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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: fariya20
why you always stop in wrong time 😡
hey do dreamy update

they pasionate dance reminde me mahi mahi wow so amazing

but idont like song

ganaa toh acha hai

mareeze e ishq

galat kaha stop kiya

kahani end krni ki tyaari krdi bs

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: nitika20
Nice ..update priya Di... tab keep network se connect karke phone se story padh ... rahi ..hu...
late padhne keep liye sorry ...
Maaneet finally ...
together ...
and...
confessed as well... bas about... jaldi ... se inki tooti hui shadi karwado ..
waiting for next part ..

thanks dear

its ok

take your time

shaadi krwa denge

usse phle twisttt

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: YaSha0512
awesome teaser n update firstly loved the pictures of tent n dresses
especially liked the backless dress

would love to have the figure to wear that kind of dress lol

as for update loved their romantic dance

with geet melting into Arnav

thanks for pm n plz keep em comin

with geet melting into Arnav😲

aranv nhi maan hai 😆

thanks waise

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

Wow lovely cute superb update..te way my maaneet dancing, my maan making his geet to dance for his tunes melting her with his passion was lovely cute.. even thought geet was angry but my maan know to cool his geet,yes geet is no:1 nautanki..my maan teasing his geet making her shy shy was lovely cute..i love te update yar

😃

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: pinku04
very beautiful update...👏👏
liked it very much... 😊😊

😃

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: piya27
more than the update

I liked the pics

main toh pics maib kho gayi thi

thanks😉

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: Rosmitha
nice update...

😊

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Part 24

maan drop geet to pinki house, then go to own house...

vicky : bhai kuch huya

ya aaj bhi

maan : shut up

daadi : hume lagta hai

geet ne ha kaha hai

vicky : aapko kaise pata daadi

daadi : aapne bhai ka chehra zara dhyan se dekhiye

unki right cheek

lip mark abhi bhi hai

maan : ase kaise ho sakta hai

he touched her face ...

vicky : daadi you too good

bhai se sch pata lagane ka acha tarika tha

maan : daadiii

daadi : humne toh bs ase hi jhooth bola tha chota sa

par maan apne hi sch kh diya

toh hum kya kare

vicky : bhai

waise aur kya - kya huya waha

kuch hume bi batayo

maan : abhi batata hu tujhe

maan runs behind vicky... daadi so happy to seeing her grand children smile..

***********

one week passed happily, after maaneet confession, in this time period, both came more closer, and start understanding more... now time arrived to reach HP, for talking with geet parents...

geet want to go firstly alone, but maan not ready to leave her alone and facing her family... he and his family also going with her...

in one week period, maan introduce geet to his daadi , in starting geet little nervous, but daadi accept her easily, and at the time of making or teasing maan , all became one team...poor maan...

**********

geet : maan daadi nhi aa rhi humare sath

maan : daadi kal hi chali gyi thi HP

vicky ke sath

geet : kal kyun

maan : unhe kuch kaam tha

geet : Unhe HP mein kya kaam aa gya

maan: geet inte jwab toh daadi ne mujhe bhi nhi diye

jb milo khud puch lena

geet : mujhe aapse koi baat nhi krni

ye baat pyaar se bhi kh sakte the na

mujhe nhi pata

par nhi

har waqt gussa

maan : geettt

bs kro

geet : dekha babaji

abhi se inhe mere bolne pe rok laga di hai

na jaane shaadi ke baad kya - kay honga

maan : tumhara toh pata nhi

mein jaroor pagal ho jaayunga

geet : toh mt kro

mujhse shaadi

maan : ye option abhi available hai

toh thik hai

geet : pata tha mujhe

aap yhi chahte ho

you never love me

aaj toh ye aapne khud hi confirm kr diya

maan : oh really

geet : yes

maan : thik hai

tumhe jo sochna hai

wo socho

i don't care

geet : i hate you

maan : i hate you too

geet : i hate you 1,2,3,4,5,...100 times

maan : great

jitni baar i love you nhi kaha honga

usse jyada i hate you kh diya

geet : jaise khud ne kitni baar kaha hai

i love you

wo toh maine hi kehlwaya

nhi toh aapne khud ke sath - sath mujhe bhi old kr dena tha

maan : jaise tumhe toh apne dil ki baat

bhut jaldi pata lag gyi thi

pata nhi kisse meri patni bna diya tha

upar de madam feeling jealous

geet : acha

jaise aap ko toh bhut acha lag raha tha na

mujhe yash ke sath dekh ke

kitna cute munda hai wo

maan : geet

maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai

usse beech mein mt laaya kro

geet : meri khi huyi baat

aap toh bhut maante hai

driver stopped the car suddenly ..and both fall forward..

maan : why you stop the car

driver : sorry sir

par mein aur car drive nhi kr sakta

geet : kyun bhaiya

aapki tabiyat thik nhi hai

driver : filhaal abhi tak toh thik hai

aange ka soch ke hi mna kr raha hu

maan : tumhari problem kya hai

geet : maan pyaar se pcuho

zara dekho usse

wo bechara aapki awaaz se dar raha hai

bhaiya aap bolo

ye kuch nhi kahenge

driver : sir madam

sorry

par mein itne shor mein driving pe concentrate nhi kar paa raha hu

maan : shor

kaunsa shor

driver : wo aap dono

maan : tumhe humari baatein shor lagati hai

how dare you

geet : bhaiya

ab aapko koi pareshani nhi hongi

aap car chlaiye

maan : why you stop me

geet : maan

shant

hum sch mein

kuch jyada hi tej bol rhe the

aur aap ye sb chodo na

she kissed on his cheek and placed her head on his shoulder...

******

precap : last twist

story going to end...thanks for support...

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: leenuguru
Nice update

update not completed abhi tak

so read again

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#490

awesome update

maaneet going to hp to talk about their maariage to geet's family😊

maaneet ke bak-bak sunke driver pareshaan ho gaya😆

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