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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rivka

Nice update

Loved it .. is Raman fallen for ishu


No and yes...(Raman's feelings)
Yet to know dear 😊
Thanks for reading
Stay tuned
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Posted: 10 years ago
i'm loving this story...it's interesting
mihika is d admin of ANTI-RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA pg in fb
raman is falling 4 laxmi oops ishita
ishita is also not so innocent...her dream!!😳
so feelings r mutual😉
poor abhi😆
update soon dear...thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read the plot.
Going to read all three chapters in a go
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10


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i'm loving this story...it's interesting
mihika is d admin of ANTI-RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA pg in fb
raman is falling 4 laxmi oops ishita
ishita is also not so innocent...her dream!!😳
so feelings r mutual😉
poor abhi😆
update soon dear...thnx 4 pm


An early morning coffee update will be there dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Just read the plot.
Going to read all three chapters in a go


Enjoy reading... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1.

Wo ho... A bold concept i must say.
Raman is a real playboy.
He is charmer.

Raman and Abhi entered the elegant hall hand-in-hand-- even my first thought was are they gay lol.

Aww.. Poor Shagun.

Part 2

Abhi is in love with Ishita. Nahiii...
Ishita is a lecturer... For a change... Actually no change... Lecture toh deti hi hai.. Lol.
He is a pervert hahaha. One track mind.

Part 3

Meri vali --- abhi se

Sometimes you sounds like girls...! (Mocking) I'm getting scared of you"--- hehe even I doubt abhi I a gay.

Omg its getting interesting yaar.
Raman is falling for her genuinely..
But this Mihika will create problems arrrhhh

Update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 1.

Wo ho... A bold concept i must say.
Raman is a real playboy.
He is charmer.

Raman and Abhi entered the elegant hall hand-in-hand-- even my first thought was are they gay lol.

Aww.. Poor Shagun.

Part 2

Abhi is in love with Ishita. Nahiii...
Ishita is a lecturer... For a change... Actually no change... Lecture toh deti hi hai.. Lol.
He is a pervert hahaha. One track mind.

Part 3

Meri vali --- abhi se

Sometimes you sounds like girls...! (Mocking) I'm getting scared of you"--- hehe even I doubt abhi I a gay.

Omg its getting interesting yaar.
Raman is falling for her genuinely..
But this Mihika will create problems arrrhhh

Update soon and thanks for the pm


Thanks for the lovely comment dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties...😊

Back with a new part...

BOLD writing 🤬

Ignore typos and grammar/spelling errors

Not proofread

Enjoy reading 😃



Chapter-4

THERE





ISHITA'S POV



I told everything happened between me and Mr Bhalla to Mihika. Of course not about my weird dream! She was boiling when I spit it out to her. I thought she will mellow down hearing Mr Bhalla's apology for me. But I was wrong. She hissed after throwing the shopping bags on the bed, "He must be playing with you. It must be his plan."


How will I manage this girl!


Honestly saying, she WAS right, NO...she IS right. He is a jerk. How dare he say that to me! *NOT THAT APOLOGY* but something else.



FLASHBACK

IN THE LIFT




Raman: "It's...yesterday...I'm so sorry for checking you out"


Ishita bend down her head in utter embarrassment. It's better no one apologise openly for such sensitive matters. No wonder her cheeks became pink. She wanted to vanish in thin air when he said that. No, it is not done, she thought. And he is not done, with his talk.


Raman: "I...should admit that...I've never seen such an ALLURING waist...EVER..."


What was he thinking? It will make her happy or she'll thank him for his appraisal? No way. He was wrong. The women with whom he had been spending his private moments would have thrown themselves in his arms hearing it. But what about a nave (Not exactly) Iyer girl? Why is he continues to blabber when she is not responding? Only he know the purpose of his rambling *sigh*! Maybe he is netting to FISH HER.


RAMAN'S POV


"To the top?"


I asked the other person whose presence I could feel. A melodious voice reached my ears making me turn towards the source. I was totally in awe when I saw her.


"Why is she always using to wear sarees? Is it such a comfortable dress? Definitely not comfortable for my sanity."


I don't know why she had this horrified expression on her face like she is watching a predator. If she came to know about me checking her out? For the first time I was feeling something I've never felt till date; SHAME.


This woman is awesome. She is teaching me new feelings. But Raman Bhalla can never get along with the fact that a woman is showing him new things which only mummiji used to do.


I closely watched her nervousness. Maybe because we're alone in the lift. I thought. She began to fidget with the shopping bag uneasily. I was seeing a girl shying in front of me for the first time. The bold women I've came across never made me feel this special.


"Sharmili ladkiyan kuch aur hi maza dete hain"

(Shy girls are special fun)


I stared at her while she looked everywhere but me. I've made women stimulate, but I've never felt the pleasure of making a woman blush with my gaze. Her shyness did arouse me to an all new level.


"I really need a release"


Her constant fidgeting on the shopping bag made the poor thing to fall on the floor. Unlike me, I forwarded a helping hand. What was I thinking?


"The Raman Kumar Bhalla bended down in front of a woman! Isn't that a great thing! She must be a hex and I...I was in her spell."


When I dropped to my knees to take the bags I felt her stiffened. I was wondering If my proximity affecting her so much. It is obvious that I peeked sideways to see her. No, her waist. The cool wavering of aero from the AC helped my eyes to see a slight part of my favourite spot. She did fist her hands tight for reasons unknown to me.


I couldn't help but look at her waist which is some centimetres away from my face. The off-white silk saree which curtained my view slowly moved away from there.


How enticing is she...!


She was oblivious of my piercing gawk. I brought my face near her waist and blew my breath on it. She stretched back thereby showing her naval to my already perked up orbs. The woman didn't know what she was doing to me. I wanted to kiss and caress her there, but don't know what stopped me.


Absorbing all my courage, I did what I wished to do from the very first moment I saw her; to touch her there. She didn't resist my advances encouraging me to go on. I grabbed her waist close to my face. That spotless pale skin of hers and my lips; touching...but not touching at all. She held my shoulders tightly. Maybe she was feeling weak by the zealous intimacy. Whatever it may, she was inducing me, making my muscles taut. I brought my lips close to her belly button, brushing it for my heart's content. Moisturizing there by my saliva. I respired her fragrance snuggling my face in her belly making her moan in pleasure.


That was it. That soft moan broke the trance. I found myself standing at an arms distance from her. Me, keeping distance from such a woman was impossible. Why that revery felt this real! Maybe because I heard her moan. But the moan was also a revery.


"Or was it real?"

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When his prasing words penetrated through her ears her hands naturally found their way to hide her waist inside the sheer fabric. He looked on amused while she squeezed the left side of her waist along with the saree by her right hand and clasped her chain with her left one; she was a nervous wreck. For making it more worse, there came his voice.


"Don't do that...it...may hurt you"


Taking in a sharp breath she released her hands and took the bags from him. He looked on without even blinking while she stood sideways to ignore him. As her focus shifted to the opposite side where the steel quoting of the lift reflected him, her instincts made her take in his figure. He was watching her intensly while she was checking him out oblivious to him. His eyes ran all over her making her nervous to the core. She felt his gaze shifting from her neck to her back to her hips and then downwards making her quiver. They were arousing each other without even standing close.

****FB END****



"Akkkaaa..."


Mihika's scream brought her back to present. She looked at her little sister quzzically and she started after sitting next to her.


Mihika: "You know akka...I've seen Abhi today at the shopping mall. (Making a shocked face) You know what's news? (Pinching Ishita's arm) Ask me akka..."


Ishita: After composing herself, "Yeah...tell me, what's news?"


Mihika: "Abhi is staying with Raman Bhalla!"


Ishita: Loudly, "Oh Nooo..."


Mihika: "Relax akka..I've settled everything"


Ishita: Tensely, "What...how? My name?"


Mihika: "I told him that I've planned to play a prank on him by the name Laxmi"


Ishita: "You told him that?"


Mihika: "Don't worry akka... I told him that I'm posing as Laxmi and asked him not to mention our names together to him. (Chirping excitedly) Isn't that so fun...! Now Raman Bhalla is going to go CRAZY!"


Ishita: "Oh God...my head is spinning Miku...what are you doing...When will these two weeks end???"


Mihika: Patting Ishita's shoulder, "Be cool akka... just enjoy...If you'll be this nervous... everything's gonna be a flop...I'm telling you"


Ishita: "You don't know anything Miku...Are you sure Abhi won't say?"


Mihika: "Of course akka...He too want to see FLIRT BHALLA respecting women. And I'll make sure that I'll win this HOT GAME!"



TO BE CONTINUED...



PRECAP


"May I...help you...?"




So that's it Kutties...

How's it?

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Posted: 10 years ago
Gaya 3 the way you write flash back make me ☺️☺️ Both had intimate feeling without being close together.niw you made me greedy want to read more soon. The name game will help them closer or MU and seperate them. But I don't guess so from Ishu expression he made her totally out of her control too. Awesome part. 👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Gaya 3 the way you write flash back make me☺️☺️ Both had intimate feeling without being close together.niw you made me greedy want to read more soon. The name game will help them closer or MU and seperate them. But I don't guess so from Ishu expression he made her totally out of her control too. Awesome part.👍🏼👍🏼


Thanks dear...
I hope you liked it 😊
You wanted to prolong their conversion right...
But there was no such one.
Although you liked it 😳

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