SWARON FF : BEYOND COMMITMENT #2 EPILOGUE UPDATED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I Just don't believe that i had to open a new thread to post the epilogue...i had no idea that we have to open new thread after the previous reaches 150 pages... so here it is...

but then again i am super happy to actually come into terms that this story has come so long that a new thread is reached... and the entire credit goes to you people and of course to shini di which i will write in the post after the update...

so the next post has the epilogue and do check the post below the update...

enjoy...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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EPILOGUE




"movie dekhne chale????" she pouted n blinked her eyes to convince swayam who looked up from his laptop... He gave a nervous smile...

"haa ...chalte hai..." he knew there is no point in fighting with her because right now fat tears will spill from her eyes...

"insidious dekhte hai..." Sharon said clapping her hands like a kid... Swayam felt his cardiac muscles contract signaling him of an attack...

"lekin cookie... Horror movie dekhne se hormonal change hote hai.. and its not good in pregnancy...any kind of shock is not good for the baby nuh????" he prayed to all the gods he knew of hoping his crazy , 4 month pregnant wife listens to him...

It has been 5 yrs of their marriage and for swayam it has been a beautiful journey knowing all the shades of Sharon which were unknown to him even after being her best friend...

And right now , whatever swayam was hoping became true to his horror... sharon's eyes has started brimming...

"accha fine... chalte hai..." swayam immediately wiped her tears and they got ready...

**********

"swayam..." Sharon looked up from the crook of his neck at him...

"hm..." swayam and Sharon were sitting in the theatre with his hands wrapped around her tightly as she was white with fear...

"tu sahi tha... mujhe nahi dekhna.. ye bohut darawni hai..." she pouted and swayam immediately took her out of the theatre...

"so ab kya karna hai????" swayam asked her hoping again she won't ask him to take for sky diving... with the kind of weird way Sharon was behaving that was not at all impossible...

"lets watch something funny... how about rom com????" she winked at him and swayam sighed in relief... better than sky diving...

They went to another screen of the multiplex after getting the tickets and settled down... after an hour of the movie Sharon looked at swayam with a frown...

"ye bakwas hai I tell you..." swayam was shocked... all the people around them looked at them giving him looks as Sharon was too loud...

Swayam gave them an embarrassing smile in the dark theatre and whispered to Sharon...

" what's wrong cookie..."

"mujhe ye nahi dekhna... its boring...lets watch the horror movie only... ab dar nahi lagega..." Swayam gritted his teeth in frustration and went out along with Sharon...

"kya chahiye???" he snapped at her and sharon frowned... swayam mentally face palmed and bashed himself left and right for shouting at her ...

"mera matlab hai ab kya kare???" he asked her sweetly...

"bola na..lets go back to insidious..." she pouted...

"but sharon the movie is almost over..." He whinned...

"Sharon kyun bola?????" she asked almost ready to burst into tears... Swayam was taken aback...

"huh???" he didn't know what else to say...

"cookie nahi bola..." she stomped her foot and started walking out of the mall and swayam now face palmed literally and ran after her to catch up with her...

*****************

It was evening and Sharon was sitting in the lounge and swayam was sitting there too watching the French opens quarter final men's singles and was almost cursing his fate as Roger Federer was on the losing end... nothing was going right today...

"Sharon di.. ye lo apki milk...jaldee pilo..." muskaan sat beside her giving her the glass... Sharon made a face and turned away...

"mujhe nahi peene..." She pouted ...

"soch lo..isme apki favorite chocolate nuts hai..." muskaan smirked as she knew Sharon is gonna drink it right away... Sharon's face lit up and she finished the milk in one way...

" nut for a nut..." Swayam muttered but as he correctly mentioned that his day was too bad , both Sharon and muskaan had heard it... Next came what was most expected...

Sharon burst into tears and started sobbing while his mom and chachi came downstairs and then he had to listen to a half an hour long lecture of how inappropriate of him was to make an "innocent" girl like Sharon cry and behave rudely with her when he was supposed to be fulfilling all her wishes even if her wish meant taking her to Disney land...

"great...just great..." He muttered...

"waise why don't you concentrate on decorating the baby room..." Swayam's mom tried to calm Sharon down... Sharon's face immediately lit up...

"haa swayam... rey ko bol colouring book leke aye..." she said happily... swayam knew she would be happy one moment and sad one moment...

"colouring book???" he tried to confirm whether he had heard right...

"I mean... wall pe paint karne ke liye colour catalogue..." after Sharon explained swayam called rey and after half an hour rey was standing in the lounge along with the rest of the shekhawat family looking sympathetically at swayam...

"blue karaye...???" Sharon went throught he card which had different shades of blue...

"nahi...pink kara... it would be a girl I'm sure..." Swayam said with a smile...

"nahi blue..." sharon immediately had to say the exact opposite of what swayam had said...

"go for mauve.." muskaan suggested and Sharon took her advice and asked for the purple catalogue...

"but these are not the correct mauve rey..." she threw the cards on rey's face and he was buffled...poor fellow , swayam thought...

"huh???" rey couldn't gauge any other reaction...

"haa... some are more mauve , some are less mauve , some are a bit less than too much mauve... some are much more than a little less mauve... some are bluish mauve , but I want mauve... not more , not less , but the correct mauve..." She explained herself and thought everyone has understood and casually went upstairs...

And in the hall there was pin drop silence... rey looked at the mauve catalogue hurled on his face and then looked at swayam who gave everyone a " I told you she is nuts" look...

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It was night and swayam came inside the room to see Sharon smiling standing near the window with a smile looking at the pouring rain.. he smiled looking her smile and guessed her mood was fine... so it was safe for him... he went inside and locked the door and hugged her from behind caressing her slightly swollen belly... Sharon leaned back at him...

"baby?? Sab thik haina andar????" swayam asked looking at her stomach...

"haa papa sab thik hai..." Sharon replied ... every night it was their schedule to talk to each other as if swayam was conversing with the baby...

"swayam see na.. its raining... lawn mein water log ho gaya..." Sharon said cheerfully... swayam gave a nervous smile again.. hope she won't ask him to swim there...

"haaa..." he said with a fake smile...

"chal na waha chalke paper boats sail karte hai..." she clapped her hands again... swayam sighed in relief... after all sailing paper boats is easier than swimming in rain water , he mentally chuckled at his own stupid joke...

Sharon went and took her diary out from her locked drawer... swayam frowned... she sat on the bed and tore some pages from there...

"ye kya kar rahi hai????" swayam literally screamed as he saw the papers she was tearing the pages where her writing was there...

"paper boat karne ke liye paper chahiye..." she made a face at him...

Swayam rushed towards her and snatched the diary away...

"kahi aur se tear kar... ye kyun kharab kar rahi hai..." he frowned at her trying to prove his point...

"you bloody thief , robber , dacoit..." She screamed back at him and swayam's eyes popped out...

"what???" he asked clueless...

" pura diary to tune chor ki tarah par liya.. you literally know it by heart... Ab iski kya zarurath..." she glared at him...

"haa wo to hai..." swayam grinned at her... " but abhi tu diary nahi likhegi?? Matlab nahi likhti bohut dino se but kabhi nahi likhegi????" he asked softly...

"naahhh..." she smiled and hugged his arms... " ab tu haina... jo likhneka man karega wo tujhe bata dungi... mera chalta firta diary... and in that way tere liye bhi easy hoga.. sunna is easier than chori karke parna..." she winked at him and swayam smiled...

They were standing on the last staircase of the lawn which was not immersed in rain water.. swayam had pulled up his jeans till his knees and Sharon was already wearing a knee length short... they had made paper boats out of her diary pages...

Swayam didn't let Sharon bend a bit and instead he himself took the boats to sail it in the water to fulfill her wish and make her smile and Sharon held and umbrella above their head...

As the rain dropped on the logged water creating ripples , and sharon's laughter echoed resonating above the sound of the rain , swayam followed sharon's gaze as their boats made of the pages of the diary floated away, each carrying the secret tale of their friendship and love "beyond commitment"...

Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE


i never knew i could write , unless and untill my english sir read a short story of mine and told me to continue...

then also i never believed and still i don't think i can write.. at least not better than many of you people whose Fanfic , short stories n OS blow me over...

n if i am writing this down today its only because of shini di... i joined IF and as a newbie posted the prologue of this FF which only got 10 likes... obviously i thought that this is horrible and i probably should not fill the forum with such stupid stuffs and then i got shini di's PM asking me to post the 1st chapter... i told her that i am not continuing and the next thing i knew was loads of comments and likes filling the prologue ... she had sent a pm to all her friends , some of them are now my friends too... so i can never thank you enough for this shini di!!!...i owe you a lot...

so this is for you...

and then last but not the least.. each one of you... and i mean it... who commented or liked or for that matter who read silently and appreciated , pointed out mistakes so that i can rectify them and learn from them.. thanks to you...

yeah how can i forget sanchi... i know its her favorite one and she literally reminded me to update it every time... thanks buddy!!!!... your comments n everything meant a lot...

i am not taking names and saying thanks individually... or the note will be bigger than the update... but i know you people will understand that i mean it from the bottom of my heart...

THANK YOU... thanks a lot se bhi zyada...

i hope i'll get your long comments and likes for the last time on this...

i feel bad...its my first work...but their story didn't end... it began...

so happy beginning...

love n loads of it,,,,

ani
Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
as much as i dont want this story to end nevertheless the story culd have had a better end...
Swaron truly means Eternity in every way... N yes its the New Beginning...
The Story had All the Emotion wrapped in Beautiful writing... Love, Friendship, Care, All shades of Happy Moments...
As i always say, u are a Wonderful Writer which u obviously are, I love each Piece of Writing of urs.
.. Each with a Fresh Vibe..
And now as The FF rests here i wish to read more from u :)
Cant wait for the Updates in the Other Stories 😉
Edited by Ires011 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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one of my favorite FF's
although i never told u this but still..!!!
will miss this one..!!

the way u write is commendable..!!
i love your writings..!!!
coming to the epilogue..!!
cute one..!!!
bechara swayam..!!!
chor wala😆
had a hearty laugh..!!!
do write more..!!!

congo for the second thread..!!!
Edited by __nidhi__ - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
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res..,
yea...congrats for 2nd thread...
unres...
u end it well..
cute and lovey dovey update..😳
in all nice ending
Edited by ndcdance - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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perfect ending for a perfect story
loved it
congrats for the second thread too
not all reach there
will miss this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was soo cute yaar
loved it..
sharon n her mood swings..bechara swayam..
it was fun reading this epilogue😆

he had to listen to a half an hour long lecture of how inappropriate of him was to make an "innocent" girl like Sharon cry and behave rudely with her when he was supposed to be fulfilling all her wishes 😆😆😆
"haa... some are more mauve , some are less mauve , some are a bit less than too much mauve... some are much more than a little less mauve... some are bluish mauve , but I want mauve... not more , not less , but the correct mauve..." lol
but sharon must be looking really cute
and the best part of the update.." swaron talk"❤️
very cute it was.
the diary part lol " pura diary to tune chor ki tarah par liya.. you literally know it by heart... Ab iski kya zarurath..."

" ab tu haina... jo likhneka man karega wo tujhe bata dungi... mera chalta firta diary... and in that way tere liye bhi easy hoga.. sunna is easier than chori karke parna..." awww
"their boats made of the diary pages floated away, each carrying the secret tale of their friendship and love "beyond commitment"...👏
so the story ended..m sad..bt Awesome story..enjoyed reading it.👍🏼


Edited by ujwalv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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btw ab 2nd thread ban hi gaya hai to continue with this story..😉
season 2 may be 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres

So here i am ...🤗
Firstly i'll like to mention i was smiling like a maniac throughout the update😆
there couldn't be a better epilogue to this wonderful story of yours...
you made all your readers smile in the end...and that makes you a wonderful writer...👏
now coming to epilogue...

The start was cute...swayam was concerned but sharon would make him do what she wanted ...and he always surrendered ...😆
I loved the entire theatre scenario...😃
when she was scared...she realized swayam was right...😆
And he was afraid if she would ask for sky-diving ...🤣
Their convos are always super adorable...i donno what to say about that...😳
but this one was my fav...
"Sharon kyun bola?????"..."huh???"..."cookie nahi bola..."....... you maintained the innocent sharon so well...😊


The way sharon was behaving was fun to read..from .crying all the way..like a kiddo ...to .being happy at small things...like nuts in milk or decorating baby's room...it was all fun..😆
And have to mention the

"colouring book???" and the "mauve"thing was superb...sharon stole the show...

"haa... some are more mauve , some are less mauve , some are a bit less than too much mauve... some are much more than a little less mauve... some are bluish mauve , but I want mauve... not more , not less , but the correct mauve..."...
...🤣

this was so good...😆 (ki kore likhis .?)

swaron talking to baby was adorable...
The end was best...sharon tore pages from her diary and her reasoning to swayam for doing so was lovely...
Sailing paper boats in rain was beautiful (couldn't find any other wrd)
you said it's an epilogue not a chapter...but it is my favourite of all...

The last words were enchanting...👏
the beautiful friendship wrapped in the canopy of love will always be cherished...

When the last chappy was up i wanted an epilogue..
and now when the epilogue is up i wish for a season 2...
i knw i'm greedy...u being an awesome writer...

Keep writing...!!!!..
and do fulfil my wish if possible...


Lavanya



Edited by lavanyalaa0 - 10 years ago

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