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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start .Asha ..continue soon . gay u r really a sweet heart dear[/QUOTE
Thank u
Well next update will be soon 😉
And ya gaya3 u r a sweetest sweetheart I have ever met this would not be possible without her 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Nice start asha. ..
Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: neet135712

Nice start .Asha ..continue soon . gay u r really a sweet heart dear


Thank you Neetuchechi... 😳
I'm really sweet at heart 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely morning romance han i love it asha please cont it amazing dear 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Asha you open the story in teasing way Ishu just fresh out from bathroom. I actually love her pink bathrobe she look angelic in that no wander Raman dumbstruck early morning. And the teasing kiss how he never catch up with her to complete the session. Ishu was smart to runaway .😆 Mihika and Sangget what is she cook up for Ishra to have some sauce in their love life. Please continue soon and Thank you so much for English translation. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi dears... 😊

Here goes the next chapter

Not proofread

Ignore typos and spelling/grammar errors




PART-2


It starts with Mihika hanging up the phone and that is when ishu came calling for her.


Ishu : Kis se bath kar rahi thi yar?

With whom you're talking?


Mihika :Kisi se bhi tho Nahi ... A...p...p ko Kuch kam tha kya Akka

No one... Do you want something akka...

said Mihika nervously


Ishu : Miku I know u too well. Thu muj se Kuch Nahi chupa schal. Chal abb sach sach bata kya chal raha hai tere dimag mai?

You can't anything from me. Common tell me what's going on in your mind?


Mihika :Kya akka... app tho meri puri surprise ki band baja rahi ho. Thoda wait karo na, sham tak sab Kuch pata chal jaega

What akka, you'll spoil my surprise. Wait till evening.

Said Mihika wile winking at Ishu and ran away.


Ishu : (st)Ayoo Murgan plz Kuch gadbad math karna. Is ladki ke dimag mai pata nahi kya chal raha hai. surprise kya ho saktha hai...

Murugan don't make any problems. Don't know what's going on in her mind. What'll be the surprise...

Thinking that ishu left to make the arrangements for evening


God: Bacha, abhi tho gadbad shuru bhi nahi hui aur thum abhi se parishan ho. Abb thera kya hoga re Ishita and he laughed

Child, the problem is yet to start and you started your tension by now. What'll happen to you.


Evening around 5:00


Raman had come fast from office to help Ishu with the arrangements the family had already left to the venue and only Ishu and Raman were left at home.


Raman : (st) yeh jkr bhi na kitna tayar hogi (to Ishu )ooo madrasan sangeeth simmi ka hai thumare nahi. Thum kitna bhi saj lo rahogi tho madrasi chudail. Hi ooo. Madrasan jaldi bhar nikal na yar

Madrasan it's Simmi's sangeet not yours. You'll look like Madrasi ghost no matter how much you try. Come fast yaar


And then the bedroom door clicked open and what Raman saw swept the ground beneath his feet


Raman (st ). Beta aj tho madrasan sab ka khoon karne Nikli hai. Beta khud ko shamal le Varna bhot Pitega

She's dressed up to kill. Control yourself else you'll get beaten up.


Ishu was standing in a white knee length frock which was off shoulder. Her hair was left open with soft curls. She had not used much make up. Only a red lipstick and done some eye make up. Her white dangling earrings, Oh God only Raman knew how he was controlling himself.


Ishu : Abb muje kya dek rehe ho...chalo abb late Nahi ho raha

Why are you staring at me. Let's go, it's getting late right.


Raman :Nahi mai soch raha tha ki Kya thum sach mai mari biwi ho ya koi or. Kyu ki kahi tak muje pata hai meri biwi itni hot tho bilkul Nahi hai. Ho kown thum?

[/I]No I was thinking if you're really my wife or someone else. Because AFAIR my wife is not this hot. Who are you?[/I]

Said Raman wile inching closer


Ishu : Raman...

Said ishu blushing like a tomato


Raman : kya...


As he leaned in more closer to her by now Ishu was pinned to the nearest wall


The ring of Ishu's phone broke them out of there intense eyelock. Raman cursed the caller under his breath as ishu picked up the call.


Ishu : Raman hum ko nikalna hoga sab wait kar rahe hai

Raman we should go now as everyone is waiting


Raman : hmmm...


And walked to the door sulking


At the party hall


Every one was having fun dancing the night out and soon Ishu and Raman joined them too. They were having a gala time when suddenly Mihika's mobile rang and she went out to pick the call


Mihika : kaha ho thum. I am waiting for u

Where are you?


Girl : Turn around sis


Mihika turned around to see a tall sexy looking girl dressed in a super hot black gown waving to her.


Mihika: Omg omg. I can't believe what I am seeing! Pari is that really u! Omg u look stunning hot


Pari :Hey Akka, how have u been? Long time na...I was so exited to meet u


Mihika : Trust me ishu akka tho thume pachan bhi nahi paegi yar

Ishu akka won't identify you


Pari : Nahi Akka vo pachan legi. Bhala hi mera chera badal gaya ho par hamare dil ki dhadkan tho Judi hui hai and she smiled

No she'll. It's true that my face changed but our heartbeats are connected.


Chal chal abb andar chal

Let's go inside

Said Mihika just then her phone rang and she excused herself


Just as pari entered the hall first one to notice her was Romi and like he did with any other girl he started flirting with her also.


Romi : hello kya mai app ko janta hu?

I know you?


Pari : Nahi par mai app ko zaroor janta hu Romi ji

No.But I know you Romi ji

she said smiling knowingly.


Romi : Bhai hume tho sab jante hai. Hum hai hi aise. You know I am very popular.

Everyone knows me. I'm like that.


Pari : o ya y not said pari smilingly


Just then there was an announcement on stage by Mihika and Pari excused herself and went there


Romi's friend : kyu.bhai ladki tho nikal li abb kya hua tere popularity ko nali mai gayi sari

[I[It means the girl left now what happens to ur popularity did it all go into drainage[/I]

And all his friends laughed


Romi : oey. Chup kar vaise bhi yeh mere type ki Nahi thi bhoth boring or pako thi yar abb chal hum bhi chaltey hai

Oh hello shut up any ways she was very boring not my type yar now let's go


On stage Mihika made an announcement that she had a surprise for her Ishu Akka and asked every one to gather around the stage. Suddenly the lights went of and there was a sound heard on the mike.


Kise ne Bachman mai tha muje sikaya

ki maa ke anchal tak khabi naph ounce pays koi bura saya



Ishu : No it can't be what I am thinking.


And she got up from her place and started walking in the direction of the voice


Raman : Ishita shita thum...r u ok


Ishu dint reply and just kept walking


Par aj mai ae hu mangne vo mamta ka anchal

jis mai sare duniya ho mari simti.

Maa kahti hai thu jaha jae bas khushi pae

par vo bolti hai thu Jaha jae Kushi tere peche ae

Tho bolo hai kise mai vo dum jo us jaisa ban kar dikae


And today I came to ask the aanchal of affection
In which my whole world revolves.
Mother says you may get happiness wherever you go
But that one says may happiness get to you wherever you go.
Tell me who has the courage to be like that.



And suddenly lights turn on and background song of tujme rab dikta hai starts playing and just as Ishu reaches the stage flowers start falling on her and screams Pari...

And from the other end comes a girl dressed up like an angle from heaven singing. Ishu runs to her and hugs her.


Every body is in awe by seeing them and is curious to know who that girl is. Then ishu composes herself and introduces pari to her family. As she come to Romi, Pari intrupts saying Akka I already know him

Raman :out of shock asks hey how? and she replies telling who doesn't know Mr Popular na Romi Bhayiya


Every body understand that
Romi must have been flirting with her and break into a fits of laughter as she calls him bhayiya.


Then ishu asks pari what is she doing in india and y didn't she inform her pari just said she wanted to surprise her and winked at Adi and Ruhi who showed her a thumps up signal.


As every body was leaving home pari goes to talk to Romi but the convo is mute. At the end of convo;


Romi : I still can't believe thum Bhabhi ki sis ho and all this was ur plan!

when his mouth opened in a perfect o shape


Pari : laughingly Vo kya hai na,
jo hota hai vo dikta Nahi.
Aur jo dikta hai vo hota Nahi.
Aur agar Kuch dikhne ke bad bhi ho jae tho
us mai koyi maza Nahi


You know what,
What that happens cannot be seen.
And what that's seen cannot be happened.
And if what's seen that happens
It won't have fun.



And she left the place after winking at Romi.


As she came out she took out her phone and texted to someone, Plan A completed. Get ready for the next step.

And at the ther side of the globe a man smiled receiving her msg.


TO BE CONTINUED...


Precap

Adi ruhi and pari jugalbandi and some ishra romance real wala romance may be 😉



So guys... 😊

Sry I know the update was a bit long, but this was just a filler for the next part

I promise the next part will be total fun

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ASHA
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nice update
so ishra aur pari n romance
plan kuch nahi samjh main aa raha
but was superb may be mihika plan
ishra ko milane ke liye
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: divazfankau

nice update
so ishra aur pari n romance
plan kuch nahi samjh main aa raha
but was superb may be mihika plan
ishra ko milane ke liye
update soon


Hamara plan hi tha ki kisi ko Hamara plan samaj mai na aye 😉 u got to wait to know was it mihikas plan or not 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Thank u so much di glad u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Amazing update...
so cute
please update soon

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