TaaRey- Love Makes Life Beautiful (Thread-1) - Page 29

Nice update
swayam's family members are so cruel
hope taani is fine
waiting for next part

Really an emotional updt.
I luvd rey's love and care towards taani. Jst wanna see the moment when rey heal her all pains and make her happy wth his luv. Swayam's parents was so disgusting. I want to kill those bloody devils. I hate them... Sharon's and swayam's care is also nice. Updt nxt part asap

loved it
waiting for another lovely update

Friends this update is dedicted to hima_taarey , poorni_vishali , and Bista-anzana because I wrote this updated and some how it got deleted I was so broken and I was over confident that I can never write this update once again with the same feelings and emotions, but these 3 had the confidence and constantly encouraged me saying this time it will be better and it was all because of these three's confidence, love and trust I wrote it once again. But I am not sure about the update, how it turned out.

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PART-7

It was late evening Taani was admitted to the hospital, Doctor started her treatment, the diagnosis was going on, Swayam was busy in the counter and Sharon though chose to be quite for sometime was standing beside him, and Rey was outside the ICU, broken and helpless, after about 2hrs when the test were almost complete, doctor came out and then they came to know that she was suffering from severe low pressure, amniotic, was in empty stomach for hours, water imbalance, deficiency of vitamins, and it was even revealed that apart from the new cuts there were much more cuts and burn marks in various places on her legs, arms and back, which surely indicated the pain she went through in the last few months, she was kept under sedatives, glucose was running through her arteries, doctors informed that they will keep her under observation for 24 hrs, the necessary form was filled by Swayam, but a mere column her date of birth couldn't be filled by him, Sharon was astonished how can a brother be unaware of her sister's date of birth? When she enquired about it Swayam chose to maintain silence because he knew there are many things which he need to answer and now those questions can't be kept away, he need to answer soon, Swayam called Kaka the old servant from home and asked him to bring a certain file, which he has collected from Taani's previous school, because being a class 12 topper she was not even allowed to collect her result and certificates, unaware to everybody Swayam collected it all, and when kaka brought it from the house, it was then they came to know that tomorrow on the day of Holi is her 18^th birthday.

Sharon was shocked all she could remember was though their parents died when she was still a kid but the way her brother REY celebrated her 18 th birthday in a grand way and her BF being a brother doesn't even know about the date of his sister's birth. When all these confusions was going on, Rey was sitting as a lifeless soul, his heart was aching, he wanted to know, why she is tortured so much, and her wound and burn marks which doctor said was killing him from inside, first time in his whole life he felt attracted towards a girl and by the time he realized that she is not his attraction rather she is his life, that he loves her from the core of his heart, and when he just decided to talk to her, she is nowhere, she is lying unconscious on the hospital bed, his heart was ripping apart in her pain. But his thought was interrupted when Sharon came to him.

Sh- Bhai, aap ko pata hai, Swayam ko Taani ki date of birth bhi nahi pata, yeah kaysa family hai bhai?

R- Chotti stop it, right now I am not in right frame of mind and all I care is about her health.

Sh- Bhai...(cupping his face in her palms) is it so?

R-Kya?

Sh-Bhai do you really think you can hide it from me? (Rubbing his tears with her palms) You love her right? It is seen on your eyes, your teary eyes are telling me the immense love you have for her.

R-(Pulling her beside him) chotti tujsae kya chupana, ha chotti I love her, I Love her so much, but I am not sure about her, bohot age difference hai, she is 7 years younger than me, Will she understand my feelings?

Sh- Bhai are you mad, aap ko kaun nahi payaar karaga, and if I am not wrong aj jo mai aap ki ankho mai dakh rahii hu, remembered that day when you choked while eating, bhai ak pal ke liya hie sayii but I saw the same feelings in her eyes too.

R-Nahii pata chotti and seriously right now I am worried about her health, and I will love her forever, but she will love me back or not will be her choice and I will never force her.

Sh- bhai frankly speaking I am sure she loves you but whether she will speak it out or not I am not sure because there family, and if I be honest bhai, mujhae nahii pata I am confused I am not even sure about my relation with Swayam after meeting his family, bhai conservative hona traditional hona alag baat hai, and being inhuman is completely different, I need to think

Bhai...

This conversation was heard by Swayam, on the first place he was happy that Rey loves Taani so much, may be after hearing the truth of her life still he will accept him and if it happens, he was sure Taani, whom he really treats as his sister from the core of his heart will have a loving protective life partner in her life, he had no doubt that Rey will give her more happiness than he himself can think for her, but he was sad too, if by chance Rey doesn't accept her hearing her past and the fact that Sharon want to re think about their relation was somewhere breaking him, he would never want Sharon to lose her trust and faith on him, thinking all these he tried to initiate a talk because it was now indeed needed, before all relations are shattered.

Sw- Rey, Sharon its already 9.30 pm , tum dono ghar chale jayo kaka ke sath I will stay back with Taani in the hospital.

R-Swayam tu Sharon ko leke chala ja, I want to stay with her.

Sh-No ways bhai, aap ke bina Swayam Shekhawat ke ghar? Am I mad ? I don't think in that house humans stay.

R-Chottii Swayam hai na tere saath.

Sh-Bhai are you kidding? Swayam? A person who doesn't know when her sister took birth, a person who sit and watch her sister being mercilessly tortured, a person who didn't disclose the truth of having a sister from last 15 years, you want me to feel safe with that person, actually Mr. Swayam Shekhawat, I really need to think, because at this moment honestly speaking I need a break-up.

Sw-Are you in your sense what are you speaking? Tumhae breakup cahiya when you know I love you so much.

Sh- Swayam love ke saath trust bhi hona cahiyaa, and that trust factor in our relation at this point is a big ZERO.

R-Stop It!! Just Stop it You both!! And Sharon kya saach mai tujhae lagta hai ki break-up is that easy, I don't think break-up is so easy in a relation because now I know exactly what love is because...

Sw-Because you love Taani...

R-(ignoring what Swayam said) I guess you both go home and Swayam Sharon ka khayal rakna.

Sh-Bhai No...no means no.

Sw- Sharon please aab Rey ne bhi kaha na

Sh-Kya kaha bhai ne, that you are trust worthy

Sw-samajh ne ki koshish karo Sharon

R- Yup Swayam I really didn't want the conversation right now, but I guess what chotti is saying is also absolutely correct, you have hidden so many things from us and now

Sh(with anger and hatred)- Now will you care to explain??

Sw-Both of you come with me and Rey don't worry she is under sedatives, her pulses are now normal, and before tomorrow morning she will not wake up, she will sleep. Behind the hospital there is the river flowing, river bank is abundant at night chal we can go there and talk.

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3 hours passed, Swayam spoke and the other two were listeners, as they couldn't gasp with the truth Swayam was speaking out. They had no senses left with the truth of Taani that she became a victim of child marriage at the age of 3 with someone 12 years older than her, being a virgin, not even knowing what exactly is a relation of husband and wife, she is compelled to live a life of a widow bearing tortures of in-laws. Swayam told them everything, that he came to know all these just when he came home after years this time, that he refused the relation of devar-bhabhi instead he treats her as his sister, and he is ready to do whatever possible to gift her a loving peaceful life. He even said that his family members will treat her more harshly, torture her more once he goes away from here, and even he is planning how to take her away from here forever.

It was midnight 1.30 am, there was serine silence, the piercing effect of wind was still there, early march weather had the chilliness, and a river bank in the midnight had added the fierceness of the cold wind, creating a shivering effect. The three persons were having crystal droplets on their eyes, each had their own reasons, but one common reason was the person lying in the hospital bed had become an inseparable part of each one's life.

The coming dawn will break-out welcoming the festival of colours, joy and happiness, a girl will turn 18. Eighteenth birthday is very special to all girls, with this birthday girls enter to a world full of dreams, aspirations, and a special dream of a prince charming in their life, but that girl on the hospital bed had no dreams no aspirations left, even colours have been snatched away from her life. All were lost in their own thoughts, struggling with their heart to frame a picture of her unbearable pain, tears were scorching down their cheeks, no one had the guts to console the other, Rey was blank, his heart was aching, he was feeling chocked but she was not there to hold a glass of water in front of him.

So will her HIGHWAY MAN ever come in her life, or has he already arrived to take her away from all pains?

Will Sharon understand Swayam?

Will Rey accept Taani after knowing the truth and if he does will he succeed in bringing Taani out from her dreadful life?

Will Swayam and Rey still remain the best buddy?

And will the two brothers trust their best buddy and happily hand over their sister's hand to each-other?

Will they succeed in giving Taani a better life, filled with love and care?

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Awsome update

First Of All Di...
Tension Vension na liya karo...
only an alien would think ur work to b bad...

u can see a change in ur writing frm ur first work to this...

u do will see a gr8 progress...

Being a reader I can say that u too have ur own style in fiction...

I do m loving all ur works ...
n now coming to update
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Kal holi :$
khair...jab bhaggu ji june me baarish kar sakte h to aap bhi holi mana sakte ho abhi...

ShaRey ko sach btadiya...
m damn sure Jo last me questions h unn sabke answers "Yes" h :D

eagerly waiting fr next

wow emotional update

Hey dear m happy dat de updte is dedicated to us (ME).. But its not us its you.. U hv wrote dis wid soo much of emotions nd m sure u r glad nd proud of dis updte.. U hv de potentiality swthrt to bring feel in every parts of de story..