LUST FOR REVENGE 2 #7 Updated PT 71 - EPILOGUE on P 123 / 4-6-2015

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Namita

@nkilam

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#641

Hi Richa

I am a new reader of your ff. I have to say that its absolutely amazing.

Some of the things that I really liked in your ff are: -

1. After reading the title of the ff one thinks that it will be one more of those stories where the guy sleeps with the girl to take revenge from her. Even though that is a basic premise of this ff the way it is written is very intriguing. It isn't very predictable.

2. The way you kept it hidden from the readers that Maan is taking revenge from Geet makes it an interesting read.

3. Even though after feeling under guilty about what he did with Geet he is very forceful with her. He is guilty he wants her but his approach remains the same. A person cannot change over night. Even though he is guilty there cannot be a complete about turn in his personality.

4. At this point its very interesting to find out how Maan will take revenge from his biological father and also how will he ever convince Geet that he is not taking any revenge from her.

5. Will Geet ever forgive Maan.

A very nice and intriguing read. I must say. One of the best that I have read so far.

Thanks

Namita

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#642

PART 71

PART 72

PART 73

PART 74

PART 75

EPILOGUE

PW is same

Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#643

Yayyy...me first..🥳
Wow...great treat to read so many updates together...
Superb updates...
So good to see everyone happy...
Sad that it ended..
But thanx dear for writing such a lovely story...
And also thanx for pw..
Keep writing..

Edited by ms.impulsive - 10 years ago

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loveguruDD

@loveguruDD

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#644

Commented in blog

amazing updates

sad that it came to an end

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Sayia

@Sayia

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#645

Thanks for the updates😊

loved reading all of them parts

bit sad one more story come to end😭

but love every bit of ur work

u r amazing writer and doing brilliant work to ur stories👏

gonna miss one more your great work

not good writing comments so sorry for the mistakes⭐️

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#646

Awesome updates

Ending was 👏👏👏. Maan forgave his dad and couldnt able to have a bond with him which is

understandbale.

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zida

@zida

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#647

Awesome updates.i have no words.i love that thing k last me sub thik ho gaya.epo is so beautifull.

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#648

Wow all part together...? Maja aa gaya...pura ka pura filmi dhamaka thaa-------aur jab ek sath sab padha ke pura kiya aisa laga jaise koi hindi movie dekh rahe hai...aur wo senti drama of father son was overwhelming-- aND IT WAS QUITE PRECTICAL DECISION TOOK BY MAAN TO MOVE TO CANEDA,KEEP HIS IDENDITY alive and keep good relation from far kahete haina ki maan,moti aur kanch ek bar toot jaye to wo joodte nahin aur agar jood jaye to patch to rah hi jati hai...

isliye kutch riste door raheke hi sambhale jai wo achaa raheta hai

Khusbu aati rahe door hi se sahi samne ho chaman koi gum to nahi...and you cover each and every smallest points of story line like pinky and addi their merriage and now will concive...but one person forgoten meera and angad unko bhi jod dena chaiye that...

one thing I forgot is how pinky meera and maan are brother sister?i think u mension they were cousine but on what rista cousin?

Rest story was develop,proceed,spaced, in very harmonious way, and like this our safar of LFR is came to end...phir milenge chalte chalte...

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