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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u sooo much for sending me pm..
This is 1 of my fav story. Chp 5 is amazing. Abh jldi se TAAREY ko ek kardo
Aapki sab stories achi hoti hai n plzzz keep writting.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
waiting for rey's reaction when he comes to know about her child marraige
loved the cute moments between taarey
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
first sorry for late comment di
sharon and taani convo was nice and lovely di
and omg the little scene of taarey in the dinner was beautiful
i loved the way taani care for him
taarey talk was nice
i hope taani meet him alone
update soon di
thanks for pm di😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Beautifully written
Water glass moment was...aww
Taani care so much for him
That she bought food for him
Even though it was not allowed to her
Rey LOVES her ❤️
Holi time
I guess during this day rey will come to know that
She is a widow
Because she wont be allowes to play holi
JUST LOVED THIS CHAPTER
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏READ chapter 4 &5 together. ...
Awesome update. .
povs glass moment.
Super awesome. .
kash yeh holi mein taarey ke pyaar ka rang bhi mil jaye. ..
thanx for pm. .
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing story😊😊
taani's in-laws are so bad😡😡
but gud to see that swayam is not lyk that😊😊
taani & rey falling for each other😊😊
now only swayam can help rey in taking taani way from all pains
waiting for next update
update soon and pm me when u update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-6



Next day it was afternoon, from morning no one has seen Taani, even Swayam had not met her, Rey's eyes were searching her everywhere, all he wanted to see her one glimpse, he was getting impatient but she was nowhere to be found, and morning getting the information from her sister that she was the topper in class 12, respect for her had grew more in his heart, but along with that one more thought has gripped his heart that Taani is really young for a relation she is 7 years younger than him, will she like him the way he likes her rather loves her? Can they be in relation? Will she love him? Even Sharon was bit anxious that she has not seen her from yesterday night, but she was also excited because after 7 days of coming here today evening she, Swayam and Rey will first time go out, they a had planned to go to the nearby river side, in the evening all Rey wanted was if somehow he could take Taani with them, then maybe he could talk with her understand her.


All were sitting in the living area, Swayam, Sharon, Rey, Swayum's parents, his chachi and chacha ji and discussion regarding next day's holi festival was going on.


Swayam's father (SF)- Kya baat hai 3.00 pm baaj kaya abhi chai nahi milieu? (It's 3.00 pm till no one served tea)


Swayam's mother (SM)- mai kya karu Taani ka kam hai, kaab sae mandir gaya abhi ayii bhi nahii


Swayam's chacha (SC)- Kya usnae nirjala brath (Fasting without no food and water) rakha bhabi? (Did she keep her fast)


SM- ha devar ji, maine kal raath ko hi boldiya tha. Kal raath ko mai pani ka jug nikal diya tha uskae room sae kal raath 12 bajae hie brath suru ho gaya tha, aj raath ko bara bajae holika ke puja ke baad khatam hoga.


Swayam- Kya bol rahii ho ma, pagal ho aap? Taani ne subha sae brath rakha pani and khanae ki bana... app logo ko kiu samajh mai nahii ata..ki woh bachhi hai? And kaunsa mandir gaya hai woh?


SD-Swayam jawan samhal ke baat karo...ghar ki larkio ki mamlae mai tumhae bolnae ki koi jarurat nahi hai? Aur 24 ghantae bina khana and pani koi barii baat toh nahii.


Sw- aap bhul rahe ho papa woh behen hai merii and kya ish ghar mai kisine kabhi 24 hrs ki fasting ki hai?


SM-behen bolne sai behen nahii ho jata


Swayam's Chachi (SCh)- Bhabhi aap ne kahae diya hai na durga mandir nangae payar (bare footed) jana hai? (Bhabi did you inform Taani ki durga mandir she has to go bare footed by walking)


Swayam- Chachi durga mandir? Are u joking 21 km woh bhi etni dhup mai bare footed maar jaygii... chotti hai , its 3.00 pm usne khana nahi khaya, pani bhi nahi pie 21 km chalk e jaygii and that too bare footed, aap log inhuman ho ?


SC- Bhabhi aap ki beta ko kiu nahi smjhatae ki baro ke mamlae mai bolna nahi cahiyaa. Aur yeaha bhi bhul gaya ki apnae chachi sae kaysae baat karate hai.(Bhabi why don't you teach your son some manners? He has forgotten how to talk to elders?)


SM-Eshmai swayam ka kya galtii hai? Maharani rotae hui surat lekar mere beta ko bharkatii hai, aj anae de usae, achhi sabak sikhaungie.(It's not the fault of my son,it's Taani who cries in front of him gaining sympathy, let her come today I will teach her a lesson)


While all this conversation was going on, Rey and Sharon was quite, first of all in this last 7 days they has seen Swayam arguing for something with his parents and so called elders, Sharon couldn't register how can a 17 years girl keep fasting for the whole day without food and water, while Rey was in his world, because yesterday night when she brought food for him it was 1.15 am, that means her fasting started, if at all he knew he would have forced her to eat something, moreover the thought that herself remaining empty stomach she cares for him was killing him from inside, and those food which he consumed was as if taunting him making fun of him and now if possible he would have thrown out whatever he has ate from morning, feeling her in that pain was killing him from inside. Soon before anyone could see Rey registered her presence in the door, looking at her he felt like killing himself, her one look could have make anyone understand the condition of her health, he felt like running towards her and taking her in his arms, and soothing her pain, he wanted to take her away from everybody, in some solace where he could keep her away from all pain and sufferings, but things was yet to begin. His strand broke.


SM-a gayii maharani...kaha ghum rahi thie etnae waqt takh, aur saar sae pallu kiu gayab hai? (seeing Taani coming she asked where was she, and why so late, and why didn't she covered her head with her saree pallu and where was she roaming about?)


SC-puri ki puri besharam hai. (shameless girl)


Taani- Dhup bohot thi...


SM-bash bash ram kahani suru maat kar..ja ke chai bana..gala suukh raha hai.(Bus don't start your story, go and prepare tea and snacks, my throat is becoming dry)


Sharon (very softly only Rey could here)- galae mai acid daal du?


But Rey couldn't hear anything as she moved towards the kitchen, Rey could see her blood strain foot marks...even all saw it, Swayam was dying every moment for his sister and now there so called traditional family ka cover-up bhi uskae buddy and girl friend ke samne utaar gaya..he was feeling helpless.


SC- dekho bhabhi purae floor blood marks sae ganda kar diya, Kya re Taani, ja ke poocha laga. (asked her elder sister-in-law, to look at Taani's foot marks, she has made the floor dirty with it, and asked Taani to clear the floor)


Still she was obeying everything, because she is used to all these, but today the heat was too much, her legs gave up, the cut in her right foot was hell paining, and before she could register anything her eyes became blurry and she fainted, whereas a pair of eye from a distance could understand that her walk was abnormal, and before her body could touch the ground, she was in his arms, at that moment he didn't care, he couldn't take her pain anymore, he was determined. Whereas for whole family Taani fainted was not at all a issue rather no one was worried, but the fact Rey caught her was a big sin committed and one more sin was yet to commit.


SM- Nautanki sae baaz nahi ayagii... abhi din bhi nahi guzra chakkar anae lagaee... (That she was faking, a kind of drama bazzi, because how can in such a short time, i.e 12am to 3.pm she faint)


SC-Bhabi (with a bitter laugh) Kis baat ki chakkar dekhna kahi mu kala to nahii kiya... aj kaal etnae sarae meheman jo hai (clearly taunting REY)


Swayam's chichi clearly indicated that she may be characterless and may have fainted because may be she is pregnant..Mocking her health and clearly indicating Rey)


SD- chal chottee (calling swayam's chacha) andar chaltae hai, and addressing his wife, agar dramae bazzi khatam ho gaya ho chai de dena...


She was still in Rey's arms instantly Swayam and Sharon came running, Rey holding her in his arms made her lie down on the couch and Swayam started sprinkling water on her face, she was not gaining her consciousness, Swayam went to call doctor, his mother and his chachi mocked him taunting him that he is going beyond limit, that Taani will as it is become OK, she is faking just that she can escape from cooking night dinner and other household works, Rey was having a disgusted feeling and just then when Taani opened her eyes little bit, she somehow sat on the couch and Sharon passed a glass of water to Rey and immediately Rey made her drink the water, Rey was holding the glass and Taani was drinking, she didn't even complete drinking when she felt a strong hold on her hair, before she could turn and Rey could understand Swayam's mother snatched away the glass and started a whole lot of drama and the reason was a severe one that she didn't complete the fasting, she broke it, which can bring darkness to the family, and that too she drank water from a man's hand, Rey was shocked was an understatement, in his whole life he didn't felt so miserable, he was staring at her and the droplets from her eyes was stabbing his heart, even there was a cut on the edge of her lips, formed by the sudden snatching of the steel glass, he couldn't register what he should do, whether he should just hug her tight or give a tight slap on Swayam's mother and his chachi's face, for Sharon it was an vulnerable situation she was not at all understanding what the drama was going on, why the girl was so much abused and what a big deal happened if her brother made her drink water when she fainted when she was empty stomach from midnight, when her legs were bleeding how inhuman can family members be, and first time her breadth hitched, if a girl of the family is treated so badly then what about a bahu of the family and her mind compelled her to think how can she marry a person belonging to this family??


Slowly, Taani tried to get up, with a bleeding feet she took steps towards the stairs, while passing by her paalu of her white saree fell on Rey's face, He felt like pulling her in his arms, loving her soothing her pain, his eyes started glittering, but when the pallu of her saree fell on him he felt his pain soothing, how comforting was her one mere touch, how can the mere touch of her saree give him so comfort when she herself is in utter pain. He was facing her back, she has just worked a few steps, she was in the middle of few stairs when she totally collapsed she once again fainted, but this time it was Swayam who caught her, he called for Rey and Rey and Sharon came running, Swayam signalled Rey and Rey in front of everyone lifted her in his arms, Swayam gave one last disgusting look at his family and clearly announced that he is taking her to the nearby town hospital. He asked Sharon to follow him and they proceeded towards the hospital.


The journey went on in utter silence, Sharon had many thinks to ask but she was quite and really was broken and vulnerable as she has never seen such type of persons in her utter life. She was quietly sitting beside Swayam who was in the driver sit, she kept on looking at Swayam from the corner of her eyes they were blood shot and was blurry she decided not to communicate and kept looking outside. Rey was on the back sit with Taani, holding her unconscious body protectively. He was caressing her hair, tears were flowing from his eyes, he was feeling lost, slowly he took out her handkerchief and rubbed the dried smear of blood from the corner of her lips. He took her hand and held her palms and kissed her knuckles.There was a bump in the road the car jerked, Rey was startled as if the jerk would increase her pain, he shifted more close to her and protectively held her more near to him, her head was in his lap, but now with utmost care he softly held her close and her head was on his chest, her open hair were caressing his cheeks, giving him a soothing feeling, just in the same way last night she herself was fasting but took care of his food. In pain also as if all she cared was about him.


REY"S POV


I always wanted her to take her in my arms and love her, but when ultimately she is in my arms, I am regretting I never wanted this to happen, I never wanted to hold her unconscious body in my arms, I started dreaming about her ...I admit I dreamt of taking her in my arms when she will be laughing or she will feel shy, she will hide her face in my chest but I never imagined to see her in this condition, she is just a broken doll, why God what's the reason why is she being tortured so much, I Love you Taani, and now all I want is to talk about you with Swayam, aab mujhae koi farq nahi parta ki you love me or not, but I am determined I will take you with me, there you may study, live a happy life, and then if you love me back, I will be the happiest person if not then also it's ok but I can't see you in pain. Kuch to baat hai, why do the family members torture her so much, I understand in Indian villages girl child her not treated well, but then too how can a mother treat her daughter so badly, when she being a lady has given birth to her daughter. But one thing is I have made up my mind, kuch bhi ho jayaee now Swayam can't ignore me, he have to answer and I swear I will not allow anyone to harm you or hurt you any-more. Never in my life I felt any kind of attraction towards any girl, but the moment I saw you my world stopped, at the beginning I ignored thinking it as my mere crush, but now I know you are the love of my life, and kuch bhi ho jaye I will feel happiness in your life, I love you Taani, my Princess, (rubbing his own tears he kissed her forehead and he didn't hesitate, he felt as he has all right on her) and this is the last pain you are going through, I assure jaab tum apnae ankhae khologie, tumharae jindegie sae saab pain gayab ho jayega, I will remove all pain from your life. I Love you and I pray to you God jaldi sae make her fine. Kuch nahi honae dunga tumhae..kuch bhi nahi. No one has the right to harm my Taani, to give her pain not even her family members.( Once again he caressed the cut in her lips and then holding her close in his chest, he closed his eyes, tears were flowing down unstoppable),




Sorry to say, I may sound bit harsh...but next update only after 85 likes.


Part-7 Pg-42https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/123565022



Edited by taani.priya1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss... Me 1st!!! Yayyy!!😊😃

Unress!!!
Di...The update was so emotional!!!!
I loved it!!
I jz wanna see Rey taking Taani away from that hell!!!!
Swayam's family members are so disgusting!!!😲
Hate them!!!!😡😡
Loved Rey, Swayam and Sharon's care towards Taani!!!
Plz plz update asap

Edited by princess1926 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I can't see it
It's going out of page
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yooo awesome update ek dum dhaasu but seriously swayam's family mmbers are a sick bunch of jerks usss swayam ki CHICHI ki to main...ulta taang du hanging garden se,poor taani hope rey soon take her away from this hell thanku for pm and update soon
Edited by priya1999 - 10 years ago

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