SWARON FF : HUMARI ADHURI KAHANI *PART 18 PG 146* - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gsk4

Superb story. 👏 I am so eager to read the next chapter. You both have gone up a level in your writing. Please update fast. 👍🏼


thank u!!!..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Luvly update
I didnt xpct swayam nd aru meet in first part..
Bt it ws cute..
Damn he met his own daughter bt cmpltly unaware of it...:'(
By readng d flashbck nd seing taani nd his mom's ignorance it ws clr dat he hd done sumthng wrng nd nw payng fr it...
D best part of d update z 'I MISS U SHARON SHIKHAWAT'
Update fast
Thnx fr pm


glad that u all r liking it... thanks..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

Swayam met his own daughter bit didn't recognize her.

Loved the father - daughter duo Lil encounter.. 😊
What's gone wrong between swaron.?
Taani and swayam's mom both behaves like a stranger with him, maybe swaron separation is the reason behind it.
I liked the flashback, it given us some glimpse of how they first met.
Swayam was like a Casanova back then, interesting.
Update soon.

-Shivani


thanks yaa...:)...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Awesome update👍🏼

Loved it sooo much🤗

Feeling bad fr swayam..always he has to suffer..cnt see swaym like this😭😔

the way taani was behaving with him...😭

Swayam n arushi convo was really cute..it reminded me of kdmhmd days.. prem n chahat first meet

Love arushi yaar..she is sooo cute.. "football ko accident se bacha rahi thi"aww

Nd they both love same ice cream flavor..😛😊

Loved flashback..it was cute..though swaym's intention were nt ryt..

update soon

n sry fr late comment


its okay buddy!! thanks by the way!!..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gofi

Nice ff

Continue soon!!


thanks...if u want pm add me in ur buddy list
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 2



Swayam was in the presentation room giving the presentation to the clients... Taani was sitting there looking at swayam... although she hated it but she had to admit swayam was the best in business... and in the past four years he has immersed himself into work and more work... There has been days when taani has peeped into his room early in the morning to find it empty... He used to go out of house before any one woke up n came back after she and their mom went to sleep... her reverie was broken as a round of clap was heard in the room...

"congrats mr . shekhawat... the deal is yours..." The chairman of the company shook hands with him... taani stood up and stood beside swayam smiling at the clients shocking swayam...

"so by next week you people come to CITY SQUARE MALL to check the consignments n the quality of the clothes..." the clients informed them as they walked out of the office together...

Taani sat in swayam's car again taking swayam by surprise... Then understood because she didn't want to create a scene in front of their clients...

The driver started the car and swayam n taani sat there in silence... Swayam was looking outside the window and suddenly he jerked up in his seat...

"hey... park the car by the side of the road..." The driver immediately parked the car and swayam got down ...

" you take her to the hotel...I'll take a cab..." He told the driver and then walked away on the pavement... taani felt bad as she thought swayam didn't want to travel with her...

Swayam walked into a park and immediately went to the ice cream stall and bought two cones of ice cream and then smiled and walked towards the swing...

He knelt down at the back of a girl and held the icecream in front of her face... aru's face brightened with a smile... Then she quickly frowned and turned to look at the person who bought ice cream for her... seeing swayam her face brightened with double intensity...

"buddyyy..." She quickly gave swayam a hug...

"chocolate ice cream for my choco pie..." Swayam smiled and kissed her cheeks... aru took the ice cream from his hand and started licking it off and then remembered something and looked at swayam with a horrified expression...

"mamma dekh legi to maregi..." She held swayam's hand and pulled him to the corner of the park to a bench...

Swayam picked her up in his arms as if she was a feather and kept her on the bench... Aru was fair and thin little girl just like her parents...

After they finished their ice cream swayam cleaned her nose with his hankerchief and then aru took the hanky and wiped swayam's nose... He laughed as he realized that there was ice cream on his face too...

"maine tumhe car se dekha... you were playing.." swayam said out of the blue...

"haa I know you are not blind..." Aru said casually with a frown and swayam chuckled...

"tumhari mom kaha hai???" he asked her...

"mumma to office gayi hai... wo lautte wakt mujhe le jati hai... we stay there..." she pointed to a building adjacent to the park and then continued... " and I come here everyday to play with our neighbor... Alena aunty..." Swayam nodded listening to her patiently...

"aur papa to india mein rehete hai... unko kaam hai isiliye wo aye nahi mujhse milne kabhi... but wo mere birthday par gift vejte hai... we stay here with masi n friend..." Swayam felt bad as aru's face fell while talking about her papa...

"may be single parent hai..." he thought in his mind...

"so buddy..." she called him out finding him zoned out... swayam noticed for the first time that she had been calling him buddy...

"buddy???" he frowned and asked...

"haa you call me chocopie ...and I will call you buddy..." She shrugged and then continued... " ab apne bare mein bhi bolo..." she asked him... swayam smiled at her...

"I stay in india with my mom and sister.. my father stays in another city for business..." he tried to keep up his smile...

"apki shadi nahi huyi???" she asked him innocently ... swayam's face fell...

Swayam and Sharon were sitting in the rehearsal hall waiting for the gang to come when swayam got a message on his phone...

He read it and looked at Sharon...

"gang nahi ane wale hai... movie dekhne gaye..." he sighed...

"humein chorke???" Sharon frowned...

"koi nahi... chalo hum bhi kahi chalte hai..." swayam stood up taking his bag and urged Sharon to stand up as well...

Sharon sighed and smiled and took her bag and moved out along with him...

It was almost six months that they had met and swayam and Sharon has grown up to be pretty close...

Swayam and Sharon went to a nearby park and sat by the swimming pool...

"ice cream khate hai..." swayam and sharon went up to an ice cream stall... As Sharon was ordering their ice creams swayam looked around casually... he saw a girl was staring at him checking him out with a seductive smile... He smirked and winked at her... as soon as Sharon turned towards him he straightened up and smiled at her taking the ice cream from her hands and paying to the man...

They sat beside the pool and started having their ice cream...

"Sharon... mujhe tumse kuch kehena tha..." swayam looked at her with an intent look...

"haa bolo..." Sharon frowned at him...

"dekho mai perfect nahi hoon... but I really don't know how to say... it's just that... mai shayad tumse pyaar karne laga hoon... I know might be you don't return it back... but chalega... I will never force you anything..." While saying this looking at her eyes he felt hollow... Sharon looked away... Swayam followed suite...

"koi perfect nahi hota swayam... I am ready to give us a chance..." sharon smiled at him and swayam's smile vanished... for some reason he didn't feel like doing this to Sharon... he shrugged his thoughts apart and hugged her...

"ghar chalte hai.. late ho chuki hai..." Sharon stood up and dusted her jeans and started walking ahead of swayam and swayam started to follow her starting to get distracted...

"sahi nahi kar raha hai tu ye... achi larki hai..." he licked his lips in discomfort... Then quickly covered up .. " don't be a spoil sport... bet har jayega varna..." he tried to convince himself but couldn't settle down...

As they were about to get out of the park he found that girl smiling at him but he didn't smile back and kept walking...

Swayam came out of his reverie with the shriek of the children playing in the park... he put his smile back and asked her cheerfully...

"kyun mai tumhe old man dikhta hoon???" he asked her narrowing his eyes...

"nahi..but aap friend jaise ho.. aur unka shadi ho gaya hai maasi ke saath.. to apki bhi ho gayi hai na???" she looked happy with her logic...

"wo.. hum dono ke beech mein katti hai..." swayam said softly... aru's face fell...

Swayam sensing that she was sad quickly cheered her up..

"but don't worry mai jaldi unse fir se friends ho jaunga... butti kar lunga..." he showed her a thumbs up...

"kaise???" she asked widening her eyes ...

"simple.. ice cream khilake..." Aru chuckled and swayam started tickling her and aru started laughing...

"and wo aise hi hasti hai...gudgudi hoti hai to..." swayam smiled and hugged her...

"aru..." they heard someone shouting her name... swayam felt his heart thud in his chest... he knew this voice... he can never fail to recognize her voice...

"mumma a gayi... bi..." aru kissed his cheeks and went away... swayam stood up immediately... he saw aru running and holding a girl's hand... he could see her back as they moved out...

Swayam shrugged his thoughts away... he knew he would never see her in his life again... He wiped the corner of his eyes and walked out of the park...

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After dinner Sharon was tucking aru in her bed under the duvet...

"so aaj masti ki park mein????" Sharon kissed her cheeks ...

"of course mumma... apko pata hai... aaj buddy ne mujhe ice cream khilaye..." She grinned and winked at her...

"buddy????" she frowned at aru...

"array mai to vul e gayi apko batana..." she sat up on the bed and climbed on sharon's lap... " peechle week I met buddy...jab maasi aur friend ke saath ghumne gaye the... unko bhi same flavor ka ice cream pasand hai... so we had our ice cream date..." Sharon rolled her eyes... But aru continued... " and today also buddy gave me an ice cream date... Wo bohut sweet hai.. india mein rehete hai with his mom and sister... unka papa dusre city mein hai... n unki wife se katti hai unka... but unhone kaha wo ice cream khilake unhe pata lenge..." aru smiled looking away and getting involved inplaying with her pooh..

Sharon closed her eyes in fear and started breathing hard... Whatever aru has told her reminded her only of swayam...

"don't talk to strangers aru ab jaldi go to sleep..." Sharon made aru lay down and went near the window sitting on the slab...

"kya aru swayam se mili????" she closed her eyes as tears streamed her cheeks...

Mujhse hui bas yeh khata ...Maine tujhe chaha sanam

Chup chup ke roothi rahi...Tune diye kaise yeh ghum

" nahi nahi... mai humesha uske bare mein sochti hoon isiliye har wakt mujhe usi ke bare mein yaad ati hai..." she couldn't hold her sobs anymore and burried her face into her knees...

"I hope tum thik ho... khush ho..." She said as she walked towards her cupboard and took a checked shirt out... it was swayam's shirt...



O bekhabar be raham ...Karle chaahe jitne sitam
Na chaahat kabhi hogi kam...Mujhe in aasoon ki kasam




She came back and sat on the window slab hugging the shirt tightly into her chest breathing in the sir through his shirt... "kyun kiya tumne aisa????" she kept sobbing into the darkness of the night like she has been doing for years now...



Maine kiya hai tujhse sachcha pyaar...
Maine kiya hai tujhse sachcha pyaar...



Precap : both stood in front of each other with their heart sinking in their ribs...



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ANI N NABANITA




Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res.
Unres.
I finally got this honour..
I'm first to comment.😃
Beautiful update.. Swayam and Aru are sooo cute.😳
I love these two more than SwaRon in this FanFic. 😉
Sharon still crying for Swayam, heart wrenching..
This ff is so beautiful in terms of emotions and their penning..
And you both are so so so hell awesome writers, I'll never be tired of praising you both.👏
And the precap.. My goodness... Please please please update soon..
Thank you for the pm.

Edited by VrushanianAdity - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Indeed he has some strong connection to Aru that pulls him towards her :') He like making her happy spending with that little kid Aru talk alot :v cute talks ^_^
How both told so much yet so less about each other in second meet itself.
Hope he could have seen who her mother was :(

I just love you manage present and past in updates _/\_ Amazing!
And also I'm glad after reading the precap thst speed is pretty good :D afterall there is such to be revealed :p right?

Last part :'( she still wish for his well being
Both miss each other cry for being apart :'( only their daughter can bring them back :(
Ani abhi update kar na next part >_<


Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifull update!!!
It was so well written👏
SwaRon are so hurt :'( and that hurts me ;'(
Anyway thnx for PM :)
update soon!
Edited by taareyswarond3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting fr the next...so continue soon

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