a woman now, aren't they?" Ishaani gave Ranveer a curious look before she smiled at him sweetly and replied.

"Yes they are."

Both of them stared at each other intently, before Ishaani got up and cleared off the dishes. Ranveer sighed and made his way to the bed, his mind still reeling with all the conversations he had had in the past 24 hours.

Ranveer felt his sleep break abruptly. As much as he was relieved that he hadn't had his usual dreams, he knew that the one he had was just as strange. He could only recollect someone crying and the continuous sound of water pouring, similar to that from a shower.

He felt disoriented as his surroundings had changed rapidly, but the sounds still remained. It was after several minutes that he realized that the sounds of the shower was still there. He quickly turned over to his other side to see the bed empty. Worried, he quickly got up and walked up to the washroom. He could hear a slight sob from within and he grew tense.

He knocked on the door thrice, but there was no response. Pushing open the door with hesitation, he entered the washroom and felt a pang hit his heart. Ishaani sat hugging herself in the shower area, drenched to the skin in her sleeveless satin peach gown. She looked up to see Ranveer and shook her head.

Ranveer entered the shower cubicle and sat down, letting himself get drenched as well. Both of them sat silently for a while before Ishaani spoke slowly, her voice cracking.

"It's feels like there's still blood on my hands. And it won't come off." Ranveer put his arm around her shoulders and pulled her closer to him, taking her hand in his own.

"Let me see." Ranveer brought her hand close to his lips and gently sucked on her fingers one by one. Ishaani let her other hand fall freely and she cuddled herself closer to him. Ranveer looked at Ishaani and spoke softly. "Better?"

Ishaani nodded her head and let Ranveer cuddle her whole, while they both sat in silence. After an infinitesimal amount of time, Ishaani spoke again.

"I have become very irrational these days, haven't I?"

"I don't say that I blame you. I have my own set of fears, but yours are cruder. It was precisely why you shifted in with me now, didn't you?"

"I couldn't let you out from my sight. Your presence gives me the security that my dreams were not reality." Ranveer nodded his head slowly.

"You must be cold." Ishaani nodded and Ranveer made her get up slowly. Both of them stared at each other for several moments before Ranveer spoke cautiously. "You shouldn't let what happened in the ER affect you this bad."

"We will take about this the day I'm stabbed and fall in your arms." Ranveer pinned her to the wall, his finger over her lips as the water falling over them increased. He glared at her, outrage evident in his voice.

"Don't you ever dare say stuff like that in front of me again or God help me, I'll kill you myself." Ranveer stared at Ishaani angrily, his soul shivering at the words she had spoken so carelessly. He removed his finger from her lips after a few moments and stared at her frightfully, realizing that they were in this close of a proximity after nearly a month. Ishaani stared at him wide-eyed for several minutes before Ranveer felt her pull him to herself, her eyes shut and head tilted. He felt his own breath cease as their noses brushed against each other's and shut his eyes before he felt his lips meet her own.

There was a raw element in the way they kissed each other; a strange, fiery passion ignited within their hearts as both of them let the water falling over them wash away their insecurities. Ranveer let his arm curl around her waist while his other hand traced over her neck that managed to have Ishaani moan softly against his lips. Ishaani, in turn, let her hand wander over his sweatshirt and her other hand interlocked itself over his hair, her touch working its magic over Ranveer. He could get the scent of essence of vanilla from her hair, while her lips has its usual soft, strawberry touch.

Ranveer let his lips capture her own in a strange urgency, as things began unravelling itself in his mind. He let himself unwind as he let his emotions overcome him and kissed her with a passion such like he had never known, the tension between them reaching a new point. Ranveer could feel Ishaani crushed between him and the wall as their lips now met for a dominant battle, his hips grinding against her own, while she let her arms now feel his back. He felt his heart feel the balm she had been yearning for all those weeks and smiled against her lips before he let his lips make a detour towards the crux of her neck.

Separating finally for air after several more minutes, Ranveer and Ishaani looked at each other and smiled coyly, before they lips meet again for a peck. Ranveer and Ishaani let their heads rest against each other's as they both gasped for breath, Ranveer's hand gently finding the knob behind him and turning off the shower. Ishaani gave him a hard look and gently locked her fingers within his own, while Ranveer felt his heart ablaze. Sighing, she led him back to the room slowly, while both of them let themselves drown in the daze of the moment that had just happened between them.

But for all they knew in that moment, the veil had begun to fall off at long last.

At long last! :D :D God, I feel as dazed as these two. :P :D

Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos. :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Before I say anything, they both need to go for IT. Thats the thing between them. Bhavnao ko samjho IshVeer 😆 btw, you have any restriction on writing mature scenes?


Finally RV is in home. Ishaani took the next step and shifted in his room. His reaction when she asked to remove shirt 🤣 and then he blushed. Aww he is cute. I can actually imagine him doing that.

How awesome was that quote? It summarize them and every soulmate out there. Both partner are essential for each other, like Donne had said lovers are part of a circle, two halves.

Gosh those nightmares. Somewhere I think RV just jumped on the recovery phases when he was shot as he was too busy on hating, those phases are rushing back now and making those dreams more horrible. He cant supress his fears underneath anger or insecurities like he did earlier because all is okay now. He is financially secure, Ishaani supporting him, even M and C are okay. The uneasiness they both feeling is, I think, lack of physical intimacy. They went through frienship, courtship, lovers, now they need to connect on the ultimate level. Its not lust, just the next step. Correct me if I am wrong.

I think Ishaani should stop making RV feel guilty about the accident. He didnt do this to him. Give the recovering guy a break !

What gonna happen to I's professional life? And Martin? Is there more to RVs injuries than just a freak accident?


Update soon.


Oh btw, how hot Radhika Shakti looked in the party masquerade eh? 3 dances in one party, her JDJ warm up I guess 😆 who is after Falguni murder? That killer's monologue is so unwanted, edit those pls CVs. Dunno why but I feel lawyer is not what he seems. Just a feeling.

Riya

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Riya! 🤗🤗
You are by far the most interesting reviewer I've had for this FF. The way you just succinctly sum up everything and whatever I want to explain is simply astounding. ⭐️⭐️
I don't think that they'll need to go in for IT coz the tension is certainly building up between them now. Regarding writing mature scenes, I don't have any restrictions. I've written it once before, but I won't be writing it here given that I'd promised one of my friends that I won't get descriptive. 😆😆
Oh yeah, that reaction was certainly one of the most interesting ones that I've written so far. It was as though I could actually see the thing happening before my eyes. 😳😳
I'm glad that you liked the quote. I'd written it myself so I was a bit hesitant whether it was alright or no, but I'm pretty happy now. 😃😃
And you are just amazing, you must know that. You have been picking on to all the hints I've been dropping around now, aren't you? Given that I've already posted the next chapter, I have no problem saying that your guess is absolutely perfect. I won't correct you because this is precisely what I've been trying to write. Its not lust, but time for them to take the next step. And as I said before and I'll say it now, you are really amazing when it comes to catching on to the hints. Really brilliant. And the way you have explained what I've been trying to show with Ranveer's nightmares was astute. ⭐️⭐️
Regarding Ishaani making Ranveer feel guilty, yep the poor guy needs a break. But then again, the incident itself was trauma for her so she can't help but feel angry at him for all the mess. Regarding ishaani's professional career, you will come to know in the next few chapters. Martin is still a while away. And don't worry, Ranveer's injuries are alright. Nothing more to it except the nightmares.
Well, you just had your wish granted. Next chapter updated. 😉
That dance was certainly hot matter. ☺️☺️ And coming to the assassin, lets just say that the guy is a specimen. ROFLROFL Unfortunately, the CVs won't even edit it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Like I said, they need to go for it. A kiss will do, for now.

Haha, Ishaani walk in house in stilletos, I agree with RV why she wear those? And poor Ironman, Ishaani ki nazar lag gyi hain I guess. And C's false labour, really interesting day.

So RV still working on library thing. Hope he succeeds. Loved Martha-his convo.

That kiss was HOT. Keh diya na, bas, keh diya. Aur kuch kehne ki halat mein hum nahi hain Lady jee😆

Riya

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At the risk of sounding boastful, some writers earlier had told me these exact things. One of them wrote one absolutely awesome spy thriller so u can guess her irritation at my replies on her post, no twist staying quite a secret. 😆 many of them left those brilliant FFs incomplete, and my frustration sky rocketed, imagine investing so much and not getting the end result in return. I am only following this story and another 2 written by my friend, and I am going to be very pissed if u two left leaving stories DC.

Really. #Iamwatchingyou 😆
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Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Like I said, they need to go for it. A kiss will do, for now.

Haha, Ishaani walk in house in stilletos, I agree with RV why she wear those? And poor Ironman, Ishaani ki nazar lag gyi hain I guess. And C's false labour, really interesting day.

So RV still working on library thing. Hope he succeeds. Loved Martha-his convo.

That kiss was HOT. Keh diya na, bas, keh diya. Aur kuch kehne ki halat mein hum nahi hain Lady jee😆

Riya

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Riya, read my previous reply. You have your answers there. 😉😉
Regarding why does she wear them, I'll be letting that out after two-three chapters. 😆😆 My poor Iron Man, I admit it must be Ishaani only jiski nazar lagi hogi. 🤣🤣 Yep, that day is certainly interesting.
Reagrding the library, I will be revealing that maybe after two chapters. 😛😛 And I'm glad that you liked their convo. 😳😳
That kiss blew your mind, eh? 😉😉 Never mind, we are content with it for now. Do read my previous reply though. You will have your answers in them, along with a hint or two. 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

At the risk of sounding boastful, some writers earlier had told me these exact things. One of them wrote one absolutely awesome spy thriller so u can guess her irritation at my replies on her post, no twist staying quite a secret. 😆 many of them left those brilliant FFs incomplete, and my frustration sky rocketed, imagine investing so much and not getting the end result in return. I am only following this story and another 2 written by my friend, and I am going to be very pissed if u two left leaving stories DC.

Really. #Iamwatchingyou 😆

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I can completely relate to this frustration because I have had the same experience as well. Back on FanFiction, I used to follow several stories, all brilliantly written and so intriguing and then one day, Poof! Just coz they lost interest in the fandom, they abandoned the story. That's why I am dead against abandoning stories. I may be late in giving updates, the abandoning them is certainly not on my list. So don't worry. 😉😉
And I can totally understand the plight of those poor authors for whom you worked as a spoiler alert. 😆😆 Luckily, since I'm writing an all-round genre, it works for me. ⭐️⭐️
And cheers! #tohavingNCcomplete ❤️😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Chapter 40: The Falling of the Veil



A/N: Hey there! :D :D Here is the next update. :D :D


Happy Reading! :D :D



December was always Ranveer's favourite month. The white blanket that the month covered over Mother Earth was always something that caught his fancy and this year was no different. He stared out of his window as the snowflakes fell slowly, a serene calm overcoming the entire atmosphere. He stared at the sky, his mind falling in a peaceful meditation, when he heard a door knock.


Turning around, he saw Martha standing near the door, a small smile on her face. Ranveer beckoned her in and freed her off her overcoat and hat, while Martha took a seat opposite his table.


"Good Lord, it's snowing so heavy. I just hope that we don't have a blizzard on the way." Ranveer gave her an apologetic look before speaking to himself more than her.


"It looked so peaceful from high up here though."


"It always does." Ranveer smiled at her and she took a seat. "Snow still has the same effect on you now, doesn't it?"


"Oh yes. Obviously I don't relate myself to it anymore given the changes my life has been through in these seven months, but it still feels peaceful." Martha nodded her head in understanding and spoke shrewdly.


"That's true enough. In these seven months, I've got to know a different Mr. Vaghela altogether. And thankfully, I got to know the real one." Ranveer frowned at her and asked, his voice laced with confusion.


"What do you mean?" Martha smiled lovingly and understanding dawned over him.


"I think you understand."


"Well, you've been with me in these three years. So naturally, you must know the difference between me being as cold and aloof as the icy nature of snow, and being as warm and pleasant as a flowery spring. Martin and Claudine tell me the same thing as well."


"I couldn't have explained that better." Martha gave Ranveer an impressed look and the latter smiled sheepishly.


"Glad I could help. So how did the hearing go?"


"The hearing went pretty well. The final verdict will be out on the 24th." Ranveer sighed heavily and gave Martha an earnest look.


"I just hope that I manage to set atleast one thing right." Martha stared at him deeply for a couple of minutes before she spoke cautiously.


"Still stuck on to the nightmares?" Ranveer gave her a helpless look and shrugged her shoulders.


"Yeah. I spoke to Ishaani yesterday, and she shares my frustration. Goodness knows what's to happen now." Martha gave Ranveer a sympathetic look and Ranveer sat opposite her, a perturbed look on his face. He offered her refreshments, all of which she politely refused. After some time Martha spoke again.


"I don't understand." Ranveer gave her a bewildered look.


"What?"


"What's the problem?"


"What do you mean?" Martha sighed and gave Ranveer a curious look.


"Things are alright between the two of you now. Infact from what I've been able to sum up, your spiritual bonding with each other has only strengthened. Then why the demons? Why the insecurity?" Ranveer gave Martha a guilty look and the latter understood.


"I put her through hell and revisited a different hell of my past altogether." Martha nodded her head and now asked him inquisitively.


"Agreed. But what's with the veil?"


"Veil?" Ranveer looked confused for a moment before his eyes widened in realization. He felt the colour creep up his cheeks before he asked swiftly. "Wait, Ishaani spoke to you about our conversation?"


"Yes. She wanted an extra understanding on the matter." Ranveer felt his throat burn and gave Martha a shrug.


"I don't know. It's like we have the security of being in love with each other. We know that we are soulfully bonded and that nothing can do us apart. Maybe, perhaps death." Martha narrowed her eyes and Ranveer could see a strange light dance within them.


"You know that failed." Ranveer caught on to Martha's implied meaning and let out a hopeless huff.


"Which is why the added frustration. It's like we are giving each other the best of our soulful assurance, but it isn't enough. It's as though we need to assure each other without physical presence. She needs my presence around her. I see her eyes wander about when I'm away for more time than necessary. I can hear the despair in her voice when she asks me whether I can make it home early today. And it's not just her. I have the same reaction. And ever since Martin told me what nearly happened, I can't stop thinking about it. It's as though both of us are living in this constant fear of losing each other. And it's really stressful."


"I'm sure you guys will figure it out." Ranveer nodded his head and Martha spoke again. "When do you intend to tell Ishaani about this?" Martha pointed towards the case file in her hand and Ranveer took a minute to answer.


"Once the final verdict was out." Martha stared at Ranveer intently and mustered her courage again.


"Can I ask you something?"


"Go ahead, Martha."


"Why haven't you told her about it?" Ranveer gave Martha a deep look before he confessed truthfully.


"I didn't want to get her hopes too high." Martha smiled at his childish honesty and continued.


"Ranveer, you know very well that our chances look good." Ranveer smiled at her innocently and Martha could sense the love in his voice.


"I do know that, but still don't want to take any chances. Which reminds me, does this make for a good Christmas gift?"


"Oh yeah, it does. Kind of celebrates the spirit of Christmas now, doesn't it?" Ranveer smiled and Martha gave him a meaningful look again. "Make sure to have things sorted out and let the veil fall." Ranveer smiled to himself as he remembered the countless times he had confided things to Martha and taken her suggestions. He could see the same thought running through Martha's mind and he grinned.


"How do I let it fall without knowing what it is?" Martha gave it a good though before replying slowly.


"Let things unwind themselves. It will fall off on its own."


"Easier said than done."


"Touch, but then again, I love the spring-essence Ranveer much more than the snowy one. Same goes for my girl as well. I like the bubbly and lively one far more than the quiet, pleasing-to-the-sight one." Ranveer smiled as Martha got up and quickly walked up to make her wear her overcoat. He smiled to himself as he admitted bitterly.


"I must have been pathetic to handle in those three years." Martha turned around and took her hat from his hand and put it on. Patting Ranveer's shoulder, she spoke admiringly.


"For all I know, you inspired me far more in life than I could help you. You are a fighter, Ranveer, and it's your love that has brought you this far. You and Ishaani are both survivors. You both have survived and fought off a lot in life with nothing but love. I'm sure you both will fight this out together." Ranveer smiled and Martha patted his cheek. "I'll take your leave now."


"Alright. Keep me updated on the situation."


Martha nodded and gave Ranveer a reassuring nod, before she left his cabin. Ranveer once again took to staring outside the window, a smile now etched over his face as the raw sunlight cut through the icy snow.



Ranveer entered the house and saw Ishaani's head drooping over the magazine. Ranveer's worried expression dissolved into one of relief and he walked up to Ishaani. Ranveer patted her shoulder and Ishaani gave a startled jerk, before seeing it was Ranveer. Smiling, she got up and gave him a hug and he hugged her lovingly. They swayed in the same pose for several minutes before they finally parted, Ranveer still holding her by her waist.


"How was your day?" Ishaani let out a soft yawn and Ranveer grinned shamelessly.


"Boring as usual. What about you?" Ishaani smiled at him and took off his coat.


"It was pretty eventful."


"How come you didn't call me today? Your phone was switched off as well." Ishaani could see the tiredness on his face and gave him a reproving look.


"That can wait. It's a pretty interesting story. Freshen up and I'll get the dinner warmed up for you." Ranveer pouted childishly and Ishaani smiled, putting her arms over his neck.


"Can we have it in our room today? I feel lazy to come down all the way for dinner again." Ishaani narrowed her eyes as Ranveer gave her a puppy look, her gaze faltering after a few minutes under his appealing ones.


"Alright, I'll get the food up." Ranveer smiled and kissed her forehead lovingly, before making his way up the staircase. Ishaani looked towards his retreating figure and smiled, making her way to the kitchen after five minutes.


Twenty minutes later, Ranveer and Ishaani both sat together in their room, discussing trivial topics. Ranveer was halfway through the dessert when he remembered the main topic of discussion and asked curiously.


"So tell me, what happened today?" Ishaani chuckled before speaking quickly.


"In the morning, I missed falling from the staircase."


"What?!" Ranveer looked aghast and Ishaani smiled.


"Don't worry, I caught my balance at the right time. My phone slipped out from my hand and feel the length. Poor thing didn't survive." Ranveer gave Ishaani an angry look and she shrugged her shoulders innocently. "Don't look at me like that. It wasn't my fault. My pantaloons got caught up in my stilettos."


"Why do you have to wear such long ones when you can't handle it?"


"You don't expect me to roam in knee-length nightgowns now, do you?" Ranveer was about to retort when he fell silent, his cheeks burning.


"You are impossible." Ishaani gave him an approving nod and continued.


"Well, that was just the start. Martin and the one of the helpers had an ugly argument."


"Why?"


"Apparently, when dusting your brilliant life-size Iron Man, the helper dropped it whole. The thing cracked from the feet." Ranveer could hear the badly suppressed glee in Ishaani's voice and scowled at her.


"What did Martin do with it?"


"Oh, he has treasured it for you. Says he will get it rectified." Ranveer shook his head in disappointment and Ishaani snorted, Ranveer distinctly catching the phrase 'boys with toys'.


"What happened next?"


"Claud went into labour." Ranveer choked over his strawberry jelly and stared at Ishaani dumbstruck.


"What?! And you are telling me this now?"


"Oh, relax. It was a false labour. Claud got the contractions pretty bad, but the water bag hadn't burst. Then too, Martin and I took her to the hospital. Over there, the doctor checked her up and told her she was having a false labour. Ever since that, Claud has been in a bad temper."


"Why? She should be happy that it wasn't a premature delivery. Atleast she is going great so far."


"Go figure. Martin and I got good lectures from her about how we handled the situation most poorly."


"That's insane! Besides, how on Earth would you know that it was a false labour? We haven't even had kids..." Ranveer trailed off his sentence to look at Ishaani, who suddenly took to staring at her bowl of lemon mousse. She looked up and gave him a blazing look while Ranveer reciprocated it with equal intensity.


"But if Claudine as a doctor couldn't make it out, how could you have done it?"


"Actually all three of us got a bit carried away. False labour is pretty common during a pregnancy but given that Claudine was having the contractions for three hours straight and we knew that it was too long for the false labour and then we took her quickly. And it was a false labour. Martin and I were relieved but Claud got a bad swing of hormones. Trust me, it's been hell trying to pacify her. Both of us gave up in the end."


"Good Lord. Pregnancies are such testing times for a woman now, aren't they?" Ishaani gave Ranveer a curious look before she smiled at him sweetly and replied.


"Yes they are."


Both of them stared at each other intently, before Ishaani got up and cleared off the dishes. Ranveer sighed and made his way to the bed, his mind still reeling with all the conversations he had had in the past 24 hours.



Ranveer felt his sleep break abruptly. As much as he was relieved that he hadn't had his usual dreams, he knew that the one he had was just as strange. He could only recollect someone crying and the continuous sound of water pouring, similar to that from a shower.


He felt disoriented as his surroundings had changed rapidly, but the sounds still remained. It was after several minutes that he realized that the sounds of the shower was still there. He quickly turned over to his other side to see the bed empty. Worried, he quickly got up and walked up to the washroom. He could hear a slight sob from within and he grew tense.


He knocked on the door thrice, but there was no response. Pushing open the door with hesitation, he entered the washroom and felt a pang hit his heart. Ishaani sat hugging herself in the shower area, drenched to the skin in her sleeveless satin peach gown. She looked up to see Ranveer and shook her head.


Ranveer entered the shower cubicle and sat down, letting himself get drenched as well. Both of them sat silently for a while before Ishaani spoke slowly, her voice cracking.


"It's feels like there's still blood on my hands. And it won't come off." Ranveer put his arm around her shoulders and pulled her closer to him, taking her hand in his own.


"Let me see." Ranveer brought her hand close to his lips and gently sucked on her fingers one by one. Ishaani let her other hand fall freely and she cuddled herself closer to him. Ranveer looked at Ishaani and spoke softly. "Better?"


Ishaani nodded her head and let Ranveer cuddle her whole, while they both sat in silence. After an infinitesimal amount of time, Ishaani spoke again.


"I have become very irrational these days, haven't I?"


"I don't say that I blame you. I have my own set of fears, but yours are cruder. It was precisely why you shifted in with me now, didn't you?"


"I couldn't let you out from my sight. Your presence gives me the security that my dreams were not reality." Ranveer nodded his head slowly.


"You must be cold." Ishaani nodded and Ranveer made her get up slowly. Both of them stared at each other for several moments before Ranveer spoke cautiously. "You shouldn't let what happened in the ER affect you this bad."


"We will take about this the day I'm stabbed and fall in your arms." Ranveer pinned her to the wall, his finger over her lips as the water falling over them increased. He glared at her, outrage evident in his voice.


"Don't you ever dare say stuff like that in front of me again or God help me, I'll kill you myself." Ranveer stared at Ishaani angrily, his soul shivering at the words she had spoken so carelessly. He removed his finger from her lips after a few moments and stared at her frightfully, realizing that they were in this close of a proximity after nearly a month. Ishaani stared at him wide-eyed for several minutes before Ranveer felt her pull him to herself, her eyes shut and head tilted. He felt his own breath cease as their noses brushed against each other's and shut his eyes before he felt his lips meet her own.


There was a raw element in the way they kissed each other; a strange, fiery passion ignited within their hearts as both of them let the water falling over them wash away their insecurities. Ranveer let his arm curl around her waist while his other hand traced over her neck that managed to have Ishaani moan softly against his lips. Ishaani, in turn, let her hand wander over his sweatshirt and her other hand interlocked itself over his hair, her touch working its magic over Ranveer. He could get the scent of essence of vanilla from her hair, while her lips has its usual soft, strawberry touch.


Ranveer let his lips capture her own in a strange urgency, as things began unravelling itself in his mind. He let himself unwind as he let his emotions overcome him and kissed her with a passion such like he had never known, the tension between them reaching a new point. Ranveer could feel Ishaani crushed between him and the wall as their lips now met for a dominant battle, his hips grinding against her own, while she let her arms now feel his back. He felt his heart feel the balm she had been yearning for all those weeks and smiled against her lips before he let his lips make a detour towards the crux of her neck.


Separating finally for air after several more minutes, Ranveer and Ishaani looked at each other and smiled coyly, before they lips meet again for a peck. Ranveer and Ishaani let their heads rest against each other's as they both gasped for breath, Ranveer's hand gently finding the knob behind him and turning off the shower. Ishaani gave him a hard look and gently locked her fingers within his own, while Ranveer felt his heart ablaze. Sighing, she led him back to the room slowly, while both of them let themselves drown in the daze of the moment that had just happened between them.



But for all they knew in that moment, the veil had begun to fall off at long last.



At long last! :D :D God, I feel as dazed as these two. :P :D


Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos. :D


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;) WONDER full chapter LM seriously u can become a world famous writer..ur writing is sooo fab that there r no words to describe it.btw tysm for sending me that PM.. cant wait for bext chapter stay awesome swty

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