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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW NICE ONE BUT ACTUALLY WHY SHAGUN HAS BEEN SHOT WANT TO KNOW THX FOR PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

First thanks for pm kanna..:-)
coming to the point..
Raman went hospital,to know how ishita will get cure and he wants the answers..


Flash back:
ess flash back mai lots of twists hidden in it.:-):-):-)
I THINK SO.

WHEN RAMAN CALL TO SHAGUN:
Hello baby...abi tak nahi soya?mera waiting?i'm driving yaar...to the hotel

SO THIS INCIDENCE TOOK PLACE AT N8 TIME..:-)

FROM THE OTHER END:mat jaoo..ish..ishita mat jaoo.
Let me come with you.,
i'm not that brave...:-(:-(:-(

I'm scared;-(;-(;-(

male voice:"dekha kaisa gayab hogayi teri dost...ab to tujhe kaun bachayenge?

Another side raman in panic voice...

Bhayya is coming to you.Are u k?
Say something?

Atlast raman reached where shagun is.

MY POINT OF VIEW :
There is a lot of elements HIDDEN IN THIS FLASH BACK


THIS FLASH BACK IS INCOMPLETE...
IT IS A TEASER:->:->:->

In hospital,raman conversation with doctor...

ROBBERY...IT WAS...but they shot her...in her throat...how much pain she'd have under gone!";-(;-(;-(;-(


After three days she died!;-(;-(;-(;-(;-(
usse physically aur koyi...i mean RAPE?

NO...NEVER DID THAT HAPPEN..

IS RAMAN VERY SURE ABOUT THE SITUATION?

DOCTOR ASKED A Straight forward question to raman:
will u leave her if she will not talk for alife time?


Trying hard to hide his anger"NO,I'WONT LEAVE HER EVER"

:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O
ashok and raman are cool...

Here raman not invited ashok to his married...:-P:-P:-P%-)%-)

khannas in bhalls house..

She stepped back a bit and looked on.
She tried to disguise her confusion in a smile

ishita behaviour when she saw ashok creats lots of questions.

May be ashok knows about ishita past,her condition...

This all will clear once vandita comfront to raman and ashok at a time.:-):-)

i love this part where raman correcting ashok..
NO BHALLA ,ITS ISHITA RAMAN BHALLA.:-D:-D:-D:-D

AFTER completing dinner and ready to bid the bye to bhallas..

Ashok asked raman ,why u married her?

I thinking that ashok in some point of view he know about ishita condition which raman doesn't know..:-)

ashok thought may be raman knowns ishita truth.

Raman TRUTH FOR ISHITA AND ASHOK TRUTH FOR ISHITA...COMPLETE DIFFERENT:-O:-O:-O

if ashok is a villian,raman identify his voice ..or may be RAMAN not concentrated in hurry and terrible situation.:-)

Lots
of queries in my mind.
But author sahiba kuch aur plan kiya hoga.


E precap mai kuch gad baad hai.
If it come true,raman ask ishita for kiss..
Awee romantic hojayega.:-)
continue soon.:-)



Sorry for the late reply 😔
Whoa...another wonderful review 👏
Your POV regarding the 1st FB is right; Took place at night and it's incomplete 😊
Already know nah... It's a register marriage considering Ishu's condition. (So obviously no guests)
And what Raman and Ashok know about Ishu is entirely different. (You're catching me always 😉 )
Is baar no gadbads in the precap 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Woww ashok is dr. here vo b gynecologists.. Lol

Update was gud...
Precap.. Is Raman asking 4 kiss...


Who else will ask 😉 ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Does ashok know abt ishita's past and shagun's death truth???? Will he tell raman in d near future???
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri1091

Does ashok know abt ishita's past and shagun's death truth???? Will he tell raman in d near future???


Maybe 🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


Sorry for the late reply 😔
Whoa...another wonderful review 👏
Your POV regarding the 1st FB is right; Took place at night and it's incomplete 😊
Already know nah... It's a register marriage considering Ishu's condition. (So obviously no guests)
And what Raman and Ashok know about Ishu is entirely Gdifferent. (You're catching me always 😉 )
Is baar no gadbads in the precap 😈


After reading this comment just a random thought came into my mind can it be wile the phone convo fb the person who is with shagun I guess he is param made shagun tell all that wantedly on phone so he can cause damage to Raman ishu bond because if ishu ran away how can she see shagun die and got so scared and is ishu scared only by seeing shaguns death or did param try to do some thing with her also ... And y param wanted to spoil ishra bond some kind of revenge or what and ashok was also with him I guess or was it ashok himself but he is +ve na ... Ok got to go will continue later 😆 Ok I am back to finish this one 😉 but u told that u don't know how far will u keep ashok +ve dint u hmmm 😕 kya chal raha hai madum ke is shaitan khurafathi brain main and I guess I take back my guess about ashok as he is happily maried 😃 ok so y ishu could have left shagun did some one else catch ishu or what 😡 or did she go to get help 😕 but u said she is scared of men matlab us ke sath Kuch hote hote bacha hai that is y she doesn't even go near her appa precap pe muje phale se hi doubt tha there is some thing fishi before this either ramans plan or he saw ishu drenched in rain or ...lol..😉😉 I think I should read the update once again may be I find some clue 😉
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties 😊

As they say, Something is better than nothing

Sooo...back with the next part (Chottusaaa...)😳

Ignore typos and grammar/spelling errors

Not proofread

Enjoy reading 😃




Chapter-7

LET ME LOVE AGAIN




EIGHT DAYS LATER

MORNING AT BHALLA HOUSE



Raman was fixing his hair in front of the mirror while Ishita was taking out his vest and coat. He was going for an important meeting in Mumbai and will be back after five days. For some unknown reasons he wanted to be with her; CRAZY HEART. But then the revenge thing pops up; Making him a HANDSOME MONSTER. He looked at her sad face. She didn't notice him staring at her. He recalled the Dr Reddy's words.


"You should watch her closely so that you can understand her more. Sometimes it helps!"


He prepared himself with not so nonsense matter to scrutinize her reactions. And started his blabbering keenly observing her expressions.


Raman: "Maine professor Takhur se baat ki dhi. Usne kaha ki tum kal admission le sakte ho. I do want you to complete the course."

(I'd talked to Prof. Takhur. He said that you may take admission tomorrow)


She didn't look at him but began to crisp his coat with fear and/or disgust. He intently glanced for a while and then approached her asking about the reason why she spoilt his ironed cloth. She hastily threw it on the bed and walked out to take the iron box.


RAMAN'S POV


Jab main ne Mumbai jaane ki baat kiya, tab sad Sikh rahi dhi.

(When I've informed about my Mumbai journey, she seemed sad)


May be because she will miss me. *sigh* She...missing me! It is impossible!


I think I've a bad timing.
I wouldn't have informed her about her studies at this time when she is...maybe she is feeling bad for my departure.


I saw her face turning pale with fear...her entire body became rigid and dead. Only her hands were working on my coat, to supress her unreadable expression.


Thank that coat!

Uske bahane se topic bhi change kiya aur uski attention bhi.

(It helped me change the topic and her attention)


Aaj-kal main usse naraz tak nahi hona chahta hun.

(Nowadays I don't even want to be mad at her)


Don't know why...but I feels like there is something more to the story.


Jaise ki joh main soch raha hun voh sach nahi...

(Like, what I've been thinking is not true)


I need to know everything. Everything that happened in that bloody night.


Where did she go that night when Shagun was in the clutches of that bas***d. I thought that she ran away for her life leaving behind my sister. But now...I can't stomach the fact that she left her.


I feels like she could never do that. Though I can't make myself believe that she is innocent. HEART IS NOT A PROOF!


For now, I should stay calm. I'm sure that I'll find the truth so soon.


RAMAN IN MUMBAI


The journey from airport to hotel was like a blur which he didn't remember clearly. After checking in he did immerse himself in his upcoming presentations. He very much wanted to evade the thought of Ishita and Shagun. Nonetheless, they were the sole occupants of his MIND AND HEART. Three hectic days of conferences proved that he can go home before time. But he needed to arrange one more meeting successfully which may change the course of his life. After a lot of contemplations he decided to proceed the plan.


"How can I help you sir?" The receptionist asked with a graceful smile.


Raman: "Emm...I want an appointment with Dr Ashok Khanna."


The receptionist looked at him weirdly for which he shook his head in disbelief and explained gritting his teeth, "For my wife"


Receptionist: "Oh...here you go. Your turn will come after ten minutes sir."


Raman: Faking a smile, "Thank you"


Receptionist: "You're most welcome"


ASHOK AND RAMAN


Ashok: "I knew you will come to me"


Raman: Rubbing his nose, "I couldn't help coming"


Ashok: "Kya jaanna hai?"

(What you want to know?)


Raman: "Sab kuch"

(Everything)


Ashok: "Kis barein main?"

(About what?)


Raman: "Ishita"


Ashok: "You said you know everything"


Raman: "But I think...what I know is not that what you know"


Ashok: "Exactly Raman! Us din tumhare baatein sunkar mujhe pata chala dha ki joh tum jante ho voh galat hai...aur shayad tum kuch janta hi nahi"

(I got it from the way you talked the other day that what you know is wrong...maybe you don't know anything)


Raman: "What you mean Ashok? Voh Shagun ko chodke chali gayi dhi...And she died because of..."

(She left Shagun...)


Ashok: "Because of who? Agar Ishita rukti bhi nah tab bhi Shagun ko nahi bacha pati...Instead voh bhi mar jaati...You wanted your sister's best friend to die for her?"

(If Ishita stayed there she wouldn't have been able to help Shagun. Instead she also would have died)


Raman: "No...it's not like that...But mujhe laga voh uski saath degi..."

(I thought she will be by her side)


Ashok: "Jahan tak main jaanta hun, Ishita is not wrong"

(As far as I know, Ishita is not wrong)

Raman: Expectantly, "Toh tujhe pata hai ki voh raat kya hua dha?"

(So you know what happened that night)


Ashok: Clearing his throat, "No...but...I know what happened to Ishita after she left Shagun"


Raman: "Kya hua dha,?"

(What did happen?)


Ashok: "Raman listen...Joh hua soh hua...ab past ko jaane doh..."

(Past is past...let it go)


Raman: "But I want to know...Please tell me Ashok...Tum sab kuch jaan kar bhi Ishita ko support karte hai toh...Maybe it will help me LOVE HER AGAIN."

(You supports Ishita even after knowing everything)


Ashok: "But..."


Raman held Ashok's hands and pleaded him to help him out making Ashok fall in his tears.


THREE DAYS LATER

AT NIGHT



Raman was staring at the fan, in half sitting position, resting his head on the headrest of the bed, as if thinking of how to make one.Ishita came out of the bathroom wearing a golden silk gown; ready to sleep. He was bowled over by her beauty and the pent up LOVE (Not LUST 😉 ) came into light again, to have her. Now it's being even more powerful.


Within the two months and few weeks of their marriage he had approached her three times , not for sex but for a simple kiss. It might feel funny. But it is the truth. The third time they were almost kissed, but she pushed him letting out a strange cry. From then, he had decided not to give his heart or mind to that restricted area. However, today, he is ready to get slapped as he can't control it anymore. Moreover, now he has the confidence that he can handle her.


When she came towards the bed to take her place, he forwarded his hand inviting her. She after a little hesitation accepted his invitation by giving her hand in his. He gently pulled her to the bed letting her fall beside him resting her head on his chest. She cuddled to him out of instinct, but there was still something amiss. He smiled softly hugging her back. They stayed like that for sometimes. Raman was the first to come out of the stupor feeling her asleep in his arms. He removed her hands from his body and laid her comfortably on the bed and closed to kiss her forehead only to stop midway seeing her frown.


Raman: Chuckling, "Nautangi..."


Ishita opened her eyes slowly showing apology and saw him
leaned over her. She felt a strange sensation when she found herself covered by him till her upper part. She wanted to squirm away and stay there at the same time.


He felt her left hand clutching tightly on the duvet making him divert his focus to there. She slanted her head to the right side again capturing his attention towards her. This time he got a good view of her milky cheek. He moved his head to touch it with his cheek. She stretched her head sideways giving him more access to her neck and shoulder. He looked at the exposed skin of her shoulder for sometime to see if there is any red signal. Without getting any he nuzzled his head in the crook of her neck. That intimate act of him made her heart beat faster. She raised her chest arching her back and brought him closer by hugging him erotically.


His hands were hesitant to explore her more and his head was hell bend on staying there, nuzzling her. With great difficulty he parted from her neck only to get invited by her cheek which is already in a treasing mode adorning a beautiful crimson hue. When he touched her cheek with his, she giggled making him look at her bemused. She caressed his stubbled cheeks and signed that it pricks her. He mouthed a sorry and looked at her beaming face.


They looked deep into each other's eyes drowning in and finding out the love and passion that they were bottled up till now. Ishita unknown to herself brought her head upward, tilting it a bit not to touch his nose. The wee distance betwixt there lips were filled by there hot and heavy breath. She slowly and softly brushed her lips with his and looked at him. He didn't saw her looking at him as his whole attention was on her lips. He couldn't believe that she did it. He was immersed in her lips that he forgot about her hands which were descending to his neck.


She was feeling so nervous from the beginning. Mustering all her courage, she dared to do it. But he didn't respond the way he should have to be. His intense stare was only helping her to build-up more nervousness. Thus she did the obvious. Bitting her quivering lower lip, she glanced slowly at his face to see his darkened eyes ogling at her lips. She felt so happy that he do responded but in a different way.


He brought his hand to her lips and asked her while rubbing it tenderly with his thumb, "May I ki...kiss you Ishita?"



TO BE CONTINUED...



PRECAP


GUESS WHAT 😈




So that's it Kutties 😊

How's it?

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear... Did ashok told him the truth he knws???? Is dat d reason raman is having love for her??? Plzz reveal d flash back dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohh..This is lovely. ..galat timing pe ruk gaye yaar..update soon .wanting
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohh..This is lovely. ..galat timing pe ruk gaye yaar..update soon .waiting

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